Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94Z3BGYNGV59G83NP4KHHN

Run Details

Duration:
30.0s
Cost:
$0.002911
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The damp chill of Soho clung to Aurora like a second skin. November air, heavy with exhaust fumes and the lingering promise of rain, seeped through the thin fabric of her delivery jacket. The neon sign of The Raven’s Nest pulsed a soft, almost weary green onto the slick asphalt, a familiar beacon in the encroaching dusk. She wasn’t meant to be here, not tonight. A shift that had stretched from noon until nearly nine, the ache in her feet a dull throb, the hollow in her gut a familiar companion. Her flat upstairs, above the bar, usually offered a quiet, if spartan, refuge. But tonight, the thought of its solitude pressed down, a greater weight than the overloaded satchel still slung across her shoulders. The warm, amber light bleeding from the bar’s windows beckoned with a promise of something less lonely, something… solid. She pushed open the heavy oak door, the same one she’d fumbled with her keys for countless times while hauling crates of tofu for the Golden Empress. A small bell above it gave a muffled chime. The air inside was thick with the scent of old wood, stale beer, and something faintly sweet, like pipe tobacco. It was blessedly warmer. The Raven's Nest, even at this hour, was never truly empty. A few scattered patrons nursed drinks at the long, dark wood bar, their faces lost in the shadows cast by strategically placed lamps adorned with worn, leather shades. Old maps, detailed and faded, papered the walls alongside black-and-white photographs of faces Aurora didn’t recognize, frozen in sepia smiles. Silas Blackwood was where she expected him to be: behind the bar, polishing glasses with a slow, deliberate motion. His grey-streaked auburn hair was neatly trimmed, his beard matching the subtle silver threaded through it. He moved with a familiar, almost imperceptible, hesitation in his left leg, a ghost of an old injury that never quite vanished. He looked up as the bell chimed, his hazel eyes, sharp and observant, catching hers. A faint smile touched the corners of his mouth, acknowledging her presence without alarm. “Rory,” he said, his voice a low rumble that barely disturbed the quiet hum of the room. “Late shift?” She managed a tight smile, shucking her jacket. The relief from the warmth was immediate. “You know it. Cheung never stops asking.” She walked towards the bar, setting her satchel down with a soft thud. The familiar weight felt heavier tonight, a reminder of a life she hadn’t planned. “He’s a relentless man,” Silas agreed, continuing his methodical work with a tumbler. “Anything stronger than water tonight?” Rory hesitated. She *should* go upstairs. Eat something frozen from the back of the fridge. Try to forget the frustration of a customer short-changing her, the condescending tone of a man who’d clearly thought she was just some girl playing dress-up in a uniform. But the bar offered a different kind of forgetfulness, a temporary insulation. “Just… whatever’s easiest,” she said, sliding onto one of the worn stools. “Whiskey, neat.” Silas nodded, his movements economical. He reached for a bottle, the silver signet ring on his right hand glinting under the low lights. The clink of the glass as he poured was a clean, domestic sound, far removed from the clandestine whispers the walls of this place might have held. He slid the drink across the polished counter. It sat there, a warm amber promise. “Rough day delivering dreams?” Silas asked, his gaze steady. Rory picked up the glass, cradling its warmth. The smell of peat and malt rose to her. It was a good whiskey, the kind that demanded respect. “Something like that. Or mostly just… lukewarm noodles and disgruntled faces.” She took a small sip, letting the burn slide down her throat. “Definitely no dreams involved.” Silas leaned against the backbar, his arms crossed. The limp was more apparent when he was still, a constant, subtle reminder of a life lived by different rules. He didn't pry, but his quiet presence invited a kind of honest confession that came as naturally to him as breathing. He’d seen her arrive in London, a whirlwind of flight and frayed nerves, a stark contrast to the poised young woman he’d glimpsed at university events years prior, when she’d still been discussing case law with her father. He’d accepted her as a tenant, a quiet presence above his establishment, and a reluctant recipient of his occasional, paternal counsel. “Sometimes,” Silas said, his voice low, almost a murmur, “the dreams are just… waiting. Not delivering them.” Rory laughed, a short, sharp sound that was devoid of humor. “Waiting where, Silas? In a queue for the next part-time job? Or maybe a very exclusive club for delivery people who used to be destined for something else?” She twirled the glass, watching the whiskey swirl. The crescent scar on her left wrist, a relic of a clumsy childhood fall, prickled with a phantom itch. She traced its faint line with her thumb. “I was supposed to be a barrister. Arguing cases. Wearing sensible suits. My father built his career on it. My mother… she always said my sharp mind would serve justice.” She took another, larger sip of whiskey, the burn sharper this time. “Instead, here I am, racing through traffic, dodging potholes, and praying my ancient scooter doesn’t die on me before I get to the next postcode. I’m running away, Silas. That’s what I’m doing. Running away from Evan, from Cardiff, from the future I was supposed to have. And I’ve ended up… here.” She gestured vaguely around the dim bar, the gesture encompassing not just the room but her entire life since leaving Wales. Silas watched her, his expression unreadable. The casual authority he carried was a comfort and a quiet challenge. He didn't offer platitudes or dismissal. “Evan. The one you mentioned once, briefly.” His tone was neutral, but laced with an understanding that felt ancient. “Escaping a bad situation is rarely a clean affair. Sometimes it forces you onto a path you never intended, simply because it’s the only one that leads away from the danger.” “But is this… *away*?” Rory’s voice cracked slightly. “Or just a different kind of trap? I’m twenty-five, Silas. I should be building something. Not just… surviving. Not just delivering other people’s dinners while my own life metaphorically burns.” The words, sharp and bitter, spilled out now, unbidden, fueled by whiskey and a weariness that had been accumulating for months, perhaps years. She remembered Eva’s excited calls about law school applications, about the future they’d mapped out together, a future that seemed impossibly distant now, a faded map of a life unlived. Evan’s shadow, too, stretched long, a reminder of how easily one could be broken. Silas picked up another glass, running a thumb along its rim. His gaze drifted, as if seeing something beyond the mundane confines of his bar. “Survival is a powerful foundation, Rory. More solid than many might think. You learn a great deal about gravity when you’re constantly fighting it.” He paused, his sigh almost inaudible. “I spent decades chasing shadows. Making choices, big and small, that felt necessary, vital even. The kind that keep systems from collapsing, that protect those who don't know the darkness is there.” He looked back at her, a hint of something heavy in his eyes. “You believe you ran from what you were meant to be. I ran towards what I thought I *had* to be. And then one day, you wake up and realize the man you’ve become bears little resemblance to the one who started the race.” Rory listened, her breath catching. She’d always seen Silas as the steady anchor of her building, the owner of the quiet bar. She knew he’d been something else before, spoke vaguely of retirement, but the weight of his words, the shadowed depths in his gaze, suggested a life far more intricate and perhaps more perilous than she’d imagined. The ‘bots’ched operation in Prague – he’d mentioned that once, a lifetime ago it seemed. “Did you… regret it?” she asked, the question tumbling out before she could stop it. Silas held her gaze for a long moment. The lamps cast his face in sharp relief, carving out lines of experience around his eyes and mouth. “Regret is a complicated ledger, Rory. You tally the wins, the losses, the sacrifices. Sometimes, the price of security for others is a profound personal loss. The things you *didn’t* do, the person you *didn't* become, the moments you couldn’t afford to be present for…” He trailed off, turning back to his glasses. “There’s a quiet hum in this place, isn’t there?” he said abruptly, his tone shifting back to the proprietor. “A stillness. It’s what I sought when Prague finally broke my knee. A different kind of war zone.” He gestured with the polished glass towards the patrons. “They come here to forget their own struggles, or to find… a moment of peace. Like you. We all crave a safe harbour, don’t we? A place where the storms feel a little further away.” Rory looked at the faces around the bar. A couple whispering secrets, an older man staring blankly into his pint, a young woman sketching in a notebook. Were they all running, too? Had they all made choices that led them here, to this dim haven in Soho, nursing their own silent regrets? She felt a kinship, sudden and unexpected, that went beyond landlord and tenant, beyond age and circumstance. “I just… I thought I was being brave, leaving everything behind,” she admitted, the whiskey loosening the tightly held reins of her composure. “But sometimes it just feels like I traded one cage for another. A gilded one, maybe, thanks to you providing the rooftop. But still a cage.” Silas moved from behind the bar, the slight limp more pronounced as he walked to the end of the counter. He stopped beside her stool, his presence a solid weight. He didn’t touch her, but she felt his quiet regard. “Bravery isn’t always about fighting the lion, Rory. Sometimes it’s about walking away from the fire, even when you don’t know what’s on the other side. And sometimes,” he tapped his signet ring against the wood, a soft, resonant sound, “the truest wisdom comes not from the life you lived, but from understanding all the lives you didn’t. The weight of time is just the accumulated knowledge of those paths not taken, and the ones you did, knowing they led you precisely to where you stand now.” He looked at her, his hazel eyes holding a depth of understanding that resonated through the quiet bar. “And you, Rory, are simply standing. That’s the beginning of everything. Even here.” The weight of his words settled over her, not with the crushing force of despair, but with the quiet, profound gravity of truth. The ache in her feet seemed to recede, replaced by a different kind of weariness, a knowing weariness. The dreams she’d fled might be deferred, perhaps lost, but the path she was on, however unplanned, was undeniably hers. And in the quiet hum of The Raven’s Nest, under the steady gaze of Silas Blackwood, for the first time in a long time, that felt like enough to build upon.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
33.33% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Rory’s voice cracked slightly [slightly]"
2"he said abruptly [abruptly]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.167
86.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1885
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"tightly"
count1
4
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"very"
2"slightly"
3"tightly"
4"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1885
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count4
3
word"beacon"
count1
4
word"throb"
count1
5
word"weight"
count6
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"reminder"
count3
8
word"methodical"
count1
9
word"glinting"
count1
10
word"clandestine"
count1
11
word"stark"
count1
12
word"traced"
count1
13
word"racing"
count1
14
word"unreadable"
count1
15
word"race"
count1
16
word"depths"
count1
17
word"intricate"
count1
18
word"profound"
count2
19
word"resonated"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"pulsed"
2"familiar"
3"beacon"
4"throb"
5"weight"
6"warmth"
7"reminder"
8"methodical"
9"glinting"
10"clandestine"
11"stark"
12"traced"
13"racing"
14"unreadable"
15"race"
16"depths"
17"intricate"
18"profound"
19"resonated"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count2
highlights
0"the weight of his words"
1"The weight of his words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen106
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords1886
ratio0.003
matches
0"should"
1"away"
2"had"
3"didn’t"
4"didn't"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1302
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Aurora2
Raven3
Nest3
Golden1
Empress1
Blackwood2
Rory6
Silas12
London1
Wales1
Eva1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Raven"
2"Blackwood"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Wales"
globalScore1
windowScore1
57.41% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed impossibly distant now, a faded map of a life unlived"
1"as if seeing something beyond the mundane confines of his bar"
2"felt like enough to build upon"
40.93% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.591
wordCount1886
matches
0"not just the room but her entire life since leaving Wales"
1"not from the life you lived, but from understanding all the lives you didn’t"
2"not with the crushing force of despair, but with the quiet, profound gravity of truth"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean75.44
std41.95
cv0.556
sampleLengths
0144
1119
286
319
449
518
670
765
89
954
10108
1117
12104
1385
1474
15105
16144
1773
1815
19116
2044
2169
2249
23158
2492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs192
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences102
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1216
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.03618421052631579
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.01644736842105263
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean18.49
std14.72
cv0.796
sampleLengths
012
121
224
38
426
513
621
718
81
927
109
1120
124
1311
1428
1520
1619
1716
1822
1915
2014
2117
222
238
247
2520
2614
2713
285
292
304
319
3229
3312
3412
352
365
3718
3827
398
407
419
428
439
4410
4523
464
478
4820
4921
56.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.38235294117647056
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
33.64% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences88
matches
0"She wasn’t meant to be"
1"Her flat upstairs, above the"
2"She pushed open the heavy"
3"It was blessedly warmer."
4"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
5"He moved with a familiar,"
6"He looked up as the"
7"he said, his voice a"
8"She managed a tight smile,"
9"She walked towards the bar,"
10"She *should* go upstairs."
11"she said, sliding onto one"
12"He reached for a bottle,"
13"He slid the drink across"
14"It sat there, a warm"
15"It was a good whiskey,"
16"She took a small sip,"
17"He didn't pry, but his"
18"He’d seen her arrive in"
19"He’d accepted her as a"
ratio0.466
11.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences88
matches
0"The damp chill of Soho"
1"November air, heavy with exhaust"
2"The neon sign of The"
3"She wasn’t meant to be"
4"A shift that had stretched"
5"Her flat upstairs, above the"
6"The warm, amber light bleeding"
7"She pushed open the heavy"
8"A small bell above it"
9"The air inside was thick"
10"It was blessedly warmer."
11"The Raven's Nest, even at"
12"Silas Blackwood was where she"
13"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
14"He moved with a familiar,"
15"He looked up as the"
16"A faint smile touched the"
17"he said, his voice a"
18"She managed a tight smile,"
19"The relief from the warmth"
ratio0.898
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
38.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"A shift that had stretched from noon until nearly nine, the ache in her feet a dull throb, the hollow in her gut a familiar companion."
1"Try to forget the frustration of a customer short-changing her, the condescending tone of a man who’d clearly thought she was just some girl playing dress-up in…"
2"He didn't pry, but his quiet presence invited a kind of honest confession that came as naturally to him as breathing."
3"She remembered Eva’s excited calls about law school applications, about the future they’d mapped out together, a future that seemed impossibly distant now, a fa…"
4"His gaze drifted, as if seeing something beyond the mundane confines of his bar."
5"Had they all made choices that led them here, to this dim haven in Soho, nursing their own silent regrets?"
6"And in the quiet hum of The Raven’s Nest, under the steady gaze of Silas Blackwood, for the first time in a long time, that felt like enough to build upon."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Silas asked, his gaze steady"
1"Silas said, his voice low, almost a murmur,"
2"He paused, his sigh almost inaudible"
3"He looked back, a hint of something heavy in his eyes"
4"she asked, the question tumbling out before she could stop it"
5"he said abruptly, his tone shifting back to the proprietor"
6"she admitted, the whiskey loosening the tightly held reins of her composure"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Silas agreed (agree)"
1"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.267
leniency0.533
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.133
70.7952%