Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ950ARPWAB746ZGXV4XWQJE

Run Details

Duration:
22.2s
Cost:
$0.009187
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon green of the sign above the entrance hummed with a low, electric thrum, vibrating through the windowpanes of The Raven’s Nest. It was an hour past the dinner rush, that hollow space in the evening when the Soho crowds were either tucked away in theaters or still lingering over dessert elsewhere. Inside, the air tasted of old cedar, stale hops, and the faint, citrusy tang of the floor wax Silas insisted on using every Tuesday. Aurora sat at the far end of the mahogany bar, her fingers tracing the condensation on a glass of soda water. She had finished her delivery shift for the Golden Empress an hour ago, the scent of ginger and toasted sesame still clinging to the fabric of her jacket. This was her ritual: the transition from the frantic pace of London’s streets to the quiet sanctuary of the flat upstairs. Silas was behind the bar, his movements methodical and sparse. He was polishing a highball glass with a white linen cloth, his right hand flashing the silver signet ring he always wore. The grey-streaked auburn of his hair caught the amber glow of the backlighting, making him look more like a weary professor than a retired field agent. He didn't speak; he didn't have to. The comfortable silence was a currency they both traded in. The door creaked open, admitting a gust of damp, diesel-heavy air and the rhythmic chime of the bell. Silas looked up, his hazel eyes narrowing with the practiced neutrality of a man who had spent decades cataloging threats. Rory didn't turn around until she heard the footsteps—heavy, confident, and strangely familiar. “I’ll just have whatever’s on tap, thanks,” a voice said. It was a Cardiff voice. It was the sound of rain-slicked slate and the salt-wind of the Bristol Channel. Rory froze. The small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist began to itch, a phantom sensation she hadn't felt in years. She turned her head slowly. The man at the bar was wearing a Barbour jacket that looked too expensive for a Soho dive, his hair fair and swept back in a style that screamed 'junior associate.' He was looking at his phone, but as he sensed Rory’s gaze, he looked up. The recognition hit him like a physical blow. “Laila?” he whispered. Rory felt a cold shiver trace the line of her spine. “It’s Rory now, Julian.” Julian Vance looked as though he’d seen a ghost, or perhaps more accurately, someone he’d declared dead and buried. He was the son of her father’s oldest partner at the firm, the boy she was supposed to have married in the timeline where she didn't run away. He looked exactly the same, yet entirely different through the lens of her London life. He was a relic of a gilded cage she had broken out of four years ago. “Rory,” he repeated, the name sounding foreign in his mouth. He moved toward her, his gait confident, though he faltered when he caught sight of Silas. Silas hadn't moved, but the atmosphere around him had shifted. He leaned against the back bar, the linen cloth still in hand, his slight limp evident as he adjusted his weight. He was watching Julian the way a hawk watches a field mouse that has wandered too far into the open. “You’re here,” Julian said, stopping a respectful three feet away. “Your mother... Brendan... they’ve been frantic. For years, Rory. Do you have any idea?” “I’m sure they have a very curated version of frantic,” Rory said, her voice cool and level. She was surprised by her own composure. The intelligence that had once made her a star Pre-Law student now served as a shield, chilling her emotions into something manageable. “How did you find me, Julian? Did Evan send you?” Julian flinched at the name. “No. I’m in London for a deposition. I just... I saw the green sign. I remembered you always liked that shade. It was a fluke. A one-in-a-million shot.” He looked around the bar, his eyes lingering on the black-and-white photographs and the ancient maps pinned to the walls. He looked back at Rory, taking in her shoulder-length black hair—gone was the long, waist-length mane her mother had insisted she keep—and the simple, utilitarian clothes. “You’re delivering food,” he said, his voice dropping an octave, thick with a pity that made Rory’s teeth ache. “I saw the bike outside. The Golden Empress. Rory, you were the top of the set. You were going to be a KC before you were thirty. And now you’re... here? Living in Soho, working for a takeaway?” “I’m living,” Rory corrected him. Her blue eyes were bright, piercing. “That’s the part you’re missing. I’m not being told what to wear, who to defend, or which bruises to hide with foundation. I am a delivery person, Julian. And I am remarkably good at it because I know every alleyway in this city better than you know your own backyard.” “It’s a waste,” Julian said, shaking his head. He reached out as if to touch her arm, but stopped when Silas cleared his throat. The sound was low, like the growl of a distant engine. Silas stepped forward, the light hitting the neat trim of his auburn beard. “The lady is having a drink, friend. I didn't hear her invite you to join her.” Julian stiffened, his professional veneer cracking. “This is a private conversation. I’ve known her since we were children.” “I’ve known a lot of people since they were children,” Silas said, his voice deceptively mild. “Common history isn't the same thing as a standing invitation. You want that drink, or are you just here to provide a deposition on her life choices?” Julian looked between them, finally seeing the silent communication pass between Rory and the older man. He saw the way Rory didn't shrink away, how she stood her ground, anchored by the man with the hazel eyes and the silver ring. “You’ve changed,” Julian said, looking back at Rory. The regret in his eyes was palpablenot for her, she realized, but for the version of her he had lost. The version he could have possessed. “You look harder. Older.” “I’m twenty-five, Julian. I’m exactly the age I’m supposed to be,” Rory said. “And yes, I’ve changed. I had to. You can’t survive a fire and expect to come out smelling like roses.” Julian reached into his pocket and pulled out a card, laying it on the mahogany surface. “If you ever want to come home... if you ever realize that this isn't enough... call me. Your father still has the house in Gower. It’s quiet there.” Rory looked at the card—heavy cardstock, embossed gold lettering—and then back at Julian. She thought of the Welsh coast, the cold, grey Atlantic, and the suffocating weight of her father’s expectations. She thought of Evan’s hand around her throat in the hallway of that house in Gower. “I am home, Julian,” she said quietly. Julian waited for a moment, perhaps hoping for a different answer, a crack in the facade. When none came, he turned and walked toward the door. The bell chimed again, a lonely sound that was swallowed by the Soho rain. Silence reclaimed the bar. Silas picked up the card, squinted at it, and then dropped it into the wastebasket beneath the counter without a word. He poured a small measure of rye into a glass and slid it down the bar to her. “On the house,” he said. Rory picked up the glass, her hand steady. The crescent scar on her wrist had stopped itching. She looked up at the maps on the wall—the world laid out in ink and paper, full of borders and secrets. “He looked at me like I was a tragedy,” she said. Silas leaned his elbows on the bar, his gaze meeting hers. “People like that only see the cracks, Rory. They don't understand that’s where the light gets in. Or the steel.” Rory took a sip of the rye, feeling the burn in her throat, warm and grounding. She looked at the green neon reflection in the window. Outside, the world was loud, chaotic, and dangerous, but for the first time in years, she didn't feel like she was running. She was exactly where she chose to be. “Thanks, Silas,” she murmured. He nodded once, picked up his cloth, and went back to his glasses. The rhythmic unevenness of his gait, the subtle skip in his left leg, was the only sound in the room—a reminder that everyone carried their history, but only some were strong enough to let it forge them into something new.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.536
leniency1
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.067
93.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1456
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1456
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"methodical"
count1
4
word"comfortable"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"rhythmic"
count2
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"chilling"
count1
11
word"palpable"
count1
12
word"facade"
count1
13
word"chaotic"
count1
14
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"tracing"
2"sanctuary"
3"methodical"
4"comfortable"
5"silence"
6"rhythmic"
7"footsteps"
8"familiar"
9"weight"
10"chilling"
11"palpable"
12"facade"
13"chaotic"
14"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences79
matches
0"was surprised"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences79
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1448
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1090
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.28
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho3
Silas10
Tuesday1
Golden1
Empress1
London2
Cardiff1
Bristol1
Channel1
Barbour1
Rory14
Vance1
Julian11
Pre-Law1
Welsh1
Atlantic1
Evan1
Gower1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
3"Vance"
4"Julian"
5"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Bristol"
4"Welsh"
5"Gower"
globalScore0.858
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.691
wordCount1448
matches
0"not for her, she realized, but for the version of her he had lost"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean39.14
std20.15
cv0.515
sampleLengths
077
170
275
351
429
526
654
73
815
978
1026
1151
1224
1356
1433
1546
1657
1761
1824
1940
2018
2143
2241
2338
2433
2544
2647
277
2840
2943
305
3138
3211
3331
3456
354
3653
91.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences79
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was surprised"
2"was swallowed"
45.86% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs173
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was wearing"
2"was watching"
3"was running"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences92
ratio0.076
matches
0"He didn't speak; he didn't have to."
1"Rory didn't turn around until she heard the footsteps—heavy, confident, and strangely familiar."
2"He looked back at Rory, taking in her shoulder-length black hair—gone was the long, waist-length mane her mother had insisted she keep—and the simple, utilitarian clothes."
3"The regret in his eyes was palpable—not for her, she realized, but for the version of her he had lost."
4"Rory looked at the card—heavy cardstock, embossed gold lettering—and then back at Julian."
5"She looked up at the maps on the wall—the world laid out in ink and paper, full of borders and secrets."
6"The rhythmic unevenness of his gait, the subtle skip in his left leg, was the only sound in the room—a reminder that everyone carried their history, but only some were strong enough to let it forge them into something new."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount642
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"damp, diesel-heavy air"
1"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.03582554517133956
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.00778816199376947
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean15.74
std9.16
cv0.582
sampleLengths
023
130
224
321
428
521
610
722
826
97
1010
1118
1220
1313
1410
155
1614
172
1819
195
2046
218
223
2311
244
2519
2628
2715
2816
2910
3016
3110
3221
3320
3410
3514
3617
377
3822
3910
405
4128
4220
4326
4419
4538
465
476
4850
498
39.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.29347826086956524
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences73
matches
0"It was an hour past"
1"She had finished her delivery"
2"He was polishing a highball"
3"He didn't speak; he didn't"
4"It was a Cardiff voice."
5"It was the sound of"
6"She turned her head slowly."
7"He was the son of"
8"He looked exactly the same,"
9"He was a relic of"
10"he repeated, the name sounding"
11"He moved toward her, his"
12"He leaned against the back"
13"He was watching Julian the"
14"She was surprised by her"
15"He looked around the bar,"
16"He looked back at Rory,"
17"he said, his voice dropping"
18"Her blue eyes were bright,"
19"He reached out as if"
ratio0.397
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences73
matches
0"The neon green of the"
1"It was an hour past"
2"Aurora sat at the far"
3"She had finished her delivery"
4"This was her ritual: the"
5"Silas was behind the bar,"
6"He was polishing a highball"
7"The grey-streaked auburn of his"
8"He didn't speak; he didn't"
9"The comfortable silence was a"
10"The door creaked open, admitting"
11"Silas looked up, his hazel"
12"Rory didn't turn around until"
13"a voice said"
14"It was a Cardiff voice."
15"It was the sound of"
16"The small, crescent-shaped scar on"
17"She turned her head slowly."
18"The man at the bar"
19"The recognition hit him like"
ratio0.959
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Silas looked up, his hazel eyes narrowing with the practiced neutrality of a man who had spent decades cataloging threats."
1"The intelligence that had once made her a star Pre-Law student now served as a shield, chilling her emotions into something manageable."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he repeated, the name sounding foreign in his mouth"
1"Rory said, her voice cool and level"
2"Silas said, his voice deceptively mild"
16.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
1"he repeated (repeat)"
2"Rory corrected (correct)"
3"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.536
leniency1
rawRatio0.267
effectiveRatio0.267
71.0780%