| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.56% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1554 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 9.91% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1554 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "comforting" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "chill" | | 7 | "throbbed" | | 8 | "echo" | | 9 | "footfall" | | 10 | "tracing" | | 11 | "lilt" | | 12 | "beacon" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "cacophony" | | 15 | "loomed" | | 16 | "calculate" | | 17 | "echoing" | | 18 | "normalcy" | | 19 | "racing" | | 20 | "sanctuary" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 52.15% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 129 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1543 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | 0 | "Schlick. Schlick. Schlick." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 1529 | | uniqueNames | 23 | | maxNameDensity | 0.98 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Kingston | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 3 | | London | 3 | | Underground | 1 | | October | 2 | | Grove | 3 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Pre-Law | 1 | | Jennifer | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Carters | 1 | | Clipping | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Yu-Fei" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Pendant" | | 5 | "Grove" | | 6 | "Silas" | | 7 | "Jennifer" | | 8 | "Carters" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Kingston" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "quite remember, and for the last hour, it had been burning" | | 1 | "color that seemed to glow under the moonlight" | | 2 | "sounded like her mother—Jennifer’s soft, W" | | 3 | "felt like a hand—brushed the back of he" | | 4 | "felt like it was made of many small, mo" | | 5 | "felt like ten minutes" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1543 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 34.29 | | std | 22.15 | | cv | 0.646 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 92 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 67 | | 8 | 38 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 61 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 69 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 78 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 46 | | 27 | 65 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 52 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 67 | | 37 | 40 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 30 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 57 | | 43 | 44 | | 44 | 40 |
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| 85.77% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "been gifted" | | 1 | "being trapped" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was made" | | 4 | "being plunged" | | 5 | "was gone" | | 6 | "was torn" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 12 | | totalVerbs | 235 | | matches | | 0 | "was humming" | | 1 | "was pulsing" | | 2 | "were pressing" | | 3 | "was vibrating" | | 4 | "was stalling" | | 5 | "was coming" | | 6 | "was opening" | | 7 | "was looking" | | 8 | "was swinging" | | 9 | "was falling" | | 10 | "was blooming" | | 11 | "wasn't blowing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 129 | | ratio | 0.101 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't moving, strictly speaking, but it was humming against her skin—a low, rhythmic warmth that mirrored a quickening pulse." | | 1 | "Before her, the trees didn't just grow; they arched, forming a literal gateway of woven bark." | | 2 | "Wildflowers—foxgloves, poppies, and pale, strange lilies Rory couldn't name—bloomed in a riot of color that seemed to glow under the moonlight." | | 3 | "But the bluebells didn't just rustle; they stayed flat, crushed by a footfall that made no sound." | | 4 | "She backed away, her thumb tracing the small crescent scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit that had stayed with her since childhood." | | 5 | "The voice sounded like her mother—Jennifer’s soft, Welsh lilt—but the cadence was wrong." | | 6 | "It wasn't just near a portal; the portal was opening." | | 7 | "RORY didn't see eyes, but she felt the gaze—a cold, ancient hunger that viewed her as nothing more than a flicker of light in a long, dark corridor." | | 8 | "They didn't just wilt; they rotted in seconds, their vibrant colors turning to a grey, liquid mush." | | 9 | "They were her own voice at five, at fifteen, at twenty; a cacophony of Aurora Carters calling out for help, laughing, crying, screaming." | | 10 | "A hand—or something that felt like a hand—brushed the back of her neck." | | 11 | "The gateway she had entered through looked different now—sharper, the bark like jagged teeth." | | 12 | "The distant roar of the A3, the wind in the dry autumn leaves, the hum of London—it all rushed back in an overwhelming wave of normalcy." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1548 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "many small, moving parts," |
| | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.030361757105943153 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006459948320413436 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 129 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 129 | | mean | 11.96 | | std | 8.34 | | cv | 0.697 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 32.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 23 | | diversityRatio | 0.24806201550387597 | | totalSentences | 129 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 56.02% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, from the darkness above" | | 1 | "Nearly six hours had vanished" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 72.10% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn't have been here." | | 1 | "It wasn't moving, strictly speaking," | | 2 | "It was the size of" | | 3 | "She adjusted her grip on" | | 4 | "It wasn’t the absence of" | | 5 | "She pushed through a thicket" | | 6 | "She stepped through." | | 7 | "It was a pocket of" | | 8 | "They weren't granite or basalt," | | 9 | "She’d heard whispers of it" | | 10 | "It throbbed with a rhythmic," | | 11 | "It was pulsing in time" | | 12 | "she called out" | | 13 | "Her voice was flat, robbed" | | 14 | "They bent low to the" | | 15 | "She backed away, her thumb" | | 16 | "Her boots hit the edge" | | 17 | "She looked down at her" | | 18 | "It wasn't a voice, but" | | 19 | "It was coming from behind" |
| | ratio | 0.37 | |
| 52.44% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 97 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "The metal kickstand of the" | | 1 | "Rory Carter let out a" | | 2 | "She shouldn't have been here." | | 3 | "It wasn't moving, strictly speaking," | | 4 | "It was the size of" | | 5 | "She adjusted her grip on" | | 6 | "The grass was long and" | | 7 | "Rory was a creature of" | | 8 | "This silence was different." | | 9 | "It wasn’t the absence of" | | 10 | "She pushed through a thicket" | | 11 | "The air changed." | | 12 | "The temperature didn't drop so" | | 13 | "She stepped through." | | 14 | "The clearing beyond shouldn't have" | | 15 | "It was a pocket of" | | 16 | "Wildflowers—foxgloves, poppies, and pale, strange" | | 17 | "They weren't granite or basalt," | | 18 | "This was the Grove." | | 19 | "She’d heard whispers of it" |
| | ratio | 0.815 | |
| 84.03% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "Before her, the trees didn't" | | 1 | "Yet, a few yards away," |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The metal kickstand of the delivery bike crunched into the gravel of the Richmond Park perimeter path, a sound that felt unnecessarily loud in the stillness of …" | | 1 | "It wasn't moving, strictly speaking, but it was humming against her skin—a low, rhythmic warmth that mirrored a quickening pulse." | | 2 | "Wildflowers—foxgloves, poppies, and pale, strange lilies Rory couldn't name—bloomed in a riot of color that seemed to glow under the moonlight." | | 3 | "They bent low to the ground as if an invisible weight were pressing down on them, moving in a slow, circular path that spiraled toward her." | | 4 | "She backed away, her thumb tracing the small crescent scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit that had stayed with her since childhood." | | 5 | "RORY didn't see eyes, but she felt the gaze—a cold, ancient hunger that viewed her as nothing more than a flicker of light in a long, dark corridor." | | 6 | "She scrambled on her hands and knees through the wildflowers, which were now black and stinging like nettles." | | 7 | "She walked back to the scooter, her mind racing through the logic of what had happened, trying to find the legal precedent for a reality that could fold in on i…" | | 8 | "Behind her, deep in the dark of the park, a single patch of bluebells was blooming in the frost, their heads nodding in a wind that wasn't blowing." | | 9 | "She kicked the engine to life and sped away, the golden light of the city appearing like a sanctuary in the distance, while the Heartstone sat heavy and silent …" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she hissed, her breath coming in shallow, panicked stabs" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the voice whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |