Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ952EKSAGKQW69E9BZVHH47

Run Details

Duration:
21.7s
Cost:
$0.001919
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The low hum of the refrigerator behind the bar was the loudest sound in the Raven’s Nest. Rory traced the condensation on her glass with a fingertip, the chill seeping into her skin. The afternoon light, weak and diffused, bled through the grimy Soho window, doing little to dispel the bar’s perpetual twilight. Silas was in the back, sorting through paperwork, his grey-streaked auburn hair a familiar, comforting sight. Rory had come down from her flat for a moment’s quiet before her evening delivery shift. The air here always smelled of old wood, stale beer, and something else, something indefinable that spoke of secrets kept and histories woven. A gust of wind rattled the door. Rory didn’t look up until a shadow fell across the worn floorboards. It was a man, dressed in a suit that looked both expensive and slightly rumpled, as if he’d slept in it. He scanned the room, his gaze snagging on her. Recognition warred with disbelief. He paused, a hand hovering near the doorframe, before slowly approaching. “Rory?” The voice was a question, tentative, like testing unfamiliar ice. She blinked, the name a ghost from a life she’d carefully packed away. “Leo?” He stopped a few feet from her table, his features sharper, thinner than she remembered. The easy smile that had once lit up his face seemed to have been filed down, leaving only a faint etching. His eyes, once a clear, bright grey, now held a perpetual tiredness, ringed with weariness that no amount of sleep could erase. His dark hair, which she recalled always tousled with youthful bravado, was neatly combed, thinning at the temples. He looked like a man who had been buffed and polished into something shiny but brittle. “It is you,” he breathed, exhaling slowly. He ran a hand over his jaw, a gesture of self-consciousness. “I… wow. What are you doing here?” Rory gestured to the empty chair opposite her, a ghost of her old ease returning. “I live upstairs. I work for Yu-Fei Cheung, deliver for him. Sometimes Silas lets me just… exist in the quiet before the rush.” She kept her voice level, betraying none of the sudden tremor in her stomach. This was not part of the plan, none of this life. Not Silas, not the deliveries, certainly not this bar that hummed with unspoken potential and unseen dangers. And definitely not running into ghosts from Cardiff. Leo sank into the chair, his movements stiff. “Upstairs? Blimey. You always did gravitate towards the interesting places. I just came from a meeting near here. Feels like a lifetime since… well.” He trailed off, his gaze drifting around the dimly lit room, taking in the faded maps and sepia photographs. “Still the same, isn’t it?” “Mostly,” Rory said, picking up her glass. “Silas likes it that way.” “Silas?” The name seemed to surface from a half-forgotten memory. “The old bloke who used to play chess in the park?” Rory’s lips twitched. “Something like that.” Silas was a retired intelligence operative, owner of this bar, and her reluctant mentor. He was also her landlord. It was a long, complicated story she didn’t have the energy to explain to Leo. “He… he owns the place.” Leo nodded, a flicker of understanding, or perhaps just polite acknowledgement, passing through his eyes. “Right. So, delivering food now? I always thought you’d be… I don’t know. Queen’s Counsel by now, at least. You were always the sharpest.” The compliment landed like a stone, heavy and out of place. Queen’s Counsel. Her father would have loved that. Her mother had probably dreamed of it. Rory had dutifully started Pre-Law at Cardiff, the weight of expectation pressing down until it had felt suffocating, until Evan’s shadow had made even that feel like a temporary reprieve. Then Eva had called. London. A new start. A life that wasn’t dictated by others’ plans. “Studies had to be put on hold,” she said, measuring her words. “Life took a different turn.” Just like that. ‘A different turn’. It sounded so bland, so unlike the precarious tightrope walk her life had become. “Hold? That’s a shame,” Leo said, his voice lacking conviction. He hailed the bartending figure emerging from the back. “Drink? My treat.” Rory shook her head. “I’m fine.” “Whiskey. Double,” Leo called out, then turned back to Rory. “So. Cardiff. Do you ever go back?” “No,” Rory said, a little too quickly. The crescent scar on her left wrist, usually hidden beneath her sleeve, felt suddenly warm. “Not for a long time. You?” Leo waved a dismissing hand, his gaze fixed on the amber liquid Silas was pouring. His usual easy grace was gone, replaced by a kind of restless energy that seemed to fray the edges of his composure. “Once or twice. It’s… smaller than I remembered. Or maybe I’m just… bigger.” He accepted the drink from Silas, giving the older man a cursory nod. Silas met Rory’s eyes for a brief moment, a silent question or perhaps a shared observation, before returning to his work, his slight limp barely noticeable as he moved. “Bigger how?” Rory prompted, curiosity and a strange, unwelcome nostalgia warring within her. Their university days had been a blur of late nights, shared dreams, terrible poetry, and the intoxicating belief that the world was theirs for the taking. Leo had been so full of fire, so utterly convinced he’d conquer everything. Leo took a long swallow of whiskey, his Adam's apple bobbing convulsively. “Just… more complicated. More tied down. I’m a partner at Sterling & Thorne now.” He said it like an accusation. Rory waited. Sterling & Thorne? It sounded impossibly grand, impossibly grim. “That’s… that’s amazing, Leo. I remember you always wanted that.” He gave a short, barking laugh that held no humour. “Did I? Must have been the younger me. The one who thought climbing the ladder was the only way to prove you weren’t dead yet. It’s… it’s a lot of hours. A lot of depositions. A lot of people trying to screw other people over, and my job is to be the best at screwing them back.” He looked down at his hands, now curled around the heavy glass. They were manicured, but his knuckles were white. “My wife, Sarah, she left two years ago. Said I was married to the firm. She wasn’t wrong.” The confession hung in the air, stark and raw. Rory felt a jolt. This was the Leo she had known? The vibrant, restless Leo who’d sworn he’d never be one of them, swallowed by the grey suits and the crushing routine? She remembered him arguing passionately against injustice, about to change the world with every fibre of his being. Now he looked like he’d been changed by it instead. “I’m sorry to hear that, Leo,” she said, the words tasting like ashes. She remembered Sarah, bright and hopeful, at their graduation party. “Don’t be,” he said, forcing a smile that didn’t reach his eyes. He swirled his whiskey, the ice clinking like tiny, mournful bells. “It’s the life I built. Or let be built around me. You, though…” He looked at her, really looked at her, and for the first time, the weary gaze seemed to hold a spark of genuine intrigue, tinged with something that might have been envy. “You look… different. More… awake. Less worried about what everyone else thinks. Living above a bar in Soho. Delivering for a Chinese restaurant. It’s not exactly the path we talked about, is it?” Rory felt a blush creep up her neck. Awake? Maybe. Or maybe just more aware of the precipice. “It’s… it’s kept me out of trouble,” she said, a wry twist to her lips. Silas’s world was far from safe, but it was honest in its danger, unlike the polite, legalised predation Leo described. “And it pays the bills.” “The bills,” Leo echoed, looking at his own expensive watch as if measuring its cost. “Right. I remember bills. Now I just sign them. What about… Evan?” The name hung heavy, a cold, sharp shard. Rory involuntary touched her left wrist, the small crescent scar a faint map of pain and escape. She pulled her hand away quickly, tucking it under the table. “He’s not part of my life anymore. I left Cardiff because of him. Came to London.” “Eva found you?” “She did. She always does.” Eva, her friend, the one who knew what Rory needed before Rory did. Leo finished his whiskey in one gulp, then set the glass down with a thud. Silas had seen and was already moving with another. “Eva. Right. She was always the one with her head screwed on straight. Unlike me, I suppose.” He gave a hollow laugh. “Chasing dreams. Turns out some dreams are just nightmares in disguise. You’re lucky, Rory. You always were. You just didn’t know it. You had the courage to walk away from it all, from him, from that path. I just kept walking down the one I thought I was supposed to.” He stared into his new drink, the dim light of the Raven’s Nest catching the lines etched around his eyes, the deep furrows on his brow. Rory watched him, seeing not just the man he was, but the ghost of the boy he’d been. They had stood on different precipices, their futures unwritten pages in the same worn notebook. She had chosen the unknown, the risky, the life that offered no guarantees but the chance to be truly free. He had chosen certainty, ambition, the polished veneer of success. And here they both were, years later, in a dimly lit Soho bar, grappling with the weight of the choices that had made them strangers to their younger selves. The quiet hum of the refrigerator seemed to grow louder, filling the space between them with all the words left unsaid, all the regrets unspoken, the vast, uncharted territories between who they had been and who they had become.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:02:02.88Z" 2/25/2026, 1:02:02 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Just like [Just]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.048
66.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1663
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count2
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"utterly"
count1
6
adverb"passionately"
count1
7
adverb"really"
count1
8
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"carefully"
3"quickly"
4"suddenly"
5"utterly"
6"passionately"
7"really"
8"truly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Sarah"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1663
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"etching"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count2
8
word"potential"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"weight"
count2
11
word"stark"
count1
12
word"intrigue"
count1
13
word"tinged"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count1
15
word"etched"
count1
16
word"grappling"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"chill"
2"familiar"
3"comforting"
4"scanned"
5"etching"
6"stomach"
7"unspoken"
8"potential"
9"flicker"
10"weight"
11"stark"
12"intrigue"
13"tinged"
14"echoed"
15"etched"
16"grappling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences100
matches
0"d with disbelief"
1"felt a jolt"
71.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen70
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1663
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1222
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.55
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho2
Silas8
Cardiff2
Rory19
Leo13
Counsel1
Pre-Law1
Evan1
Eva2
Adam1
Thorne1
Sarah1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Leo"
5"Evan"
6"Eva"
7"Adam"
8"Sarah"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.723
windowScore0.667
29.52% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like a man who had been buffed and"
1"energy that seemed to fray the edges of his composure"
2"looked like he’d been changed by it inste"
3"as if measuring its cost"
79.74% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.203
wordCount1663
matches
0"not just the man he was, but the ghost of the boy he’d been"
1"no guarantees but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean51.97
std38.48
cv0.74
sampleLengths
0108
164
211
314
492
525
688
756
812
921
1045
1139
12109
1322
146
1517
1628
1792
1852
1932
2021
21105
2269
2323
24101
2558
2627
2752
283
2918
3096
31157
87.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences100
matches
0"been filed"
1"been buffed"
2"was gone"
3"were manicured"
4"been changed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs208
matches
0"was pouring"
1"was already moving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences120
ratio0
matches(empty)
79.50% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount804
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.06343283582089553
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.01616915422885572
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean13.86
std10.57
cv0.763
sampleLengths
017
116
220
316
416
523
67
712
821
99
104
1111
1211
1313
141
1515
1621
1722
1818
1916
207
2111
227
2315
2437
2511
2617
278
288
2943
305
317
325
3310
3411
353
3617
375
3815
395
4015
4124
4211
432
446
457
4630
474
481
493
61.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.39166666666666666
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners47
70.18% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"Then Eva had called."
1"Just like that"
ratio0.021
51.58% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences95
matches
0"It was a man, dressed"
1"He scanned the room, his"
2"He paused, a hand hovering"
3"She blinked, the name a"
4"He stopped a few feet"
5"His eyes, once a clear,"
6"His dark hair, which she"
7"He looked like a man"
8"he breathed, exhaling slowly"
9"He ran a hand over"
10"She kept her voice level,"
11"He trailed off, his gaze"
12"He was also her landlord."
13"It was a long, complicated"
14"Her father would have loved"
15"Her mother had probably dreamed"
16"she said, measuring her words"
17"It sounded so bland, so"
18"He hailed the bartending figure"
19"His usual easy grace was"
ratio0.421
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences95
matches
0"The low hum of the"
1"Rory traced the condensation on"
2"The afternoon light, weak and"
3"Silas was in the back,"
4"Rory had come down from"
5"The air here always smelled"
6"A gust of wind rattled"
7"Rory didn’t look up until"
8"It was a man, dressed"
9"He scanned the room, his"
10"Recognition warred with disbelief."
11"He paused, a hand hovering"
12"The voice was a question,"
13"She blinked, the name a"
14"He stopped a few feet"
15"The easy smile that had"
16"His eyes, once a clear,"
17"His dark hair, which she"
18"He looked like a man"
19"he breathed, exhaling slowly"
ratio0.926
52.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"Now he looked like he’d"
ratio0.011
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Not Silas, not the deliveries, certainly not this bar that hummed with unspoken potential and unseen dangers."
1"His usual easy grace was gone, replaced by a kind of restless energy that seemed to fray the edges of his composure."
2"The vibrant, restless Leo who’d sworn he’d never be one of them, swallowed by the grey suits and the crushing routine?"
3"And here they both were, years later, in a dimly lit Soho bar, grappling with the weight of the choices that had made them strangers to their younger selves."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Leo said, his voice lacking conviction"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he breathed (breathe)"
1"Leo called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.238
leniency0.476
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.095
80.7732%