Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ952ZEX8Q777EATRNVEKA9G

Run Details

Duration:
25.1s
Cost:
$0.010360
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign outside The Raven’s Nest flickered, casting a rhythmic, sickly emerald glow across the rain-streaked window. Inside, the air tasted of stale tobacco, expensive scotch, and the damp wool of coats drying near the radiator. Aurora Carter—Rory to anyone who had known her for more than a week—swiped a rag across the scarred mahogany of the bar. She wasn't officially on shift, but Silas’s left knee was acting up again, the old injury from Prague pulsing with the arrival of a low-pressure system, and she couldn’t sit in her flat upstairs listening to him limp through the evening rush. Silas sat on a high stool at the end of the bar, his grey-streaked auburn hair caught in the low light. He was nursing a soda water, his right hand resting flat on the wood, the silver signet ring catching the glint of the overhead lamps. He didn't say much, but his hazel eyes tracked every movement in the room with the practiced stillness of a man who used to count exits for a living. "You're scrubbing the finish off that wood, Rory," Silas said, his voice a low, gravelled rumble. "Just keeping busy, Si," she replied, not looking up. She adjusted the sleeve of her black sweater, making sure it covered the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. It was a habit now, a physical tick born of a decade’s worth of guarding herself. The bell above the door chimed, a lonely, tinny sound that cut through the low hum of the jukebox playing something melancholic and brass-heavy. A man stepped in, shaking a dripping umbrella. He was dressed in a tailored charcoal overcoat that screamed Chancery Lane, his shoes polished to a mirror shine that had no business in a Soho dive. He looked around the room with a squint of mild disapproval until his eyes landed on the bar. Rory froze. The rag stopped mid-circle. It was Julian Vance. Ten years ago, he had been the boy in the front row of her Jurisprudence lectures at Cardiff University, the one who had shared high-waisted dreams of becoming a KC alongside her. Back then, she had been Aurora, the barrister’s daughter with the bright blue eyes and the certain future. Now, she was Rory, a delivery driver for the Golden Empress who lived above a pub and smelled faintly of Yu-Fei’s ginger-sculled broth. Julian approached the bar, his expression shifting from confusion to a slow, dawning shock. He stopped two feet away, his hands hovering over the wood as if afraid he might catch something. "Aurora?" he whispered. The name sounded like a ghost, a heavy, ornate thing she hadn't carried in years. Rory forced her fingers to relax. She pulled the rag over her shoulder and met his gaze. "Julian. It’s been a long time." "A long time?" He laughed, a brief, frantic sound. "You vanished. One day you were there, arguing about the Human Rights Act, and the next, your flat was empty. Your father—Brendan wouldn't tell anyone where you'd gone. He just said you’d taken a 'leave of absence.'" Silas shifted on his stool, the movement subtle but deliberate. He didn't interject, but the weight of his presence settled over the exchange like a shield. Rory felt the phantom pressure of her past pressing in on her, the memory of Evan’s voice, the way he had isolated her until London was her only oxygen. "I needed a change of scenery," Rory said, her voice tight and professional. "What can I get you? We have a decent Islay single malt, or the usual suspects on tap." Julian stared at her, his eyes tracing the line of her shoulder-length black hair, so different from the long, polished curls she’d worn in Wales. He looked at her hands—calloused from bike grips and heavy crates—and then back to her face. "You’re working here? Aurora, you were the top of the class. You were going to be a litigator. My God, I’m a junior partner at Fletcher & Ward now. I thought... I don't know what I thought, but not this." "It’s Rory now," she said. The precision in her tone was a blade. "And what you thought doesn't really factor into the reality of the last five years, Julian." He flinched. He took a seat, the expensive fabric of his coat bunching awkwardly. "Small Macallan. Neat." Rory moved with practiced efficiency. She poured the amber liquid, the glass clicking softly against the bar. Julian reached for it, but his eyes never left hers. He looked older, certainly—the soft edges of his youth had sharpened into the weary cynicism of the London legal circuit—but he was essentially the same. He was the version of her life that had stayed on the tracks. "I saw your mother last Christmas," Julian said softly. "In Cardiff. She looked... diminished. She said she hears from you, but you never come home. Not even for the holidays." Rory focused on the reflection of the green neon sign in the back-bar mirror. "London is a busy place, Julian. People get lost in it. Some by accident, some by choice." "Was it him?" Julian asked, his voice dropping an octave, leaning in. "That guy? Evan? Everyone knew he was a prick, but we didn't think..." "Don't," Rory interrupted. The "out-of-the-box" thinker he remembered was still there, but she had applied that intelligence to survival, not statutes. "Don't pretend you were worried then. You were all too busy with your pupillages and your networking. I left because I had to. The rest is just history." Silas cleared his throat, a dry sound that broke the tension. "Everything alright here, Rory?" She glanced at Silas, seeing the quiet authority in his posture. He knew. He didn't know the specifics of Julian, but he knew the look of a shadow from the past trying to lengthen itself over the present. "Fine, Silas. Just an old acquaintance," she said. Julian looked at Silas, noting the grey-streaked hair and the signet ring, then looked back at Rory. "Is this it then? This life? Delivering takeaway and pulling pints in a place that looks like it hasn't seen a health inspector since the Cold War? You were brilliant, Aurora. You could have been anything." Rory leaned her elbows on the bar, closing the distance between them. The blue of her eyes was cold, startlingly bright in the dim tavern. "I am something, Julian. I’m free. I don't wake up wondering if the person next to me is going to snap. I don't spend my days lying to judges or polishing my ego in a mirror. I have a roof, a job, and friends who don't ask for my pedigree." Julian took a long swallow of his scotch, the burn making him wince. "You sound like a different person. You look like her, but the voice... it’s harder. You used to be so soft, Aurora. You used to laugh at everything." "Soft things get broken," she said. She reached out and took a stray coaster from the bar, spinning it between her fingers. "I grew up. It happens to the lucky ones." Regret flared in Julian’s eyes, a fleeting, painful look of a man realizing he’d missed a turn-off miles back on the road. He reached across the bar, his hand stopping just short of her wrist—the one with the crescent scar. He seemed to notice the tension in her arm, the way she didn't pull away but signaled clearly that he shouldn't touch her. "I should have called," he whispered. "When you stopped showing up to the library. I thought about it. I just... I didn't want to get involved in the drama. I figured you'd handle it. You were always the smart one." "That’s the thing about being 'the smart one,'" Rory said, her voice dropping to a near-whisper. "People assume you don't need help. They stand by and watch you drown because they’re sure you’re just practicing your backstroke." The silence that followed was heavy, filled only by the crackle of the ice in Silas's glass and the distant muffled roar of a bus turning onto Dean Street. Julian looked at the remainder of his scotch as if it were poison. He reached into his leather wallet, pulled out a twenty-pound note, and laid it on the bar. "I’m sorry," he said. It was a small word for a decade of silence. "If you ever... if you want to come back. My firm is always looking for researchers. You wouldn't even need to finish the degree, not with your marks. I could talk to the partners." Rory looked at the money, then at him. She felt a strange surge of pity. He was offering her a ladder back to a house that had burned down years ago. He thought he was being a savior, but he was just showing her how little he understood. "I have to check the kegs," Rory said, stepping back from the bar. "Keep the change, Julian. It’s expensive to stay that polished in London." She turned away before he could respond, heading toward the small door behind the bar that led to the cellar. She didn't look back to see him stand, button his charcoal coat, and step out into the neon-green rain. As the door chimed shut, Silas let out a slow breath. He adjusted his bad leg and looked at Rory as she emerged from the cellar stairs, her face a mask of careful neutrality. "You okay, kid?" Silas asked. Rory picked up a glass and began to polish it, her movements slow and deliberate. The bright blue of her eyes was shadowed, reflecting the maps on the walls and the old photographs of people who had long since moved on. "I'm fine, Silas," she said, her voice steady. "Just a ghost. They don't have a lot of weight once you stop believing in them." She tucked her hair behind her ear, the crescent scar on her wrist caught for a moment in the green light, and went back to work. The Raven’s Nest was quiet again, the way it was meant to be, a sanctuary for those who had finally stopped running.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:02:20.13Z" 2/25/2026, 1:02:20 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Julian said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.474
leniency0.947
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.053
91.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1710
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count2
highlights
0"really"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1710
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"glint"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"tension"
count2
6
word"fleeting"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"sanctuary"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"rhythmic"
2"glint"
3"weight"
4"tracing"
5"tension"
6"fleeting"
7"whisper"
8"silence"
9"sanctuary"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1702
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1187
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity1.35
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Carter1
Rory16
Silas10
Prague1
Chancery1
Lane1
Soho1
Julian11
Vance1
Jurisprudence1
Cardiff1
University1
Aurora2
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
Evan1
London2
Wales1
Dean1
Street1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Julian"
6"Vance"
7"Jurisprudence"
8"Yu-Fei"
9"Evan"
places
0"Prague"
1"Chancery"
2"Lane"
3"Soho"
4"Cardiff"
5"London"
6"Wales"
7"Dean"
8"Street"
globalScore0.826
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a ghost, a heavy, ornate thin"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1702
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"applied that intelligence"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean41.51
std22.12
cv0.533
sampleLengths
0102
175
216
345
477
56
677
732
818
923
1046
1155
1231
1381
1429
1517
1665
1730
1831
1925
2049
2115
2238
238
2453
2575
2641
2731
2863
2940
3037
3159
3248
3348
3425
3539
3634
375
3841
3924
4048
92.73% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences84
matches
0"was dressed"
1"was shadowed"
2"was meant"
34.98% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs202
matches
0"was acting"
1"was nursing"
2"was offering"
3"was being"
4"was just showing"
32.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences104
ratio0.038
matches
0"Aurora Carter—Rory to anyone who had known her for more than a week—swiped a rag across the scarred mahogany of the bar."
1"He looked at her hands—calloused from bike grips and heavy crates—and then back to her face."
2"He looked older, certainly—the soft edges of his youth had sharpened into the weary cynicism of the London legal circuit—but he was essentially the same."
3"He reached across the bar, his hand stopping just short of her wrist—the one with the crescent scar."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1210
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.0256198347107438
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.011570247933884297
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean16.37
std9.53
cv0.583
sampleLengths
019
119
222
342
421
525
629
716
89
920
1016
1124
128
1327
1418
152
164
174
1832
1918
2023
2114
2218
233
2415
256
2611
276
289
2937
3010
3116
3229
3313
3418
3525
3616
3740
385
398
4016
412
4212
433
445
4512
4610
4725
4813
499
46.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3269230769230769
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
39.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences73
matches
0"She wasn't officially on shift,"
1"He was nursing a soda"
2"He didn't say much, but"
3"she replied, not looking up"
4"She adjusted the sleeve of"
5"It was a habit now,"
6"He was dressed in a"
7"He looked around the room"
8"It was Julian Vance."
9"He stopped two feet away,"
10"She pulled the rag over"
11"He laughed, a brief, frantic"
12"He didn't interject, but the"
13"He looked at her hands—calloused"
14"He took a seat, the"
15"She poured the amber liquid,"
16"He looked older, certainly—the soft"
17"He was the version of"
18"She glanced at Silas, seeing"
19"He didn't know the specifics"
ratio0.452
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences73
matches
0"The green neon sign outside"
1"Aurora Carter—Rory to anyone who"
2"She wasn't officially on shift,"
3"Silas sat on a high"
4"He was nursing a soda"
5"He didn't say much, but"
6"Silas said, his voice a"
7"she replied, not looking up"
8"She adjusted the sleeve of"
9"It was a habit now,"
10"The bell above the door"
11"A man stepped in, shaking"
12"He was dressed in a"
13"He looked around the room"
14"The rag stopped mid-circle."
15"It was Julian Vance."
16"Julian approached the bar, his"
17"He stopped two feet away,"
18"The name sounded like a"
19"Rory forced her fingers to"
ratio0.932
68.49% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Now, she was Rory, a"
ratio0.014
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Now, she was Rory, a delivery driver for the Golden Empress who lived above a pub and smelled faintly of Yu-Fei’s ginger-sculled broth."
1"He stopped two feet away, his hands hovering over the wood as if afraid he might catch something."
2"Silas cleared his throat, a dry sound that broke the tension."
3"Julian looked at the remainder of his scotch as if it were poison."
4"The bright blue of her eyes was shadowed, reflecting the maps on the walls and the old photographs of people who had long since moved on."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Silas said, his voice a low, gravelled rumble"
1"she replied, not looking up"
2"Rory said, her voice tight and professional"
3"Julian asked, his voice dropping an octave, leaning in"
4"Rory said, her voice dropping to a near-whisper"
5"she said, her voice steady"
44.74% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
1"He laughed (laugh)"
2"Rory interrupted (interrupt)"
3"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.447
leniency0.895
rawRatio0.235
effectiveRatio0.211
75.0563%