| 37.84% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Julian looked around [around]" | | 1 | "Rory said sharply [sharply]" | | 2 | "Julian said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.486 | | leniency | 0.973 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.162 | |
| 81.02% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1581 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "truly" | | 5 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.56% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1581 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "could feel" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "electric" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "reminder" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "calibrated" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "predator" | | 11 | "gleaming" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 69 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1574 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 66 | | wordCount | 1109 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.44 | | worstName | "Julian" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Julian" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 3 | | Aurora | 3 | | Soho | 2 | | Silas | 11 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Prague | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Rory | 15 | | London | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Julian | 16 | | Vance | 1 | | Pre-Law | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Victorian | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Scotch | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Blackwood" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Carter" | | 7 | "Julian" | | 8 | "Vance" | | 9 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "Prague" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.779 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 62.28% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite mask" | | 1 | "sounded like the boy she had once shared c" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1574 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 40.36 | | std | 25.5 | | cv | 0.632 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 77 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 112 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 68 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 60 | | 12 | 54 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 54 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 48 | | 21 | 54 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 58 | | 27 | 85 | | 28 | 48 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 63 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 35 | | 37 | 86 | | 38 | 60 |
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| 95.52% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "being asked" | | 1 | "been groomed" |
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| 8.43% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 174 | | matches | | 0 | "was buffing" | | 1 | "was listening" | | 2 | "wasn't looking" | | 3 | "was still living" | | 4 | "was mourning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.055 | | matches | | 0 | "Even with the slight hitch in his stride—that lingering souvenir from a Prague winter he never spoke about—he looked as if he were part of the furniture, anchored to the room by the weight of his hazel eyes and the silver signet ring that caught the amber light of the back-shelf lanterns." | | 1 | "He was a piece of her Cardiff life—a fellow Pre-Law student, the man her parents had once hoped she might marry, the one who had stayed behind to collect the degrees and the accolades she had abandoned in the middle of a Tuesday night three years ago." | | 2 | "“I remember the nights,” Rory said, her gaze drifting to a black-and-white photograph on the wall—a grainy shot of a rainy street in a city she didn't recognize." | | 3 | "She looked at Julian—the expensive suit, the groomed hair, the life of spreadsheets and billable hours—and saw a man who was still living in the dream she had escaped." | | 4 | "For Rory, it was a river—and she was finally content to let it carry her away from the shore." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1126 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.02930728241563055 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012433392539964476 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 17.3 | | std | 11.96 | | cv | 0.691 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 47 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 27 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 45 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 47.62% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3516483516483517 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 50.30% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a rhythmic, electric" | | 1 | "She pushed through the heavy" | | 2 | "He didn't look up from" | | 3 | "She ran a hand through" | | 4 | "It was a pale, jagged" | | 5 | "He slid it across the" | | 6 | "she muttered, lifting the glass" | | 7 | "He was Rory’s age, twenty-five" | | 8 | "His hair was perfectly swept," | | 9 | "she said, her voice steadier" | | 10 | "He was a piece of" | | 11 | "He stopped a respectful distance" | | 12 | "He wasn't looking at them," | | 13 | "She squeezed the glass harder." | | 14 | "She took a slow sip" | | 15 | "He looked at her with" | | 16 | "He caught Rory’s eye, a" | | 17 | "She wanted to feel this." | | 18 | "She wanted to see the" | | 19 | "She stood up, her height" |
| | ratio | 0.424 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon sign outside" | | 1 | "It was a rhythmic, electric" | | 2 | "She pushed through the heavy" | | 3 | "Silas Blackwood moved behind the" | | 4 | "Silas asked, his voice a" | | 5 | "He didn't look up from" | | 6 | "Aurora said, sliding onto her" | | 7 | "She ran a hand through" | | 8 | "It was a pale, jagged" | | 9 | "Silas poured a measure of" | | 10 | "He slid it across the" | | 11 | "she muttered, lifting the glass" | | 12 | "The door chimed again." | | 13 | "A man stepped in, shaking" | | 14 | "He was Rory’s age, twenty-five" | | 15 | "His hair was perfectly swept," | | 16 | "Rory froze, the whiskey halfway" | | 17 | "The man turned, scanning the" | | 18 | "The name hit her like" | | 19 | "Nobody in London called her" |
| | ratio | 0.924 | |
| 75.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Even with the slight hitch" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 51.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas Blackwood moved behind the mahogany bar with the practiced grace of a man who had spent decades learning how to disappear in plain sight." | | 1 | "Even with the slight hitch in his stride—that lingering souvenir from a Prague winter he never spoke about—he looked as if he were part of the furniture, anchor…" | | 2 | "He was Rory’s age, twenty-five or so, but he carried himself with the heavy, curated importance of someone who had already decided his place in the world." | | 3 | "The man turned, scanning the dim interior with a look of mild condescension that dissolved into raw shock the moment his eyes landed on her." | | 4 | "She looked at Julian—the expensive suit, the groomed hair, the life of spreadsheets and billable hours—and saw a man who was still living in the dream she had e…" |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas asked, his voice a gravelly baritone" | | 1 | "she said, her voice steadier than she felt" |
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| 68.92% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Julian whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she lied (lie)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.432 | | leniency | 0.865 | | rawRatio | 0.188 | | effectiveRatio | 0.162 | |