Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ9543KW6EYPQNQ0KX5XHSQS

Run Details

Duration:
23.2s
Cost:
$0.009595
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign outside the Raven’s Nest hummed with a low-frequency buzz that Aurora could feel in the marrow of her teeth. It was a rhythmic, electric pulse that competed with the drizzle slicking the Soho pavement. She pushed through the heavy oak door, the bells chiming a muted greeting, and let the familiar scent of the bar wash over her: floor wax, stale hops, and the faint, sharp tang of Silas’s expensive gin. Silas Blackwood moved behind the mahogany bar with the practiced grace of a man who had spent decades learning how to disappear in plain sight. Even with the slight hitch in his stride—that lingering souvenir from a Prague winter he never spoke about—he looked as if he were part of the furniture, anchored to the room by the weight of his hazel eyes and the silver signet ring that caught the amber light of the back-shelf lanterns. “Long shift, Rory?” Silas asked, his voice a gravelly baritone. He didn't look up from the glass he was buffing with a white linen cloth. “The Golden Empress had a run on Peking duck,” Aurora said, sliding onto her usual stool at the far end of the bar, nearest the bookshelf that masked the entrance to Silas’s private office. She ran a hand through her shoulder-length black hair, tucked a stray lock behind her ear, and caught sight of the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. It was a pale, jagged reminder of a childhood tumble in Cardiff, a ghost of a girl who had once believed she would spend her life in a courtroom rather than on a delivery bike. “Mrs. Cheung was in a state. I think I’ve got plum sauce in my pores.” Silas poured a measure of whiskey without being asked. He slid it across the polished wood, his movements economical. “The life of the law was too quiet for you, remember?” “Quiet isn’t the word I’d use for my father’s house,” she muttered, lifting the glass. The door chimed again. A man stepped in, shaking a dark umbrella and shedding a tailored charcoal overcoat. He was Rory’s age, twenty-five or so, but he carried himself with the heavy, curated importance of someone who had already decided his place in the world. His hair was perfectly swept, his shoes expensive enough to make Rory instinctively tuck her own scuffed boots under the bar’s brass rail. Rory froze, the whiskey halfway to her lips. The man turned, scanning the dim interior with a look of mild condescension that dissolved into raw shock the moment his eyes landed on her. “Aurora?” The name hit her like a physical blow. Nobody in London called her Aurora. Here, she was Rory, or Carter, or occasionally a ghost. “Julian,” she said, her voice steadier than she felt. Julian Vance took three steps toward her, his face a map of disbelief. He was a piece of her Cardiff life—a fellow Pre-Law student, the man her parents had once hoped she might marry, the one who had stayed behind to collect the degrees and the accolades she had abandoned in the middle of a Tuesday night three years ago. “My God, it is you,” Julian said. He stopped a respectful distance away, his eyes roaming over her utilitarian jacket and the weary set of her shoulders. “I heard… well, no one knew what to think. Your mother said you were traveling. Your father wouldn’t speak your name at the firm’s dinner last spring.” Rory felt Silas’s presence sharpen behind the bar. He wasn't looking at them, but she knew he was listening, his internal radar calibrated for the sudden shift in atmospheric pressure. “I’m not traveling, Julian,” Rory said. “I live here.” “In Soho?” Julian looked around the Raven’s Nest as if he expected a Victorian ghost to manifest from the shadows of the old maps on the walls. “Brendan said you’d had some kind of… breakdown. After the thing with Evan. He said you’d just snapped.” The mention of Evan made the scar on her wrist itch. She squeezed the glass harder. “I didn’t snap. I woke up. There’s a difference.” Julian signaled Silas for a drink, his hand fluttering with a nervousness he couldn't quite mask. Silas served him a Scotch, his hazel eyes lingering on Julian’s face for a heartbeat too long, a silent assessment that Julian was too distracted to notice. “You look different,” Julian whispered, leaning against the bar. “Harder. Not in a bad way, just… you used to be so bright, Aurora. Everyone at Cardiff University thought you’d be the one to break all the records. Then you just vanished into London. No forwarding address, no phone calls. Eva wouldn't tell us anything.” “Eva did what I asked her to do,” Rory said. She took a slow sip of the whiskey, letting the burn settle the tremors in her chest. “I didn't want to be found by anyone who knew the girl I was supposed to be.” “And who are you now?” Julian asked. He looked at her with a mix of pity and a strange, hungry curiosity. “I’m an associate at Miller and Thorne now. I’m doing intellectual property. It’s… it’s what we talked about, remember? The internships, the long nights in the library?” “I remember the nights,” Rory said, her gaze drifting to a black-and-white photograph on the wall—a grainy shot of a rainy street in a city she didn't recognize. “I just don't remember wanting them. I think I was just mimicking the people around me. Like a bird imitating a song it doesn't actually like.” Julian blinked, clearly uncomfortable with the metaphor. “Your father is devastated, you know. He thinks he failed you. He thinks Evan… well, he thinks he should have seen what was happening.” “He saw,” Rory said sharply. “He just thought a Welsh teacher’s daughter and a barrister’s son should be able to work through a few ‘disagreements.’ He called it character building. He didn't realize the building was collapsing.” Silas limped over to their end of the bar, picking up an empty bowl of olives. He caught Rory’s eye, a silent question in the tilt of his head. *Do you want him gone?* Rory gave a nearly imperceptible shake of her head. She wanted to feel this. She wanted to see the life she had amputated, if only to confirm the wound had healed. “I’m sorry,” Julian said, and for a moment, he actually sounded like the boy she had once shared coffee with in the student union. “I didn't see it either. None of us did. But Aurora… look at this place. Look at you. You’re working for a takeaway? Living above a pub? You were meant for more than this.” “More than what, Julian?” She stood up, her height of five-foot-six suddenly feeling like six feet. “More than being happy? More than being safe? I don't wake up wondering if I’m going to be hit because I didn't iron a shirt correctly. I don't spend my days reading contracts for people who only care about how much they can squeeze out of a competitor. I deliver food to people who are hungry, and I come home to a place where I don’t have to pretend.” Julian looked down at his Scotch. The silence between them stretched, filled with the hum of the neon sign and the distant siren of a police car threading through Soho’s narrow veins. The weight of the years they hadn't shared sat on the bar like an unpayable tab. “He’s married now,” Julian said softly. “Evan. To a girl from Swansea. She looks a bit like you used to.” Rory felt a cold shiver trace the line of her spine. She looked at Julian—the expensive suit, the groomed hair, the life of spreadsheets and billable hours—and saw a man who was still living in the dream she had escaped. He was a ghost of a future she hadn't wanted, and he was mourning a version of her that had never truly existed. “I hope she’s faster than I was,” Rory said. She reached into her pocket, pulled out a few crumpled notes, and slapped them onto the bar. “It was good to see you, Julian. Really.” “You’re leaving?” “I have an early start,” she lied. She looked at Silas. “See you tomorrow, Si.” “Tomorrow, Rory,” Silas replied, his voice a steady anchor in the sudden storm of her past. He watched Julian with a predator’s patience, the silver signet ring gleaming as he went back to his glass. Rory turned and walked toward the door. She didn't look back at the bar, or the maps, or the man who represented everything she had been groomed to be. As she stepped out into the London rain, the green neon light washed over her, turning her skin a strange, alien hue. She felt the weight of Julian’s pity behind her, but as she started the climb to her flat above the Nest, all she felt was the lightness of being a stranger in her own life. The rain was cold, but it was clean, and for the first time in years, the silence of the night didn't feel like a threat. It felt like an answer. For Julian, time was a ladder he was still desperately climbing. For Rory, it was a river—and she was finally content to let it carry her away from the shore.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
37.84% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Julian looked around [around]"
1"Rory said sharply [sharply]"
2"Julian said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.486
leniency0.973
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.162
81.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1581
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
5
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"sharply"
2"suddenly"
3"softly"
4"truly"
5"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1581
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"could feel"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"electric"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"weight"
count3
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"calibrated"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"predator"
count1
11
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"could feel"
1"rhythmic"
2"electric"
3"pulse"
4"familiar"
5"weight"
6"reminder"
7"scanning"
8"calibrated"
9"silence"
10"predator"
11"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen69
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords5
totalWords1574
ratio0.003
matches
0"Do you want him gone?"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions66
wordCount1109
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.44
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest3
Aurora3
Soho2
Silas11
Blackwood1
Prague1
Cardiff2
Rory15
London2
Carter1
Julian16
Vance1
Pre-Law1
Tuesday1
Victorian1
Evan1
Scotch2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Rory"
6"Carter"
7"Julian"
8"Vance"
9"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore0.779
windowScore0.5
62.28% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite mask"
1"sounded like the boy she had once shared c"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1574
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean40.36
std25.5
cv0.632
sampleLengths
075
177
225
3112
430
515
668
733
81
924
109
1160
1254
1330
149
1545
1625
1743
1854
1944
2048
2154
2231
2337
2434
2531
2658
2785
2848
2920
3063
319
3217
338
342
3515
3635
3786
3860
95.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences72
matches
0"being asked"
1"been groomed"
8.43% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs174
matches
0"was buffing"
1"was listening"
2"wasn't looking"
3"was still living"
4"was mourning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences91
ratio0.055
matches
0"Even with the slight hitch in his stride—that lingering souvenir from a Prague winter he never spoke about—he looked as if he were part of the furniture, anchored to the room by the weight of his hazel eyes and the silver signet ring that caught the amber light of the back-shelf lanterns."
1"He was a piece of her Cardiff life—a fellow Pre-Law student, the man her parents had once hoped she might marry, the one who had stayed behind to collect the degrees and the accolades she had abandoned in the middle of a Tuesday night three years ago."
2"“I remember the nights,” Rory said, her gaze drifting to a black-and-white photograph on the wall—a grainy shot of a rainy street in a city she didn't recognize."
3"She looked at Julian—the expensive suit, the groomed hair, the life of spreadsheets and billable hours—and saw a man who was still living in the dream she had escaped."
4"For Rory, it was a river—and she was finally content to let it carry her away from the shore."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1126
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.02930728241563055
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.012433392539964476
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean17.3
std11.96
cv0.691
sampleLengths
023
115
237
325
452
510
615
734
828
935
1015
119
1210
1311
1415
154
1614
1727
1823
198
2025
211
228
236
2410
259
2613
2747
287
2920
3027
318
3222
336
343
3527
3618
3711
385
399
4016
4127
429
4345
4410
4517
4617
477
4814
4927
47.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3516483516483517
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
50.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences66
matches
0"It was a rhythmic, electric"
1"She pushed through the heavy"
2"He didn't look up from"
3"She ran a hand through"
4"It was a pale, jagged"
5"He slid it across the"
6"she muttered, lifting the glass"
7"He was Rory’s age, twenty-five"
8"His hair was perfectly swept,"
9"she said, her voice steadier"
10"He was a piece of"
11"He stopped a respectful distance"
12"He wasn't looking at them,"
13"She squeezed the glass harder."
14"She took a slow sip"
15"He looked at her with"
16"He caught Rory’s eye, a"
17"She wanted to feel this."
18"She wanted to see the"
19"She stood up, her height"
ratio0.424
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences66
matches
0"The green neon sign outside"
1"It was a rhythmic, electric"
2"She pushed through the heavy"
3"Silas Blackwood moved behind the"
4"Silas asked, his voice a"
5"He didn't look up from"
6"Aurora said, sliding onto her"
7"She ran a hand through"
8"It was a pale, jagged"
9"Silas poured a measure of"
10"He slid it across the"
11"she muttered, lifting the glass"
12"The door chimed again."
13"A man stepped in, shaking"
14"He was Rory’s age, twenty-five"
15"His hair was perfectly swept,"
16"Rory froze, the whiskey halfway"
17"The man turned, scanning the"
18"The name hit her like"
19"Nobody in London called her"
ratio0.924
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Even with the slight hitch"
ratio0.015
51.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Silas Blackwood moved behind the mahogany bar with the practiced grace of a man who had spent decades learning how to disappear in plain sight."
1"Even with the slight hitch in his stride—that lingering souvenir from a Prague winter he never spoke about—he looked as if he were part of the furniture, anchor…"
2"He was Rory’s age, twenty-five or so, but he carried himself with the heavy, curated importance of someone who had already decided his place in the world."
3"The man turned, scanning the dim interior with a look of mild condescension that dissolved into raw shock the moment his eyes landed on her."
4"She looked at Julian—the expensive suit, the groomed hair, the life of spreadsheets and billable hours—and saw a man who was still living in the dream she had e…"
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Silas asked, his voice a gravelly baritone"
1"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
68.92% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Julian whispered (whisper)"
2"she lied (lie)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.432
leniency0.865
rawRatio0.188
effectiveRatio0.162
71.4992%