Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95CJB222KNEYASABWM7QQ7

Run Details

Duration:
19.4s
Cost:
$0.001886
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The edge of Richmond Park dissolved into deeper shadow as Aurora Carter stepped off the gravel path, her trainers crunching softly on fallen leaves that felt older than autumn. The lamplit perimeter of the city seemed miles behind her, a fading hum against the encroaching quiet. She pulled the collar of her worn courier jacket closer, the fabric smelling faintly of charcoal noodles and spilled soy sauce from her shift at the Golden Empress. The night air, even this late in April, carried a deceptive chill that had nothing to do with the temperature. She was here because the Heartstone Pendant, nestled heavy and smooth against her skin beneath her shirt, had begun to pulse with a quiet, insistent warmth two nights ago, a warmth that escalated into a persistent throb as she’d walked the familiar routes home. It had led her, not to an infernal crack in the pavement, but to this forgotten pocket off the beaten track, the air growing thick with an almost palpable stillness. She reached the standing stones first, ancient oaks gnarled into sentinel poses, their bark like deeply carved scripture. They marked the supposed edge of the Fae Grove, a place whispered about in hushed tones, a place local legends said existed slightly out of sync with the world. Her childhood friend Eva had told her stories, tales of misplaced hours and shimmering figures, but Rory, ever the pragmatist, had filed them under ‘folklore’. Now, standing between the silent, colossal trees, the legend felt less like invention and more like a preface. The moment she stepped within the boundary, the silence deepened. It wasn't the absence of sound, but an active presence, a muffling blanket that seemed to absorb stray noises before they could even form. Her own breathing sounded unnaturally loud, a ragged counterpoint to the absolute void. Even the distant traffic drone from the city had vanished, as if the Grove had its own localized vacuum. The moonlight here lent an eerie luminosity to the clearing. Wildflowers, impossibly vibrant, carpeted the ground – blues, purples, and whites that shimmered with a faint, phosphorescent glow. The codex had mentioned they bloomed year-round, but seeing them like this, impossibly perfect and alive in the dead of night, felt like a trick of the eye. Their petals seemed too smooth, too intensely coloured, too still. Rory’s right hand drifted to her chest, fingers finding the cool silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant. Beneath her shirt, the gemstone pulsed with a warmth that felt more significant now, more insistent. It wasn't an infernal heat, but a deep, resonant thrum, like a quiet heartbeat. *Near a Hel portal*, the fragments of knowledge she'd gathered suggested. But there was no portal here, only an unnerving stillness and flowers that glowed. Yet, the pendant’s reaction was undeniable. It was guiding her, or reacting to something this place held. She took a tentative step forward, then another, her eyes scanning the periphery. Her mind, cool and sharp, catalogued the details. The ancient oaks leaned inwards, their branches interlocking overhead to form a crude, dark canopy. The air here was thick, damp, and carried a scent that was not quite woodland loam, nor decaying leaves; it was sharper, cleaner, with an unsettling undertone of something metallic, like rain on old blood. A sudden, sharp crack echoed from her left. Rory froze, every muscle tightening. It was the sound of a twig snapping underfoot. Too loud to be a falling branch. Too distinct to be the wind. But there was no wind. The leaves overhead hung motionless, the air utterly still. Her gaze snapped to the sound’s origin, a dense patch of bushes where the moonlight barely penetrated. Nothing moved. The shadows seemed to hold their breath, blending seamlessly with the vegetation. Her intelligent brain immediately supplied rational explanations: a fox, a badger, the settling of earth. But the primal part of her screamed that none of those explanations fit the chilling unnaturalness of the grove. She touched the pendant again, its warmth now a steady beat against her palm. It offered no reassurance, only confirmation that *something* was reacting. She tried to retrace her steps mentally, mapping the path she'd taken. It felt like only minutes had passed since she’d entered the standing stones, yet a strange lethargy was beginning to creep into her limbs, a sense of time stretching thin, elastic. She instinctively checked her phone, pulled it from an inner pocket. The screen flickered to life, the time displayed: 2:03 AM. She distinctly remembered glancing at it minutes ago, when it had read 2:01 AM. Two minutes. But the feeling of stillness, of immersion, felt like it had lasted far longer. A disquieting synchronicity between the pendant's pulse and this temporal slippage. Another sound. A whisper, faint as a moth’s wing against glass, seemed to coil around her ear. It was not words, not clearly. More of a sigh given shape, a breath that was not her own. Rory whipped her head around, her heart hammering against her ribs. Her bright blue eyes, usually so steady, darted into the gloom. Nothing. The wildflowers stood in silent, luminous testimony to the Grove’s oppressive peace. Yet, she felt a prickling sensation start at the base of her neck and crawl down her arms, the hairs standing on end. This was not just an isolated clearing. This was a place *aware*. Her vision caught a flicker at the edge, a movement too quick to register. It was like a shadow detaching itself from the deeper darkness beneath an ancient hawthorn. She blinked, and it was gone. But the impression remained: a disturbance, a presence that didn't belong. She forced herself to take a slow, deep breath. *Think, Rory.* What was happening? The pendant reacted to Hel portals. Hel. The realm of darkness, of the dead. Was this Grove merely a threshold? Was something emanating from it, something dangerous and unseen? She turned slowly, a full circle, her gaze trying to pierce the curtain of night and unnatural flora. The standing stones felt like eyes, watching her every move. The sense of isolation was profound, but it was undercut by an even more terrifying certainty: she was not alone. The feeling was like a cold hand tracing the outline of her spine, the prickling on her skin intensifying. It wasn't just that something was *here*, it was that *it knew she was here*. It was aware of her intrusion, of the warmth radiating from her chest, a beacon in its silent domain. A low, rustling sound emanated from directly behind the largest oak standing stone, close enough to make her flinch. It was the sound of something scraping, something moving deliberately, deliberately *slowly*. Rory backed away, her movements stiff, careful not to make a sound that would betray her fear. Her fingers tightened around the pendant beneath her shirt, the cool metal now strangely comforting, a tangible link to the world she understood, even as its warmth was the reason she was here. The wildflowers seemed to lean towards her now, their bright colours pulsing in rhythm with the pendant’s rhythm. Or was that just her eyes playing tricks? The luminescence seemed to intensify, casting faint, wavering patterns on the ground. She felt a sudden, intense wave of dizziness, like the Grove itself was tilting. She squeezed her eyes shut for a moment, trying to ground herself. When she opened them again, the shadows seemed deeper, more substantial. The periphery of her vision was alive with fleeting movements, shapes that coalesced and dissolved before her mind could fully register them. It was like looking through a warped lens, where reality itself was unstable. The air grew colder, a biting frost that seeped into her bones. It wasn't just the chill of the night; it was an unnatural cold, the kind that hinted at vast, empty spaces. She thought of the delivery routes she'd taken, the dark alleyways, the hushed streets. She had navigated fear before, the everyday anxieties of a city at night, but this was different. This was ancient, elemental fear. The kind born not of human malice, but of something far older, far less comprehensible. A faint, almost imperceptible glow began to emanate from the heart of the clearing, not from the wildflowers, but from a point deeper within the interwoven branches. It was a soft, internal light, like moonlight filtered through blood, a deep crimson that mirrored the gem against her skin. The pendant pulsed faster, its warmth blooming into a distinct heat that singed her fingertips. It was no longer just reacting; it was *agitated*. She knew, then, with a certainty that chilled her to the marrow, that she had stumbled into a place where the veil was thin. Whatever whispered her name, whatever moved in the shadows, whatever pulsed with the Grove’s unnatural vitality, was drawing closer. The stillness was gone, replaced by a taut, expectant silence that was far more terrifying. It was the silence before the predator strikes. Rory’s cool-headed intelligence battled against a rising tide of pure dread. She was alone, deep in a place that bent the rules of reality, and something unseen was coming for her down the path of glowing flowers, drawn by the very artifact she carried. Her hand, trembling slightly, instinctively reached for the small crescent scar on her left wrist, a familiar anchor in a world suddenly adrift. But even that familiar mark felt alien under the oppressive, watching stillness of the Fae Grove.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
65.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1584
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"intensely"
count1
3
adverb"utterly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count2
5
adverb"deliberately"
count2
6
adverb"very"
count1
7
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"intensely"
3"utterly"
4"slowly"
5"deliberately"
6"very"
7"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1584
totalAiIsms46
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count7
3
word"throb"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count3
5
word"palpable"
count1
6
word"sentinel"
count1
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count3
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"chilling"
count1
14
word"sense of"
count2
15
word"flickered"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"gloom"
count1
18
word"oppressive"
count2
19
word"flicker"
count1
20
word"profound"
count1
21
word"tracing"
count1
22
word"beacon"
count1
23
word"comforting"
count1
24
word"tangible"
count1
25
word"wavering"
count1
26
word"fleeting"
count1
27
word"navigated"
count1
28
word"chilled"
count1
29
word"predator"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"pulse"
2"warmth"
3"throb"
4"familiar"
5"palpable"
6"sentinel"
7"silence"
8"shimmered"
9"perfect"
10"pulsed"
11"scanning"
12"echoed"
13"chilling"
14"sense of"
15"flickered"
16"whisper"
17"gloom"
18"oppressive"
19"flicker"
20"profound"
21"tracing"
22"beacon"
23"comforting"
24"tangible"
25"wavering"
26"fleeting"
27"navigated"
28"chilled"
29"predator"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
38.01% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords16
totalWords1585
ratio0.01
matches
0"Near a Hel portal"
1"something"
2"aware"
3"Think, Rory."
4"here"
5"it knew she was here"
6"slowly"
7"agitated"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1584
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.44
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora1
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
April1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Fae2
Grove7
Eva1
Rory7
Hel3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Pendant"
3"Eva"
4"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
5"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences99
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"blanket that seemed to absorb stray noises before they could even form"
1"felt like a trick of the eye"
2"not quite woodland loam, nor decaying leaves; it was sharper, cleaner, with an unsettling undertone of something metallic, like rain on old blood"
3"felt like only minutes had passed since"
4"felt like it had lasted far longer"
5"felt like eyes, watching her every move"
6"seemed deeper more substantial"
10.73% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.893
wordCount1585
matches
0"not to an infernal crack in the pavement, but to this forgotten pocket off the beaten track, the air growi"
1"not of human malice, but of something far older, far less comprehensible"
2"not from the wildflowers, but from a point deeper within the interwoven branches"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences109
matches
0"screamed that none"
1"was that *it"
79.44% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean93.24
std39.91
cv0.428
sampleLengths
0168
190
2132
389
471
58
6106
7129
894
912
1089
11101
1281
13110
1484
1572
16149
95.61% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences109
matches
0"was gone"
1"was *agitated"
2"was gone"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs246
matches
0"was guiding"
1"was reacting"
2"was beginning"
3"was happening"
4"was tilting"
5"was like looking"
6"was drawing"
7"was coming"
38.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences109
ratio0.037
matches
0"Wildflowers, impossibly vibrant, carpeted the ground – blues, purples, and whites that shimmered with a faint, phosphorescent glow."
1"The air here was thick, damp, and carried a scent that was not quite woodland loam, nor decaying leaves; it was sharper, cleaner, with an unsettling undertone of something metallic, like rain on old blood."
2"It wasn't just the chill of the night; it was an unnatural cold, the kind that hinted at vast, empty spaces."
3"It was no longer just reacting; it was *agitated*."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount239
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.029288702928870293
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.016736401673640166
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean14.54
std7.89
cv0.542
sampleLengths
029
117
228
320
444
530
618
729
825
918
1010
1124
1213
1319
1410
1518
1628
1710
1817
1916
2014
2111
2214
236
2411
2513
268
2715
2835
298
305
319
327
336
345
359
3617
372
3812
3915
4019
4114
4210
4312
4431
4511
4610
4714
482
4914
40.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.24770642201834864
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences104
matches
0"Even the distant traffic drone"
1"Too loud to be a"
2"Too distinct to be the"
3"More of a sigh given"
ratio0.038
46.92% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences104
matches
0"She pulled the collar of"
1"She was here because the"
2"It had led her, not"
3"She reached the standing stones"
4"They marked the supposed edge"
5"Her childhood friend Eva had"
6"It wasn't the absence of"
7"Her own breathing sounded unnaturally"
8"Their petals seemed too smooth,"
9"It wasn't an infernal heat,"
10"It was guiding her, or"
11"She took a tentative step"
12"Her mind, cool and sharp,"
13"It was the sound of"
14"Her gaze snapped to the"
15"Her intelligent brain immediately supplied"
16"She touched the pendant again,"
17"It offered no reassurance, only"
18"She tried to retrace her"
19"It felt like only minutes"
ratio0.433
56.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences104
matches
0"The edge of Richmond Park"
1"The lamplit perimeter of the"
2"She pulled the collar of"
3"The night air, even this"
4"She was here because the"
5"It had led her, not"
6"She reached the standing stones"
7"They marked the supposed edge"
8"Her childhood friend Eva had"
9"The moment she stepped within"
10"It wasn't the absence of"
11"Her own breathing sounded unnaturally"
12"The moonlight here lent an"
13"Wildflowers, impossibly vibrant, carpeted the"
14"The codex had mentioned they"
15"Their petals seemed too smooth,"
16"Rory’s right hand drifted to"
17"It wasn't an infernal heat,"
18"It was guiding her, or"
19"She took a tentative step"
ratio0.808
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences104
matches
0"Now, standing between the silent,"
1"Yet, the pendant’s reaction was"
2"Yet, she felt a prickling"
ratio0.029
35.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences80
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"The edge of Richmond Park dissolved into deeper shadow as Aurora Carter stepped off the gravel path, her trainers crunching softly on fallen leaves that felt ol…"
1"The night air, even this late in April, carried a deceptive chill that had nothing to do with the temperature."
2"She was here because the Heartstone Pendant, nestled heavy and smooth against her skin beneath her shirt, had begun to pulse with a quiet, insistent warmth two …"
3"Wildflowers, impossibly vibrant, carpeted the ground – blues, purples, and whites that shimmered with a faint, phosphorescent glow."
4"Beneath her shirt, the gemstone pulsed with a warmth that felt more significant now, more insistent."
5"The air here was thick, damp, and carried a scent that was not quite woodland loam, nor decaying leaves; it was sharper, cleaner, with an unsettling undertone o…"
6"The feeling was like a cold hand tracing the outline of her spine, the prickling on her skin intensifying."
7"The periphery of her vision was alive with fleeting movements, shapes that coalesced and dissolved before her mind could fully register them."
8"It wasn't just the chill of the night; it was an unnatural cold, the kind that hinted at vast, empty spaces."
9"It was a soft, internal light, like moonlight filtered through blood, a deep crimson that mirrored the gem against her skin."
10"The pendant pulsed faster, its warmth blooming into a distinct heat that singed her fingertips."
11"The stillness was gone, replaced by a taut, expectant silence that was far more terrifying."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Her childhood friend Eva had (have)"
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
70.2228%