| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.84% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1827 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "perfectly" | | 4 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.79% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1827 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "navigating" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "sentinels" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "velvet" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "electric" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "tracing" | | 12 | "racing" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "etched" | | 15 | "calculated" | | 16 | "porcelain" | | 17 | "standard" | | 18 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blink of an eye" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "in the blink of an eye" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 150 | | matches | | |
| 76.19% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 150 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "managed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "seemed to" | | 3 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 151 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 31 | | totalWords | 1815 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "The clearing marked by the ancient oaks. Do not leave the bag at the gate. Bring it to the center. Do not look back." | | 1 | "Cool-headed," | | 2 | "Think your way out, Aurora." | | 3 | "were" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 63 | | wordCount | 1780 | | uniqueNames | 22 | | maxNameDensity | 0.84 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 4 | | Aurora | 2 | | Carter | 2 | | Isabella | 2 | | Plantation | 2 | | October | 1 | | Golden | 3 | | Empress | 3 | | Peking | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 6 | | Surrounding | 1 | | Heartstone | 7 | | Pendant | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Jasmin | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 2 | | Silas | 1 | | Rory | 15 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Empress" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Pendant" | | 5 | "Jasmin" | | 6 | "Silas" | | 7 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Isabella" | | 4 | "Plantation" | | 5 | "Peking" | | 6 | "Fae" | | 7 | "Grove" | | 8 | "Cardiff" | | 9 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 119 | | glossingSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "quite see through the canopy, the Fae Grove stretched out before her" | | 1 | "f oak that had seemingly turned to stone whi" | | 2 | "felt like sentinels guarding a door tha" | | 3 | "as if eavesdropping on her thoughts" | | 4 | "seemed taller from this vantage point, leaning inward as if eavesdropping on her thoughts" | | 5 | "drone that seemed to vibrate in her marrow" | | 6 | "It was as if something invisible were walking across the grass, and its very footprint was poison" | | 7 | "looked like woven cobwebs" | | 8 | "looked like polished teeth" | | 9 | "sounded like grinding glass" | | 10 | "felt like an anchor in a storm" | | 11 | "runes that seemed to bleed a slow, silver sap" | | 12 | "felt like a winter frost that bit throu" |
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| 89.81% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.102 | | wordCount | 1815 | | matches | | 0 | "Not unzipped, but shredded" | | 1 | "not toward the brambles, but toward one of the standing stones" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 42.21 | | std | 24.01 | | cv | 0.569 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 79 | | 2 | 99 | | 3 | 74 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 82 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 97 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 46 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 48 | | 18 | 62 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 55 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 56 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 38 | | 28 | 53 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 48 | | 31 | 39 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 57 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 45 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 52 | | 41 | 54 | | 42 | 30 |
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| 79.53% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | | 0 | "been left" | | 1 | "were made" | | 2 | "being lit" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "was gone" | | 5 | "been finished" | | 6 | "being heard" | | 7 | "been opened" | | 8 | "was gone" | | 9 | "was sucked" | | 10 | "was replaced" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 14 | | totalVerbs | 283 | | matches | | 0 | "was navigating" | | 1 | "was stumbling" | | 2 | "was coming" | | 3 | "was nearly scalding" | | 4 | "were screaming" | | 5 | "were walking" | | 6 | "was glowing" | | 7 | "was throbbing" | | 8 | "was blistering" | | 9 | "was tugging" | | 10 | "were shimmering" | | 11 | "were flickering" | | 12 | "were still eating" | | 13 | "were still standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 11 | | flaggedSentences | 20 | | totalSentences | 151 | | ratio | 0.132 | | matches | | 0 | "One step she was navigating the familiar, muddy outskirts near the Isabella Plantation; the next, she was stumbling into a clearing where the air tasted of crushed jasmine and overripe peaches." | | 1 | "Surrounding the clearing were the standing stones—halfway between petrified wood and weathered granite." | | 2 | "They didn't just mark the boundary; they felt like sentinels guarding a door that had been left ajar." | | 3 | "It didn't just sit; it thrummed." | | 4 | "They were vivid, terrifyingly bright colors—electric blues, bruised purples, and amaranth reds—blooming with a vitality that felt predatory." | | 5 | "As she walked, they didn't crush under her boots; they bent away, then sprang back up, untouched." | | 6 | "It wasn't just warm now; it was nearly scalding." | | 7 | "She was a delivery driver, a girl who had survived an abusive ex and the cutthroat streets of London; she didn't believe in fairy tales." | | 8 | "Then it appeared on the other side—a tall, spindly shape that didn't so much walk as unfold itself from behind a standing stone." | | 9 | "But the vibration wasn't rhythmic; it was melodic." | | 10 | "A few yards away, a wildflower—a deep, veined orchid—suddenly wilted, its petals turning to grey ash in seconds." | | 11 | "They didn't have faces, not really—just smooth, pale surfaces where features should be, like wet clay that hadn't been finished." | | 12 | "If the stone was this hot, the Grove wasn't just a clearing; it was a thinning of the skin between worlds." | | 13 | "The \"delivery\" hadn't been an order; it had been bait." | | 14 | "A sound finally broke the silence—a wet, tearing noise, like someone pulling a heavy boot out of thick mud." | | 15 | "She felt the power of the artifact—a strange, ancient weight that felt like an anchor in a storm." | | 16 | "One of them raised a hand—a long, spindly thing with too many fingers—and pointed at her chest." | | 17 | "The pale things didn't run; they simply *were* further along their path each time she blinked." | | 18 | "The touch didn't feel like skin; it felt like a winter frost that bit through the fabric and into her spine." | | 19 | "The sweetness, the light, the pale figures—all of it was sucked into a single, silent point of crimson light." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 213 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 8 | | adverbRatio | 0.03755868544600939 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018779342723004695 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 151 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 151 | | mean | 12.02 | | std | 7.42 | | cv | 0.617 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 34 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 38.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.2781456953642384 | | totalSentences | 151 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 91.95% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "Then it appeared on the" | | 1 | "Instead, she backed away, her" | | 2 | "Slowly, the world began to" | | 3 | "Only the dark, silent woods" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 82.07% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "It shouldn't have been there." | | 2 | "She knew the geography of" | | 3 | "They were enormous, gnarled trunks" | | 4 | "They didn't just mark the" | | 5 | "It didn't just sit; it" | | 6 | "It grew warmer as she" | | 7 | "she called out" | | 8 | "Her voice, usually steady and" | | 9 | "She looked down at the" | | 10 | "They were vivid, terrifyingly bright" | | 11 | "They shouldn't have been in" | | 12 | "Her mind, trained by the" | | 13 | "It wasn't just warm now;" | | 14 | "She stopped in the exact" | | 15 | "She knelt to place the" | | 16 | "she said, her blue eyes" | | 17 | "She turned to leave, but" | | 18 | "She was a delivery driver," | | 19 | "She took a step toward" |
| | ratio | 0.345 | |
| 73.79% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 112 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "The damp autumn air of" | | 1 | "The transition was so sharp" | | 2 | "Rory stopped, her boots sinking" | | 3 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 4 | "Yu-Fei would have a fit" | | 5 | "It shouldn't have been there." | | 6 | "She knew the geography of" | | 7 | "They were enormous, gnarled trunks" | | 8 | "They didn't just mark the" | | 9 | "Rory reached up, her fingers" | | 10 | "The thumbnail-sized crimson gem was" | | 11 | "Tonight, it was different." | | 12 | "It didn't just sit; it" | | 13 | "A faint, rhythmic heat radiated" | | 14 | "It grew warmer as she" | | 15 | "she called out" | | 16 | "Her voice, usually steady and" | | 17 | "The silence was absolute, a" | | 18 | "She looked down at the" | | 19 | "They were vivid, terrifyingly bright" |
| | ratio | 0.772 | |
| 68.97% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "If the stone was this" | | 1 | "If this was a portal," |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "They were enormous, gnarled trunks of oak that had seemingly turned to stone while twisting in silent agony." | | 1 | "Her voice, usually steady and sharp, sounded muffled, as if the air around her were made of heavy velvet." | | 2 | "They were vivid, terrifyingly bright colors—electric blues, bruised purples, and amaranth reds—blooming with a vitality that felt predatory." | | 3 | "The light was coming from the flora itself, a faint phosphoric glow that cast long, distorted shadows away from her, as if she were being lit by a fire that gav…" | | 4 | "The standing stones seemed taller from this vantage point, leaning inward as if eavesdropping on her thoughts." | | 5 | "It was as if something invisible were walking across the grass, and its very footprint was poison." | | 6 | "The deep crimson gem was glowing fiercely, a frantic, red strobe light that illuminated the clearing in flashes." | | 7 | "They were tall, their limbs long and too many-jointed, dressed in rags that looked like woven cobwebs." | | 8 | "The crescent scar was throbbing, a dull ache that mirrored the pendant’s pulse." | | 9 | "She just stood there in the cold, her fingers trailing over the crescent scar on her wrist, wondering if the things in the Grove were still eating the teeth she…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her blue eyes scanning the perimeter" | | 1 | "Rory said, her voice iron-flat despite the trembling in her knees" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "a voice whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |