Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95T3FWVETDMF576XD6PWBY

Run Details

Duration:
23.5s
Cost:
$0.009817
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain in Soho didn't fall so much as it dissolved, a grey, atomized mist that clung to the brickwork and turned the pavement into a dark, oil-slicked mirror. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the air tasted of old cedar, hop-residue, and the faint, metallic hum of the green neon sign vibrating above the door. Aurora Carter sat at the far end of the bar, her fingers tracing the condensation on a condensation-beaded glass of soda water. She was twenty-five, but in the low, amber light of the Nest, surrounded by Silas’s collection of yellowing maps and silver-framed photographs of cities that no longer existed, she felt like a relic. Her black hair, cut sharp at the shoulders, caught the light whenever she tilted her head. She pulled the sleeve of her oversized sweater down, subconsciously masking the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. Behind the bar, Silas Blackwood moved with a practiced, heavy-footed rhythm. The slight limp in his left leg—a souvenir from a life he rarely spoke of—dictated the tempo of the room. He was polishing a highball glass, his hazel eyes scanning the few patrons scattered in the booths with a quiet, territorial authority. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught a stray beam of light as he set the glass down and looked at Rory. “You’re thinking too loud again, kid,” Silas said. His voice was a low rasp, seasoned by decades of smoke and secrets. “It’s distracting the coasters.” Rory offered a thin smile. “Just winding down. The lunch rush at the Golden Empress was a nightmare. Yu-Fei had me halfway to Kensington and back through the gridlock.” Silas grunted, a sound of vague sympathy, and began to rearrange a row of gin bottles. The bell above the door chimed—a sharp, brassy note that cut through the low-fi jazz humming from the speakers. A man stepped in, bringing a gust of cold, wet air with him. He paused to shake out a black umbrella, his movements precise and expensive. He wore a charcoal overcoat that cost more than Rory’s monthly rent, and his shoes, though dampened by the London sludge, were polished to a high, unforgiving shine. Rory didn't look up until the man climbed onto a stool three seats away. Silas approached him, his expression neutral, the mask of the veteran barman firmly in place. “Whisky. Neat. Something old,” the man said. Rory froze. The voice was a jarring chord from a song she had spent three years trying to forget. It was an educated voice, rounded by the lecture halls of Cardiff University and the stuffy boardrooms of her father’s law firm. She turned her head slowly, the movement heavy and reluctant. “Leo?” The man turned. He had a face built for success—symmetrical, clean-shaven, though the skin beneath his eyes was bruised with the fatigue of the high-stakes world. He squinted through the gloom, his gaze traveling from Rory’s worn leather jacket to the sharp line of her jaw. “Aurora?” he whispered. His eyes widened, a mixture of shock and a strange, harrowing relief. “My God. It is you.” He didn't call her Rory. To Leo Thorne, and everyone from the life she had fled, she was still Aurora Carter, the barrister’s daughter with the bright future and the brilliant, legalistic mind. “It’s just Rory now,” she said, her voice steadier than she felt. Leo stood, then seemed to think better of it and sat back down, his hands splayed on the mahogany bar. “Rory. Right. I… I’ve looked for you. Your father has looked for you. After you left Cardiff, after that business with Evan, you just disappeared. We heard London, but London is a big place to drown in.” “I didn't drown, Leo. I just learned to swim in different water.” Silas slid a glass of amber liquid toward Leo. His hazel eyes lingered on Rory for a fraction of a second—a silent check-in—before he retreated to the other end of the bar to tinker with the espresso machine. He remained within earshot, a silent sentinel. Leo took a long pull of his whisky. “You look different. Not just the hair. There’s a… hardness to you.” “Survival tends to do that,” she said. She looked at his hands. On his ring finger sat a heavy gold band. He had stayed the course. He had followed the map their parents had drawn for them. “I see you made Junior Partner. Or is it Senior now?” “Senior,” Leo said, a flicker of pride quickly extinguished by the awkwardness of the moment. “I’m in London for a merger. Staying at the Savoy. I just… I needed a drink somewhere quiet. Somewhere no one would recognize me.” He let out a dry, hollow laugh. “Of all the gin joints, right?” “This isn't a gin joint, Leo. It’s a sanctuary.” “A sanctuary.” He gestured to the maps on the walls, the dim lighting, the faded grandeur of the place. “You were the top of our class, Rory. You could have been anything. You could have been sitting across from me at the Savoy, talking about case law and pensions. Instead, you’re… what are you doing?” Rory thought of the bike journeys through the rain, the smell of ginger and soy from the Golden Empress, the quiet nights in her flat upstairs where the only sound was the muffled thump of the bass from the bar below. She thought of the freedom of being nobody, of the way the name Aurora felt like a dress that had always been three sizes too small. “I’m living,” she said. “Without permission.” The tension between them was a physical thing, a bridge built of old memories that was slowly collapsing under its own weight. Leo looked at her with a pity that made her blood simmer. He saw a tragedy; she saw a narrow escape. “He’s still there, you know,” Leo said softly. “Evan. He’s back in Cardiff. He’s… he’s cleaned up his act. He asks about you.” Rory’s hand twitched. The crescent scar on her wrist felt hot, a ghost-pain from the night she’d tripped over a glass coffee table while trying to escape a storm she hadn't realized she was living in. Silas’s rag stopped moving. The bar went very quiet. “I don’t care about Evan,” Rory said, her voice dropping to a dangerous, low frequency. “And I don’t care about the version of me you carry around in your head, Leo. That girl died on the M4 somewhere near Reading.” Leo flinched. He reached out as if to touch her arm, but the cold intensity in her blue eyes stopped him. “I didn't mean to—I’m just saying, it doesn't have to be like this. Your father, he’s older. He’s had a heart scare. He wants the daughter he lost back.” “He has the daughter he deserved,” Rory replied. “The one who did exactly what he wanted until she couldn't breathe anymore. Tell him I’m dead if it makes it easier for him. It’s functionally the same.” Leo stared at her, and for a moment, the polished veneer of the high-flying solicitor cracked. He looked at the shadows in the corner of the room, at the maps of lost empires, and he seemed to realize that he was the one who was out of place. He was a man of the light, of contracts and certainties, standing in a room built for people who lived in the margins. “You’ve changed so much, Aurora,” he said, his voice thick with a regret he couldn't quite name. It wasn't just regreting for her—it was the realization that the world wasn't as stable as he believed. That someone could simply step off the path and vanish into the fog. “No,” Rory said, sliding off her stool. “I’ve just stopped pretending. There’s a difference.” She turned to Silas. “I’m going up, Si. See you in the morning.” Silas nodded once, a sharp, decisive movement. He turned his gaze to Leo, a look that wasn't hostile but carried the weight of a physical barrier. “Drink’s on the house, counselor. Have a safe walk back to the Savoy.” Rory didn't wait for Leo’s response. She walked toward the back of the bar, past the bookshelf that led to the secret room she’d only seen once, and up the narrow, creaking stairs to her apartment. Halfway up, she paused. Through the floorboards, she heard the muffled chime of the bell as Leo exited back into the Soho mist. She stood in the dark for a long time, her hand resting on the banister. She looked down at the scar on her wrist, barely visible in the gloom. It was a small mark, a little crescent moon, a reminder of the cost of leaving. The weight of the years she’d spent in Cardiff felt like a heavy coat she’d finally dropped in the hallway. She took a breath, the air smelling of London rain and the old, reliable wood of The Raven’s Nest, and continued climbing, leaving the ghost of Aurora Carter in the bar below.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Leo said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.424
leniency0.848
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.061
83.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1519
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"quickly"
2"softly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1519
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"firmly"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count2
4
word"sentinel"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"sanctuary"
count2
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"intensity"
count1
10
word"carried the weight"
count1
11
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"scanning"
2"firmly"
3"gloom"
4"sentinel"
5"flicker"
6"sanctuary"
7"tension"
8"weight"
9"intensity"
10"carried the weight"
11"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences80
matches
0"a flicker of pride"
89.29% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1512
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1156
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.21
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Raven2
Nest3
Carter3
Silas9
Blackwood1
Rory14
London2
Cardiff2
University1
Leo12
Thorne1
Aurora4
Golden1
Empress1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Rory"
6"Leo"
7"Thorne"
8"Aurora"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Golden"
globalScore0.894
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like a relic"
1"felt like a dress that had always been"
2"quite name"
3"felt like a heavy coat she’d finally dr"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1512
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"realize that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean39.79
std22.67
cv0.57
sampleLengths
054
190
277
325
429
589
629
77
851
91
1046
1120
1233
1312
1457
1512
1645
1720
1848
1952
209
2155
2267
236
2443
2523
2645
2740
2850
2936
3071
3148
3214
3313
3439
3536
3668
3752
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"were polished"
85.06% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs174
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was slowly collapsing"
2"wasn't just regreting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences99
ratio0.061
matches
0"The slight limp in his left leg—a souvenir from a life he rarely spoke of—dictated the tempo of the room."
1"The bell above the door chimed—a sharp, brassy note that cut through the low-fi jazz humming from the speakers."
2"He had a face built for success—symmetrical, clean-shaven, though the skin beneath his eyes was bruised with the fatigue of the high-stakes world."
3"His hazel eyes lingered on Rory for a fraction of a second—a silent check-in—before he retreated to the other end of the bar to tinker with the espresso machine."
4"He saw a tragedy; she saw a narrow escape."
5"It wasn't just regreting for her—it was the realization that the world wasn't as stable as he believed."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1176
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.02465986394557823
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.011054421768707483
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean15.27
std9.44
cv0.618
sampleLengths
029
125
222
333
416
519
611
720
822
924
108
1113
124
135
1424
1516
1619
1713
1813
1928
2014
2115
227
232
2417
2522
2610
271
283
2923
3020
313
3212
335
345
3528
3612
3720
3837
3912
409
4129
427
438
4412
457
465
479
485
4911
47.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.32323232323232326
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
28.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences73
matches
0"She was twenty-five, but in"
1"Her black hair, cut sharp"
2"She pulled the sleeve of"
3"He was polishing a highball"
4"His voice was a low"
5"He paused to shake out"
6"He wore a charcoal overcoat"
7"It was an educated voice,"
8"She turned her head slowly,"
9"He had a face built"
10"He squinted through the gloom,"
11"His eyes widened, a mixture"
12"He didn't call her Rory."
13"she said, her voice steadier"
14"His hazel eyes lingered on"
15"He remained within earshot, a"
16"She looked at his hands."
17"He had stayed the course."
18"He had followed the map"
19"He let out a dry,"
ratio0.479
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences73
matches
0"The rain in Soho didn't"
1"Aurora Carter sat at the"
2"She was twenty-five, but in"
3"Her black hair, cut sharp"
4"She pulled the sleeve of"
5"The slight limp in his"
6"He was polishing a highball"
7"The silver signet ring on"
8"His voice was a low"
9"Rory offered a thin smile."
10"Silas grunted, a sound of"
11"The bell above the door"
12"A man stepped in, bringing"
13"He paused to shake out"
14"He wore a charcoal overcoat"
15"Rory didn't look up until"
16"Silas approached him, his expression"
17"the man said"
18"The voice was a jarring"
19"It was an educated voice,"
ratio0.932
68.49% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"To Leo Thorne, and everyone"
ratio0.014
82.07% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The rain in Soho didn't fall so much as it dissolved, a grey, atomized mist that clung to the brickwork and turned the pavement into a dark, oil-slicked mirror."
1"The tension between them was a physical thing, a bridge built of old memories that was slowly collapsing under its own weight."
2"Leo looked at her with a pity that made her blood simmer."
3"She walked toward the back of the bar, past the bookshelf that led to the secret room she’d only seen once, and up the narrow, creaking stairs to her apartment."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
1"Rory said, her voice dropping to a dangerous, low frequency"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.061
75.5335%