Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95V6EQNA5ZVRZ7KHCYD2MA

Run Details

Duration:
23.3s
Cost:
$0.001991
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The damp London air clung to Aurora’s coat like a second skin, a permanent fixture after a shift delivering steaming cartons of Kung Pao chicken and sweet and sour pork. She pushed open the low door of The Raven’s Nest, the familiar click of the latch a small comfort. The air inside was thick with the scent of old wood, spilled beer, and a faint, undercurrent of something sharper – pipe tobacco, perhaps, or the lingering ghost of Silas’s wartime espionage. It was a refuge, this place. Dimly lit, the walls a comforting mosaic of faded maps and stoic black-and-white photographs of faces she’d never know, it was a place that seemed to absorb the city’s clamor, offering a hush in return. Silas Blackwood stood behind the scarred oak bar, his movements economical, precise. The grey in his auburn hair had deepened since she’d first moved into the flat above him. His hazel eyes, sharp and assessing, met hers over the rim of a glass he was polishing. A flicker of recognition, a slight nod, and he returned to his task. He didn’t need to ask what she’d have. A pint of bitter, ice-cold and uncomplicated, was her ritual. He’d slide it across the dark wood without preamble, a silent acknowledgment of shared proximity. She took a stool near the back, away from the early evening trickle of patrons. Her uniform, plain black trousers and a branded polo shirt for the Golden Empress, felt too bright, too functional in the muted glow. She peeled off her gloves, tucking them into the pocket of her drab jacket. The small crescent scar on her left wrist, usually hidden by her sleeve, felt cool against her skin. A phantom ache, a memory of scraped bone and a panicked doctor’s visit that felt like another lifetime. It was the lifetime before London, certainly. Before Evan. Before the quiet desperation that had landed her here, above a bar owned by a retired spy. The door swung open again, a gust of colder wind briefly stirring the motes of dust dancing in the gloom. A man entered, shaking droplets from a pristine charcoal umbrella. He scanned the room, his gaze sweeping past her, then snapping back. For a moment, only the low murmur of the bar and the distant traffic filled the space between them. A strange, unsettling stillness. Then he spoke, his voice a confident baritone that carried a resonance she hadn’t heard in years. "Rory?" Aurora froze, the half-lifted pint glass halfway to her lips. The name, spoken with that particular inflection, was like a key turning in a lock she’d long forgotten existed. She lowered the glass slowly, her heart giving an unwelcome lurch. She turned, fully, and met his eyes. Liam. It was Liam. But… not. The boy she’d shared stolen cigarettes with behind the derelict garage near her childhood home, the one who’d debated philosophical texts with her until dawn fuelled by cheap instant coffee. He was still tall, perhaps an inch or two more, but it was the polish that struck her. His hair, once perpetually tousled, was cut with sharp, modern precision. He wore a suit that spoke of Savile Row without shouting it, a subtle weave of charcoal grey that seemed to absorb the light rather than reflect it. A watch, sleek and silver, glinted on his wrist. His eyes, she remembered them as being a warm, inquisitive brown. Now, they were sharp, appraising, missing nothing, yet holding a curious, almost chilling, detachment. He looked like he belonged in a boardroom, not the dim, bohemian haven of The Raven’s Nest. "Liam," she managed, her voice a little rougher than she intended. "Christ. It's been… a while." He grinned, a flash of white teeth that lacked the easy, open warmth of the boy she remembered. "A while," he echoed, the grin widening, but not quite reaching those sharp eyes. "Years. What are you doing… here?" He gestured vaguely around the bar, his suit jacket settling perfectly back into place as he walked towards her. She shrugged, a gesture that felt pathetic. "London. Work. I, ah, live in the flat upstairs." She indicated the ceiling with a slight tilt of her head. "Silas's place." Liam’s eyebrows lifted, a subtle, almost imperceptible shift. "Silas? The Raven's Nest? Still playing landlord, is he?" He didn't seem to quite know what to make of it. Rory offered a small, tight smile. "Something like that." He reached their table. "You… you look… successful." The word felt clumsy on her tongue, inadequate. "I suppose you could say that," he said, perching on the edge of the stool opposite her, his movements economical, almost predatory. He didn't offer to buy her a drink, or ask what she wanted. "And you, Rory? Still aiming for that barrister's wig?" The question landed like a tiny pebble in still water, sending ripples of something old and bitter to the surface. Her father’s courtroom dramas, the endless hours of debate, the path she’d been steered onto with such certainty. "No," she said, her voice flat. "That life… it wasn't for me. Not anymore." "I can imagine," he said, his tone surprisingly gentle, but laced with a hint of something she couldn't quite decipher. Pity? Or was it a quiet satisfaction that she’d strayed from the expected course? She traced the scar on her wrist, a habit she hadn't realized she had. "I heard you left Cardiff rather suddenly." The mention of Cardiff, of home, was a phantom limb. She felt a sudden, sharp pang of missing the uncomplicated ease of their shared past. "It was… time," she said, choosing her words carefully. She poured herself a little of her bitter. "What about you? You’re not still sketching gargoyles on the back of lecture notes, are you?" He laughed, a short, clipped sound. "Hardly. I'm in finance, Rory. Sterling Towers. You know it?" Sterling Towers. Of course. The gleaming monument to commerce in the city’s heart, a place worlds away from greasy curry deliveries and the hushed world of Silas’s bar. "I know of it," she said. "It’s… demanding. But rewarding." He paused, his gaze drifting past her, as if already distracted, looking for an exit. "We always said we’d conquer the world, didn't we? You with your words, me with… whatever I decided to pin my colours to." He turned back, a more direct look in his eye. "I still have that old notebook of yours, you know. The one with all your arguments against Kierkegaard." A memory, sharp and clear, flashed through her mind: the cramped attic room in her shared student flat, the smell of dust and old paper, Liam leaning back against the window frame, the streetlight casting his face in silver. They’d been young, fiercely intelligent, convinced they possessed the keys to understanding everything. They’d had plans. Grand, sweeping plans that involved changing the world, or at least understanding it. "You kept it?" she asked, a surprising softness entering her voice. "Of course," he said, his tone casual, but his eyes held hers. "It was a snapshot. Of us. Of what we thought was important. I sometimes wonder if I still remember what that felt like. Before Sterling Towers." He picked up an olive from a small dish Silas had placed on their table, turning it between his thumb and forefinger. "You know, I was at a gala last week. Some charity auction. Spoke to Lord Ashworth. He’s looking for bright young minds for his new venture. Something about… offshore energy contracts. I thought of you." The offer hung in the air, heavy and ill-fitting. Offshore energy contracts. Her father would have approved. But it wasn't her. Not the Rory who had fled an abusive relationship, the Rory who found solace in the quiet competence of Silas’s bar, the Rory who delivered lukewarm meals to strangers for a living. "That's… kind, Liam," she said, her voice deliberately cool. "But I'm not really… looking for a new career path of that nature." He took a slow sip of the neat whiskey he'd ordered with the kind of effortless entitlement she’d only ever seen on television. "Pity," he murmured, setting the glass down. "Such brilliant potential. Wasted, perhaps?" The word “wasted” struck a raw nerve. Was it wasted? Delivering food? Living above a bar? She’d survived. She’d escaped. Wasn't survival a form of success? But looking at Liam, at the way he commanded space even when seated, at the ease with which he navigated a world that felt utterly alien to her, a flicker of doubt, sharp and unwelcome, ignited. He had clearly chosen his path, and honed himself to fit it, like a shard of honed steel. She, on the other hand, felt more like a piece of driftwood, shaped by currents she hadn’t chosen. "Everyone makes their choices, Liam," she said, her voice carefully neutral. "Yours seem to have worked out rather well for you. Are you happy?" His smile was back, quicker this time, thinner. He took another sip of his whiskey. "Happy is a… complicated metric, Rory. But I have what I need. What I wanted." He paused, his gaze finally settling on the crescent scar peeking from her sleeve. He didn't comment on it, but his eyes lingered for a fraction of a second too long. "You always were the one with the courage, though. To walk away. I remember when Evan… well. And you were just… gone. Didn't look back." The mention of Evan tightened something in her chest. Liam had been there, a witness to the suffocating control, the slow erosion of her spirit. He’d seen the fear in her eyes, the desperate need to escape. And then, she’d vanished, leaving only a hasty note for her parents and a bewildered voicemail for Eva. "Sometimes, walking away is the only way forward," she said, her gaze sweeping across the interior of the bar, catching Silas’s eye for a fleeting second. He gave a subtle, almost imperceptible inclination of his head, a silent anchor. "Indeed," Liam replied, standing up as if summoned by an invisible force. His chair scraped back with a low shriek. "Well. I have a train to catch. A late meeting. Business never sleeps, you know." He offered his hand, and she took it. His grip was firm, cool. "It was… good to see you, Rory." "You too, Liam," she said, the words feeling hollow. He gave one last, appraising look, a look that seemed to encompass her entire life since Cardiff, and then he was gone, disappearing into the London night as silently as he had arrived. Aurora sank back onto the stool, the brief energy of the encounter draining away, leaving her feeling paradoxically more tired than before. The pint of bitter tasted flat now, without its accompanying comfort. The weight of time, of paths diverged, of potential unfulfilled or perhaps simply redirected, settled heavily in the quiet space Liam had vacated. She looked at her hands, at the scar on her wrist. Not wasted, she told herself. Just… different. And perhaps, she mused, the cost of Liam's polished success was simply a different kind of indelible mark.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:15:33.731Z" 2/25/2026, 1:15:33 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"He turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.61
leniency1
rawRatio0.08
effectiveRatio0.08
78.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1860
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count2
4
adverb"deliberately"
count1
5
adverb"really"
count1
6
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"perfectly"
2"suddenly"
3"carefully"
4"deliberately"
5"really"
6"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1860
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"comforting"
count1
2
word"mosaic"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count2
4
word"dancing"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"pristine"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"resonance"
count1
9
word"lurch"
count1
10
word"chilling"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"traced"
count1
14
word"pang"
count1
15
word"gleaming"
count1
16
word"solace"
count1
17
word"effortless"
count1
18
word"potential"
count2
19
word"navigated"
count1
20
word"fleeting"
count1
21
word"encounter"
count1
22
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"comforting"
2"mosaic"
3"flicker"
4"dancing"
5"gloom"
6"pristine"
7"scanned"
8"resonance"
9"lurch"
10"chilling"
11"warmth"
12"echoed"
13"traced"
14"pang"
15"gleaming"
16"solace"
17"effortless"
18"potential"
19"navigated"
20"fleeting"
21"encounter"
22"weight"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count2
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"A flicker of recognition"
2"a flicker of doubt"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences123
matches(empty)
84.79% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences123
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1861
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Not wasted, she told herself."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1526
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity0.59
worstName"Liam"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
London3
Aurora3
Kung1
Pao1
Raven2
Nest2
Silas6
Blackwood1
Golden1
Empress1
Evan2
Liam9
Savile1
Row1
Rory4
Pity1
Cardiff2
Towers1
Eva1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Raven"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Empress"
5"Evan"
6"Liam"
7"Rory"
8"Eva"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences98
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"place that seemed to absorb the city’s clamor, offering a hush in return"
1"felt like another lifetime"
2"looked like he belonged in a boardroom, n"
3"not quite reaching those sharp eyes"
4"quite decipher"
5"look that seemed to encompass her entire life since Cardiff, and then he was gone, disappearing into the London night as silently as he had arrived"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1861
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean54.74
std33.63
cv0.614
sampleLengths
0122
192
2114
365
418
547
61
7143
816
957
1029
1128
1225
1344
1452
1555
1658
1716
1834
1970
2068
2111
2295
2353
2422
2535
2698
2724
2886
2955
3039
3155
3242
3392
99.56% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences123
matches
0"been steered"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs237
matches
0"was polishing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences138
ratio0.007
matches
0"The air inside was thick with the scent of old wood, spilled beer, and a faint, undercurrent of something sharper – pipe tobacco, perhaps, or the lingering ghost of Silas’s wartime espionage."
94.40% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1530
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount71
adverbRatio0.046405228758169936
lyAdverbCount26
lyAdverbRatio0.01699346405228758
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean13.49
std9.18
cv0.681
sampleLengths
030
119
232
36
435
512
617
717
813
98
1010
1115
1215
1323
1414
1518
1618
177
182
1917
2020
2110
2212
2319
244
2517
261
2710
2819
2911
307
311
323
331
341
3530
3618
3711
3828
399
4011
4114
4217
4311
445
4518
4614
4725
487
4920
56.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.36231884057971014
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners50
60.61% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences110
matches
0"Dimly lit, the walls a"
1"Then he spoke, his voice"
ratio0.018
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount63
totalSentences110
matches
0"She pushed open the low"
1"It was a refuge, this"
2"His hazel eyes, sharp and"
3"He didn’t need to ask"
4"He’d slide it across the"
5"She took a stool near"
6"Her uniform, plain black trousers"
7"She peeled off her gloves,"
8"It was the lifetime before"
9"He scanned the room, his"
10"She lowered the glass slowly,"
11"She turned, fully, and met"
12"It was Liam."
13"He was still tall, perhaps"
14"His hair, once perpetually tousled,"
15"He wore a suit that"
16"His eyes, she remembered them"
17"He looked like he belonged"
18"she managed, her voice a"
19"He grinned, a flash of"
ratio0.573
32.73% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences110
matches
0"The damp London air clung"
1"She pushed open the low"
2"The air inside was thick"
3"It was a refuge, this"
4"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
5"The grey in his auburn"
6"His hazel eyes, sharp and"
7"A flicker of recognition, a"
8"He didn’t need to ask"
9"A pint of bitter, ice-cold"
10"He’d slide it across the"
11"She took a stool near"
12"Her uniform, plain black trousers"
13"She peeled off her gloves,"
14"The small crescent scar on"
15"A phantom ache, a memory"
16"It was the lifetime before"
17"The door swung open again,"
18"A man entered, shaking droplets"
19"He scanned the room, his"
ratio0.855
90.91% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences110
matches
0"Before the quiet desperation that"
1"Now, they were sharp, appraising,"
ratio0.018
59.52% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Dimly lit, the walls a comforting mosaic of faded maps and stoic black-and-white photographs of faces she’d never know, it was a place that seemed to absorb the…"
1"A phantom ache, a memory of scraped bone and a panicked doctor’s visit that felt like another lifetime."
2"Before the quiet desperation that had landed her here, above a bar owned by a retired spy."
3"He grinned, a flash of white teeth that lacked the easy, open warmth of the boy she remembered."
4"Not the Rory who had fled an abusive relationship, the Rory who found solace in the quiet competence of Silas’s bar, the Rory who delivered lukewarm meals to st…"
5"But looking at Liam, at the way he commanded space even when seated, at the ease with which he navigated a world that felt utterly alien to her, a flicker of do…"
6"He gave one last, appraising look, a look that seemed to encompass her entire life since Cardiff, and then he was gone, disappearing into the London night as si…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"she managed, her voice a little rougher than she intended"
1"he echoed, the grin widening, but not quite reaching those sharp eyes"
2"The word felt, inadequate"
3"she said, her voice flat"
4"she asked, a surprising softness entering her voice"
5"he said, his tone casual, but his eyes held hers"
6"she said, her voice deliberately cool"
7"she said, her voice carefully neutral"
8"she said, the words feeling hollow"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.317
leniency0.634
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.049
78.5742%