Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95VCH06QC4KBF8QXV4TXAM

Run Details

Duration:
23.5s
Cost:
$0.011178
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hummed with the usual Soho evening drone, a low thrum of half-heard conversations and the clink of glasses. Rory wiped down the polished mahogany bar with a practiced hand, the scent of stale ale and lemon polish clinging to her fingers. Outside, the distinctive green neon sign flickered, throwing a faint, sickly glow through the streaky front window. It was late for her shift, but a quiet night meant meticulous cleaning. Silas, a solid anchor behind the bar, meticulously polished a tumbler, his grey-streaked auburn beard catching the low light. He moved with a quiet efficiency, his slight limp almost imperceptible. A silver signet ring gleamed on his right hand as he turned the glass. He caught Rory’s eye, a flicker of hazel warmth. “Almost done, love. Don’t let me keep you from your beauty sleep.” Rory offered him a small smile. “Not quite yet. Still got the back tables.” She slung her rag over her shoulder, her straight, shoulder-length black hair falling over one bright blue eye as she bent to pick up a stray coaster. The small crescent scar on her left wrist, a childhood souvenir from a bicycle crash, seemed to pulse with an old, phantom ache in the dim light. Living above the bar, her own flat a sanctuary of familiar clutter, meant she never rushed to leave the quiet camaraderie of Silas’s company. Especially on nights like this, when a subtle sense of unease had been nipping at her heels since dusk. She worked her way through the scattering of tables, clearing empty glasses and pushing in chairs. The old maps on the walls, the black-and-white photographs of forgotten London scenes, seemed to watch her, each one a silent witness to countless stories unfolding within these walls. As she neared the entrance, a sharp, unfamiliar laugh cut through the bar’s murmur. A woman stood silhouetted against the neon glow from outside, her back to Rory. Tall, impossibly poised in a tailored charcoal suit that sculpted a figure Rory only vaguely remembered beneath layers of student-era hoodies. The woman spoke into a sleek phone, her voice carrying an educated lilt, crisp and confident. Rory paused, her rag clutched in her hand. There was something in the curve of her jaw, the way she held her head. Something that prickled at the edges of Rory’s memory. The woman clicked her phone shut and turned, her gaze sweeping the room. Her eyes, a sharp, assessing green, landed on Rory. Time folded in on itself, a thick, suffocating blanket. “Rory?” The voice was a little higher, more polished than Rory remembered, yet utterly unmistakable. Rory’s breath caught. Elara. Elara Davies. Only, this wasn’t Elara Davies, the girl who wore ripped jeans and debated obscure poets during all-night study sessions in the Cardiff University library. This was someone else, someone honed and sharpened, a predator in an expensive suit. Her blonde hair, once tousled and often dyed a rebellious shade, was now a perfect, expensive-looking bob that framed a face undeniably beautiful, but etched with new lines of ambition around the green eyes. “Elara?” Rory managed, the name feeling foreign on her tongue. Her own reflection, usually a familiar stranger, suddenly seemed young, soft, provincial in comparison to this sculpted apparition. Elara’s lips stretched into a smile that didn’t quite reach her eyes. “It *is* you, isn’t it? Good heavens, I almost didn’t recognise you. Still in London, then?” She took a step towards Rory, a delicate leather handbag clutched in one hand. The scent of her perfume, something sophisticated and costly, reached Rory before she did. Rory felt a strange mix of shock and defensiveness. “Yes, still here. And you?” She gestured vaguely at Elara’s impeccable attire. “You’ve... changed.” The understatement hung heavy, a lead weight in the air. Elara chuckled, a dry, elegant sound. “Haven’t we all?” She surveyed The Raven’s Nest, her gaze lingering on the dusty maps and the quirky décor, a hint of disdain in her expression that was quickly masked. “This is… quaint. What are you doing here, Rory? I heard you’d dropped out of pre-law after… well, after.” The ‘after’ hung between them, heavy with the unspoken ghost of Evan, the abusive ex Rory had fled, the life she’d abandoned. Rory’s jaw tightened. She’d tried to bury that part of herself, but Elara’s presence ripped it open, exposing a tender, unhealed wound. “I work here,” Rory said, her voice even, perhaps a little too level. “Part-time. I also do deliveries for Yu-Fei’s Golden Empress.” She offered the information like a shield, daring Elara to judge. Elara’s perfectly sculpted eyebrows rose. “A delivery person. How… unexpected. I remember when you were going to be the next big barrister, tearing apart courtrooms. You had that fire, Rory. What happened?” The words, though framed as a question, felt more like an accusation. Rory remembered Elara, sitting across from her in a greasy Spoon’s, offering fervent praise for Rory’s fierce intellect, her ability to dissect legal texts. That fire. It had burned out, smothered under the weight of Evan’s control, then rekindled in a different, quieter way. “Life happened,” Rory said simply, meeting Elara’s gaze. Her blue eyes held steady, refusing to flinch. “Things change. What about you? Still chasing corporate glory?” Elara’s smile finally softened, a genuine flicker of warmth breaking through the polished veneer. “Something like that. I’m an associate director at Meridia Capital now. Finance. It’s… demanding. And incredibly lucrative.” She gestured around the bar. "This is a far cry from the life we imagined, isn't it? Our little flat in Cardiff, dreaming of offices in Canary Wharf, of making partner." Rory’s mind flashed back to those dreams, shared over cheap wine and instant noodles. Elara had been a fiercely loyal friend then, a confident counterpart to Rory’s more hesitant ambition. But when Rory’s life had begun to unravel, when Evan’s grip had tightened and her attendance at lectures dwindled, Elara had slowly, imperceptibly, pulled away. There had been no big fight, no dramatic break. Just a gradual fading, a polite distance. Rory had been too lost in her own turmoil to challenge it, too proud to beg. The regret of that unspoken abandonment, that quiet withdrawal of support when it was needed most, coiled in Rory’s gut. “Life makes its own plans,” Rory offered, shrugging, trying to project an air of philosophical acceptance she didn’t quite feel. “I’m content.” Elara’s gaze narrowed slightly, assessing. “Content. Is that what we aimed for, Rory? Content?” She took another step closer, lowering her voice, though the bar was quiet enough for it to carry. “I remember you, holed up in your room, crying over Evan. I remember thinking you were wasting yourself. I knew you were capable of more.” The casual way Elara dismissed Rory’s pain, the implicit judgment in her “I knew you were capable of more,” struck Rory like a physical blow. She remembered Eva, her childhood friend, arriving unannounced, dragging her out of that dark flat, away from Evan. Eva had seen the waste, but she had offered a hand, not an observation. A warmth spread through Rory’s left hand. Subconsciously, she’d touched the crescent scar on her wrist, a tiny, almost invisible line that represented a deeper wound. “It wasn’t that simple, Elara,” Rory said, her voice dropping. The bitterness tasted sharp on her tongue. “You weren’t there to see it, were you? You hardly called.” Elara recoiled slightly, her perfect posture stiffening. “I had my own life, Rory. My own ambitions. I couldn’t dwell on your… choices. I had to focus. Cardiff was suffocating me. I had to get out.” There was a hard edge in her voice now, a defensiveness that exposed a raw nerve. “So you just… left?” Rory pressed, the unspoken years of hurt finally bubbling to the surface. “You left me to pick up the pieces alone? Our friendship – it just wasn’t worth fighting for?” Elara’s green eyes flickered, a momentary shadow passing through them. “That’s unfair, Rory. I encouraged you to leave him. I *told* you he was bad news.” “Telling me and helping me are two different things, Elara,” Rory retorted, the heat rising in her cheeks. “I was barely functioning. I was losing everything. I needed a friend, not a critic.” Silas, who had been quietly wiping the bar, coughed softly, a polite but firm interruption. He glanced at Rory, a silent question in his hazel eyes, then swept his gaze over Elara before returning to his polishing. It was a subtle gesture, a lifeline, offering Rory a way out, reminding her of her present. Rory took a breath, reeling herself back in. This wasn’t the time or place for this confrontation, this unpacking of old wounds. Not here, not now, not with this stranger wearing her friend’s face. Elara seemed to also gather herself, a practiced composure settling back over her features. Her smile, when it returned, was a cool, professional one. “Perhaps we both made choices, then. And look where we are. You, here.” She gestured vaguely at The Raven’s Nest. “And me, heading up a merger next quarter that will reshape the market.” A subtle flexing of power, a quiet assertion of victory. The silence stretched, thick and uncomfortable. Rory could hear the dull throb of the music from the club down the street, the distant wail of a siren a thousand miles away. The gap between them, once a mere geographical distance, now felt like an unbridgeable chasm of experience and values. She saw the bright blue eyes of her youth, full of idealism and nascent ambition, reflected in the polished surface of the bar, then looked up at Elara’s shrewd green gaze, now devoid of that carefree sparkle. “Well,” Rory said, her voice flat. “It was… something… seeing you, Elara.” The polite pleasantry felt like a lie. Elara nodded, her expression unreadable. “It was. You truly haven’t changed, have you, Rory? Still hold onto everything, I see.” She glanced at her expensive watch. “I need to be going. A car waiting.” She turned, a graceful pivot, and walked towards the entrance, her heels clicking softly on the wooden floor. She didn’t look back. The green neon sign flashed as she slipped out into the Soho night, taking with her the faint scent of expensive perfume and the suffocating weight of an old, broken friendship. Rory stood motionless, the forgotten rag still clutched in her hand, until Silas’s quiet voice broke the spell. “Everything alright, love?” he asked, his gaze steady and knowing. Rory turned, a weary sigh escaping her lips. “Just ghosts,” she murmured, looking at the empty space where Elara had stood. “Old ghosts, Silas.” Silas nodded, his understanding implicit. He reached under the bar and slid a small glass of amber liquid towards her. “Whiskey, then. Chases them away. For a while, at least.” Rory picked up the glass, the cool weight of it a small comfort. She looked at her reflection in the dark liquid, her bright blue eyes shadowed with a lingering sadness. The girl who had dreamed of changing the world with Elara was gone. And perhaps, that wasn't such a bad thing after all.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:15:39.944Z" 2/25/2026, 1:15:39 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Rory said simply [simply]"
2"She gestured around [around]"
3"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
4"The polite pleasantry felt like [like]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.59
leniency1
rawRatio0.217
effectiveRatio0.217
73.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1864
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
5
adverb"slightly"
count2
6
adverb"softly"
count2
7
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"suddenly"
2"quickly"
3"perfectly"
4"slowly"
5"slightly"
6"softly"
7"truly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Elara"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1864
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"flicker"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count3
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"sanctuary"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count2
6
word"sense of"
count1
7
word"lilt"
count1
8
word"predator"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count2
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"weight"
count4
12
word"unspoken"
count3
13
word"unravel"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
15
word"throb"
count1
16
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"flicker"
2"warmth"
3"pulse"
4"sanctuary"
5"familiar"
6"sense of"
7"lilt"
8"predator"
9"perfect"
10"etched"
11"weight"
12"unspoken"
13"unravel"
14"silence"
15"throb"
16"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
90.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1865
ratio0.001
matches
0"is"
1"told"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
15.98% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions87
wordCount1455
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.68
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven3
Nest3
Soho2
Rory39
Silas5
London1
Davies2
Elara24
Cardiff1
University1
Spoon1
Evan3
Eva2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Davies"
5"Elara"
6"Spoon"
7"Evan"
8"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"University"
globalScore0.16
windowScore0.167
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences95
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"seemed young soft, provincial in comparison to this sculpted apparition"
1"quite reach her eyes"
2"quite feel"
3"felt like an unbridgeable chasm of expe"
4"felt like a lie"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1865
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences123
matches
0"bury that part"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean45.49
std24.5
cv0.539
sampleLengths
074
165
2111
359
483
531
615
74
874
928
1056
1133
1255
1344
1433
1532
1656
1725
1862
19107
2022
2157
2257
2326
2428
2551
2634
2726
2833
2954
3034
3167
3287
3319
3434
3553
3618
3710
3824
3930
4054
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs222
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences123
ratio0
matches(empty)
99.87% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount893
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.036954087346024636
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.020156774916013438
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean15.16
std8.03
cv0.529
sampleLengths
021
123
217
313
419
511
614
79
812
96
1035
1127
1224
1319
1416
1529
1614
1714
1821
1916
208
2115
229
2313
249
259
2615
273
281
292
3024
3114
3234
3310
3418
3512
3630
3714
389
3912
4012
416
4230
4319
4422
453
4619
4713
4820
495
54.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.34146341463414637
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences105
matches
0"Especially on nights like this,"
1"Only, this wasn’t Elara Davies,"
2"Just a gradual fading, a"
3"Subconsciously, she’d touched the crescent"
ratio0.038
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences105
matches
0"It was late for her"
1"He moved with a quiet"
2"He caught Rory’s eye, a"
3"She slung her rag over"
4"She worked her way through"
5"Her eyes, a sharp, assessing"
6"Her blonde hair, once tousled"
7"Her own reflection, usually a"
8"She took a step towards"
9"She gestured vaguely at Elara’s"
10"She surveyed The Raven’s Nest,"
11"She’d tried to bury that"
12"She offered the information like"
13"It had burned out, smothered"
14"Her blue eyes held steady,"
15"She gestured around the bar"
16"She took another step closer,"
17"She remembered Eva, her childhood"
18"He glanced at Rory, a"
19"It was a subtle gesture,"
ratio0.286
21.90% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences105
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with"
1"Rory wiped down the polished"
2"It was late for her"
3"Silas, a solid anchor behind"
4"He moved with a quiet"
5"A silver signet ring gleamed"
6"He caught Rory’s eye, a"
7"Rory offered him a small"
8"She slung her rag over"
9"The small crescent scar on"
10"She worked her way through"
11"The old maps on the"
12"A woman stood silhouetted against"
13"The woman spoke into a"
14"Rory paused, her rag clutched"
15"Something that prickled at the"
16"The woman clicked her phone"
17"Her eyes, a sharp, assessing"
18"Time folded in on itself,"
19"The voice was a little"
ratio0.876
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Tall, impossibly poised in a tailored charcoal suit that sculpted a figure Rory only vaguely remembered beneath layers of student-era hoodies."
1"Only, this wasn’t Elara Davies, the girl who wore ripped jeans and debated obscure poets during all-night study sessions in the Cardiff University library."
2"Subconsciously, she’d touched the crescent scar on her wrist, a tiny, almost invisible line that represented a deeper wound."
3"Silas, who had been quietly wiping the bar, coughed softly, a polite but firm interruption."
16.30% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Rory managed, the name feeling foreign on her tongue"
1"Rory said, her voice dropping"
2"Rory retorted, the heat rising in her cheeks"
3"Rory said, her voice flat"
4"he asked, his gaze steady and knowing"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory pressed (press)"
1"Rory retorted (retort)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.205
leniency0.41
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.154
75.3455%