Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95W8NZWDD00S9EEARV3X0V

Run Details

Duration:
26.7s
Cost:
$0.011215
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest flickered, casting a rhythmic, sickly emerald pulse against the rain-streaked window of the Soho storefront. Inside, the air tasted of cedarwood, stale gin, and the dusty, comforting scent of the old maps that papered the walls. Aurora sat at the far end of the mahogany bar, her fingers tracing the condensation on a glass of tonic water. She liked this corner; it allowed her to keep her back to a stack of vintage photographs and her eyes on the door. Behind the bar, Silas Blackwood moved with the slow, deliberate grace of a man who had long ago traded speed for precision. He was polishing a highball glass, his movements fluid despite the slight, rhythmic hitch in his gait—the legacy of a Prague winter he never spoke about. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the dim light, a solitary glint of authority in the gloom. He didn’t look up when the door chimed, but Aurora saw his hazel eyes flick toward the reflection in the mirrored back-bar. "You're lingering, Rory," Silas said, his voice a low, sandpaper baritone. "The Golden Empress will be wondering if you’ve been hijacked by a rival delivery service." "Yu-Fei knows I’m off the clock in ten minutes," Aurora replied, her voice steady. She pushed a strand of her straight, shoulder-length black hair behind her ear, her thumb grazing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "Besides, it’s raining. People are more patient when they’re dry and the delivery person isn't." Silas grunted, a sound that might have been an agreement or a dismissal. He set the glass down and reached for a bottle of bourbon, his gaze shifting past Aurora toward the door. The bell had chimed again. A woman stood in the entryway, shivering as she shook out a dripping designer umbrella. She was dressed in a tailored charcoal coat that screamed Cardiff high society—perfectly pressed, expensive, and entirely wrong for a Tuesday night in a Soho dive. When she looked up, scanning the room with a mixture of apprehension and nostalgia, Aurora felt a cold knot tighten in her stomach. It was Bethan. Bethan Davies, the girl who had sat next to her in every Pre-Law lecture at Cardiff University. The girl who had been there the night Aurora met Evan. The girl who had represent the life Aurora’s father, Brendan, had mapped out for her with the clinical certainty of a surveyor. Aurora didn’t move. She couldn’t. She watched Bethan’s eyes travel over the black-and-white photos of forgotten jazz musicians and the yellowing charts of the North Sea. Finally, Bethan’s gaze landed on the bar. She froze. "Laila?" Bethan whispered, the name Rory had used during those first frantic months in London. Then, her eyes sharpened, taking in the black hair, the sharp lines of Aurora’s face, and the way she held herself—not like a frightened student, but like someone who had learned how to vanish in plain sight. "No. Aurora?" "Bethan," Aurora said. The name felt heavy, a relic dug up from a site she had thought was paved over. Bethan approached the bar, her heels clicking with an aggressive, polished rhythm that didn't belong in the Nest. Silas stepped back, melting into the shadows of the back shelves, though Aurora knew he wasn't missing a single syllable. "Lord, it is you," Bethan said, stopping a few feet away. She looked Aurora up and down, her expression a painful cocktail of shock and pity. "Your mother—Jennifer—she’s been frantic. Well, not frantic anymore, more... resigned. But Rory, look at you. We thought you were in legal aid in Bristol. That’s what your father told everyone." Aurora felt the familiar prickle of irritation. "My father says whatever makes the dinner parties go smoother, Bethan. You should know that by now." Bethan pulled out the stool next to her, glancing at the worn leather before sitting. "He said you were following in his footsteps. A barrister in the making." She gestured vaguely at Aurora’s damp delivery jacket draped over the stool. "What is this? Someone said they saw you in Soho, but I didn't believe it. I was in town for a conference and I thought... I’ve been looking for three days." "I’m not lost, Bethan," Aurora said, her blue eyes turning icy. "I’m exactly where I chose to be." "In a place like this?" Bethan’s voice dropped, hushed with a performative concern. "Working delivery? Living above a bar? Evan was devastated when you left, you know. He really went to pieces." At the mention of Evan’s name, the air seemed to leave the room. Aurora’s hand instinctively covered the crescent scar on her wrist. She felt Silas’s presence shift behind her—a silent, watchful weight. "Evan went to pieces because his favorite toy broke," Aurora said, her voice dropping to a dangerous whisper. "I’m not interested in his recovery. Or my father’s PR campaigns." Bethan flinched, her eyes darting to Silas, who was now leaning against the back counter, his grey-streaked auburn beard catching the light. He looked like a man who knew exactly where all the bodies were buried, and Bethan seemed to register the threat of that quiet authority. "You've changed," Bethan said, and there was a genuine note of sadness in it now. "You used to be so... bright. We were going to change the world together. Remember? Those nights in the library, dreaming about the High Court." "We were children dreaming about a cage," Aurora replied. She looked at Bethan—really looked at her. She saw the expensive jewelry, the tired lines around her eyes, the way she clutched her handbag like a shield. "You stayed in the cage, Beth. You’re wearing the uniform. Are you happy?" Bethan opened her mouth to provide the expected answer, but the lie died in the dim, honest light of the bar. She looked down at her manicured hands. "I'm a senior associate now. I’m on track for partner by thirty. I have a flat in Penylan. It's what we worked for." "No," Aurora said softly. "It’s what they wanted us to work for. There’s a difference." "And this is better? Hiding? Working for a restaurant called the Golden Empress?" Bethan’s voice trembled with a sudden, sharp resentment. "You just walked away. You left your family, your friends, your career. You left me to handle the questions. Do you have any idea how much I had to lie for you?" "I never asked you to," Aurora said. A silence stretched between them, filled only by the low hum of the refrigerator and the distant siren of a police car navigating the Soho narrowness. Aurora realized then that the gap between them wasn't just geographical or professional. It was a matter of survival. Bethan was still playing the game, while Aurora had realized the only way to win was to set the board on fire. "You look like a stranger," Bethan said, her voice hollow. "I see your face, but the girl I knew... she wouldn't be sitting in a dark room with a man who looks like he’s lived ten different lives, drinking tonic water and waiting for the next delivery call." "The girl you knew was a performance," Aurora said. "This is the reality." Silas stepped forward then, his limp audible as he moved to the taps. He placed a small dish of olives on the bar between the two women. The movement was a subtle interruption, a way of signaling that the audience was over. "Can I get you something, miss?" Silas asked. His hazel eyes were unreadable, but his tone was polite, the voice of a man who knew how to usher people out of rooms they didn't belong in. Bethan looked at Silas, then back at Aurora. She saw the way Aurora glanced at Silas—a look of mutual understanding, of a shared language that Bethan would never speak. She stood up, her charcoal coat swishing. "Your father still keeps your room the same," Bethan said, a final, futile attempt to exert the gravity of the past. "He thinks you’ll wake up one day and come home." "Tell him to rent it out," Aurora said. "I’ve got a room here. It’s smaller, but the locks actually work." Bethan stared at her for a long moment, searchingly, looking for the Aurora who had once laughed over cheap wine in a Cardiff dorm room. When she found nothing but the cool, intelligent gaze of the woman Rory had become, she sighed. "I don't think I'll tell him I found you," Bethan said quietly. "I don't think he’d recognize the description anyway." She turned and walked toward the door, her umbrella trailing water across the floor. The neon green pulse caught her as she stepped out into the rain, turning her into a silhouette for a fleeting second before she vanished into the Soho crowd. The chime of the door echoed and died. Aurora sat still, her heart a steady, muffled drum in her chest. She reached for an olive, the salt sharp on her tongue. "Friend of yours?" Silas asked, his voice devoid of judgment. "A ghost," Aurora replied. Silas nodded, picking up his polishing cloth again. He didn't ask about the father, or the law degree, or the man named Evan. He knew that the weight of a past was something you carried until you learned how to use it as an anchor. "The rain’s letting up," he observed, glancing at the window. "Yu-Fei will be looking for you." Aurora stood, pulling her delivery jacket on. She zipped it up, the familiar weight of her current life settling over her shoulders. She looked at the crescent scar on her wrist, then up at the maps on the wall—the vast, uncharted territories stretching out beyond the borders of her old world. "Let her look," Aurora said, her voice regained its cool, out-of-the-box edge. "I'm not going anywhere." She turned and walked out of the Nest, her reflection in the glass momentarily merging with the neon green light before she stepped into the night, leaving the ghosts of Cardiff behind in the shadows of the bar. Silas watched her go, his signet ring clicking softly against the mahogany as he returned to his work, the steady guardian of a sanctuary built for those who had finally decided to change.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:16:08.772Z" 2/25/2026, 1:16:08 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Aurora said softly [softly]"
2"Bethan said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.533
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
85.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1735
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count2
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"really"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1735
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"solitary"
count1
6
word"glint"
count1
7
word"gloom"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"apprehension"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"familiar"
count2
12
word"footsteps"
count1
13
word"weight"
count3
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"trembled"
count1
16
word"silence"
count1
17
word"navigating"
count1
18
word"unreadable"
count1
19
word"fleeting"
count1
20
word"echoed"
count1
21
word"sanctuary"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"rhythmic"
2"pulse"
3"comforting"
4"tracing"
5"solitary"
6"glint"
7"gloom"
8"scanning"
9"apprehension"
10"stomach"
11"familiar"
12"footsteps"
13"weight"
14"whisper"
15"trembled"
16"silence"
17"navigating"
18"unreadable"
19"fleeting"
20"echoed"
21"sanctuary"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1726
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"When she found nothing but the cool, intelligent gaze of the woman Rory had become, she sighed."
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions93
wordCount1263
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity2.45
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest3
Soho4
Silas13
Blackwood1
Prague1
Aurora31
Cardiff4
Tuesday1
Bethan22
Davies1
Pre-Law1
University1
Evan3
Brendan1
North1
Sea1
Rory2
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Blackwood"
3"Aurora"
4"Bethan"
5"Davies"
6"Evan"
7"Brendan"
8"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore0.273
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a man who knew exactly where"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.579
wordCount1726
matches
0"not like a frightened student, but like someone who had learned how to vanish in plain sight"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences111
matches
0"signaling that the"
1"knew that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean37.52
std20.91
cv0.557
sampleLengths
088
190
226
353
438
564
63
750
835
954
1020
1138
1256
1324
1471
1518
1632
1733
1829
1947
2040
2149
2251
2315
2453
257
2667
2748
2813
2942
3036
3136
3231
3320
3442
3520
3643
378
3823
3910
404
4145
4216
4351
4416
4571
93.57% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences90
matches
0"was dressed"
1"was paved"
2"were buried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs209
matches
0"was polishing"
1"wasn't missing"
2"was still playing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences111
ratio0.072
matches
0"She liked this corner; it allowed her to keep her back to a stack of vintage photographs and her eyes on the door."
1"He was polishing a highball glass, his movements fluid despite the slight, rhythmic hitch in his gait—the legacy of a Prague winter he never spoke about."
2"She was dressed in a tailored charcoal coat that screamed Cardiff high society—perfectly pressed, expensive, and entirely wrong for a Tuesday night in a Soho dive."
3"Then, her eyes sharpened, taking in the black hair, the sharp lines of Aurora’s face, and the way she held herself—not like a frightened student, but like someone who had learned how to vanish in plain sight."
4"She felt Silas’s presence shift behind her—a silent, watchful weight."
5"She looked at Bethan—really looked at her."
6"She saw the way Aurora glanced at Silas—a look of mutual understanding, of a shared language that Bethan would never speak."
7"She looked at the crescent scar on her wrist, then up at the maps on the wall—the vast, uncharted territories stretching out beyond the borders of her old world."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1278
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.024256651017214397
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.012519561815336464
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean15.55
std8.41
cv0.541
sampleLengths
023
121
221
323
422
526
620
722
811
915
1014
1124
1215
1313
1420
155
1615
1726
1823
193
2017
2111
2222
233
242
2521
267
272
2815
2937
302
313
3217
3318
3420
3511
3615
3730
387
3917
4015
4125
4231
4311
447
4513
4619
4713
4810
4910
43.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3153153153153153
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners35
82.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"Finally, Bethan’s gaze landed on"
1"Then, her eyes sharpened, taking"
ratio0.025
81.73% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences81
matches
0"She liked this corner; it"
1"He was polishing a highball"
2"He didn’t look up when"
3"She pushed a strand of"
4"He set the glass down"
5"She was dressed in a"
6"It was Bethan."
7"She watched Bethan’s eyes travel"
8"She looked Aurora up and"
9"She gestured vaguely at Aurora’s"
10"She felt Silas’s presence shift"
11"He looked like a man"
12"She looked at Bethan—really looked"
13"She saw the expensive jewelry,"
14"She looked down at her"
15"It was a matter of"
16"He placed a small dish"
17"His hazel eyes were unreadable,"
18"She saw the way Aurora"
19"She stood up, her charcoal"
ratio0.346
3.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences81
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Aurora sat at the far"
2"She liked this corner; it"
3"He was polishing a highball"
4"The silver signet ring on"
5"He didn’t look up when"
6"Silas said, his voice a"
7"Aurora replied, her voice steady"
8"She pushed a strand of"
9"Silas grunted, a sound that"
10"He set the glass down"
11"The bell had chimed again."
12"A woman stood in the"
13"She was dressed in a"
14"It was Bethan."
15"Bethan Davies, the girl who"
16"The girl who had been"
17"The girl who had represent"
18"Aurora didn’t move."
19"She watched Bethan’s eyes travel"
ratio0.914
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
16.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Inside, the air tasted of cedarwood, stale gin, and the dusty, comforting scent of the old maps that papered the walls."
1"Behind the bar, Silas Blackwood moved with the slow, deliberate grace of a man who had long ago traded speed for precision."
2"She was dressed in a tailored charcoal coat that screamed Cardiff high society—perfectly pressed, expensive, and entirely wrong for a Tuesday night in a Soho di…"
3"Bethan Davies, the girl who had sat next to her in every Pre-Law lecture at Cardiff University."
4"The girl who had been there the night Aurora met Evan."
5"Then, her eyes sharpened, taking in the black hair, the sharp lines of Aurora’s face, and the way she held herself—not like a frightened student, but like someo…"
6"Bethan approached the bar, her heels clicking with an aggressive, polished rhythm that didn't belong in the Nest."
7"Bethan flinched, her eyes darting to Silas, who was now leaning against the back counter, his grey-streaked auburn beard catching the light."
8"Bethan stared at her for a long moment, searchingly, looking for the Aurora who had once laughed over cheap wine in a Cardiff dorm room."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Silas said, his voice a low, sandpaper baritone"
1"Aurora replied, her voice steady"
2"Aurora said, her blue eyes turning icy"
3"Aurora said, her voice dropping to a dangerous whisper"
4"Bethan said, her voice hollow"
5"Silas asked, his voice devoid of judgment"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Bethan whispered (whisper)"
1"he observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.089
73.8203%