| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.72% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1401 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 17.92% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1401 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "could feel" | | 2 | "variables" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "sentinels" | | 6 | "chaotic" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "throb" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "anticipation" | | 14 | "calculated" | | 15 | "etched" | | 16 | "resolving" | | 17 | "gloom" | | 18 | "shattered" | | 19 | "crystalline" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 143 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.92% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 143 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 143 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1401 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a Hel portal, she corrected herself." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1388 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.58 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Hell-gates | 1 | | Rory | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Earth" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Fae" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Richmond" | | 4 | "Park" | | 5 | "Hell-gates" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 75.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Tulips that seemed to pulse with their own light" | | 1 | "sounded like a woman, low and vibrating" | | 2 | "sounded like her own name" |
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| 57.24% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.428 | | wordCount | 1401 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the rustle of wind in the grass, but the distinct snap of a twig breaking" | | 1 | "not like the grass of Richmond Park, but soft as memory foam, swallowing the sound of her boots" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 58.38 | | std | 30.54 | | cv | 0.523 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 114 | | 1 | 126 | | 2 | 80 | | 3 | 77 | | 4 | 78 | | 5 | 68 | | 6 | 89 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 62 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 91 | | 11 | 62 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 57 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 51 | | 23 | 93 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | |
| 4.74% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 239 | | matches | | 0 | "was reacting" | | 1 | "wasn't just reacting" | | 2 | "wasn't hunting" | | 3 | "was waiting" | | 4 | "was playing" | | 5 | "was ticking" | | 6 | "was still waiting" |
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| 82.92% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 143 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "That was the problem with places like this; the clockwork of the world didn't tick the same way when the veil was thin." | | 1 | "It wasn't just reacting to the environment anymore; it was reacting to proximity." | | 2 | "It wasn't just an artifact; it was a key." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1326 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.03092006033182504 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00980392156862745 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 143 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 143 | | mean | 9.8 | | std | 6.49 | | cv | 0.662 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 32.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 25 | | diversityRatio | 0.20279720279720279 | | totalSentences | 143 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 98.77% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the same endless ring" | | 1 | "Too many limbs folding inward." | | 2 | "Then the light went out." | | 3 | "Only the cold silver chain" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 30.37% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a scent that" | | 1 | "She pulled the Heartstone up," | | 2 | "She adjusted the black hair" | | 3 | "She had been here for" | | 4 | "Her watch said twelve minutes" | | 5 | "She tapped the face of" | | 6 | "She knew this behavior." | | 7 | "She had read the file" | | 8 | "She should have felt fear." | | 9 | "Her logical mind, trained in" | | 10 | "It sat in the marrow" | | 11 | "She placed her hand in" | | 12 | "It came from the edge" | | 13 | "She turned her head quickly," | | 14 | "They were too perfect, their" | | 15 | "She checked the Heartstone again." | | 16 | "It wasn't just reacting to" | | 17 | "It was a shadow detaching" | | 18 | "It moved with a fluid" | | 19 | "It was too wide, too" |
| | ratio | 0.474 | |
| 11.85% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 121 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "The cold seeped through the" | | 1 | "Rory stepped past the final" | | 2 | "The air inside the clearing" | | 3 | "It was a scent that" | | 4 | "She pulled the Heartstone up," | | 5 | "The crimson gem was dark" | | 6 | "She adjusted the black hair" | | 7 | "She had been here for" | | 8 | "Her watch said twelve minutes" | | 9 | "That was the problem with" | | 10 | "She tapped the face of" | | 11 | "She knew this behavior." | | 12 | "She had read the file" | | 13 | "The Fae Grove was a" | | 14 | "She should have felt fear." | | 15 | "Her logical mind, trained in" | | 16 | "Temperature drop, time dilation, atmospheric" | | 17 | "It sat in the marrow" | | 18 | "She placed her hand in" | | 19 | "The pain of it grounded" |
| | ratio | 0.896 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 70.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the same endless ring of trees, their bark etched with symbols that moved when she looked at them directly, shifting like worms under skin." | | 1 | "A massive oak stood in its place, its roots rising from the earth like grasping hands." | | 2 | "The time dilation was playing tricks on her mind, folding the space." | | 3 | "She dropped to her knees, clutching the stone, trying to block out the sound." | | 4 | "She screamed, a sharp, desperate sound that tore at her throat, and smashed the stone against the tree trunk." | | 5 | "And deep in the silence, she could hear the slow, heavy breathing of something that was still waiting for her to leave, because it hadn't finished her yet." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |