| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.12% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1344 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 36.76% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1344 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "variable" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "gloom" | | 8 | "throbbed" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "chaotic" | | 11 | "racing" | | 12 | "perfect" | | 13 | "etched" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 149 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 149 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 149 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 9 | | totalWords | 1344 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "When the stone wakes, the door opens." | | 1 | "Hel portal," |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1335 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.82 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Aurora | 11 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 50.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like wet earth and crushed lavende" | | 1 | "felt like fifteen" | | 2 | "light that seemed to cast shadows upward rather than down" | | 3 | "looked like the scars on her wrist, repea" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.744 | | wordCount | 1344 | | matches | | 0 | "Not swaying, but turning their heads toward her" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 149 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 28.6 | | std | 19.36 | | cv | 0.677 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 70 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 67 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 54 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 36 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 54 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 40 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 51 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 49 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 39 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 37 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 41 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 44 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 30 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 12 |
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| 88.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 149 | | matches | | 0 | "were supposed" | | 1 | "were stacked" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "were gone" | | 4 | "was gone" | | 5 | "been gone" | | 6 | "been gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 15 | | totalVerbs | 224 | | matches | | 0 | "was burning" | | 1 | "was waking" | | 2 | "were leaning" | | 3 | "was deafening" | | 4 | "was widening" | | 5 | "was altering" | | 6 | "wasn't just affecting" | | 7 | "wasn't coming" | | 8 | "was coming" | | 9 | "were turning" | | 10 | "weren't singing" | | 11 | "weren't buzzing" | | 12 | "was glowing" | | 13 | "was getting" | | 14 | "was coming" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 149 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn't just glow; it throbbed, a faint inner light that seemed to cast shadows upward rather than down." | | 1 | "The time dilation wasn't just affecting her perception; it was altering the geography." |
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| 93.67% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 743 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.040376850605652756 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010767160161507403 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 149 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 149 | | mean | 9.02 | | std | 5.71 | | cv | 0.633 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 35.23% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 22 | | diversityRatio | 0.2080536912751678 | | totalSentences | 149 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 48.66% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the shadows of the" | | 1 | "Just normal oak trees stood" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 41.90% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "It smelled like wet earth" | | 1 | "She stood just past the" | | 2 | "They were supposed to mark" | | 3 | "It pulsed again, a rhythmic" | | 4 | "She checked her watch." | | 5 | "It had been 11:30 when" | | 6 | "She was here because the" | | 7 | "They didn't rustle in the" | | 8 | "It was the kind of" | | 9 | "She took a step forward." | | 10 | "She turned her head slowly," | | 11 | "She exhaled, a sharp cloud" | | 12 | "She told herself it was" | | 13 | "It felt expectant." | | 14 | "She walked toward the center" | | 15 | "She pulled it out, holding" | | 16 | "It didn't just glow; it" | | 17 | "She needed to find the" | | 18 | "She had come prepared for" | | 19 | "She had not come prepared" |
| | ratio | 0.445 | |
| 36.64% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 116 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove" | | 1 | "It smelled like wet earth" | | 2 | "She stood just past the" | | 3 | "They were supposed to mark" | | 4 | "Aurora adjusted the collar of" | | 5 | "The Heartstone Pendant rested against" | | 6 | "It pulsed again, a rhythmic" | | 7 | "She checked her watch." | | 8 | "The digital display on her" | | 9 | "It had been 11:30 when" | | 10 | "The time distortion was a" | | 11 | "She was here because the" | | 12 | "The unknown benefactor who had" | | 13 | "Aurora scanned the perimeter." | | 14 | "The wildflowers bloomed in defiance" | | 15 | "Buttercups, foxgloves, and things she" | | 16 | "They didn't rustle in the" | | 17 | "The silence was absolute, a" | | 18 | "It was the kind of" | | 19 | "She took a step forward." |
| | ratio | 0.847 | |
| 36.50% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "If the stone was waking," |
| | ratio | 0.007 | |
| 59.52% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "It smelled like wet earth and crushed lavender, a cloying sweetness that clung to the back of Aurora’s throat." | | 1 | "They were supposed to mark the boundary, a threshold between the mundane sprawl of Richmond Park and this pocket of reality that refused to obey the calendar." | | 2 | "It pulsed again, a rhythmic thrumming against her skin that matched the beat of her own heart, though slightly out of sync." | | 3 | "The unknown benefactor who had left it on her doorstep had not included instructions, only a note in jagged handwriting that said: *When the stone wakes, the do…" | | 4 | "Aurora froze, her hand instinctively going to her left wrist, her thumb finding the small crescent-shaped scar hidden beneath her sleeve." | | 5 | "She pushed through, tearing her jacket, feeling the sting of scratches on her arms." | | 6 | "But on her left wrist, the small crescent-shaped scar was glowing faintly, a deep crimson pulse that matched the rhythm of the city traffic." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |