Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBESHRZPEJKGMMF8AKGF78G

Run Details

Duration:
27.9s
Cost:
$0.006892
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The wind died the moment she crossed the line of ancient oak standing stones. One second, the bite of a London November was tearing at the collar of her coat, and the next, the air was still, thick with a humidity that smelled of wet earth and crushed violets. Aurora Carter pulled her scarf tighter, her bright blue eyes scanning the perimeter of the clearing. This was Isolde’s grove, though the map she’d found tucked into a library book had marked the spot as nothing more than a dense patch of overgrowth in Richmond Park. She adjusted the silver chain at her throat. The Heartstone pendant pressed against her sternum, cool at first, then warming rapidly against her skin. She knew the stone’s behavior from the warning notes of the unknown benefactor: it hummed near a Hel portal. The Grove was Fae-touched, a pocket where the veil between worlds was thin enough to bleed, and the stone’s increasing heat suggested the threshold was shifting. Rory took a step forward. The grass beneath her boots was soft, unnaturally lush, wildflowers in full bloom carpeting the ground despite the frost on the trees. They glowed faintly, their petals pulsing in rhythm with the heartbeat of the stone. She checked her watch. The second hand was twitching, stuttering against the dial. An hour inside could be minutes or days outside, the lore had warned. She wasn’t sure how long she’d been standing here, but her stomach churned. She had come for answers, a favor for Silas regarding the delivery route that led to this place, but the rational part of her mind, the pre-law part, was screaming that she shouldn’t have come alone. She looked at her left wrist. The small crescent-shaped scar from her childhood accident caught the dim, violet light of the grove. It was a physical anchor, a reminder of a life before the abuse, before London, before the stones. She rubbed the smooth skin there, grounding herself. A sound broke the silence. It wasn't the snap of a twig or the hoot of an owl. It was the sound of breathing, slow and rhythmic, coming from the tree line directly ahead. It was too even. The breath of a human, yet lacking the irregularity of lungs in motion. Rory held her breath, waiting. The wind picked up, rustling the leaves of the oak trees, but the wildflowers in the center of the clearing did not move. The anomaly sat in the discrepancy; the wind moved around the trees but left the ground untouched. She took another step. The Heartstone grew hotter, burning the skin beneath her shirt. It wasn't just reacting to the portal; it was reacting to a presence. From the corner of her vision, a shadow detached itself from the trunk of a birch tree. It didn't move like a trick of the light. It unspooled, stretching out along the moss, long and dark, reaching toward the center of the clearing. Rory turned her head sharply, locking her eyes on the spot. The shadow was gone. When she looked back, it was reattached to the bark, seamless as if it had never moved. She swallowed hard, the taste of iron on her tongue. She thought of Eva, how she’d begged her not to come here. She thought of the flat above Silas’s bar, the safety of the brick and mortar. Now she felt exposed, her black shoulder-length hair plastered against her neck with cold sweat. A twig snapped. Rory spun around. There was nothing. The clearing was a perfect circle of stillness, the standing stones forming a barrier she couldn't see but could feel pressing against her chest. She tried to recall the path back to the boundary, but the trees looked the same on every side, identical oaks twisting their branches toward a sky that had lost its stars. The darkness here was heavy, a physical weight that pressed against her eardrums. Then, the temperature dropped. Not the natural chill of the park, but a sudden, localized freeze that crystallized the moisture on her eyelashes. She looked down at her wrist. Her fingers trembled. She needed to move. She needed to run. But her legs felt heavy, as if she were wading through deep water. The Heartstone pulsed with a violent warmth, a bright red fire against her chest, and for a moment, she thought she saw a shape behind the gem. Not the red of the stone, but a dark, hollowed-out eye staring back at her from the metal. A whisper brushed against her ear, not with air, but with the feeling of dry paper dragging across silk. *Stay.* Rory’s heart hammered against her ribs. It wasn't a voice, not really. It was a pressure in the center of her skull, demanding compliance. The rational part of her brain scrambled to form a plan. If she moved, would it get worse? If she stood still, would it take her? She looked at the flowers again. They were closing. The petals were folding inward, tight as fists, as if sensing her fear. Time was accelerating. She looked at her watch again. The hands were spinning. Minutes were passing in seconds, or perhaps centuries. She couldn't tell the difference. The only constant was the throbbing heat of the pendant. A shadow detached from the ground this time. It rose. It wasn't a shadow of a man. It was a shape that defied geometry, a jagged silhouette that seemed to drink the faint light around it. It didn't walk; it glided, sliding across the moss without disturbing the grass beneath it. It moved toward the standing stones, then turned back toward her. Rory stepped back, her heel catching on a root. She stumbled, the movement sharp and desperate. The whisper came again, louder, a chorus of voices layered together, overlapping in a way that made her teeth ache. They weren't speaking English. They were speaking the space between syllables, the sounds the air made when it was torn. She reached for the pendant, fumbling for the clasp. She needed it off. She needed the heat to stop. Her fingers were stiff, her breath coming in short, ragged gasps. As she clawed at the chain, the shadow stopped moving. It loomed over her, blocking out the dim violet light. It had no face, but she felt its gaze boring into her, assessing, judging. The weight of the presence pressed down on her shoulders, heavier than any coat, heavier than any fear she had ever carried from Cardiff. She remembered the scar on her wrist. She pressed her thumb hard against the smooth skin of the crescent, creating pain. It helped. Pain was real. Pain was now. The shadow lunged. Rory didn't think. She kicked off the ground, scrambling backward, her hand finding the silver chain. With a sharp tug, the chain snapped. The Heartstone flew from her neck, clattering against the ground where it landed with a heavy, wet sound, like a stone dropped into a deep well. The heat vanished instantly. The weight on her shoulders lifted. The shadow froze, its form flickering like a candle in a draft. It looked down at the crimson gem, then back at her. For a heartbeat, the silence was absolute. Rory ran. She didn't look back. She scrambled through the moss, her coat tangling around her legs, her breath tearing at her throat. She passed the flowers, which had now turned to stone. She passed the trees, which seemed to lean in to block her path. She focused on the boundary. The line of ancient oaks. The wind hit her face as she crossed the threshold. The cold returned, biting and real. She fell to her knees in the mud of Richmond Park, sobbing silently, pulling her knees to her chest. The night sky above was clear, the stars indifferent and distant. Behind her, through the trees, she heard the sound of picking up a stone. A heavy, wet stone. And then, the crunch of it breaking on the pavement. She stayed on her knees until dawn, the cold seeping into her bones, waiting for the sensation of not being alone to fade, though she knew, with a certainty that settled deep in her gut, that the wrongness would return.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1379
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1379
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"churned"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"weight"
count3
9
word"chill"
count1
10
word"crystallized"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count2
15
word"silk"
count1
16
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"stomach"
2"churned"
3"reminder"
4"silence"
5"rhythmic"
6"perfect"
7"could feel"
8"weight"
9"chill"
10"crystallized"
11"trembled"
12"pulsed"
13"warmth"
14"whisper"
15"silk"
16"loomed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach churned"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences122
matches(empty)
84.31% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences122
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1379
ratio0.001
matches
0"Stay."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1379
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.58
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London2
November1
Carter1
Isolde1
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone4
Hel1
Grove1
Fae-touched1
Silas2
Eva1
Rory8
English1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Isolde"
2"Heartstone"
3"Silas"
4"Eva"
5"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Hel"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
93.82% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if sensing her fear"
1"silhouette that seemed to drink the faint light around it"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.175
wordCount1379
matches
0"Not the natural chill of the park, but a sudden, localized freeze"
1"Not the red of the stone, but a dark, hollowed-out eye staring back at her from the metal"
2"not with air, but with the feeling of dry paper dragging across silk"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"screaming that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean47.55
std27.99
cv0.589
sampleLengths
095
169
241
3123
451
545
627
775
852
93
1075
1123
1275
1320
1450
1558
1610
1752
1856
1988
2029
213
2249
2340
242
2554
2646
2728
2840
96.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences122
matches
0"was gone"
1"was reattached"
2"was torn"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount12
totalVerbs229
matches
0"was tearing"
1"was shifting"
2"was twitching"
3"was screaming"
4"was reacting"
5"wasn't just reacting"
6"were wading"
7"were folding"
8"were spinning"
9"were passing"
10"weren't speaking"
11"were speaking"
72.60% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences122
ratio0.025
matches
0"The anomaly sat in the discrepancy; the wind moved around the trees but left the ground untouched."
1"It wasn't just reacting to the portal; it was reacting to a presence."
2"It didn't walk; it glided, sliding across the moss without disturbing the grass beneath it."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1383
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.0274765003615329
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.0072306579898770785
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean11.3
std7.74
cv0.685
sampleLengths
014
135
216
330
48
516
619
726
85
922
1014
114
129
1313
1413
1536
166
1716
1818
198
205
2113
2216
234
2413
255
2623
2717
284
2910
3013
3117
329
3317
3411
354
3617
3710
3812
3915
4015
413
423
433
4424
4532
4613
474
4819
496
25.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats30
diversityRatio0.22950819672131148
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners28
28.25% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences118
matches
0"Then, the temperature dropped."
ratio0.008
36.95% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences118
matches
0"She adjusted the silver chain"
1"She knew the stone’s behavior"
2"They glowed faintly, their petals"
3"She checked her watch."
4"She wasn’t sure how long"
5"She had come for answers,"
6"She looked at her left"
7"It was a physical anchor,"
8"She rubbed the smooth skin"
9"It wasn't the snap of"
10"It was the sound of"
11"It was too even."
12"She took another step."
13"It wasn't just reacting to"
14"It didn't move like a"
15"It unspooled, stretching out along"
16"She swallowed hard, the taste"
17"She thought of Eva, how"
18"She thought of the flat"
19"She tried to recall the"
ratio0.458
23.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences118
matches
0"The wind died the moment"
1"One second, the bite of"
2"Aurora Carter pulled her scarf"
3"This was Isolde’s grove, though"
4"She adjusted the silver chain"
5"The Heartstone pendant pressed against"
6"She knew the stone’s behavior"
7"The Grove was Fae-touched, a"
8"Rory took a step forward."
9"The grass beneath her boots"
10"They glowed faintly, their petals"
11"She checked her watch."
12"The second hand was twitching,"
13"An hour inside could be"
14"She wasn’t sure how long"
15"She had come for answers,"
16"She looked at her left"
17"The small crescent-shaped scar from"
18"It was a physical anchor,"
19"She rubbed the smooth skin"
ratio0.873
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences118
matches
0"Now she felt exposed, her"
1"If she moved, would it"
2"If she stood still, would"
ratio0.025
65.93% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"One second, the bite of a London November was tearing at the collar of her coat, and the next, the air was still, thick with a humidity that smelled of wet eart…"
1"She had come for answers, a favor for Silas regarding the delivery route that led to this place, but the rational part of her mind, the pre-law part, was scream…"
2"She tried to recall the path back to the boundary, but the trees looked the same on every side, identical oaks twisting their branches toward a sky that had los…"
3"It had no face, but she felt its gaze boring into her, assessing, judging."
4"She kicked off the ground, scrambling backward, her hand finding the silver chain."
5"She scrambled through the moss, her coat tangling around her legs, her breath tearing at her throat."
6"She stayed on her knees until dawn, the cold seeping into her bones, waiting for the sensation of not being alone to fade, though she knew, with a certainty tha…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.9357%