Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBEZFXCKGSE85PSQTNXZDE6

Run Details

Duration:
38.5s
Cost:
$0.002171
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon green sign of The Raven’s Nest buzzed against the Soho night like a trapped insect. Inside, the air smelled of stale lager, wet wool, and the copper tang of old maps spread across the walls. Aurora sat on a stool three down from the jukebox, her knees slightly splayed in a way that felt defensive. She had just shifted a crate of pale ale from the delivery van outside. Her uniform was still stained with the oil grease of the engine. Silas moved along the counter, his left leg dragging just enough to rattle the silverware in the drawer he passed. He didn’t look up when he slid a glass across the wood. His hazel eyes were tired, rimmed with red from another long night playing the bartender while managing the ghosts in the room. He wore his silver signet ring on his right hand; it caught the light, a dull, cold flash. “Rory,” Silas said. It wasn’t a question. “Thanks,” Rory said. She kept her eyes on the glass. At forty minutes to midnight, she should have been asleep in the flat overhead, the one that smelled of him and old paper. Instead, she was drinking water to wash the taste of exhaust. She lifted her wrist to take a sip. The skin was pale, the small crescent scar there catching the dim light. A childhood accident. It hurt less now than it used to, but it throbbed when the rain came. The bell above the door chimed. It wasn’t the heavy, mechanical clunk of the other customers entering, but a sharp, quick tinkle. Rory looked up. The man standing in the doorway was tall, wearing a coat that cost more than her rent. He shook the rain from his hair—dark, styled, not the messy wetness of a delivery bike rider. He looked through the room, scanning the maps, until his gaze locked onto her. His mouth opened, then closed. He looked at her flat, black hair, straight across her shoulders. He looked at the grease on her sleeve. “Rory?” She set the glass down. The condensation dripped onto the bar top, pooling near the coaster. It took her a moment to name him. The face had thinned, the softness of university years stripped away. “Liam?” “Christ.” He stepped forward, navigating the floorboards that creaked under his weight. He ignored the stool and stopped in front of her. He looked at the grease again, then back to her eyes. “My god, you work here?” Silas paused, a rag hovering in his hand. His head tilted slightly toward them, the neat beard twitching. He said nothing, but his silence was an accusation, a weight in the room that Rory could feel pressing against her ribs. “Delivery driver,” she said, her voice steady despite the sudden tightness in her throat. She didn’t offer her hand. She hadn’t in a long time. “Yu-Fei’s.” Liam nodded slowly. “Right. Of course. I was told you were... well, you weren’t.” Told by whom? By the people who had left Cardiff to stay in the past. The ones who assumed she would come back and file for the degree she’d dropped before the first final exams. “It’s been a few years, Liam,” she said. She looked down at her watch. It was a plastic thing, cheap and practical. He was checking a gold wristwatch. The disparity sat heavy between them, invisible and suffocating. “Three years, four months,” Liam corrected. He leaned against the bar, not touching it. “I tried to find you last year. The flat in the West End, you’re not there anymore. I asked the neighbors. They said you moved to Soho.” “I moved to the top of this place,” Rory said. “It’s cheaper. And quieter.” “Is it?” Liam looked up at the ceiling, as if he could see through the floorboards to the room above. He turned back to her, a smile plastered on his face. It didn’t reach his eyes. “So, what are you doing, Rory? If you aren’t studying law.” The room smelled of damp wool and old paper again. The green neon hummed like a dying heart. Rory felt the heat in her cheeks, the flush of shame that she had spent years trying to burn down. “Working,” she said. “Living.” He took a breath, exhaling slowly through his nose. The smell of expensive cologne mixed with the beer scent. “You always talked about the law. You were brilliant. Everyone said so. Brendan and Jennifer, they must have been proud.” “My father is in Cardiff. My mother is retired.” “Right.” Liam tapped the bar top. He looked at Silas. “Your man?” “Owner,” Silas said, returning to his counter. He didn’t use Liam’s name. He just nodded, his limp evident as he moved to wipe a spot of spilt gin. He wore a silver signet ring that looked like a small skull. Liam watched it, then looked back at Rory. “Are you happy?” Liam asked. It was a direct shot, unmediated by politeness. Rory looked at the scar on her wrist, the small crescent moon shape. “I’m alive. That counts for something.” Liam winced. He looked as if he hadn’t intended the words to hit so hard. He shifted his weight from one foot to the other, the leather of his shoes squeaking. “I just... I didn’t think you’d go back to the basement. I didn’t think you’d give up.” “Did you think I’d keep the promise?” Rory asked. She stood up. Her knees popped. She was tired. She had carried heavy boxes across a city that had nearly swallowed her last month. She wasn’t tired of the work, she was tired of the expectation. “I left for London, not for the firm, Liam. I left because I couldn’t breathe in Cardiff. And you know that.” Liam swallowed. He took a step back from the counter. “I know you left the relationship. I didn’t know you left everything.” Rory leaned against the bar, bracing herself. “I’m not a trophy you can put on a shelf, Liam. That’s not how it works.” He looked at the bar, at the collection of maps pinned to the corkboard behind Silas’s head. The Raven’s Nest was a quiet place, but it held secrets. He looked back at her. His face was older, lined with the kind of worry that came from high stakes and high pressure. He looked like a man who had won but had lost something else in the process. “I miss you,” he said, quietly. “Then you should miss me. But you don’t get to come in here and ask if I’m happy unless you’re going to leave.” Silas moved the glass from the counter, pouring fresh water into one of the buckets for the muck that had been left from Liam’s drink. He didn’t look up, but Rory felt the weight of his stare. The silver ring flashed again. Liam laughed, a dry, humorless sound. “I’ve got a flight at six. Back to the office.” He pulled a card from his wallet. He placed it on the sticky coaster. “If you ever want to talk. Real talk. Not... this.” Rory didn’t look at the card. She looked at the door. He was already thinking about leaving, calculating the time, the mileage, the cost of the ticket. “Thanks,” she said. She turned back to the empty glass. Liam hesitated, then nodded once, sharp and decisive. He walked past the bar, toward the door. He didn’t look back. Silas waited until the green light flickered off behind the glass of the door before he spoke. “A lawyer,” Silas said, his voice low. “Someone who wanted me to forget the mess,” Rory said. She lifted the water and drank it all in one go. The cold settled in her stomach, an antidote to the shame. Silas came around the counter. His limp was less pronounced when he walked, but the tension in his shoulders was there. He picked up the card Liam had left and set it in the trash bin beside the cash register. “He thinks you failed,” Silas said. He looked at the scar on her wrist, then at her eyes. His hazel gaze was steady. “I didn’t,” Rory said. “No,” Silas said. He walked back to the taps, checking the pressure, adjusting the flow of the beer lines. He didn’t want to argue. He knew the score better than anyone in the room. “You survived.” Rory reached out, her fingers brushing the wood of the bar. The grain felt rough under her fingertips. Outside, the neon buzz continued to flicker. The city was still moving, loud and indifferent. “Tell him I’m not dead,” Rory said. Silas didn’t smile. He turned the taps off. “You’re not.” He picked up a rag and began to wipe the spot where Liam had placed the card. He did it efficiently, the stain of existence disappearing from the wood. Rory sat back on the stool, watching him work. The room felt larger now that the tension was gone, the silence filling the space with the hum of the refrigerator and the distant sirens. She was safe, and she was tired, and she was enough.
created_at"2026-02-25T22:33:40.532Z" 2/25/2026, 10:33:40 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.512
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1531
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1531
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"mechanical"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"navigating"
count1
4
word"weight"
count4
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"calculating"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"tension"
count2
11
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"mechanical"
2"scanning"
3"navigating"
4"weight"
5"silence"
6"could feel"
7"calculating"
8"flickered"
9"stomach"
10"tension"
11"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences132
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1530
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1254
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.28
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Liam"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Rory16
Cardiff1
Liam14
Silas13
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Liam"
4"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.862
windowScore0.5
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a small skull"
1"looked like a man who had won but had los"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1530
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean30.6
std19.59
cv0.64
sampleLengths
083
172
27
344
439
522
651
724
81
936
1038
1140
1226
1314
1435
1537
1641
1714
1847
1938
204
2139
229
2312
2448
2513
2619
2748
2866
2922
3023
3167
326
3323
3442
3540
3627
3710
3820
3917
407
4132
4240
4323
444
4536
4633
477
4810
4974
99.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences132
matches
0"been left"
1"was gone"
84.06% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs230
matches
0"was drinking"
1"was checking"
2"was already thinking"
3"was still moving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences153
ratio0.013
matches
0"He wore his silver signet ring on his right hand; it caught the light, a dull, cold flash."
1"He shook the rain from his hair—dark, styled, not the messy wetness of a delivery bike rider."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1255
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.026294820717131476
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005577689243027889
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean10
std5.93
cv0.593
sampleLengths
017
120
220
314
412
520
612
722
818
93
104
113
127
1323
1411
158
1613
173
1815
196
2016
213
2217
2317
2414
255
2611
278
281
295
3011
318
3211
331
3412
3510
3611
375
388
3910
4022
4114
425
436
441
453
4611
473
4812
4920
38.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.2549019607843137
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners39
28.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"Instead, she was drinking water"
ratio0.009
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount70
totalSentences116
matches
0"She had just shifted a"
1"Her uniform was still stained"
2"He didn’t look up when"
3"His hazel eyes were tired,"
4"He wore his silver signet"
5"It wasn’t a question."
6"She kept her eyes on"
7"She lifted her wrist to"
8"It hurt less now than"
9"It wasn’t the heavy, mechanical"
10"He shook the rain from"
11"He looked through the room,"
12"His mouth opened, then closed."
13"He looked at her flat,"
14"He looked at the grease"
15"She set the glass down."
16"It took her a moment"
17"He stepped forward, navigating the"
18"He ignored the stool and"
19"He looked at the grease"
ratio0.603
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount110
totalSentences116
matches
0"The neon green sign of"
1"Aurora sat on a stool"
2"She had just shifted a"
3"Her uniform was still stained"
4"Silas moved along the counter,"
5"He didn’t look up when"
6"His hazel eyes were tired,"
7"He wore his silver signet"
8"It wasn’t a question."
9"She kept her eyes on"
10"She lifted her wrist to"
11"The skin was pale, the"
12"A childhood accident."
13"It hurt less now than"
14"The bell above the door"
15"It wasn’t the heavy, mechanical"
16"Rory looked up."
17"The man standing in the"
18"He shook the rain from"
19"He looked through the room,"
ratio0.948
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she said, her voice steady despite the sudden tightness in her throat"
1"Liam looked up, as if he could see through the floorboards to the room above"
2"he said, quietly"
3"Silas said, his voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Liam corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.419
leniency0.837
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.047
78.7194%