| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.80% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1470 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 48.98% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1470 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "reminder" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "scanned" | | 7 | "racing" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "beacon" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 174 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 174 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 174 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1470 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1455 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.89 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | London | 2 | | November | 1 | | Silas | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 4 | | Earth | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Aurora | 13 | | Eva | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Silas" | | 1 | "Earth" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like it was fracturing" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.68 | | wordCount | 1470 | | matches | | 0 | "Not heat haze, but a distortion, like looking through water" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 174 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 36.75 | | std | 24.51 | | cv | 0.667 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 72 | | 4 | 76 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 107 | | 8 | 61 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 75 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 52 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 56 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 50 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 52 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 50 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 40 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 43 | | 39 | 58 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 174 | | matches | | 0 | "being hunted" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 9 | | totalVerbs | 245 | | matches | | 0 | "was listening" | | 1 | "was screaming" | | 2 | "wasn't just glowing" | | 3 | "wasn't warning" | | 4 | "was acting" | | 5 | "was fracturing" | | 6 | "was choking" | | 7 | "was ticking" | | 8 | "were watching" |
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| 77.18% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 174 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't just heat anymore; it was a vibration, rattling her ribs." | | 1 | "It wasn't empty anymore; it was listening." | | 2 | "The gemstone wasn't just glowing; it was screaming." | | 3 | "The warmth was not protection; it was an invitation." |
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| 98.92% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 97 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 4 | | adverbRatio | 0.041237113402061855 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010309278350515464 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 174 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 174 | | mean | 8.45 | | std | 5.23 | | cv | 0.619 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 31.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 32 | | diversityRatio | 0.1781609195402299 | | totalSentences | 174 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 166 | | matches | | 0 | "Just three ancient oaks, gnarled" | | 1 | "Just the sound of her" | | 2 | "Maybe it was ten hours." | | 3 | "Maybe it was ten years." | | 4 | "Dark, wet, and silent." |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 41.69% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 166 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here because" | | 1 | "It had been cold when" | | 2 | "It pulsed against her skin," | | 3 | "She reached up and touched" | | 4 | "It was warm, almost feverish." | | 5 | "She stepped through the gap" | | 6 | "It was November, but the" | | 7 | "They shouldn't exist in this" | | 8 | "They shouldn't exist in the" | | 9 | "She knew the lore, or" | | 10 | "She checked her watch." | | 11 | "She tapped the glass face." | | 12 | "It kept moving, but the" | | 13 | "Her voice sounded thin, swallowed" | | 14 | "She needed to find the" | | 15 | "She walked past the first" | | 16 | "It felt like skin." | | 17 | "She snatched her hand back," | | 18 | "It grounded her." | | 19 | "She focused on the pain" |
| | ratio | 0.446 | |
| 26.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 144 | | totalSentences | 166 | | matches | | 0 | "The boundary stones did not" | | 1 | "Aurora stopped at the edge" | | 2 | "She had come here because" | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant lay flat" | | 4 | "It had been cold when" | | 5 | "It pulsed against her skin," | | 6 | "She reached up and touched" | | 7 | "It was warm, almost feverish." | | 8 | "She stepped through the gap" | | 9 | "The air changed instantly." | | 10 | "The smell of London traffic," | | 11 | "The silence was absolute." | | 12 | "Aurora pulled her jacket tighter." | | 13 | "It was November, but the" | | 14 | "Poppies and bluebells tangled in" | | 15 | "They shouldn't exist in this" | | 16 | "They shouldn't exist in the" | | 17 | "She knew the lore, or" | | 18 | "The Fae Grove." | | 19 | "A pocket between Earth and" |
| | ratio | 0.867 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 166 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed against her skin, a second heartbeat that was slower, heavier, wrong." | | 1 | "The air grew colder, a sudden drop in temperature that made her teeth chatter." | | 2 | "She kept walking, her hand resting over the scar on her wrist, the only thing that felt real in a world that had just proven it wasn't." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |