Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBFDDR7SMEDED30FK59Q8Q0

Run Details

Duration:
59.7s
Cost:
$0.012480
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest hummed against the Soho rain, a persistent buzz that seemed to vibrate through the pavement and into the soles of Aurora’s boots. She stood under the awning for a moment, shaking the water from her black hair, letting it cling to her shoulders in straight, dark strands. The air inside the bar was a familiar cocktail of stale beer, lemon polish, and old paper. She pushed through the door, the bell above it jingling with a sound that felt too cheerful for the hour. Silas was behind the bar, his grey-streaked auburn beard catching the low light as he wiped a glass. He looked up, his hazel eyes acknowledging her without surprise. He didn’t speak, just gave a slight nod, the silver signet ring on his right hand glinting as he set the glass down. He knew the routine. Rory worked the deliveries for the Golden Empress, and this was her stop after the last run. She was supposed to be going up to the flat above, to sleep, to reset. She wasn’t looking for a drink. She was looking for a moment of quiet before the stairs. She moved toward a corner table, her left wrist brushing against the rough denim of her jacket. The small crescent-shaped scar there, a relic from a childhood accident in Cardiff, itched when the weather turned damp. She rubbed it absently, a nervous habit she had never quite broken. The door opened again, cutting through the low murmur of the bar. A woman stepped in, shaking a wet umbrella. She wore a coat that cost more than Rory’s monthly rent, tailored wool in a deep charcoal that repelled the rain rather than absorbing it. The woman turned, scanning the room, and her gaze locked onto the corner. Rory froze. The air left her lungs, displaced by a sudden, sharp pressure in her chest. Eva. It had been five years. Five years since the night Rory fled Cardiff, leaving the abuse of Evan and the suffocating weight of her father’s expectations behind. Eva had been the one to pack the bags, the one to drive her to the station, the one who whispered that London was a place where you could disappear. Eva walked toward her, her heels clicking on the floorboards. She looked older, not in age, but in hardness. The softness Rory remembered from university days had been ironed out, replaced by a sharp, angular precision. Her hair was shorter, dyed a platinum blonde that clashed with the warm, dim lighting of the Nest. “Rory,” Eva said. The name was a question and a statement all at once. “Eva.” Rory’s voice sounded thin. She stood up, the chair scraping against the floor. “I didn’t think you were in London.” “I’m everywhere now. Work takes me places.” Eva stopped a foot away. She didn’t offer a hug. The distance between them felt like a canyon. “You look tired.” “Just finished a shift.” Rory gestured vaguely toward the kitchen door, though she knew the Golden Empress was blocks away. “Delivery.” Eva’s eyes flickered to the bar where Silas was watching. He had stopped wiping the glass, his posture rigid, his left leg bearing the slight weight of his old knee injury. He was a ghost in the room, a silent witness to the history he didn’t know. “Silas still runs this place?” Eva asked. “Yeah. It’s his front.” Eva let out a short, dry laugh. “Of course it is. You always did like the mysterious types.” “I like the quiet types.” Rory corrected. Eva moved to the table, sitting down as if she owned the space. She placed her bag on the floor, a sleek leather case that looked out of place among the scuffed wood and the maps pinned to the walls. The black-and-white photographs of old London streets seemed to stare down at them, silent judges of the passage of time. “Five years,” Eva said. She didn’t look at Rory. She looked at her hands, resting on the table. “I tried to call. When you first got here. Your number was disconnected.” “I changed everything. Phone, name, address.” Rory kept her hands in her lap, hiding the scar on her wrist. “I needed to be unfindable.” “I know.” Eva finally looked up. Her eyes were the same, but the light behind them was different. Colder. “I was worried. About Evan.” “He can’t get to me here.” “Can’t he?” Eva leaned forward. “People find each other, Rory. Or they don’t. It depends on how hard you want to be found.” The tension in the room tightened, a wire pulled taut. Rory felt the weight of the unspoken things hanging between them. The regret of the friendship that had been sacrificed for survival. The guilt of leaving Eva behind in Cardiff to deal with the fallout of Evan’s rage, the police, the questions. “I didn’t have a choice,” Rory said softly. “I know you didn’t.” Eva sighed, the hardness in her face fracturing for a second. “But you didn’t have to stop writing. You could have sent a postcard. A letter. Anything to say you were alive.” “I was alive. I just wasn’t me.” Eva reached into her coat pocket and pulled out a small, folded piece of paper. She slid it across the table. It was a business card. “I’m a lawyer now,” Eva said. “Specializing in civil protection. Restraining orders. Custody battles.” Rory looked at the card. The weight of it was heavier than the paper. “I thought you wanted to be a teacher,” Rory said. “Plans change.” Eva stood up, smoothing her coat. “I wanted to be the one who saved people. Turns out I just want to be the one who stops them from getting hurt in the first place.” She paused at the edge of the table, looking down at Rory. The neon sign outside cast a green reflection on the floor, pooling around their feet like spilled oil. “Are you safe?” Eva asked. It wasn’t a rhetorical question. “I’m safe.” Rory nodded. She touched the scar on her wrist, feeling the rough skin. “I have a mentor. A landlord. A network.” She glanced at Silas. He was pouring a drink now, his back turned, giving them the privacy of his silence. Eva nodded slowly. “Good. Just good.” She turned to leave, then stopped. “Call me, Rory. Even if it’s just to say you’re okay. I can’t carry this alone anymore.” Rory watched her walk to the door. The bell jingled again as she stepped out into the rain, the sound echoing in the sudden silence of the bar. Rory looked down at the business card. The ink was fresh, the paper crisp. She picked it up and slipped it into her pocket, next to her keys. Silas walked over, his limp barely audible. He set a glass of water on the table. “Friend from Cardiff?” he asked, his voice low and gravelly. “Old friend,” Rory said. “Seemed like she wanted to say more.” “She did.” Rory took a sip of the water. It tasted cold, clean, and real. “But some things take too long to say to matter anymore.” Silas studied her for a moment, his hazel eyes unreadable. He tapped the silver ring on his finger against the table once. “Time is a heavy thing to carry, Rory,” he said. “I know,” she replied. She looked at the door where Eva had vanished. The rain was still falling, washing the streets of Soho clean, but it couldn’t wash away the years. She stood up, leaving the business card on the table, a promise she wasn’t sure she could keep. She walked toward the stairs to her flat, the green neon light fading behind her, leaving only the shadows of the maps on the wall to mark the distance she had traveled.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Rory said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.537
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
92.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1312
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1312
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"weight"
count4
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"echoing"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"glinting"
2"scanning"
3"weight"
4"flickered"
5"tension"
6"unspoken"
7"silence"
8"echoing"
9"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1312
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount1049
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.91
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Soho2
Aurora1
Golden2
Empress2
Cardiff3
Rory20
Evan2
London2
Eva20
Silas5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
5"Eva"
6"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.547
windowScore0.167
77.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"buzz that seemed to vibrate through the pavement and into the soles of Aurora’s boots"
1"felt like a canyon"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.762
wordCount1312
matches
0"not in age, but in hardness"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"whispered that London"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean26.24
std21.56
cv0.822
sampleLengths
092
187
217
348
412
546
616
71
857
954
1014
1121
1228
1321
1447
157
164
1718
187
1960
2031
2124
2224
236
2423
2552
268
2736
287
2926
3014
3114
3210
3336
3430
3510
3643
376
3823
3942
4014
4116
4210
434
447
4526
4622
4710
484
4977
94.41% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences97
matches
0"was supposed"
1"been ironed"
2"been sacrificed"
15.84% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs181
matches
0"wasn’t looking"
1"was looking"
2"was watching"
3"was pouring"
4"was still falling"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences115
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1053
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.027540360873694207
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008547008547008548
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean11.41
std6.88
cv0.603
sampleLengths
030
125
217
320
418
510
623
74
817
915
106
1111
1217
1319
1412
1512
168
1725
1813
192
2014
211
225
2322
2430
2510
269
2717
2818
293
3011
315
329
337
3412
355
368
373
3820
391
4010
4121
4216
437
444
457
4611
477
4813
4927
36.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.25217391304347825
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
36.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences83
matches
0"She stood under the awning"
1"She pushed through the door,"
2"He looked up, his hazel"
3"He didn’t speak, just gave"
4"He knew the routine."
5"She was supposed to be"
6"She wasn’t looking for a"
7"She was looking for a"
8"She moved toward a corner"
9"She rubbed it absently, a"
10"She wore a coat that"
11"It had been five years."
12"She looked older, not in"
13"Her hair was shorter, dyed"
14"She stood up, the chair"
15"She didn’t offer a hug."
16"He had stopped wiping the"
17"He was a ghost in"
18"She placed her bag on"
19"She didn’t look at Rory."
ratio0.458
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences83
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"She stood under the awning"
2"The air inside the bar"
3"She pushed through the door,"
4"Silas was behind the bar,"
5"He looked up, his hazel"
6"He didn’t speak, just gave"
7"He knew the routine."
8"Rory worked the deliveries for"
9"She was supposed to be"
10"She wasn’t looking for a"
11"She was looking for a"
12"She moved toward a corner"
13"The small crescent-shaped scar there,"
14"She rubbed it absently, a"
15"The door opened again, cutting"
16"A woman stepped in, shaking"
17"She wore a coat that"
18"The woman turned, scanning the"
19"The air left her lungs,"
ratio0.988
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest hummed against the Soho rain, a persistent buzz that seemed to vibrate through the pavement and into the soles of Aurora…"
1"She wore a coat that cost more than Rory’s monthly rent, tailored wool in a deep charcoal that repelled the rain rather than absorbing it."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he asked, his voice low and gravelly"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory corrected (correct)"
1"Eva sighed (sigh)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.317
leniency0.634
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.098
77.2434%