| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.21% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1390 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 42.45% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1390 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "electric" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "throbbed" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "beacon" | | 11 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 140 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 140 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 140 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1390 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 62.50% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a trick of the light, she told herself." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 1376 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.8 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | London | 1 | | Grove | 4 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Aurora | 11 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 75.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like walking through water, every" | | 1 | "as if bowing" | | 2 | "felt like hours, though her watch might" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.719 | | wordCount | 1390 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a snap this time, but a breath" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 140 | | matches | | 0 | "signaling that the" | | 1 | "make that sound" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 42.12 | | std | 26.01 | | cv | 0.618 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 95 | | 2 | 65 | | 3 | 88 | | 4 | 76 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 85 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 46 | | 12 | 67 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 58 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 59 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 43 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 39 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 68 |
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| 97.74% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 140 | | matches | | 0 | "been gone" | | 1 | "were gone" | | 2 | "were gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 8 | | totalVerbs | 237 | | matches | | 0 | "was pulling" | | 1 | "was taking" | | 2 | "was screaming" | | 3 | "was mimicking" | | 4 | "was watching" | | 5 | "was coming" | | 6 | "were closing" | | 7 | "was bleeding" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 140 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't a heartbeat; it was a rhythmic vibration, like a tuning fork struck against bone." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 367 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.02997275204359673 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013623978201634877 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 140 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 140 | | mean | 9.93 | | std | 6.18 | | cv | 0.622 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 40.71% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.2357142857142857 | | totalSentences | 140 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 50.51% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the settling of leaves," | | 1 | "Then, the shadows detached themselves" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 59.39% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a heavy, suffocating" | | 1 | "She adjusted the collar of" | | 2 | "She had come here for" | | 3 | "She shoved it back into" | | 4 | "She knew the theory, but" | | 5 | "It felt like walking through" | | 6 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 7 | "They should have been dead" | | 8 | "She was cool-headed by nature," | | 9 | "It wasn't a heartbeat; it" | | 10 | "It grew hotter, radiating a" | | 11 | "She hadn't believed it then." | | 12 | "She didn't turn." | | 13 | "She stood still, her breathing" | | 14 | "she called out" | | 15 | "Her voice sounded flat, absorbed" | | 16 | "She took a step forward," | | 17 | "It was a phantom sensation," | | 18 | "She rubbed the skin with" | | 19 | "She was five-foot-six, human, and" |
| | ratio | 0.402 | |
| 35.76% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 112 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | | 0 | "The boundary stones stood like" | | 1 | "Aurora paused at the edge" | | 2 | "It was a heavy, suffocating" | | 3 | "She adjusted the collar of" | | 4 | "The Heartstone Pendant sat against" | | 5 | "She had come here for" | | 6 | "The chill of the London" | | 7 | "Aurora pulled her phone from" | | 8 | "The screen flickered, the time" | | 9 | "She shoved it back into" | | 10 | "Time moved differently in the" | | 11 | "She knew the theory, but" | | 12 | "It felt like walking through" | | 13 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 14 | "Wildflowers bloomed in the darkness," | | 15 | "Petals of neon pink and" | | 16 | "They should have been dead" | | 17 | "Aurora kept her eyes forward," | | 18 | "She was cool-headed by nature," | | 19 | "The pendant throbbed." |
| | ratio | 0.848 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the heat was a" | | 1 | "If she blinked, it might" | | 2 | "If she ran, would she" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 73.73% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant sat against her sternum, a deep crimson weight that had grown uncomfortably warm in the last ten minutes." | | 1 | "The screen flickered, the time jumping erratically before settling on a number that made no sense." | | 2 | "It grew hotter, radiating a heat that seeped through her shirt and into her skin." | | 3 | "She was five-foot-six, human, and currently alone in a place that existed in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm." | | 4 | "But the air behind her felt displaced, as if something large had just moved through it." | | 5 | "She felt the fatigue of a long day creeping into her bones, the kind of exhaustion that came from working double shifts at the Golden Empress, but she had only …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |