| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.25% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1538 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 21.98% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1538 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "could feel" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "sentinels" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "mechanical" | | 6 | "gloom" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "throbbed" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "perfect" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "echo" | | 13 | "grave" | | 14 | "beacon" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 171 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 171 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 171 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1538 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1535 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.59 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "You" | | discoveredNames | | Thames | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | November | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | London | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Aurora | 9 | | Carter | 2 | | Eva | 3 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | You | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "November" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Empress" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Carter" | | 5 | "Eva" | | 6 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "Thames" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "Fae" | | 6 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 84.78% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 115 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like just trees to the casual eye" | | 1 | "felt like thresholds" | | 2 | "looked like a hand, but it felt like the" | | 3 | "felt like the cold iron of a grave ston" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1538 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 171 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.65% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 42.72 | | std | 21.31 | | cv | 0.499 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 83 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 83 | | 3 | 76 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 59 | | 7 | 62 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 60 | | 10 | 71 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 64 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 43 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 36 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 47 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 43 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 44 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 47 | | 35 | 45 |
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| 90.90% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 171 | | matches | | 0 | "were drawn" | | 1 | "being watched" | | 2 | "were gone" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "was gone" | | 5 | "were trapped" | | 6 | "was extinguished" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 9 | | totalVerbs | 278 | | matches | | 0 | "was radiating" | | 1 | "was just leading" | | 2 | "was reacting" | | 3 | "was feeling" | | 4 | "was vibrating" | | 5 | "wasn't just glowing" | | 6 | "was turning" | | 7 | "wasn't looking" | | 8 | "was wearing" |
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| 59.31% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 171 | | ratio | 0.029 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't the absence of sound; it was a heavy, muffled pressure, like being underwater." | | 1 | "The feeling wasn't predatory; it was observational." | | 2 | "The crimson gem wasn't just glowing; it was vibrating, casting a faint inner light that didn't illuminate the grass." | | 3 | "The time dilation wasn't a feature; it was a cage." | | 4 | "It didn't walk; it drifted, feet not touching the grass." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1537 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.031229668184775537 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008458035133376708 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 171 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 171 | | mean | 8.99 | | std | 6.13 | | cv | 0.682 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 30.70% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 33 | | diversityRatio | 0.23976608187134502 | | totalSentences | 171 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 64.52% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere that shouldn't speak to" | | 1 | "Just the rustle of the" | | 2 | "Just the echo of the" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 49.68% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "It smelled of wet soil" | | 1 | "It shouldn’t have warmed the" | | 2 | "She stepped over a fallen" | | 3 | "She knew the rules of" | | 4 | "She tapped the face of" | | 5 | "It was a stutter in" | | 6 | "She squinted, her bright blue" | | 7 | "She breathed out, forcing her" | | 8 | "She wasn't a child anymore." | | 9 | "She didn't flinch at every" | | 10 | "It burned now, not just" | | 11 | "It was reacting to something." | | 12 | "She walked on, her steps" | | 13 | "She had a job to" | | 14 | "It wasn't the absence of" | | 15 | "It sounded human, a throatier," | | 16 | "It ended abruptly." | | 17 | "She rubbed the mark with" | | 18 | "She whirled, swinging a flashlight" | | 19 | "It didn't shift with the" |
| | ratio | 0.426 | |
| 5.16% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 141 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "The wind coming off the" | | 1 | "It smelled of wet soil" | | 2 | "Aurora pulled her coat tighter" | | 3 | "It shouldn’t have warmed the" | | 4 | "Aurora had come to this" | | 5 | "She stepped over a fallen" | | 6 | "Shadows stretched long across the" | | 7 | "The tall oaks that marked" | | 8 | "These were the standing stones" | | 9 | "The path led into the" | | 10 | "Wildflowers bloomed here, despite the" | | 11 | "Poppies and bluebells carpeted the" | | 12 | "Aurora stopped, looking down." | | 13 | "She knew the rules of" | | 14 | "Time moved differently inside the" | | 15 | "A watch in her right" | | 16 | "She tapped the face of" | | 17 | "The second hand jumped forward" | | 18 | "The discrepancy wasn't linear." | | 19 | "It was a stutter in" |
| | ratio | 0.91 | |
| 64.52% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "To her, they felt like" | | 1 | "Yet, the warmth of the" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 76.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Shadows stretched long across the path, distorted by the uneven ground, the angles wrong as if they were drawn by a hand that didn’t understand geometry." | | 1 | "The tall oaks that marked the boundary stood like silent sentinels, their bark dark as oil slicks." | | 2 | "It was the voice of someone she hadn't heard in years, someone who died before she left Cardiff." | | 3 | "The ground was flat, a circle of impossible green grass under a sky that wasn't visible." | | 4 | "The crimson gem wasn't just glowing; it was vibrating, casting a faint inner light that didn't illuminate the grass." | | 5 | "She could feel her throat moving, the muscles flexing, but the voice was trapped inside." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, her voice steady, though it cracked at the end" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |