| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He stepped back [back]" | | 1 | "Tomás turned away [away]" | | 2 | "The figure stepped aside [aside]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 1027 | | tagDensity | 0.017 | | leniency | 0.033 | | rawRatio | 0.176 | | effectiveRatio | 0.006 | |
| 99.80% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 50028 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 85.21% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 50028 | | totalAiIsms | 148 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gloom" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "vibrated" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 10919 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 10919 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 11928 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 18 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 50028 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 142 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 607 | | wordCount | 46312 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.91 | | worstName | "Morris" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 1 | | High | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Herrera | 2 | | Morris | 422 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 2 | | Quinn | 162 | | Tomás | 5 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Silas | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Herrera" | | 1 | "Morris" | | 2 | "Saint" | | 3 | "Christopher" | | 4 | "Market" | | 5 | "Quinn" | | 6 | "Tomás" | | 7 | "Silas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "High" | | 2 | "Street" | | 3 | "Raven" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 2022 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 50028 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 11928 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 2715 | | mean | 18.43 | | std | 13.56 | | cv | 0.736 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 78 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 55 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 39 | | 24 | 44 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 43 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 47 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 142 | | totalSentences | 10919 | | matches | | 0 | "were chained" | | 1 | "been found" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was hunted" | | 4 | "was gone" | | 5 | "was gone" | | 6 | "was gone" | | 7 | "was gone" | | 8 | "was gone" | | 9 | "was gone" | | 10 | "was gone" | | 11 | "was gone" | | 12 | "was gone" | | 13 | "was gone" | | 14 | "was gone" | | 15 | "was gone" | | 16 | "was gone" | | 17 | "was gone" | | 18 | "was gone" | | 19 | "was gone" | | 20 | "was gone" | | 21 | "was gone" | | 22 | "was gone" | | 23 | "was gone" | | 24 | "was gone" | | 25 | "was gone" | | 26 | "was gone" | | 27 | "was gone" | | 28 | "was gone" | | 29 | "was gone" | | 30 | "was gone" | | 31 | "was gone" | | 32 | "was gone" | | 33 | "was gone" | | 34 | "was gone" | | 35 | "was gone" | | 36 | "was gone" | | 37 | "was gone" | | 38 | "was gone" | | 39 | "was gone" | | 40 | "was gone" | | 41 | "was gone" | | 42 | "was gone" | | 43 | "was gone" | | 44 | "was gone" | | 45 | "was gone" | | 46 | "was gone" | | 47 | "was gone" | | 48 | "was gone" | | 49 | "was gone" | | 50 | "was gone" | | 51 | "was gone" | | 52 | "was gone" | | 53 | "was gone" | | 54 | "was gone" | | 55 | "was gone" | | 56 | "was gone" | | 57 | "was gone" | | 58 | "was gone" | | 59 | "was gone" | | 60 | "was gone" | | 61 | "was gone" | | 62 | "was gone" | | 63 | "was gone" | | 64 | "was gone" | | 65 | "was gone" | | 66 | "was gone" | | 67 | "was gone" | | 68 | "was gone" | | 69 | "was gone" | | 70 | "was gone" | | 71 | "was gone" | | 72 | "was gone" | | 73 | "was gone" | | 74 | "was gone" | | 75 | "was gone" | | 76 | "was gone" | | 77 | "was gone" | | 78 | "was gone" | | 79 | "was gone" | | 80 | "was gone" | | 81 | "was gone" | | 82 | "was gone" | | 83 | "was gone" | | 84 | "was gone" | | 85 | "was gone" | | 86 | "was gone" | | 87 | "was gone" | | 88 | "was gone" | | 89 | "was gone" | | 90 | "was gone" | | 91 | "was gone" | | 92 | "was gone" | | 93 | "was gone" | | 94 | "was gone" | | 95 | "was gone" | | 96 | "was gone" | | 97 | "was gone" | | 98 | "was gone" | | 99 | "was gone" | | 100 | "was gone" | | 101 | "was gone" | | 102 | "was gone" | | 103 | "was gone" | | 104 | "was gone" | | 105 | "was gone" | | 106 | "was gone" | | 107 | "was gone" | | 108 | "was gone" | | 109 | "was gone" | | 110 | "was gone" | | 111 | "was gone" | | 112 | "was gone" | | 113 | "was gone" | | 114 | "was gone" | | 115 | "was gone" | | 116 | "was gone" | | 117 | "was gone" | | 118 | "was gone" | | 119 | "was gone" | | 120 | "was gone" | | 121 | "was gone" | | 122 | "was gone" | | 123 | "was gone" | | 124 | "was gone" | | 125 | "was gone" | | 126 | "was gone" | | 127 | "was gone" | | 128 | "was gone" | | 129 | "was gone" | | 130 | "was gone" | | 131 | "was gone" | | 132 | "was gone" | | 133 | "was gone" | | 134 | "was gone" | | 135 | "was gone" | | 136 | "was gone" | | 137 | "was gone" | | 138 | "was gone" | | 139 | "was gone" | | 140 | "was gone" | | 141 | "was gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 554 | | totalVerbs | 12876 | | matches | | 0 | "was going" | | 1 | "was hunting" | | 2 | "was rising" | | 3 | "was beginning" | | 4 | "was going" | | 5 | "was hunting" | | 6 | "was rising" | | 7 | "was beginning" | | 8 | "was going" | | 9 | "was hunting" | | 10 | "was rising" | | 11 | "was beginning" | | 12 | "was going" | | 13 | "was hunting" | | 14 | "was rising" | | 15 | "was beginning" | | 16 | "was going" | | 17 | "was hunting" | | 18 | "was rising" | | 19 | "was beginning" | | 20 | "was going" | | 21 | "was hunting" | | 22 | "was rising" | | 23 | "was beginning" | | 24 | "was going" | | 25 | "was hunting" | | 26 | "was rising" | | 27 | "was beginning" | | 28 | "was going" | | 29 | "was hunting" | | 30 | "was rising" | | 31 | "was beginning" | | 32 | "was going" | | 33 | "was hunting" | | 34 | "was rising" | | 35 | "was beginning" | | 36 | "was going" | | 37 | "was hunting" | | 38 | "was rising" | | 39 | "was beginning" | | 40 | "was going" | | 41 | "was hunting" | | 42 | "was rising" | | 43 | "was beginning" | | 44 | "was going" | | 45 | "was hunting" | | 46 | "was rising" | | 47 | "was beginning" | | 48 | "was going" | | 49 | "was hunting" | | 50 | "was rising" | | 51 | "was beginning" | | 52 | "was going" | | 53 | "was hunting" | | 54 | "was rising" | | 55 | "was beginning" | | 56 | "was going" | | 57 | "was hunting" | | 58 | "was rising" | | 59 | "was beginning" | | 60 | "was going" | | 61 | "was hunting" | | 62 | "was rising" | | 63 | "was beginning" | | 64 | "was going" | | 65 | "was hunting" | | 66 | "was rising" | | 67 | "was beginning" | | 68 | "was going" | | 69 | "was hunting" | | 70 | "was rising" | | 71 | "was beginning" | | 72 | "was going" | | 73 | "was hunting" | | 74 | "was rising" | | 75 | "was beginning" | | 76 | "was going" | | 77 | "was hunting" | | 78 | "was rising" | | 79 | "was beginning" | | 80 | "was going" | | 81 | "was hunting" | | 82 | "was rising" | | 83 | "was beginning" | | 84 | "was going" | | 85 | "was hunting" | | 86 | "was rising" | | 87 | "was beginning" | | 88 | "was going" | | 89 | "was hunting" | | 90 | "was rising" | | 91 | "was beginning" | | 92 | "was going" | | 93 | "was hunting" | | 94 | "was rising" | | 95 | "was beginning" | | 96 | "was going" | | 97 | "was hunting" | | 98 | "was rising" | | 99 | "was beginning" | | 100 | "was going" | | 101 | "was hunting" | | 102 | "was rising" | | 103 | "was beginning" | | 104 | "was going" | | 105 | "was hunting" | | 106 | "was rising" | | 107 | "was beginning" | | 108 | "was going" | | 109 | "was hunting" | | 110 | "was rising" | | 111 | "was beginning" | | 112 | "was going" | | 113 | "was hunting" | | 114 | "was rising" | | 115 | "was beginning" | | 116 | "was going" | | 117 | "was hunting" | | 118 | "was rising" | | 119 | "was beginning" | | 120 | "was going" | | 121 | "was hunting" | | 122 | "was rising" | | 123 | "was beginning" | | 124 | 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rising" | | 167 | "was beginning" | | 168 | "was going" | | 169 | "was hunting" | | 170 | "was rising" | | 171 | "was beginning" | | 172 | "was going" | | 173 | "was hunting" | | 174 | "was rising" | | 175 | "was beginning" | | 176 | "was going" | | 177 | "was hunting" | | 178 | "was rising" | | 179 | "was beginning" | | 180 | "was going" | | 181 | "was hunting" | | 182 | "was rising" | | 183 | "was beginning" | | 184 | "was going" | | 185 | "was hunting" | | 186 | "was rising" | | 187 | "was beginning" | | 188 | "was going" | | 189 | "was hunting" | | 190 | "was rising" | | 191 | "was beginning" | | 192 | "was going" | | 193 | "was hunting" | | 194 | "was rising" | | 195 | "was beginning" | | 196 | "was going" | | 197 | "was hunting" | | 198 | "was rising" | | 199 | "was beginning" | | 200 | "was going" | | 201 | "was hunting" | | 202 | "was rising" | | 203 | "was beginning" | | 204 | "was going" | | 205 | "was hunting" | | 206 | "was rising" | | 207 | "was beginning" | | 208 | "was going" | | 209 | "was hunting" | | 210 | "was rising" | | 211 | "was beginning" | | 212 | "was going" | | 213 | "was hunting" | | 214 | "was rising" | | 215 | "was beginning" | | 216 | "was going" | | 217 | "was hunting" | | 218 | "was rising" | | 219 | "was beginning" | | 220 | "was going" | | 221 | "was hunting" | | 222 | "was rising" | | 223 | "was beginning" | | 224 | "was going" | | 225 | "was hunting" | | 226 | "was rising" | | 227 | "was beginning" | | 228 | "was going" | | 229 | "was hunting" | | 230 | "was rising" | | 231 | "was beginning" | | 232 | "was going" | | 233 | "was hunting" | | 234 | "was rising" | | 235 | "was beginning" | | 236 | "was going" | | 237 | "was hunting" | | 238 | "was rising" | | 239 | "was beginning" | | 240 | "was going" | | 241 | "was hunting" | | 242 | "was rising" | | 243 | "was beginning" | | 244 | "was going" | | 245 | "was hunting" | | 246 | "was rising" | | 247 | "was beginning" | | 248 | "was going" | | 249 | "was hunting" | | 250 | "was rising" | | 251 | "was beginning" | | 252 | "was going" | | 253 | "was hunting" | | 254 | "was rising" | | 255 | "was beginning" | | 256 | "was going" | | 257 | "was hunting" | | 258 | "was rising" | | 259 | "was beginning" | | 260 | "was going" | | 261 | "was hunting" | | 262 | "was rising" | | 263 | "was beginning" | | 264 | "was going" | | 265 | "was hunting" | | 266 | "was rising" | | 267 | "was beginning" | | 268 | "was going" | | 269 | "was hunting" | | 270 | "was rising" | | 271 | "was beginning" | | 272 | "was going" | | 273 | "was hunting" | | 274 | "was rising" | | 275 | "was beginning" | | 276 | "was going" | | 277 | "was hunting" | | 278 | "was rising" | | 279 | "was beginning" | | 280 | "was going" | | 281 | "was hunting" | | 282 | "was rising" | | 283 | "was beginning" | | 284 | "was going" | | 285 | "was hunting" | | 286 | "was rising" | | 287 | "was beginning" | | 288 | "was going" | | 289 | "was hunting" | | 290 | "was rising" | | 291 | "was beginning" | | 292 | "was going" | | 293 | "was hunting" | | 294 | "was rising" | | 295 | "was beginning" | | 296 | "was going" | | 297 | "was hunting" | | 298 | "was rising" | | 299 | "was beginning" | | 300 | "was going" | | 301 | "was hunting" | | 302 | "was rising" | | 303 | "was beginning" | | 304 | "was going" | | 305 | "was hunting" | | 306 | "was rising" | | 307 | "was beginning" | | 308 | "was going" | | 309 | "was hunting" | | 310 | "was rising" | | 311 | "was beginning" | | 312 | "was going" | | 313 | "was hunting" | | 314 | "was rising" | | 315 | "was beginning" | | 316 | "was going" | | 317 | "was hunting" | | 318 | "was rising" | | 319 | "was beginning" | | 320 | "was going" | | 321 | "was hunting" | | 322 | "was rising" | | 323 | "was beginning" | | 324 | "was going" | | 325 | "was hunting" | | 326 | "was rising" | | 327 | "was beginning" | | 328 | "was going" | | 329 | "was hunting" | | 330 | "was rising" | | 331 | "was beginning" | | 332 | "was going" | | 333 | "was hunting" | | 334 | "was 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going" | | 461 | "was hunting" | | 462 | "was rising" | | 463 | "was beginning" | | 464 | "was going" | | 465 | "was hunting" | | 466 | "was rising" | | 467 | "was beginning" | | 468 | "was going" | | 469 | "was hunting" | | 470 | "was rising" | | 471 | "was beginning" | | 472 | "was going" | | 473 | "was hunting" | | 474 | "was rising" | | 475 | "was beginning" | | 476 | "was going" | | 477 | "was hunting" | | 478 | "was rising" | | 479 | "was beginning" | | 480 | "was going" | | 481 | "was hunting" | | 482 | "was rising" | | 483 | "was beginning" | | 484 | "was going" | | 485 | "was hunting" | | 486 | "was rising" | | 487 | "was beginning" | | 488 | "was going" | | 489 | "was hunting" | | 490 | "was rising" | | 491 | "was beginning" | | 492 | "was going" | | 493 | "was hunting" | | 494 | "was rising" | | 495 | "was beginning" | | 496 | "was going" | | 497 | "was hunting" | | 498 | "was rising" | | 499 | "was beginning" | | 500 | "was going" | | 501 | "was hunting" | | 502 | "was rising" | | 503 | "was beginning" | | 504 | "was going" | | 505 | "was hunting" | | 506 | "was rising" | | 507 | "was beginning" | | 508 | "was going" | | 509 | "was hunting" | | 510 | "was rising" | | 511 | "was beginning" | | 512 | "was going" | | 513 | "was hunting" | | 514 | "was rising" | | 515 | "was beginning" | | 516 | "was going" | | 517 | "was hunting" | | 518 | "was rising" | | 519 | "was beginning" | | 520 | "was going" | | 521 | "was hunting" | | 522 | "was rising" | | 523 | "was beginning" | | 524 | "was going" | | 525 | "was hunting" | | 526 | "was rising" | | 527 | "was beginning" | | 528 | "was going" | | 529 | "was hunting" | | 530 | "was rising" | | 531 | "was beginning" | | 532 | "was going" | | 533 | "was hunting" | | 534 | "was rising" | | 535 | "was beginning" | | 536 | "was going" | | 537 | "was hunting" | | 538 | "was rising" | | 539 | "was beginning" | | 540 | "was going" | | 541 | "was hunting" | | 542 | "was rising" | | 543 | "was beginning" | | 544 | "was going" | | 545 | "was hunting" | | 546 | "was rising" | | 547 | "was beginning" | | 548 | "was going" | | 549 | "was hunting" | | 550 | "was rising" | | 551 | "was beginning" | | 552 | "was going" | | 553 | "was hunting" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 11928 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 46313 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 431 | | adverbRatio | 0.009306242307775355 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00008636883812320515 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 11928 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 85.85% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 11928 | | mean | 4.19 | | std | 1.53 | | cv | 0.365 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 25.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7274 | | diversityRatio | 0.004778672032193159 | | totalSentences | 11928 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 9232 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7317 | | totalSentences | 9232 | | matches | | 0 | "She scrambled over the top," | | 1 | "It was not a clean" | | 2 | "He moved with the fluid" | | 3 | "His dark coat flapped behind" | | 4 | "She checked the time." | | 5 | "She landed hard, rolled, and" | | 6 | "She did not feel it." | | 7 | "She pushed the thought aside." | | 8 | "She knew the lore." | | 9 | "She approached the gate slowly." | | 10 | "Her boots crunched on broken" | | 11 | "She looked at the token." | | 12 | "It was human bone." | | 13 | "He held a small medical" | | 14 | "His other hand rested on" | | 15 | "Her voice was steady." | | 16 | "He stepped back into the" | | 17 | "He tapped the medallion on" | | 18 | "He held up a small" | | 19 | "She drew her gun" |
| | ratio | 0.793 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 9227 | | totalSentences | 9232 | | matches | | 0 | "The figure vaulted the chain-link" | | 1 | "Quinn hit the metal with" | | 2 | "She scrambled over the top," | | 3 | "Water slicked the cobblestones." | | 4 | "It was not a clean" | | 5 | "Tomás Herrera did not look" | | 6 | "He moved with the fluid" | | 7 | "His dark coat flapped behind" | | 8 | "Quinn adjusted her grip on" | | 9 | "The leather of her watch" | | 10 | "She checked the time." | | 11 | "Midnight had passed." | | 12 | "The deadline for the full" | | 13 | "She landed hard, rolled, and" | | 14 | "The rain drummed on her" | | 15 | "She did not feel it." | | 16 | "The cold was a constant." | | 17 | "The memory of DS Morris" | | 18 | "She pushed the thought aside." | | 19 | "The man whose medical records" |
| | ratio | 0.999 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 9232 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 16 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The figure vaulted the chain-link fence with a grace that belied his desperation." | | 1 | "The man who carried a Saint Christopher medallion under his shirt." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1027 | | tagDensity | 0.001 | | leniency | 0.002 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |