Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBH35707V7HD2R6HX74WGT8

Run Details

Duration:
36.4s
Cost:
$0.012946
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the entrance of The Raven's Nest hummed with a low, electric buzz that seemed to vibrate in Aurora's teeth. It was late past closing time, the London rain slicking the Soho streets until the pavement reflected the fractured neon like spilled oil. Aurora stood just inside the doorway, shaking water from her shoulder-length black hair, the droplets catching the light of the dim bar. She was still wearing the delivery jacket, the logo of the Golden Empress restaurant faded slightly from the wash. Her bright blue eyes scanned the room, searching not for customers, but for a silhouette she had spent three years trying to forget. Silas sat at the far end of the bar, the dim light catching the grey streaks in his auburn hair. He didn't look up as she entered, his hazel eyes fixed on the ledger open on the polished wood. His silver signet ring glinted on his right hand as he turned a page, the only movement he made. His left leg gave a slight, rhythmic twitch, the old injury from Prague never quite letting go, a phantom ache for a war long over. Aurora tightened her grip on the strap of her bag. She walked toward the back, where the shadows pooled deepest, but stopped dead when the stool near the door shifted. The wood creaked under weight. A woman turned, a glass of amber liquid in her hand. Rory. It was Rory's name now. She kept it in Cardiff, kept it in the memories of a life before Evan. Here, in the soot-stained light of Silas's bar, she was just the girl who delivered food and lived above the owner's head. But the woman in the corner was something else entirely. Eva. The change was immediate and physical. In the codex of Rory's memory, Eva was the girl with the dyed hair and the boundless energy, the one who had written her into the flat above the bar when the situation in Cardiff became unbearable. This Eva was thinner, her clothes too clean for the grit of the night, her eyes hollowed out by something heavy and unspoken. The woman who had fled to London for the safety of Rory's friendship looked like she had come to bury herself. You're here, Rory said, her voice quiet, almost lost under the hum of the fridge and the distant siren. I told you to come, the woman said. She didn't smile. She took a long sip from her glass. I told you to call me. I did. I called. You didn't answer. Rory stepped fully into the light, the scar on her left wrist catching the dim glow as she pulled her hand from her pocket. The small crescent mark was pale against her skin, a reminder of a childhood accident, now overshadowed by the adult sharpness of the wrist. She had survived the abusive ex, the Pre-Law degree, the flight, the survival. Eva had not survived the same way. She looked like she had survived without growing. The air between them was thick with the weight of the unspoken. They had stood together in Cardiff for a decade, through university and graduation and the first time the world had felt like a closed room. Then the phone calls stopped. The letters stopped. Silas watched them from the corner of his eye, his expression unreadable. He was a Spymaster in retirement, a man who knew better than to interrupt a conversation that was already broken. He tapped a finger on the table, the ring clicking softly against the wood, but he remained seated, a silent sentinel. What happened, Rory asked. The words felt heavy, clumsy. You just vanished. Eva swirled the liquid in her glass. The ice clinked against the crystal. I got tired of being the girl who ran. I got tired of the letters asking why you left. And where are you now? I'm working, Eva said. A pause. A drink. A flat. Just like you. Rory felt the tension in her shoulders release, then tighten again. It wasn't that Eva had changed that hurt. It was the recognition of the mirror. They had both been the protagonists of their own stories in Cardiff. Now, they were just characters in a London that didn't care who they were. Silas stood up, the movement stiffening the joints of his left leg. He walked over to them, the floorboards groaning under his weight. He stopped a few feet away, his height imposing in the dim light. The maps on the wall behind him seemed to shift in the flickering neon. Rory, Silas said. It wasn't a question. It's alright, she said. I need to close up. He nodded, his hazel eyes passing over Eva. He knew better than to ask what Eva knew. The bar was a front for his network, a sanctuary for secrets, but not a place for old ghosts. Eva stood up as well, the glass in her hand emptying. She looked at Rory, then at Silas. The tension shifted from a sharp edge to a dull ache. You look good, Rory said. I look tired, Eva corrected. Her voice cracked. I haven't slept right since you left Cardiff. Rory didn't move. The rain outside tapped against the windowpane, a rhythmic, relentless sound. She looked at the scar on her wrist. It was small. It didn't define her, but it was part of the map of her body. Like Eva's hollow eyes were part of the map of her face. I should go, Eva said. She turned toward the door. The green neon sign buzzed louder as she passed it, a dying insect sound. Wait, Rory said. She stepped forward, then stopped. She didn't know what to say. There were years of messages that never sent, of apologies that never needed to be made. There was the fear that if they acknowledged the gap, it would become a canyon they couldn't cross. Eva paused at the door. The handle was cold metal. I just wanted to see you. That was enough, Rory said. Eva opened the door, the rain rushing in like a tide. She didn't look back. She stepped out into the Soho night, and the door clicked shut, silencing the buzz of the neon sign. Rory stood alone in the bar. The silence was heavy. Silas had moved back to his ledger, but he wasn't writing. He watched her with the quiet authority of a man who had seen too many secrets die in the dark. You okay? Silas asked. Rory touched the scar on her wrist. It was a small pain, a memory of a childhood accident. But the pain in her chest was new. It was the weight of time. I'm here, she said. Silas nodded. He picked up his glass of whiskey and took a drink, the silver ring glinting one last time in the dim light. The maps on the wall held their breath, waiting for the next story to unfold. Rory knew it would be another one. Another one to survive. But for the first time in years, she wasn't alone in the survival. She turned to the door, her hand on the handle, and opened it to the rain.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1210
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1210
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"fractured"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count2
4
word"weight"
count4
5
word"unspoken"
count2
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"sentinel"
count1
9
word"crystal"
count1
10
word"tension"
count2
11
word"imposing"
count1
12
word"sanctuary"
count1
13
word"silence"
count1
14
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"fractured"
2"scanned"
3"rhythmic"
4"weight"
5"unspoken"
6"reminder"
7"unreadable"
8"sentinel"
9"crystal"
10"tension"
11"imposing"
12"sanctuary"
13"silence"
14"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
94.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences118
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1210
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions7
matches
0"What happened, Rory asked."
1"Rory, Silas said."
2"You look good, Rory said."
3"I look tired, Eva corrected."
4"I should go, Eva said."
5"Wait, Rory said."
6"That was enough, Rory said."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions67
wordCount1210
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.4
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora3
London3
Soho2
Golden1
Empress1
Prague1
Rory17
Cardiff5
Evan1
Silas9
Eva15
Pre-Law1
Spymaster1
You5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
5"Silas"
6"Eva"
7"You"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Prague"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.798
windowScore0.667
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"buzz that seemed to vibrate in Aurora's teeth"
1"looked like she had come to bury herself"
2"looked like she had survived without grow"
3"felt like a closed room"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.826
wordCount1210
matches
0"not for customers, but for a silhouette she had spent three years trying to forget"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean35.59
std27.43
cv0.771
sampleLengths
0111
183
246
353
41
587
619
725
87
976
1045
1153
1212
1332
145
1513
1652
1750
187
199
2036
2134
2216
2351
2424
2548
2616
275
2834
2941
304
3132
324
3379
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs219
matches
0"was still wearing"
1"wasn't writing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences118
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1213
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.025556471558120363
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004122011541632316
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean10.25
std7.21
cv0.703
sampleLengths
024
123
222
319
423
520
619
719
825
910
1020
115
1211
131
145
1515
1622
1710
181
196
2037
2123
2221
2319
248
253
268
276
282
292
303
3124
3224
3313
347
358
3612
3725
385
393
4012
4120
4221
434
445
453
467
476
489
4910
36.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.23728813559322035
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners28
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences108
matches
0"Then the phone calls stopped."
1"Just like you."
ratio0.019
16.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences108
matches
0"It was late past closing"
1"She was still wearing the"
2"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
3"He didn't look up as"
4"His silver signet ring glinted"
5"His left leg gave a"
6"She walked toward the back,"
7"It was Rory's name now."
8"She kept it in Cardiff,"
9"You're here, Rory said, her"
10"I told you to come,"
11"She didn't smile."
12"She took a long sip"
13"I told you to call"
14"You didn't answer."
15"She had survived the abusive"
16"She looked like she had"
17"They had stood together in"
18"He was a Spymaster in"
19"He tapped a finger on"
ratio0.509
20.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences108
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"It was late past closing"
2"Aurora stood just inside the"
3"She was still wearing the"
4"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
5"Silas sat at the far"
6"He didn't look up as"
7"His silver signet ring glinted"
8"His left leg gave a"
9"Aurora tightened her grip on"
10"She walked toward the back,"
11"The wood creaked under weight."
12"A woman turned, a glass"
13"It was Rory's name now."
14"She kept it in Cardiff,"
15"Here, in the soot-stained light"
16"The change was immediate and"
17"This Eva was thinner, her"
18"The woman who had fled"
19"You're here, Rory said, her"
ratio0.88
46.30% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"Now, they were just characters"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The green neon sign above the entrance of The Raven's Nest hummed with a low, electric buzz that seemed to vibrate in Aurora's teeth."
1"Here, in the soot-stained light of Silas's bar, she was just the girl who delivered food and lived above the owner's head."
2"He was a Spymaster in retirement, a man who knew better than to interrupt a conversation that was already broken."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.8475%