| 85.71% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Silas said finally [finally]" | | 1 | "Silas said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.486 | | leniency | 0.971 | | rawRatio | 0.118 | | effectiveRatio | 0.114 | |
| 88.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1326 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.44% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1326 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "calculated" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "tangible" | | 7 | "unspoken" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 122 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1326 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 1103 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.36 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Blackwood | 1 | | London | 2 | | Prague | 1 | | Silas | 15 | | Aurora | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Blackwood" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Prague" |
| | globalScore | 0.82 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like an accusation" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1326 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 34.89 | | std | 25.64 | | cv | 0.735 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 86 | | 1 | 95 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 70 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 72 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 62 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 53 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 68 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 82 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 42 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 76 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | |
| 97.96% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "was wearing" | | 1 | "was still trying" | | 2 | "was polishing" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 122 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "The maps on the wall behind them told him enough of the world’s secrets; he didn’t need to hunt them for his own friend." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1111 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slight, subconscious limp beginning" |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.0315031503150315 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008100810081008101 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 122 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 122 | | mean | 10.87 | | std | 7.01 | | cv | 0.645 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 34.43% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.28688524590163933 | | totalSentences | 122 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 35.84% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the liquid in the" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t come down from" | | 1 | "She had lived in the" | | 2 | "His hands moved with the" | | 3 | "He was wearing a dark" | | 4 | "He leaned forward, a hand" | | 5 | "He didn’t smile." | | 6 | "He didn’t have to." | | 7 | "He had the weight of" | | 8 | "It was an acknowledgement of" | | 9 | "He shifted his weight, a" | | 10 | "It was the same injury" | | 11 | "She had seen him limp" | | 12 | "He was a hundred years" | | 13 | "he said, his voice rougher" | | 14 | "She moved toward the bar," | | 15 | "She kept her left wrist" | | 16 | "He didn’t ask why she" | | 17 | "He reached for a bottle" | | 18 | "He just let out a" | | 19 | "They looked at each other." |
| | ratio | 0.602 | |
| 3.01% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 85 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon sign above" | | 1 | "Aurora pushed through the heavy" | | 2 | "She hadn’t come down from" | | 3 | "She had lived in the" | | 4 | "The bar was empty save" | | 5 | "Silas Blackwood didn’t look up" | | 6 | "His hands moved with the" | | 7 | "He was wearing a dark" | | 8 | "Silas set the glass down." | | 9 | "He leaned forward, a hand" | | 10 | "He didn’t smile." | | 11 | "He didn’t have to." | | 12 | "He had the weight of" | | 13 | "The name wasn’t a question," | | 14 | "It was an acknowledgement of" | | 15 | "The way he moved revealed" | | 16 | "He shifted his weight, a" | | 17 | "It was the same injury" | | 18 | "She had seen him limp" | | 19 | "He was a hundred years" |
| | ratio | 0.914 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 36.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pushed through the heavy oak door and stepped into the scent of stale beer, old leather, and the sharp tang of disinfectant that defined The Raven's Nest…" | | 1 | "He had the weight of an old soldier in his posture, the quiet authority that had kept her alive in London long before this moment." | | 2 | "Aurora was twenty-five, with shoulder-length black hair that had grown a little longer than she liked, straight and unadorned." | | 3 | "He had worn it since she met him, a symbol of his rank that wasn’t there for him to keep." | | 4 | "Her voice was cool, steady, the cool-headedness that defined her." | | 5 | "The silence stretched, thick with the history of a bar that had seen too many good men and women go away." | | 6 | "She walked out into the night, the sound of the green sign buzzing fading behind her like a heartbeat that had stopped." |
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| 95.59% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, his voice rougher than the memories she carried" |
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| 64.29% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 17 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she lied (lie)" | | 1 | "Silas agreed (agree)" | | 2 | "Silas repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.486 | | leniency | 0.971 | | rawRatio | 0.176 | | effectiveRatio | 0.171 | |