| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 92.87% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1403 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 21.60% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1403 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "throb" | | 3 | "navigate" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "spectral" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "unsettled" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "comforting" | | 10 | "traced" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "scanned" | | 13 | "stomach" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "searing" | | 16 | "beacon" | | 17 | "could feel" | | 18 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 138 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 138 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1402 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1402 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.78 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Aurora | 11 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 42.47% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like ozone and crushed petals, swe" | | 1 | "blooms that seemed to hum with a low frequency" | | 2 | "looked like bruised skin, yellow blooms t" | | 3 | "felt like a warning" | | 4 | "felt like the air was holding its breat" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1402 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 50.07 | | std | 29.6 | | cv | 0.591 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 97 | | 1 | 77 | | 2 | 110 | | 3 | 87 | | 4 | 67 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 86 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 66 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 56 | | 12 | 57 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 58 | | 17 | 61 | | 18 | 52 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 55 | | 22 | 58 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 51 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 49 | | 27 | 81 |
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| 90.01% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "was marked" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "were twisted" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "been gone" | | 5 | "been gone" |
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| 54.44% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 229 | | matches | | 0 | "was spreading" | | 1 | "was holding" | | 2 | "was burning" | | 3 | "was reacting" | | 4 | "was bleeding" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 138 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "They were vibrant, impossible colors—violets that looked like bruised skin, yellow blooms that seemed to hum with a low frequency." | | 1 | "It didn’t move toward her; it simply existed, expanding." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1404 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.019943019943019943 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005698005698005698 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 138 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 138 | | mean | 10.16 | | std | 7.19 | | cv | 0.708 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 32.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 24 | | diversityRatio | 0.17391304347826086 | | totalSentences | 138 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 26.67% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 2.40% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, letting her breath" | | 1 | "It tasted like ozone and" | | 2 | "She pulled her phone from" | | 3 | "She had left Silas’s bar" | | 4 | "She had walked for twenty" | | 5 | "It pulsed, a slow, rhythmic" | | 6 | "It had been pulling her" | | 7 | "She told herself it was" | | 8 | "She stepped off the path." | | 9 | "They were vibrant, impossible colors—violets" | | 10 | "They bloomed year-round in the" | | 11 | "They glowed with a faint," | | 12 | "She reached up, her fingers" | | 13 | "It wasn’t a comforting heat." | | 14 | "It was the heat of" | | 15 | "She traced the small crescent" | | 16 | "It was at the edge" | | 17 | "She knew better." | | 18 | "She kept her gaze fixed" | | 19 | "She forced her breathing to" |
| | ratio | 0.544 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 115 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "The boundary was marked by" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stepped between them," | | 2 | "She paused, letting her breath" | | 3 | "The transition was subtle, a" | | 4 | "It tasted like ozone and" | | 5 | "She pulled her phone from" | | 6 | "The screen lit up, casting" | | 7 | "The time read 11:47 PM." | | 8 | "She had left Silas’s bar" | | 9 | "She had walked for twenty" | | 10 | "The logic of the city" | | 11 | "Aurora tucked the phone away" | | 12 | "The Heartstone pendant rested against" | | 13 | "It pulsed, a slow, rhythmic" | | 14 | "It had been pulling her" | | 15 | "She told herself it was" | | 16 | "She stepped off the path." | | 17 | "The ground beneath her boots" | | 18 | "They were vibrant, impossible colors—violets" | | 19 | "They bloomed year-round in the" |
| | ratio | 0.92 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "Even at night, the city" | | 1 | "If she turned, whatever it" | | 2 | "If she stayed too long," |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 33.90% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed, a slow, rhythmic throb that matched the beat of her own heart, though she knew it was the stone driving the rhythm, not her." | | 1 | "She told herself it was curiosity, the same curiosity that had made her read the files on the Fae, the same intelligence that had helped her navigate the labyri…" | | 2 | "They were vibrant, impossible colors—violets that looked like bruised skin, yellow blooms that seemed to hum with a low frequency." | | 3 | "It was the sound of something dragging itself through the undergrowth, something that didn’t have feet." | | 4 | "The oaks here were twisted, their branches knotted into shapes that resembled grasping hands." | | 5 | "She felt a sudden, sharp drop in temperature, a draft that smelled of wet earth and old blood." | | 6 | "The pendant flared, the crimson light bleeding through her shirt, casting a red shadow on the grass." | | 7 | "It felt like the air was holding its breath, waiting for her to make a mistake." | | 8 | "She lay there for a long time, staring up at the moon, which looked smaller and colder than she remembered." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |