Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBHNXR5EXKH1P4MMP3M08CC

Run Details

Duration:
1m 35s
Cost:
$0.012785
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain lashed against the window of The Raven's Nest, blurring the Soho streetlights into streaks of amber and grey. Inside, the air smelled of polished mahogany, stale tobacco, and the faint, metallic tang of old maps that lined the walls. Aurora Carter sat in the corner booth, her elbows resting on the scarred wood of the table. She wore a dark jacket over a simple shirt, her straight shoulder-length black hair tucked behind her ears. Her bright blue eyes scanned the room, not with anxiety, but with the practiced vigilance of someone who had learned to read exits before entrances. The green neon sign above the entrance hummed, casting a sickly glow over the wet pavement outside. It was the only sound competing with the low murmur of the patrons. Aurora traced the rim of her glass, her left hand resting flat on the table. The small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist caught the dim light, a pale interruption against her skin. It was a souvenir from a childhood accident in Cardiff, a place she hadn't seen in three years. Silas Blackwood moved behind the bar with a deliberate, quiet grace, though the slight limp in his left leg betrayed the old injury that had ended his career in Prague. He was polishing a tumbler, the silver signet ring on his right hand glinting as he worked. He didn't look up when the bell above the door chimed, but Aurora did. The man who stepped in shook water from a trench coat. He was older than the last time she had seen him, his face softer, the lines around his eyes deeper. It was Julian. They had been inseparable during their Pre-Law days at Cardiff University, before the world had fractured. He looked around the room, his gaze sweeping past the black-and-white photographs of spies and wars until it landed on her. The recognition hit him like a physical blow. He froze, a hand hovering near the door handle. Aurora didn't smile. She simply lifted her chin, a small, acknowledging nod. Julian hesitated, then walked toward her booth. The floorboards creaked under his weight, a sound that seemed too loud in the hushed room. Rory, he said. His voice was rough, unused to her name. Julian. She kept her tone level. Cool. It was a habit she had cultivated since Evan, since the flight, since the night she decided that being predictable was a liability. He slid into the booth opposite her, the leather groaning under his weight. He looked at her hands, then at the scar on her wrist. He looked at the way she sat, poised and ready, unlike the girl who used to laugh until she cried over bad poetry. You look different, he said. I look like I live here now. He nodded slowly, his eyes drifting to the bar where Silas had finally paused his work. The older man watched them with hazel eyes that missed nothing, his beard neatly trimmed, his posture radiating a quiet authority that made the air feel heavier. Silas gave a barely perceptible nod to Aurora, a silent signal that the floor was hers. I heard you moved to London, Julian said. I didn't think you'd... I didn't think you'd cut ties so completely. I didn't cut ties. I just stopped answering the phone. She took a sip of her drink. It was whiskey, neat. The burn was familiar, grounding. Julian reached for the menu, his fingers trembling slightly. He hadn't ordered. He hadn't thought about ordering. He was still in Cardiff, in the lecture halls where they had argued about jurisprudence and the nature of justice. Evan, Julian said softly. Aurora's grip on the glass tightened. The ice clinked. Don't. I'm sorry, Rory. I didn't know what to say when you stopped calling. We all thought... What did you think? That I was going to wait? That I was going to let him break me until I was a ghost? Julian flinched. He looked down at his hands. He looked softer than he had been in university, the edges of his ambition worn down by time and stability. Aurora had sharpened herself against the world. I just wanted to make sure you were safe, he said. I am. Silas moved from behind the bar then. He walked over with that slight limp, setting a fresh bottle of water on the table near Julian. He didn't interrupt, but his presence was a wall between the past and the present. He wore a grey suit that fit him perfectly, the silver ring on his finger catching the neon light. Julian glanced at Silas, then back to Aurora. You work here? I live above it. I deliver food for the Empress down the street. I do what I have to do. Julian looked around the room again, at the maps, the photos of men who looked like they had seen things they couldn't forget. He looked at the scar on her wrist again. You look tired, Rory. I am tired. But I'm awake. That was the thing Julian couldn't understand. In Cardiff, she had been sleeping even when her eyes were open. Here, in the dim light of The Raven's Nest, she was hyper-aware. She knew the angle of the door, the sound of Silas's limp, the way the rain hit the glass. She knew the weight of the silence between them. I have a job offer, Julian said. It's in London. I thought... maybe we could... Aurora set her glass down. The sound was final. You can't save me, Julian. You never could. You were just a witness. He looked hurt, the realization settling into the lines of his face. He reached into his coat pocket and pulled out a business card. He slid it across the table. It stopped near her hand. If you ever need a friend, he said. I have friends, Aurora said. She didn't pick up the card. She stood up, the leather of the booth sighing as she left it. She walked past him, the scent of rain and wool clinging to him, the smell of the old life. She stopped at the bar where Silas waited. He didn't ask what happened. He just pushed a receipt toward her. You okay? he asked. His voice was low, gravelly. I'm fine, she said. She looked back at Julian. He was still sitting in the booth, staring at the business card, looking like a man who had just realized the map he was holding was for a country that no longer existed. The green neon flickered above the door as she stepped out into the London night. The rain was cold, biting against her skin. She pulled her collar up, her blue eyes scanning the street. She didn't look back at the bar. She walked away from the past, her left wrist hidden in her pocket, the scar warm against her thumb.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
78.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1155
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"completely"
2"slightly"
3"softly"
4"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1155
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"fractured"
count1
4
word"weight"
count3
5
word"predictable"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"traced"
2"glinting"
3"fractured"
4"weight"
5"predictable"
6"familiar"
7"silence"
8"flickered"
9"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of the silence"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences117
matches
0"t with anxiety"
69.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences117
filterMatches
0"look"
1"feel"
2"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1155
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions8
matches
0"Rory, he said."
1"You look different, he said."
2"I heard you moved to London, Julian said."
3"Evan, Julian said softly."
4"I just wanted to make sure you were safe, he said."
5"I have a job offer, Julian said."
6"If you ever need a friend, he said."
7"I have friends, Aurora said."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1155
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.21
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Carter1
Cardiff4
Blackwood1
Prague1
Aurora10
Julian14
Pre-Law1
University1
Evan2
Silas7
London3
Rory3
Empress1
You7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Blackwood"
4"Aurora"
5"Julian"
6"Evan"
7"Silas"
8"Rory"
9"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"Prague"
3"University"
4"London"
globalScore0.894
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like they had seen things they cou"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.866
wordCount1155
matches
0"not with anxiety, but with the practiced vigilance of someone who had learned to r"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean28.17
std24.87
cv0.883
sampleLengths
0101
180
261
371
417
535
611
730
848
95
107
1159
1220
1310
1453
154
169
171
1816
1924
2035
2111
222
2359
248
253
2620
2732
284
296
3059
3115
329
3313
3435
358
3611
3752
389
3942
4060
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs212
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was holding"
2"was still sitting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences117
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1161
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.031007751937984496
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.0103359173126615
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean9.87
std6.95
cv0.704
sampleLengths
020
121
217
318
425
517
613
715
817
918
1030
1117
1214
1311
1420
153
1616
1721
188
199
203
219
227
2316
243
258
261
275
281
2923
3013
3112
3223
335
347
3516
3627
3716
388
394
408
414
426
437
444
455
469
473
485
4920
25.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats29
diversityRatio0.21367521367521367
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners25
30.58% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"maybe we could..."
ratio0.009
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount72
totalSentences109
matches
0"She wore a dark jacket"
1"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
2"It was the only sound"
3"It was a souvenir from"
4"He was polishing a tumbler,"
5"He didn't look up when"
6"He was older than the"
7"It was Julian."
8"They had been inseparable during"
9"He looked around the room,"
10"He froze, a hand hovering"
11"She simply lifted her chin,"
12"His voice was rough, unused"
13"She kept her tone level."
14"It was a habit she"
15"He slid into the booth"
16"He looked at her hands,"
17"He looked at the way"
18"You look different, he said."
19"I look like I live"
ratio0.661
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences109
matches
0"The rain lashed against the"
1"Aurora Carter sat in the"
2"She wore a dark jacket"
3"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
4"The green neon sign above"
5"It was the only sound"
6"Aurora traced the rim of"
7"The small crescent-shaped scar on"
8"It was a souvenir from"
9"Silas Blackwood moved behind the"
10"He was polishing a tumbler,"
11"He didn't look up when"
12"The man who stepped in"
13"He was older than the"
14"It was Julian."
15"They had been inseparable during"
16"He looked around the room,"
17"The recognition hit him like"
18"He froze, a hand hovering"
19"Aurora didn't smile."
ratio0.945
45.87% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"If you ever need a"
ratio0.009
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Inside, the air smelled of polished mahogany, stale tobacco, and the faint, metallic tang of old maps that lined the walls."
1"Her bright blue eyes scanned the room, not with anxiety, but with the practiced vigilance of someone who had learned to read exits before entrances."
2"Silas Blackwood moved behind the bar with a deliberate, quiet grace, though the slight limp in his left leg betrayed the old injury that had ended his career in…"
3"The older man watched them with hazel eyes that missed nothing, his beard neatly trimmed, his posture radiating a quiet authority that made the air feel heavier…"
4"He wore a grey suit that fit him perfectly, the silver ring on his finger catching the neon light."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.3943%