| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.10% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1283 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 37.65% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1283 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "optimized" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "navigate" | | 6 | "gloom" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "lurch" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "reminder" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "measured" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 135 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 135 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 136 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1283 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1276 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.63 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Thames | 1 | | Aurora | 8 | | Grove | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | November | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | London | 2 | | Fear | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Thames" | | 3 | "Golden" | | 4 | "November" | | 5 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 64.77% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if absorbing the dim light" | | 1 | "felt like falling, but she stood still" | | 2 | "felt like a bone" |
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| 44.12% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.559 | | wordCount | 1283 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the residual heat of a body, but a feverish, rhythmic heat" | | 1 | "not by wind, but by intent" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 40.09 | | std | 24.19 | | cv | 0.603 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 98 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 73 | | 3 | 73 | | 4 | 58 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 77 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 71 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 37 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 50 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 59 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 60 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 35 | | 29 | 49 | | 30 | 37 | | 31 | 64 |
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| 92.27% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "were gone" | | 3 | "been, guided" | | 4 | "were gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 212 | | matches | | 0 | "was going" | | 1 | "was delivering" | | 2 | "was spinning" | | 3 | "was pulling" | | 4 | "was shrinking" | | 5 | "was holding" | | 6 | "wasn't pulling" |
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| 58.82% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 136 | | ratio | 0.029 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn't stop; it just stopped moving." | | 1 | "The standing stones that marked the boundary were no longer visible in the distance; they were gone, replaced by a seamless curve of darkness." | | 2 | "It wasn't pulling her down; it was holding her there." | | 3 | "The warmth didn't leave; it followed her hand." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1278 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "close, right beside her" | | 1 | "heavy, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.03442879499217527 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004694835680751174 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 136 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 136 | | mean | 9.43 | | std | 6.54 | | cv | 0.693 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 29 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 30.88% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 26 | | diversityRatio | 0.21323529411764705 | | totalSentences | 136 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 26.46% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the settling of leaves" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 7.30% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn't stop; it just" | | 1 | "She paused, her breath hitching" | | 2 | "She turned back toward the" | | 3 | "It was night, or at" | | 4 | "She was alone." | | 5 | "She had told no one" | | 6 | "She had come because the" | | 7 | "It was warm." | | 8 | "It had been like this" | | 9 | "She walked forward, her boots" | | 10 | "It smelled of loam and" | | 11 | "They didn't rustle in the" | | 12 | "They simply waited." | | 13 | "She was a woman of" | | 14 | "She didn't believe in ghosts" | | 15 | "She checked her watch." | | 16 | "She tapped the glass face," | | 17 | "It was the snap of" | | 18 | "she called out" | | 19 | "Her voice sounded flat, swallowed" |
| | ratio | 0.532 | |
| 3.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 115 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "The wind in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "It didn't stop; it just" | | 2 | "She paused, her breath hitching" | | 3 | "The path she had walked," | | 4 | "She turned back toward the" | | 5 | "It was night, or at" | | 6 | "Aurora pulled her jacket tighter." | | 7 | "She was alone." | | 8 | "She had told no one" | | 9 | "Silas would think she was" | | 10 | "She had come because the" | | 11 | "The silver chain bit into" | | 12 | "The Heartstone, a deep crimson" | | 13 | "It was warm." | | 14 | "It had been like this" | | 15 | "She walked forward, her boots" | | 16 | "It smelled of loam and" | | 17 | "Wildflowers bloomed around her ankles," | | 18 | "They didn't rustle in the" | | 19 | "They simply waited." |
| | ratio | 0.913 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 79.08% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "In its place stood a wall of brambles, thorny and impossibly dense, woven together as if they had grown in the span of a single heartbeat." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed around her ankles, vibrant purples and whites that shouldn't exist in November." | | 2 | "The rational part of her brain, the part that had helped her flee Evan and navigate the labyrinth of London without a map, screamed at her to turn around." | | 3 | "The petals turned their faces toward her, the white centers darkening as if absorbing the dim light." | | 4 | "It tore at the skin of her ankle, a sharp sting that made her gasp." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |