| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1367 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.48% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1367 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "vibrated" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "raced" | | 11 | "calculating" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 132 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.74% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 132 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 132 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1367 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1349 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.67 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 9 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Empress" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 96.81% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a lie, a bad bet, a logic puz" | | 1 | "quite register as a person" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.195 | | wordCount | 1367 | | matches | | 0 | "not replaced by the crickets or owl calls of nature, but by a muffled, pressurized quiet" | | 1 | "not in defense but to shield the pendant" | | 2 | "not alone, but the thing" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 52.58 | | std | 29.73 | | cv | 0.566 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 98 | | 1 | 124 | | 2 | 91 | | 3 | 77 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 73 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 84 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 57 | | 12 | 78 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 72 | | 15 | 64 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 60 | | 18 | 46 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 59 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 74 |
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| 97.29% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | | 0 | "was tucked" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 237 | | matches | | 0 | "was reacting" | | 1 | "wasn't looking" |
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| 77.92% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 132 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't a gentle heat; it was an alarm." | | 1 | "They weren't just absences of light; they were pools of something viscous that pooled slightly wider than the roots they clung to." | | 2 | "The Grove didn't move with the wind; it moved with intent." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 147 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 3 | | adverbRatio | 0.02040816326530612 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 132 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 132 | | mean | 10.36 | | std | 6.37 | | cv | 0.615 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 25.97% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 31 | | diversityRatio | 0.18604651162790697 | | totalSentences | 129 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 53.33% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she heard the sound." | | 1 | "Only her fingers found cool" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 8.80% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood just beyond the" | | 1 | "Her straight black bob was" | | 2 | "It hadn't stopped." | | 3 | "It felt like a lie," | | 4 | "She was the kind of" | | 5 | "Her mind, usually sharp enough" | | 6 | "She stepped past the first" | | 7 | "It was the sound of" | | 8 | "They were in full winter" | | 9 | "Her breath came out in" | | 10 | "She checked her watch." | | 11 | "It was too long, reaching" | | 12 | "It was a movement at" | | 13 | "She turned her head quickly," | | 14 | "She turned back to the" | | 15 | "She touched the small crescent-shaped" | | 16 | "She pushed forward, the pendant" | | 17 | "It wasn't a gentle heat;" | | 18 | "It wasn't wind, but a" | | 19 | "They weren't just absences of" |
| | ratio | 0.528 | |
| 16.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 111 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "The cold air of Richmond" | | 1 | "She stood just beyond the" | | 2 | "Her straight black bob was" | | 3 | "Aurora adjusted the hem of" | | 4 | "The Heartstone Pendant rested heavy" | | 5 | "It hadn't stopped." | | 6 | "It felt like a lie," | | 7 | "She was the kind of" | | 8 | "Her mind, usually sharp enough" | | 9 | "She stepped past the first" | | 10 | "The silence of the park" | | 11 | "It was the sound of" | | 12 | "The ground beneath her boots" | | 13 | "Wildflowers bloomed here." | | 14 | "Snowdrops and crocuses pressed through" | | 15 | "They were in full winter" | | 16 | "Her breath came out in" | | 17 | "She checked her watch." | | 18 | "The digital display blinked 11:42." | | 19 | "It was too long, reaching" |
| | ratio | 0.888 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, it was the trap" | | 1 | "To test the boundary." | | 2 | "To see what waited when" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Beneath the damp earth and rotting leaves of the winter season, there was a sweetness, like crushed lilies and ozone, that clung to the back of Aurora's throat." | | 1 | "At five-six, she felt small against the towering stone sentinels that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove." | | 2 | "It was in the air between them, a high-pitched hum that vibrated in her teeth." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |