| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 84.22% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1584 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "sharply" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.40% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1584 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "tracing" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "vibrated" | | 6 | "scanned" | | 7 | "lurch" | | 8 | "raced" | | 9 | "echo" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "gloom" | | 12 | "reminder" | | 13 | "footsteps" | | 14 | "could feel" | | 15 | "magnetic" | | 16 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 164 | | matches | | |
| 90.59% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 164 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 165 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1584 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1574 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.57 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 4 | | Silas | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Heartstone | 9 | | Earth | 1 | | Aurora | 3 | | Time | 3 | | Rory | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Silas" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Time" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 109 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like ash in her mouth, but it was" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.631 | | wordCount | 1584 | | matches | | 0 | "Not hot, but persistently, insistently warm" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 165 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 38.63 | | std | 23.07 | | cv | 0.597 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 113 | | 1 | 48 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 81 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 73 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 59 | | 13 | 56 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 53 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 56 | | 20 | 50 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 43 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 54 | | 27 | 57 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 56 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 55 | | 37 | 51 | | 38 | 37 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 4 |
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| 88.15% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 164 | | matches | | 0 | "was marked" | | 1 | "were supposed" | | 2 | "was suffocated" | | 3 | "was frightened" | | 4 | "were webbed" | | 5 | "being hunted" | | 6 | "was sucked" | | 7 | "was gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 13 | | totalVerbs | 271 | | matches | | 0 | "was working" | | 1 | "was pulsing" | | 2 | "was holding" | | 3 | "was lying" | | 4 | "was waking" | | 5 | "wasn't imagining" | | 6 | "was reacting" | | 7 | "was bending" | | 8 | "were withering" | | 9 | "was bluffing" | | 10 | "was burning" | | 11 | "was opening" | | 12 | "was building" |
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| 90.91% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 165 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "When near a Hel portal, it didn't just glow; it pulsed with warmth." | | 1 | "The silence wasn't empty; it was holding its breath." | | 2 | "If it glowed, it wouldn't just guide her; it would invite them in." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1583 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 56 | | adverbRatio | 0.035375868603916616 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007580543272267846 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 165 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 165 | | mean | 9.6 | | std | 6.48 | | cv | 0.675 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 39.70% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.26666666666666666 | | totalSentences | 165 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, a carpet of violet" | | 1 | "Too tall, too many joints," | | 2 | "Then, the sound of breathing." | | 3 | "Then, a single sound emerged" | | 4 | "Somewhere in the fog of" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 51.58% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | | 0 | "It hung underfoot like wet" | | 1 | "She had told her flatmate" | | 2 | "She needed the location Silas’s" | | 3 | "She needed the Hel portal." | | 4 | "Her breath plumed in the" | | 5 | "She reached up with her" | | 6 | "It was silent now." | | 7 | "She closed her bright blue" | | 8 | "It vibrated in her teeth." | | 9 | "She opened her eyes and" | | 10 | "They were supposed to be" | | 11 | "Her gut tightened." | | 12 | "She took a step forward," | | 13 | "It was a violation of" | | 14 | "Her ears popped." | | 15 | "She felt a sudden, vertiginous" | | 16 | "She checked the digital watch" | | 17 | "It was twenty-three-fifteen." | | 18 | "She kept moving." | | 19 | "Her mind raced, compartmentalizing like" |
| | ratio | 0.421 | |
| 38.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 128 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain hadn't fallen in London" | | 1 | "It hung underfoot like wet" | | 2 | "Aurora adjusted the collar of" | | 3 | "She had told her flatmate" | | 4 | "The lie tasted like ash" | | 5 | "She needed the location Silas’s" | | 6 | "She needed the Hel portal." | | 7 | "Her breath plumed in the" | | 8 | "She reached up with her" | | 9 | "The gem was small, roughly" | | 10 | "It was silent now." | | 11 | "She closed her bright blue" | | 12 | "The wind was there, rustling" | | 13 | "A low frequency hum, like" | | 14 | "It vibrated in her teeth." | | 15 | "She opened her eyes and" | | 16 | "They were supposed to be" | | 17 | "Her gut tightened." | | 18 | "She took a step forward," | | 19 | "It was a violation of" |
| | ratio | 0.842 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | | 0 | "To a normal passerby, this" | | 1 | "If she couldn't find the" | | 2 | "Now, it was fifty." | | 3 | "If it glowed, it wouldn't" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora adjusted the collar of her leather coat, the black leather creaking softly as she stepped over the low stone marker that defined the perimeter of the Fae…" | | 1 | "She reached up with her right hand, fingers tracing the silver chain beneath her shirt, settling the weight of the Heartstone against her sternum." | | 2 | "The gem was small, roughly the size of a thumbnail, cut from a deep crimson stone that caught the faint light." | | 3 | "She felt a sudden, vertiginous lurch, as if gravity had loosened its grip for a heartbeat before reclaiming possession." | | 4 | "The air shifted around her, displacing oxygen in a way that made the back of her neck prickle." | | 5 | "She backed away, pivoting on her heel, keeping the Heartstone between herself and the encroaching shadow." | | 6 | "The thing reached out again, its hand passing through the air like water, leaving a wake of cold." | | 7 | "Her teeth began to chatter, a violent, uncontrollable rattle that started in her jaw." | | 8 | "It was certainty, the terrifying knowledge that she was being hunted by something that didn't follow the rules of nature." | | 9 | "The portal was opening beneath her feet, a vortex of swirling darkness that smelled of old blood and ozone." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |