| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 88.70% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1327 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.25% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1327 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "searing" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "navigate" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "could feel" | | 9 | "vibrated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.84% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 120 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1325 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1320 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.83 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 2 | | Aurora | 11 | | November | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Isolde | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | London | 3 | | Panic | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Panic" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Hel" | | 5 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 37.64% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like they were vibrating" | | 1 | "sounded like stones grinding together unde" | | 2 | "looked like a mirror, reflecting her own" | | 3 | "sounded like her own name, spoken in a lan" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1325 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 42.74 | | std | 22.94 | | cv | 0.537 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 89 | | 2 | 72 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 73 | | 7 | 67 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 67 | | 10 | 69 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 75 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 60 | | 16 | 63 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 39 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 51 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 47 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 48 |
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| 84.62% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was carpeted" | | 2 | "was pressurized" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "was gone" | | 5 | "were supposed" | | 6 | "was gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 10 | | totalVerbs | 224 | | matches | | 0 | "were vibrating" | | 1 | "was brushing" | | 2 | "was glowing" | | 3 | "was pulsing" | | 4 | "was becoming" | | 5 | "were breathing" | | 6 | "was circling" | | 7 | "was holding" | | 8 | "was bleeding" | | 9 | "were still blooming" |
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| 23.81% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 120 | | ratio | 0.042 | | matches | | 0 | "The silence here was not empty; it was pressurized." | | 1 | "The codex entry in her head—what she remembered of the stranger who had left the artifact on her doorstep—said the stone pulsed near a Hel portal." | | 2 | "It didn't illuminate the flowers; it seemed to darken them, casting shadows that stretched too long and moved independently of the stone’s glow." | | 3 | "It didn't walk; it slid, a smear of darkness against the glowing flowers." | | 4 | "The flowers beneath her boots didn't bend; they recoiled, pulling their petals inward as if in pain." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1323 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.019652305366591082 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006802721088435374 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 120 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 120 | | mean | 11.04 | | std | 7.11 | | cv | 0.644 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 32.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 21 | | diversityRatio | 0.2 | | totalSentences | 120 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 51.58% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped at the boundary." | | 1 | "It was supposed to be" | | 2 | "It was November." | | 3 | "They bloomed in violent bursts" | | 4 | "It pressed against her eardrums," | | 5 | "She frowned, her cool demeanor" | | 6 | "She tapped the screen again." | | 7 | "She adjusted her scarf, her" | | 8 | "It was a warning." | | 9 | "She walked deeper into the" | | 10 | "She held her breath, listening." | | 11 | "She told herself it was" | | 12 | "She took another step." | | 13 | "She pulled the stone out" | | 14 | "It was glowing now, a" | | 15 | "It didn't illuminate the flowers;" | | 16 | "It wasn't hers." | | 17 | "It was wet, ragged, and" | | 18 | "They looked different now." | | 19 | "She forced it down." |
| | ratio | 0.421 | |
| 21.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 100 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "The air at the edge" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter pulled her coat" | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant rested against" | | 3 | "She stopped at the boundary." | | 4 | "It was supposed to be" | | 5 | "It was November." | | 6 | "The grass should be brown," | | 7 | "They bloomed in violent bursts" | | 8 | "The silence here was not" | | 9 | "It pressed against her eardrums," | | 10 | "Aurora reached into her pocket" | | 11 | "The screen was black, unresponsive," | | 12 | "She frowned, her cool demeanor" | | 13 | "She tapped the screen again." | | 14 | "She adjusted her scarf, her" | | 15 | "The skin there throbbed, a" | | 16 | "It was a warning." | | 17 | "The pendant grew warm against" | | 18 | "Aurora paused, her breath hitching" | | 19 | "The codex entry in her" |
| | ratio | 0.877 | |
| 43.86% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, as she stepped through" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The air at the edge of Richmond Park tasted of wet iron and old leaves, a sharp contrast to the damp, cloying sweetness that waited behind the trees." | | 1 | "They bloomed in violent bursts of violet and white, their petals glowing with a faint, bioluminescent sheen that shouldn't exist in the dead of winter." | | 2 | "The codex entry in her head—what she remembered of the stranger who had left the artifact on her doorstep—said the stone pulsed near a Hel portal." | | 3 | "Yet the warmth spread through her chest, radiating outward until her ribs felt like they were vibrating." | | 4 | "The movement was internal, a shivering of the petals as if something invisible was brushing past them." | | 5 | "It was glowing now, a faint crimson pulse that matched the rhythm of her own heartbeat." | | 6 | "It didn't illuminate the flowers; it seemed to darken them, casting shadows that stretched too long and moved independently of the stone’s glow." | | 7 | "The air felt older, heavier, as if she were breathing in the exhaust of centuries." | | 8 | "The flowers beneath her boots didn't bend; they recoiled, pulling their petals inward as if in pain." | | 9 | "It had a face that looked like a mirror, reflecting her own terrified expression back at her, but distorted, stretched, wrong." | | 10 | "She ran toward the only light she could see, a faint, unnatural shimmer in the distance that wasn't the pendant." | | 11 | "She collapsed onto the pavement of the park road, gasping, her heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |