Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBKJVZ2X1HBXJGQHZN640ZM

Run Details

Duration:
1m 41s
Cost:
$0.002977
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain in Soho did not fall so much as it pressed, a heavy, grey curtain that blurred the world outside The Raven’s Nest into watercolors of indeterminate shape. Inside, the air smelled of stale gin, roasted coffee beans, and the damp wool of coats left too long on the radiator. The neon sign above the door buzzed with a dying green hum, casting a sickly luminescence across the floorboards where the dust danced in the slivers of light cutting through the heavy drapes. Aurora stood near the edge of the bar, the glass of water in her hand sweating against her skin. She shifted her weight, catching her reflection in the darkened pane of glass behind the taps. Her hair, straight and shoulder-length black, felt heavier than usual against her neck, a consequence of the humidity that had followed her out of the delivery van. Her blue eyes scanned the room, the familiar maps glued to the walls appearing as ghostly topographies of danger. It was a bar where secrets were poured as freely as the whiskey. The back room door was open. A man sat there, his back to the room. He was too thin for the jacket he wore, the grey fabric straining against a spine that had taken hits from this life. The recognition did not hit her like a physical blow, but like a slow leak, air rushing out of her life without her noticing. It was her father. No. It was not. It was Mark, her classmate from Cardiff. He hadn't been back in London in ten years. Rory turned and walked to the bar counter, her movements smooth, practiced. She tried to hide the tremor in her left hand, the wrist that curled in to protect the small crescent scar hidden from view if she wore long sleeves. She had not worn sleeves in ten years. Mark stood up as she approached. He was older. His hair was longer, unkempt, falling into eyes that had lost the sharp, ambitious glint they had held during their pre-law moot court debates. He looked at her, his mouth opening to form her nickname, then closing as the years seemed to settle over him like a damp coat. Rory. It had a different sound coming from him. It was the sound of the past, and she found the weight of it in her throat. You came back. The words were simple, but the silence between them stretched, filled by the ambient hum of the neon sign and the distant clink of glass from the kitchen. I have to see him, Mark said, gesturing vaguely toward the back room where the secret meetings happened. I have to ask him if he still knows everything. Silly said. The name dropped from Mark's lips with a casualness that hurt more than an accusation. Silas Blackwood was the only person who truly understood the space between them. He owned the room. Silas is busy. She stepped around the bar counter, her own delivery uniform—a faded grey t-shirt with the logo of the Golden Empress restaurant—rubbing against the rough oak of the bar. He's not here. It's my shift. Mark looked at the logo on her chest, his eyes tracing the fabric. I thought you were studying law. In Cardiff. You were brilliant at it. I am a courier now. She held up her hands, the skin pale and clean, save for the bandage on her left wrist that she never removed. I deliver food. It is faster. Less paperwork. Less pain, he finished for her. They stood in the dim light, the distance between them measured in miles of bad roads and the choice to leave rather than speak. Rory looked at his face. The lines around his eyes were deep now, carved by the kind of exhaustion that did not go away with sleep. He had stayed in Cardiff. He had stayed in the life they had shared. She had fled, as Eva had begged her to, leaving the name Rory behind for something sharper. I remember the night you left. Rory gripped the counter. The scar on her wrist pulsed, a phantom heat. It was a reminder of the accident she had had as a child, the first time she had hurt someone without meaning to, the first time she had realized her hands were capable of damage. This memory was different. I told you to go, she said quietly. Mark nodded. You ran. I had to. I said too much that I shouldn't. I told them things. He shook his head slowly. It was not the answer he expected. He wanted her to admit it was a mistake, a flight of cowardice. But she did not look like a coward. She looked like a woman who had learned how to survive in the cracks. I found him, Mark said, his voice dropping. The one you left. You don't know who I mean. I know, Rory said. Her blue eyes did not waver. Do you think he would want me back? Mark smiled, but it was a sad expression. He knew the shape of that smile. It was the same smile his father had given before the divorce. It was a smile that meant he knew the end of a story before it had finished. He does not write. The silence returned, heavier than before. Mark took a step forward and put a hand on the bar top, inches from her gloved hand. His hand was large, rough, stained with ink. I want to know why you stayed. In London. You have a flat here. You live with a man. She knew he meant Silas. That was the unspoken question in every room, the question that lived in the silence of The Raven's Nest. She had seen him in the back room, the way he moved with a limp that made no sound, the way the silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light. He is... a mentor. He is a spy. Mark said it bluntly. A retired one, but a spy nonetheless. I know who your father was. Brendan Carter. Rory felt a chill that had nothing to do with the rain. Silas had told her about her father. He had told her the truth, the kind of truth that required protection. But she had not expected Mark to know. And what does he know? He knows you are safe, Mark said. At least for now. Rory looked away, toward the back wall where the old maps remained pinned. She could feel the eyes of the room on them. Silas had left the door open for a reason. He knew Mark was here. He knew she would see him. I need to go back to the kitchen. The orders are piling up. Yes. Mark nodded again, looking at the floor. Yes. It is good to be safe. The rain hammered against the window. Rory turned to leave, but he caught her arm. For a second, the weight of the past was physical. Her skin was warm against his palm. Don't call me Rory, he said softly. She pulled her arm away, wincing as her wrist moved. She did not look at him. She walked past the bar, past the maps, past the back room where the heavy door remained ajar just a fraction of an inch, revealing a dark silhouette that did not move. Goodbye, Mark. She did not look back as she pushed through the heavy door of the kitchen, leaving the light of the Raven's Nest behind for the darker, warmer glow of the service floor. The neon sign buzzed, a dying green light that faded in and out, marking the seconds of a moment that had been saved only because it was never spoken. Silas was waiting in the shadows of the kitchen door. He looked older than she had remembered. His grey-streaked auburn beard was neat, but his eyes, hazel and sharp, had seen too much of the world. He did not speak. He simply nodded, a small, almost imperceptible motion of the chin, acknowledging the weight of the friend she had just lost. She nodded back. Then she turned to the orders, the smell of garlic and fried dough rising from the pass, and let the noise drown out the quiet regret of the past. The rain continued to press against the glass, washing the world clean, but nothing in London ever truly washed clean. It only dried in the wrong place.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
85.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1423
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"truly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1423
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"weight"
count4
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"glint"
count1
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"chill"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"scanned"
2"familiar"
3"glint"
4"silence"
5"tracing"
6"measured"
7"pulsed"
8"reminder"
9"unspoken"
10"chill"
11"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences137
matches
0"felt a chill"
80.29% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences137
filterMatches
0"know"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences137
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1421
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions5
matches
0"I have to see him, Mark said, gesturing vaguely toward the back room where the secret meetings happened."
1"I told you to go, she said quietly."
2"I found him, Mark said, his voice dropping."
3"I know, Rory said."
4"He knows you are safe, Mark said."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1421
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.06
worstName"Mark"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Mark"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven3
Nest3
Mark15
Cardiff3
London3
Blackwood1
Golden1
Empress1
Eva1
Rory10
Silas6
Carter1
You6
persons
0"Raven"
1"Mark"
2"Blackwood"
3"Eva"
4"Rory"
5"Silas"
6"Carter"
7"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.972
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a woman who had learned how t"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1421
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean30.89
std23.79
cv0.77
sampleLengths
084
194
215
362
49
549
658
726
83
928
1028
1134
1237
1326
1435
156
1681
176
1852
198
204
2114
2247
2318
2418
2544
264
2732
2819
2956
304
3123
3240
335
3411
3543
3613
3715
3832
397
4048
412
4261
4361
443
4556
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences137
matches
0"were poured"
1"been saved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs262
matches
0"were studying"
1"was waiting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences137
ratio0.007
matches
0"She stepped around the bar counter, her own delivery uniform—a faded grey t-shirt with the logo of the Golden Empress restaurant—rubbing against the rough oak of the bar."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1425
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.02456140350877193
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.010526315789473684
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences137
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences137
mean10.37
std8.48
cv0.818
sampleLengths
029
122
233
319
416
527
619
713
86
99
1023
1124
124
131
143
157
169
1712
1829
198
206
213
2224
2325
241
258
2617
273
2828
2918
3010
312
3215
3313
344
353
3628
373
383
3913
406
412
425
435
4422
453
463
472
486
4924
39.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.22627737226277372
totalSentences137
uniqueOpeners31
54.20% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences123
matches
0"At least for now."
1"Then she turned to the"
ratio0.016
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount77
totalSentences123
matches
0"She shifted her weight, catching"
1"Her hair, straight and shoulder-length"
2"Her blue eyes scanned the"
3"It was a bar where"
4"He was too thin for"
5"It was her father."
6"It was not."
7"It was Mark, her classmate"
8"He hadn't been back in"
9"She tried to hide the"
10"She had not worn sleeves"
11"He was older."
12"His hair was longer, unkempt,"
13"He looked at her, his"
14"It had a different sound"
15"It was the sound of"
16"You came back."
17"I have to see him,"
18"I have to ask him"
19"He owned the room."
ratio0.626
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount114
totalSentences123
matches
0"The rain in Soho did"
1"The neon sign above the"
2"Aurora stood near the edge"
3"She shifted her weight, catching"
4"Her hair, straight and shoulder-length"
5"Her blue eyes scanned the"
6"It was a bar where"
7"The back room door was"
8"A man sat there, his"
9"He was too thin for"
10"The recognition did not hit"
11"It was her father."
12"It was not."
13"It was Mark, her classmate"
14"He hadn't been back in"
15"Rory turned and walked to"
16"She tried to hide the"
17"She had not worn sleeves"
18"Mark stood up as she"
19"He was older."
ratio0.927
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The rain in Soho did not fall so much as it pressed, a heavy, grey curtain that blurred the world outside The Raven’s Nest into watercolors of indeterminate sha…"
1"Her hair, straight and shoulder-length black, felt heavier than usual against her neck, a consequence of the humidity that had followed her out of the delivery …"
2"He was too thin for the jacket he wore, the grey fabric straining against a spine that had taken hits from this life."
3"She had seen him in the back room, the way he moved with a limp that made no sound, the way the silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light."
4"She walked past the bar, past the maps, past the back room where the heavy door remained ajar just a fraction of an inch, revealing a dark silhouette that did n…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.3847%