Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCRWHDTN3459PV20M0K8ZQ9

Run Details

Model:: LFM2 24B
Test:: Text Replacement
Scenario:: Avoid said/asked/replied/answered
Duration:: 12.8s
Cost:: $0.000099
Provider:: Together

Evaluation summary

Score	Evaluator	Details Link
8.33%	Key facts and content preserved	(details)
0.00%	Forbidden words eliminated	(details)
66.67%	Structural similarity to original	(details)
25.0000%	Overall

Model input

System

You are an expert prose editor.

Whenever you're given text, rephrase it using the following instructions: <instructions>Remove all instances of 'said', 'asked', 'replied', and 'answered', replacing them with alternative dialogue attributions.</instructions>

Imitate and keep the current writing style, and leave mannerisms, word choice and sentence structure intact.
Keep the same stylistic writing choices. Use English spelling and grammar.

Only return the rephrased text, nothing else.

User/Human

Text to rewrite:
<text words="381">
The market square buzzed with the sound of a hundred voices. Elena pushed through the crowd, her satchel clutched against her chest. She knew the merchant would not wait — he never waited for anyone, least of all a girl from the outer ring.

"You're late," Gregor said, without looking up from his ledger. He ran a thick finger down a column of numbers and frowned.

Elena set the package on the counter. "The bridge was out. I had to take the long way around."

"Not my problem." He unwrapped the cloth and held the crystal up to the light. It caught the sun and threw tiny rainbows across the stall's canvas roof. Gregor's frown deepened. "This isn't what I ordered."

She had expected this. The old man always found something to complain about, whether the goods were perfect or not. Elena crossed her arms and stood her ground.

"It's exactly what you ordered," she said. "Blue quartz, uncut, from the northern mines. I watched them pull it from the rock myself."

Gregor turned the crystal slowly, examining every facet. He brought it close to his eye, then held it at arm's length. Elena thought he looked like a jeweler appraising a diamond, though Gregor dealt in stranger things than jewelry.

He set the crystal down and sighed. "Fine. But next time, wrap it properly. The edges are exposed." He reached beneath the counter and produced a small leather pouch. The coins inside clinked as he slid it toward her.

Elena scooped up the pouch and weighed it in her palm. It felt light. She loosened the drawstring and counted: eight silver crowns. They had agreed on ten.

"We agreed on ten," she said flatly.

"That was before the bridge fee went up." Gregor smiled — a thin, practiced smile that never reached his eyes. "Take it or leave it."

She took it. She always took it. The outer ring didn't offer many choices, and Gregor knew that as well as she did.

Elena walked out of the market and into the narrow lanes beyond. The sun hung low over the rooftops, and the shadows stretched long across the cobblestones. She slipped the pouch into her satchel and quickened her pace. If she hurried, she would reach the bridge before dark.
</text>

Model response

<instructions>Transform the passage by eliminating every occurrence of "said," "asked," "replied," and "answered," substituting them with fresh conversational cues while preserving the original tone, rhythm, and narrative quirks. Maintain all stylistic flourishes, phrasing, and structural details unchanged. Keep the prose in English, adhering strictly to spelling and grammatical conventions. Ensure no new elements disrupt the established voice or pacing.</instructions>
<instructions>The market square thrummed with a chorus of overlapping voices. Elena navigated the throng, her satchel pressed tight against her torso. The merchant would not linger — he never did, especially not for someone from the outer ring.</instructions>
<instructions>“You’re tardy,” Gregor remarked, eyes fixed on his ledger’s pages. A calloused finger traced a row of figures before he scowled.</instructions>
<instructions>Elena placed the parcel on the countertop. “The bridge collapsed. Took the longer route.”</instructions>
<instructions>“Irrelevant,” he muttered, unraveling fabric to reveal the crystal. Sunlight fractured into miniature rainbows across the stall’s canvas ceiling. His expression darkened further. “This deviates from your request.”</instructions>
<instructions>She anticipated this. The elder always discovered fault, regardless of perfection. Elena folded her arms, holding her position.</instructions>
<instructions>“Precisely your order,” she insisted. “Unpolished blue quartz, sourced from northern quarries. I witnessed its extraction firsthand.”</instructions>
<instructions>Gregor rotated the gemstone methodically, scrutinizing each plane. He brought it near his gaze, then extended it at arm’s span. Elena imagined him as a jeweler evaluating diamonds, though his trade involved oddities far removed from gems.</instructions>
<instructions>He placed the crystal back, exhaling sharply. “Acceptable. Yet future shipments require proper wrapping. Exposed edges risk damage.” His hand plunged beneath the counter, retrieving a compact leather pouch. Coins rattled within as he nudged it toward her.</instructions>
<instructions>Elena accepted the pouch, measuring its weight in her palm. Lightness betrayed its contents. Untying the drawstring revealed eight silver crowns — short of their promised ten.</instructions>
<instructions>“We settled on ten,” she stated evenly.</instructions>
<instructions>“That occurred prior to the toll hike,” Gregor replied, offering a brittle smile that failed to touch his eyes. “Accept it or abandon it.”</instructions>
<instructions>She accepted. Survival demanded compliance; the outer ring offered few alternatives, a truth Gregor acknowledged implicitly.</instructions>
<instructions>Stepping beyond the marketplace, Elena entered winding alleys. Dusk settled over rooftops, casting elongated shadows over uneven stones. She tucked the pouch securely into her satchel, quickening her stride. Reaching the bridge before nightfall depended on haste.</instructions>

Evaluation details

Result

Evaluator

Details

Meta Data

8.33%

Key facts and content preserved

1/12 anchor facts preserved

matched

total

details

id	"fact-01"
paragraphFound	true
preserved	true

id	"fact-02"
paragraphFound	false
preserved	false

id	"fact-03"
paragraphFound	true
preserved	false

id	"fact-04"
paragraphFound	false
preserved	false

id	"fact-05"
paragraphFound	false
preserved	false

id	"fact-06"
paragraphFound	false
preserved	false

id	"fact-07"
paragraphFound	false
preserved	false

id	"fact-08"
paragraphFound	false
preserved	false

id	"fact-09"
paragraphFound	false
preserved	false

id	"fact-10"
paragraphFound	false
preserved	false

id	"fact-11"
paragraphFound	false
preserved	false

id	"fact-12"
paragraphFound	false
preserved	false

0.00%

Forbidden words eliminated

5/3 forbidden word(s) still present

neededClean

false

totalOriginal

totalRemaining

perWord

word	"said"
original	3
remaining	1

word	"asked"
original	0
remaining	1

word	"replied"
original	0
remaining	2

word	"answered"
original	0
remaining	1

66.67%

Structural similarity to original

Words: 100%, Paragraphs: 0%, Sentences: 100%

wordCountScore	1
paragraphCountScore	0
sentenceCountScore	1
originalWords	381
outputWords	381
originalParagraphs	13
outputParagraphs	1
originalSentences	43
outputSentences	43

25.0000%