Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCRY4X1HZ8185SMDFRZQEZK

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
26.3s
Cost:
$0.000185
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the Fae Grove tasted of iron and damp earth, thick with the scent of wild thyme crushed underfoot. Aurora’s boots sank into the moss, each step muffled by centuries of decaying leaves. The ancient oaks loomed like sentinels, their gnarled branches weaving a canopy so dense it swallowed the moonlight whole. Time had warped here; she’d felt it press against her skin like a fever, minutes stretching into hours—or perhaps seconds—when she’d stepped beyond the last standing stone. Now, the silence was a living thing, coiled around her throat. Her breath fogged in the cold, though the air wasn’t cold. That was the first wrongness. The Grove breathed, slow and deliberate, its pulse syncing with the thud of her heart. She clutched the Heartstone Pendant at her throat, its rough edges biting into her skin. It pulsed faintly, a heartbeat against her collarbone, warm despite the chill. *Near a Hel portal*, the description had said. But where? The pendant didn’t lie—it hummed, a vibration she felt in her molars. She paused beneath a tree whose trunk split into two hollows, one dark enough to swallow light. The bark was slick, almost wet, though no rain had fallen. Her fingers brushed it, and the surface rippled like water. A memory surfaced: her father’s voice, years ago, explaining how the Fae could mimic reality, stretch truth until it snapped. *“They’re not monsters,”* he’d said, *“but they’re not kind.”* Aurora had rolled her eyes then. Now, she wondered if kindness was a concept this place had never bothered to learn. A sound—no, a *lack* of sound—made her freeze. No insects, no wind. Just the absence of noise, a vacuum where the Grove should have been alive. She turned, scanning the shadows. Nothing. Yet the air shifted, a pressure behind her eyes. The Heartstone flared, sudden and bright, searing her retinas with a white so intense it blurred the edges of her vision. When it faded, the trees seemed closer. Their branches twisted, elongating, as if reaching. She took a step back, boots scraping stone. The ground beneath her feet felt unstable, as though the earth itself were a skin stretched taut over something writhing below. Her pulse quickened, a drumbeat in her ears. Somewhere, a low hum began—a sound like distant voices, overlapping, unintelligible. She’d heard whispers before, in dreams, but never this clear. This felt like a language she’d forgotten, yet somehow understood. A flash of movement. A flicker at the corner of her eye. She spun, but there was nothing. Just the trees, their shadows pooling like spilled ink. The pendant’s glow dimmed, as if disappointed. Or warning. Her throat tightened. She’d come here for answers, for the reason she’d fled London—the memory of Evan’s hands, the way he’d smiled when he broke her ribs. But this… this wasn’t the abuse she’d known. This was older, hungrier. The Grove didn’t want her here. It *needed* her. The thought slithered into her mind, cold and slick. A branch snapped. Not far. Too close. She backed away, each step slower than the last. The Heartstone burned now, a brand against her chest. Its warmth was no longer comforting; it was a countdown. She could feel it, the way the pendant’s pulse matched her own, speeding up, syncing. *One, two, three.* The trees closed in. Their trunks merged, forming a tunnel of bark and shadow. The air thickened, heavy with the scent of blood and honey—a combination that made her stomach churn. Somewhere ahead, a light flickered. Not fire, but something else. Pale, sickly, pulsing in time with the pendant. She stumbled forward, driven by a force she couldn’t name. The ground dipped, and she fell, knees hitting something soft. Moss. But it wasn’t moss. It was flesh. Warm. Alive. The pendant flared again, blinding her. When she saw, the clearing opened into a circle of standing stones, identical to those at the grove’s edge. But these were different—older, their surfaces etched with symbols that writhed when she looked too long. At the center stood a figure. It wore her face. Not a reflection, but flesh and bone, eyes hollow and black. It raised a hand, and the Heartstone at her neck surged, its heat searing through her skin. The figure spoke, its voice her own. *“You came here to run.”* The words echoed, layered, as if multiple versions of herself spoke at once. Aurora’s mouth moved, but no sound came. Her body moved instead, stepping toward the figure. The pendant pulsed faster, faster, until it was a second sun against her chest. The ground trembled. The trees shrieked—a soundless rending of air. The figure laughed, a sound like breaking glass. Aurora reached out, fingers brushing the hollows of its eyes. They were empty, but warm. And then the world folded. Darkness. A scream that wasn’t hers. Silence. When she awoke, she was back in her flat above Silas’ bar, dawn bleeding through the curtains. The Heartstone lay cold on her pillow, its glow extinguished. But on her wrist, the crescent scar throbbed, a phantom ache. Outside, the city hummed, oblivious. Somewhere, a clock struck seven. She dressed quickly, fingers trembling as she fastened the pendant back into place. The scar itched. The answer she sought hadn’t been in the Grove. It had been here all along. In the space between breaths. In the silence after screams. In the reflection she never dared to look at too long.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount917
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount917
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"pulse"
count3
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"searing"
count2
8
word"quickened"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"comforting"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count1
13
word"stomach"
count1
14
word"churn"
count1
15
word"flickered"
count1
16
word"etched"
count1
17
word"echoed"
count1
18
word"trembled"
count1
19
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"silence"
3"pulse"
4"pulsed"
5"chill"
6"scanning"
7"searing"
8"quickened"
9"flicker"
10"warmth"
11"comforting"
12"could feel"
13"stomach"
14"churn"
15"flickered"
16"etched"
17"echoed"
18"trembled"
19"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences102
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords21
totalWords907
ratio0.023
matches
0"Near a Hel portal"
1"“They’re not monsters,”"
2"“but they’re not kind.”"
3"lack"
4"needed"
5"One, two, three."
6"“You came here to run.”"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount888
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove5
Heartstone5
Pendant1
Hel1
Aurora4
London1
Evan1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Aurora"
3"Evan"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Hel"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
38.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed closer"
1"as if reaching"
2"felt like a language she’d forgotten, y"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords3.308
wordCount907
matches
0"not monsters,”* he’d said, *“but they’re not kind"
1"Not fire, but something else"
2"Not a reflection, but flesh"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean31.28
std28.24
cv0.903
sampleLengths
092
180
288
376
468
536
657
77
846
949
1030
1147
124
1335
145
1542
1633
175
181
195
201
2138
2210
2316
249
256
265
275
2811
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs162
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences103
ratio0.087
matches
0"Time had warped here; she’d felt it press against her skin like a fever, minutes stretching into hours—or perhaps seconds—when she’d stepped beyond the last standing stone."
1"The pendant didn’t lie—it hummed, a vibration she felt in her molars."
2"A sound—no, a *lack* of sound—made her freeze."
3"Somewhere, a low hum began—a sound like distant voices, overlapping, unintelligible."
4"She’d come here for answers, for the reason she’d fled London—the memory of Evan’s hands, the way he’d smiled when he broke her ribs."
5"Its warmth was no longer comforting; it was a countdown."
6"The air thickened, heavy with the scent of blood and honey—a combination that made her stomach churn."
7"But these were different—older, their surfaces etched with symbols that writhed when she looked too long."
8"The trees shrieked—a soundless rending of air."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount815
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.0343558282208589
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.00245398773006135
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean8.81
std5.62
cv0.638
sampleLengths
021
114
219
327
411
511
65
715
815
912
108
112
1212
1317
1411
1510
1620
1715
1815
198
204
2114
225
231
249
2521
267
277
288
2921
308
3111
3210
3310
344
358
366
379
387
392
403
4124
422
436
444
456
463
479
483
492
50.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.34951456310679613
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences91
matches
0"Just the absence of noise,"
1"Somewhere, a low hum began—a"
2"Just the trees, their shadows"
3"Somewhere ahead, a light flickered."
4"Pale, sickly, pulsing in time"
5"Somewhere, a clock struck seven."
ratio0.066
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences91
matches
0"Her breath fogged in the"
1"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
2"It pulsed faintly, a heartbeat"
3"She paused beneath a tree"
4"Her fingers brushed it, and"
5"he’d said, Aurora had rolled"
6"She turned, scanning the shadows."
7"Their branches twisted, elongating, as"
8"She took a step back,"
9"Her pulse quickened, a drumbeat"
10"She’d heard whispers before, in"
11"She spun, but there was"
12"Her throat tightened."
13"She’d come here for answers,"
14"It *needed* her."
15"She backed away, each step"
16"Its warmth was no longer"
17"She could feel it, the"
18"Their trunks merged, forming a"
19"She stumbled forward, driven by"
ratio0.297
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences91
matches
0"The air in the Fae"
1"Aurora’s boots sank into the"
2"The ancient oaks loomed like"
3"Time had warped here; she’d"
4"Her breath fogged in the"
5"That was the first wrongness."
6"The Grove breathed, slow and"
7"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
8"It pulsed faintly, a heartbeat"
9"The pendant didn’t lie—it hummed,"
10"She paused beneath a tree"
11"The bark was slick, almost"
12"Her fingers brushed it, and"
13"A memory surfaced: her father’s"
14"he’d said, Aurora had rolled"
15"A sound—no, a *lack* of"
16"She turned, scanning the shadows."
17"The Heartstone flared, sudden and"
18"Their branches twisted, elongating, as"
19"She took a step back,"
ratio0.714
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"Now, the silence was a"
1"Now, she wondered if kindness"
ratio0.022
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The ground beneath her feet felt unstable, as though the earth itself were a skin stretched taut over something writhing below."
1"The air thickened, heavy with the scent of blood and honey—a combination that made her stomach churn."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he’d (would)"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
82.7698%