| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 917 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 917 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "searing" | | 8 | "quickened" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "comforting" | | 12 | "could feel" | | 13 | "stomach" | | 14 | "churn" | | 15 | "flickered" | | 16 | "etched" | | 17 | "echoed" | | 18 | "trembled" | | 19 | "throbbed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 21 | | totalWords | 907 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "Near a Hel portal" | | 1 | "“They’re not monsters,”" | | 2 | "“but they’re not kind.”" | | 3 | "lack" | | 4 | "needed" | | 5 | "One, two, three." | | 6 | "“You came here to run.”" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 888 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.56 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 5 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Aurora | 4 | | London | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Hel" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 38.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed closer" | | 1 | "as if reaching" | | 2 | "felt like a language she’d forgotten, y" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 3.308 | | wordCount | 907 | | matches | | 0 | "not monsters,”* he’d said, *“but they’re not kind" | | 1 | "Not fire, but something else" | | 2 | "Not a reflection, but flesh" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 31.28 | | std | 28.24 | | cv | 0.903 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 92 | | 1 | 80 | | 2 | 88 | | 3 | 76 | | 4 | 68 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 49 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 42 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 103 | | ratio | 0.087 | | matches | | 0 | "Time had warped here; she’d felt it press against her skin like a fever, minutes stretching into hours—or perhaps seconds—when she’d stepped beyond the last standing stone." | | 1 | "The pendant didn’t lie—it hummed, a vibration she felt in her molars." | | 2 | "A sound—no, a *lack* of sound—made her freeze." | | 3 | "Somewhere, a low hum began—a sound like distant voices, overlapping, unintelligible." | | 4 | "She’d come here for answers, for the reason she’d fled London—the memory of Evan’s hands, the way he’d smiled when he broke her ribs." | | 5 | "Its warmth was no longer comforting; it was a countdown." | | 6 | "The air thickened, heavy with the scent of blood and honey—a combination that made her stomach churn." | | 7 | "But these were different—older, their surfaces etched with symbols that writhed when she looked too long." | | 8 | "The trees shrieked—a soundless rending of air." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 815 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.0343558282208589 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00245398773006135 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 103 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 103 | | mean | 8.81 | | std | 5.62 | | cv | 0.638 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 50.49% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.34951456310679613 | | totalSentences | 103 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the absence of noise," | | 1 | "Somewhere, a low hum began—a" | | 2 | "Just the trees, their shadows" | | 3 | "Somewhere ahead, a light flickered." | | 4 | "Pale, sickly, pulsing in time" | | 5 | "Somewhere, a clock struck seven." |
| | ratio | 0.066 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 1 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 2 | "It pulsed faintly, a heartbeat" | | 3 | "She paused beneath a tree" | | 4 | "Her fingers brushed it, and" | | 5 | "he’d said, Aurora had rolled" | | 6 | "She turned, scanning the shadows." | | 7 | "Their branches twisted, elongating, as" | | 8 | "She took a step back," | | 9 | "Her pulse quickened, a drumbeat" | | 10 | "She’d heard whispers before, in" | | 11 | "She spun, but there was" | | 12 | "Her throat tightened." | | 13 | "She’d come here for answers," | | 14 | "It *needed* her." | | 15 | "She backed away, each step" | | 16 | "Its warmth was no longer" | | 17 | "She could feel it, the" | | 18 | "Their trunks merged, forming a" | | 19 | "She stumbled forward, driven by" |
| | ratio | 0.297 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Fae" | | 1 | "Aurora’s boots sank into the" | | 2 | "The ancient oaks loomed like" | | 3 | "Time had warped here; she’d" | | 4 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 5 | "That was the first wrongness." | | 6 | "The Grove breathed, slow and" | | 7 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 8 | "It pulsed faintly, a heartbeat" | | 9 | "The pendant didn’t lie—it hummed," | | 10 | "She paused beneath a tree" | | 11 | "The bark was slick, almost" | | 12 | "Her fingers brushed it, and" | | 13 | "A memory surfaced: her father’s" | | 14 | "he’d said, Aurora had rolled" | | 15 | "A sound—no, a *lack* of" | | 16 | "She turned, scanning the shadows." | | 17 | "The Heartstone flared, sudden and" | | 18 | "Their branches twisted, elongating, as" | | 19 | "She took a step back," |
| | ratio | 0.714 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the silence was a" | | 1 | "Now, she wondered if kindness" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The ground beneath her feet felt unstable, as though the earth itself were a skin stretched taut over something writhing below." | | 1 | "The air thickened, heavy with the scent of blood and honey—a combination that made her stomach churn." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |