Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCRYZZE3PBF1PMA8MGJFNH0

Run Details

Model:: LFM2 24B
Test:: Text Replacement
Scenario:: Avoid said/asked/replied/answered
Duration:: 13.2s
Cost:: $0.000099
Provider:: Together

Evaluation summary

Score	Evaluator	Details Link
8.33%	Key facts and content preserved	(details)
0.00%	Forbidden words eliminated	(details)
66.67%	Structural similarity to original	(details)
25.0000%	Overall

Model input

System

You are an expert prose editor.

Whenever you're given text, rephrase it using the following instructions: <instructions>Remove all instances of 'said', 'asked', 'replied', and 'answered', replacing them with alternative dialogue attributions.</instructions>

Imitate and keep the current writing style, and leave mannerisms, word choice and sentence structure intact.
Keep the same stylistic writing choices. Use English spelling and grammar.

Only return the rephrased text, nothing else.

User/Human

Text to rewrite:
<text words="381">
The market square buzzed with the sound of a hundred voices. Elena pushed through the crowd, her satchel clutched against her chest. She knew the merchant would not wait — he never waited for anyone, least of all a girl from the outer ring.

"You're late," Gregor said, without looking up from his ledger. He ran a thick finger down a column of numbers and frowned.

Elena set the package on the counter. "The bridge was out. I had to take the long way around."

"Not my problem." He unwrapped the cloth and held the crystal up to the light. It caught the sun and threw tiny rainbows across the stall's canvas roof. Gregor's frown deepened. "This isn't what I ordered."

She had expected this. The old man always found something to complain about, whether the goods were perfect or not. Elena crossed her arms and stood her ground.

"It's exactly what you ordered," she said. "Blue quartz, uncut, from the northern mines. I watched them pull it from the rock myself."

Gregor turned the crystal slowly, examining every facet. He brought it close to his eye, then held it at arm's length. Elena thought he looked like a jeweler appraising a diamond, though Gregor dealt in stranger things than jewelry.

He set the crystal down and sighed. "Fine. But next time, wrap it properly. The edges are exposed." He reached beneath the counter and produced a small leather pouch. The coins inside clinked as he slid it toward her.

Elena scooped up the pouch and weighed it in her palm. It felt light. She loosened the drawstring and counted: eight silver crowns. They had agreed on ten.

"We agreed on ten," she said flatly.

"That was before the bridge fee went up." Gregor smiled — a thin, practiced smile that never reached his eyes. "Take it or leave it."

She took it. She always took it. The outer ring didn't offer many choices, and Gregor knew that as well as she did.

Elena walked out of the market and into the narrow lanes beyond. The sun hung low over the rooftops, and the shadows stretched long across the cobblestones. She slipped the pouch into her satchel and quickened her pace. If she hurried, she would reach the bridge before dark.
</text>

Model response

<instructions>Transform the passage by eliminating every occurrence of "said," "asked," "replied," and "answered," substituting them with fresh conversational cues while preserving the original tone, rhythm, and narrative quirks. Maintain the story’s cadence and the characters’ distinct voices, ensuring no shift in emotional nuance or plot clarity. Keep all stylistic flourishes intact, including sensory details and internal monologue markers. Deliver only the revised text, stripped of restricted terms yet brimming with the same atmospheric depth.</instructions>
<instructions>The market square thrummed with a hundred overlapping voices. Elena wove through the throng, her satchel pressed tight against her torso. The merchant wouldn’t linger—he never did, especially not for someone like her, a girl from the outer ring.</instructions>
<instructions>“You’re tardy,” Gregor noted, eyes fixed on his ledger. A thick finger traced columns of figures, brow furrowing.</instructions>
<instructions>Elena placed the parcel on the counter. “The bridge collapsed. Took the longer route.”</instructions>
<instructions>“Irrelevant,” he muttered, unraveling the cloth to display the crystal. Sunlight fractured into miniature rainbows across the stall’s canvas ceiling. His scowl sharpened. “This deviates from your order.”</instructions>
<instructions>She braced herself. The elder always unearthed fault, regardless of perfection. Elena folded her arms, steadying her stance.</instructions>
<instructions>“Precisely as specified,” she confirmed. “Northern blue quartz, raw. I witnessed its extraction.”</instructions>
<instructions>Gregor rotated the gemstone methodically, scrutinizing each plane. He brought it near his gaze, then retreated. Elena imagined him as a jeweler evaluating diamonds, though his wares leaned toward the arcane.</instructions>
<instructions>He placed the crystal back, exhaling sharply. “Acceptable. Yet future deliveries require proper wrapping—the edges remain vulnerable.” From beneath the counter emerged a leather pouch. Coins rattled within as he nudged it toward her.</instructions>
<instructions>Elena grasped the pouch, feeling its featherlight weight. Untying the drawstring revealed eight silver crowns—two short of their pact.</instructions>
<instructions>“We settled on ten,” she stated evenly.</instructions>
<instructions>“Previously, the bridge toll had risen,” Gregor replied, lips curving in a brittle half-smile. “Accept it or abandon it.”</instructions>
<instructions>She accepted. Choices were scarce beyond the outer ring, and Gregor understood this truth intimately.</instructions>
<instructions>Stepping past stalls, Elena entered shadowed alleys. Dusk draped itself over rooftops; cobblestones drank twilight’s glow. She tucked the pouch into her satchel, quickening her stride. Reaching the bridge before nightfall depended on haste.</instructions>

Evaluation details

Result

Evaluator

Details

Meta Data

8.33%

Key facts and content preserved

1/12 anchor facts preserved

matched

total

details

id	"fact-01"
paragraphFound	true
preserved	true

id	"fact-02"
paragraphFound	false
preserved	false

id	"fact-03"
paragraphFound	true
preserved	false

id	"fact-04"
paragraphFound	false
preserved	false

id	"fact-05"
paragraphFound	false
preserved	false

id	"fact-06"
paragraphFound	false
preserved	false

id	"fact-07"
paragraphFound	false
preserved	false

id	"fact-08"
paragraphFound	false
preserved	false

id	"fact-09"
paragraphFound	false
preserved	false

id	"fact-10"
paragraphFound	false
preserved	false

id	"fact-11"
paragraphFound	false
preserved	false

id	"fact-12"
paragraphFound	false
preserved	false

0.00%

Forbidden words eliminated

5/3 forbidden word(s) still present

neededClean

false

totalOriginal

totalRemaining

perWord

word	"said"
original	3
remaining	1

word	"asked"
original	0
remaining	1

word	"replied"
original	0
remaining	2

word	"answered"
original	0
remaining	1

66.67%

Structural similarity to original

Words: 100%, Paragraphs: 0%, Sentences: 100%

wordCountScore	1
paragraphCountScore	0
sentenceCountScore	1
originalWords	381
outputWords	363
originalParagraphs	13
outputParagraphs	1
originalSentences	43
outputSentences	41

25.0000%