Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCRZR5V5C0AKH7VP0HXENE3

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
28.4s
Cost:
$0.000193
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the Fae Grove hung thick with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter, almost cloying, like overripe berries left too long in the sun. Aurora Carter paused at the edge of the clearing, her boots sinking slightly into the moss that carpeted the ground. The ancient oaks loomed around her, their gnarled branches twisting overhead like skeletal fingers, casting the space in a perpetual twilight. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, its weight familiar against her hip, and glanced at the Heartstone Pendant at her throat. It pulsed faintly, a quiet thrum against her skin, as if it knew she was here for a reason. The path had been narrow, winding through the park’s edge before dissolving into this place. No signs marked the way back—only the soft rustle of leaves that didn’t quite match the breeze. She’d come seeking something, though she couldn’t name it yet. A lead? A clue? The letter she’d received weeks ago, scrawled in a hand she didn’t recognize, had hinted at “the threshold where time frays.” She’d laughed it off then, dismissed it as prankster nonsense. Now, standing beneath the watchful eyes of the standing stones, the laugh felt brittle. A sound cut through the silence—a low, resonant hum, like a cello string plucked deep in the earth. It vibrated in her bones more than her ears. Aurora froze, her breath catching. The Grove’s usual chorus of crickets and distant owls had vanished. Even the wind seemed to hold its breath. She turned slowly, scanning the shadows between the trees. Nothing. Just the flicker of light through leaves, too deliberate to be chance. Her fingers brushed the pendant. It warmed further, a subtle shift that made her pulse quicken. The glow within it dimmed, then brightened, as though responding to some unseen force. She’d never seen it react like this before. The stories her grandmother told—of artifacts tied to the old magic, of promises made and broken—flashed through her mind. *Some doors open only when the moon is right*, she’d heard, *but the price is always paid in something you don’t see coming.* A branch snapped somewhere to her left. Not the brittle crack of a small twig, but a heavier, wetter sound, like something large shifting in the underbrush. Aurora’s head snapped toward the sound, her heart hammering against her ribs. The pendant flared suddenly, a sharp pulse of heat against her chest, and the air around her seemed to ripple. For a heartbeat, the clearing blurred, the edges of the world softening as if painted in watercolor. Then it steadied, leaving only the hum, louder now, almost a whisper. She took a step forward, her boot crunching on a fallen leaf. The ground felt different here—softer, as though the soil itself resisted her weight. The standing stones loomed closer, their bark etched with symbols that glowed faintly, amber and green. She reached out, tracing one with a fingertip. The stone was cold, but the touch sent a shiver up her arm, a sensation like static electricity mixed with something older, deeper. A shadow moved at the corner of her vision. She spun, but there was nothing—only the sway of ferns and the slow drift of pollen in the air. Yet the feeling lingered: a presence, not hostile, but *aware*. Like the Grove was watching, waiting. Her throat tightened. She’d read about such places in the old texts—thin places where the veil between worlds thinned. The Fae were said to trade in bargains, in memories, in years of life. What would they want from her? The pendant’s glow intensified, casting jagged red patterns on the moss. Aurora’s reflection stared back at her from a pool of still water nearby, but her eyes looked different—darker, as if the light was leaching something from them. She blinked, and the image shifted. For a moment, she saw not herself, but a figure cloaked in shadow, standing just behind her. She whirled again, but the clearing was empty save for the trees, their branches creaking as if in agreement. A sound like footsteps echoed now, deliberate and measured, coming from deeper within the Grove. Not hers. Not anyone’s she knew. She pressed a hand to the pendant, its warmth seeping into her palm. The hum rose to a keening wail, and the air grew thick, heavy with the scent of iron and decay. The Heartstone’s glow flared blindingly bright, and in that instant, she saw it—the outline of a figure, tall and gaunt, its form flickering like a candle in wind. It didn’t move toward her. It simply *was*, a silent witness to her intrusion. Aurora’s breath came in shallow gasps. She wanted to run, but her legs felt rooted. The pendant pulsed faster now, syncing with the rhythm of her heartbeat. The figure in the clearing began to fade, dissolving into mist that curled around the standing stones. The hum softened, becoming a murmur, a language she almost understood. The Grove seemed to exhale, the air cooling against her skin. When the light faded, the clearing was empty. The pendant lay cold against her chest, its glow extinguished. But the air still thrummed, a residue of what had passed through. Aurora stood motionless, listening. Somewhere, a bird called—a single, clear note that pierced the stillness. She turned toward the path back, but the trees now seemed taller, their trunks closer together, the distance to the exit shrinking in ways that defied logic. Her phone buzzed in her pocket, a jarring vibration. A text from Yu-Fei Cheung: *Delivery at the old mill? 30 mins.* She hadn’t planned to go there tonight. The message blinked again, unanswered. She stared at it, then at the pendant, now inert. The Grove had given her nothing tangible, only this hollow ache in her chest and the certainty that she’d been seen. As she walked, the shadows lengthened, stretching toward her like fingers. The Heartstone’s absence felt like a wound. Behind her, the standing stones watched, their symbols glowing faintly, as if waiting for her to return. The Grove would remember her. And next time, it might not let her leave so easily.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1037
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1037
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"loomed"
count2
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"footsteps"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"measured"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
16
word"tangible"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"weight"
2"familiar"
3"pulsed"
4"silence"
5"vibrated"
6"scanning"
7"flicker"
8"pulse"
9"whisper"
10"etched"
11"tracing"
12"footsteps"
13"echoed"
14"measured"
15"warmth"
16"tangible"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
72.31% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords30
totalWords1027
ratio0.029
matches
0"Some doors open only when the moon is right"
1"but the price is always paid in something you don’t see coming."
2"aware"
3"was"
4"Delivery at the old mill? 30 mins."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1022
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.68
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove7
Carter1
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Aurora6
persons
0"Grove"
1"Carter"
2"Heartstone"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Cheung"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Pendant"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"quite match the breeze"
1"as though responding to some unseen force"
2"seemed taller their trunks closer together, the distance to the exit shrinking in ways that defied logic"
3"felt like a wound"
4"as if waiting for her to return"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.921
wordCount1027
matches
0"Not the brittle crack of a small twig, but a heavier, wetter sound, like something large shifting in th"
1"not hostile, but *aware*"
2"not herself, but a figure cloaked in shadow, standing just behind her"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
10.86% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs13
mean79
std14.85
cv0.188
sampleLengths
0111
191
273
380
488
572
683
780
896
966
1072
1164
1251
96.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"were said"
1"been seen"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs171
matches
0"was watching"
1"was leaching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences81
ratio0.111
matches
0"No signs marked the way back—only the soft rustle of leaves that didn’t quite match the breeze."
1"A sound cut through the silence—a low, resonant hum, like a cello string plucked deep in the earth."
2"The stories her grandmother told—of artifacts tied to the old magic, of promises made and broken—flashed through her mind."
3"The ground felt different here—softer, as though the soil itself resisted her weight."
4"She spun, but there was nothing—only the sway of ferns and the slow drift of pollen in the air."
5"She’d read about such places in the old texts—thin places where the veil between worlds thinned."
6"Aurora’s reflection stared back at her from a pool of still water nearby, but her eyes looked different—darker, as if the light was leaching something from them."
7"The Heartstone’s glow flared blindingly bright, and in that instant, she saw it—the outline of a figure, tall and gaunt, its form flickering like a candle in wind."
8"Somewhere, a bird called—a single, clear note that pierced the stillness."
91.73% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1033
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay cold against her"
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.04259438528557599
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.013552758954501452
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean12.68
std6.77
cv0.534
sampleLengths
028
120
221
323
419
515
617
710
82
92
1031
1114
1218
139
145
1511
168
179
181
1912
205
2111
2214
238
2419
2523
267
2720
2812
2920
3017
3112
3212
3313
3416
358
3623
379
3819
3910
406
413
4216
4314
446
4511
4627
476
4817
4919
41.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.30864197530864196
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners25
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences77
matches
0"Even the wind seemed to"
1"Just the flicker of light"
2"Then it steadied, leaving only"
3"Somewhere, a bird called—a single,"
ratio0.052
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences77
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"It pulsed faintly, a quiet"
2"She’d come seeking something, though"
3"It vibrated in her bones"
4"She turned slowly, scanning the"
5"Her fingers brushed the pendant."
6"It warmed further, a subtle"
7"She’d never seen it react"
8"She took a step forward,"
9"She reached out, tracing one"
10"She spun, but there was"
11"Her throat tightened."
12"She’d read about such places"
13"She blinked, and the image"
14"She whirled again, but the"
15"She pressed a hand to"
16"It didn’t move toward her."
17"It simply *was*, a silent"
18"She wanted to run, but"
19"She turned toward the path"
ratio0.286
83.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences77
matches
0"The air in the Fae"
1"Aurora Carter paused at the"
2"The ancient oaks loomed around"
3"She adjusted the strap of"
4"It pulsed faintly, a quiet"
5"The path had been narrow,"
6"She’d come seeking something, though"
7"The letter she’d received weeks"
8"A sound cut through the"
9"It vibrated in her bones"
10"Aurora froze, her breath catching."
11"The Grove’s usual chorus of"
12"She turned slowly, scanning the"
13"Her fingers brushed the pendant."
14"It warmed further, a subtle"
15"The glow within it dimmed,"
16"She’d never seen it react"
17"The stories her grandmother told—of"
18"*Some doors open only when"
19"A branch snapped somewhere to"
ratio0.753
64.94% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"Now, standing beneath the watchful"
ratio0.013
30.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"It pulsed faintly, a quiet thrum against her skin, as if it knew she was here for a reason."
1"The glow within it dimmed, then brightened, as though responding to some unseen force."
2"For a heartbeat, the clearing blurred, the edges of the world softening as if painted in watercolor."
3"The ground felt different here—softer, as though the soil itself resisted her weight."
4"Aurora’s reflection stared back at her from a pool of still water nearby, but her eyes looked different—darker, as if the light was leaching something from them…"
5"Somewhere, a bird called—a single, clear note that pierced the stillness."
6"She turned toward the path back, but the trees now seemed taller, their trunks closer together, the distance to the exit shrinking in ways that defied logic."
7"Behind her, the standing stones watched, their symbols glowing faintly, as if waiting for her to return."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
75.9241%