Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS118Y3ZP8VERDGGW8G7Y2

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
20.3s
Cost:
$0.000146
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park hangs thick, heavy with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter—something almost floral, yet wrong. Aurora Carter steps over a tangle of roots, her boots sinking slightly into the mossy ground. The ancient oaks loom around her, their gnarled branches clawing at the sky like skeletal fingers. A thin veil of mist curls around her ankles, cold despite the summer heat. She pulls her coat tighter, though she knows it won’t help much. The Heartstone Pendant pulses against her collarbone, a faint thrum beneath her skin, as if the artifact itself senses the unease coiling in her chest. She’s been walking for hours, though the path feels shorter now. Time blurs here, the rules of the world bending like the willow roots snaking across the clearing. The trees lean inward, their leaves whispering in a language just beyond comprehension. Aurora’s breath comes shallow, her pulse loud in her ears. She tells herself it’s the isolation, the weight of solitude pressing down until her ribs ache. But the feeling isn’t just loneliness—it’s anticipation. Something waits. The clearing emerges suddenly, a circle of light cast by the moon through gaps in the canopy. Wildflowers bloom in riotous clusters, their petals glowing faintly, as though lit from within. The Heartstone’s glow intensifies, casting red shadows that writhe unnaturally. Aurora hesitates, her hand brushing the pendant. It’s warm, alive, and the air grows colder. Footsteps crunch behind her. She freezes. No one else should be here. The park is vast, empty save for the occasional rustle of small creatures. Yet the sound repeats—a soft, deliberate tread, like someone dragging their heel against stone. Her throat tightens. She spins, scanning the darkness. Nothing. Just the trees, their trunks etched with symbols that seem to shift when she blinks. A low hum vibrates through the ground, resonating in her bones. The flowers tremble. Aurora’s fingers tighten on the pendant. She remembers the stories—whispers of the Fae, of places where time frays and the veil between worlds thins. This isn’t just a grove; it’s a threshold. And thresholds demand payment. The mist thickens. Shapes flicker at the edges of her vision: a figure in a tattered cloak, a hand reaching from the undergrowth, eyes reflecting the moonlight like polished obsidian. She blinks, and they’re gone. Her breath quickens. The pendant burns now, a searing heat against her skin. She thinks of home—the clatter of Yu-Fei’s kitchen, the familiar scent of star anise and ginger, Silas’ gruff laughter behind the bar. Normalcy. Safety. But this place doesn’t care about normal. A branch snaps ahead, sharp and sudden. Aurora whirls, heart hammering. The clearing stretches wider, the flowers now arranged in a spiral pattern, their glow pulsing in time with the pendant. The air smells sharper, metallic, like blood and burnt sugar. She takes a step forward, then another, drawn toward the center. The ground feels unstable, as if the earth itself resists her movement. Then she hears it—a voice. Not spoken, but felt. A vibration in her skull, a chorus of whispers that coil around her thoughts. *Stay.* The word isn’t a command, nor a plea. It’s a promise. Her knees buckle. The pendant slips from her neck, rolling into the grass. The flowers recoil, their light dimming. The mist swirls, forming shapes now—faces pressed against the fog, mouths open in silent screams. Aurora scrambles backward, but the trees close in, their branches weaving a cage. The whispers grow louder, insistent. *You belong here now.* She reaches for the pendant, but her hands pass through empty air. The ground tilts. The clearing tilts. The moon vanishes, replaced by a swirling void of stars that bleed into each other. Aurora’s vision blurs. She sees herself reflected in the flowers—eyes hollow, lips stained black, smiling. The last thing she hears is the click of a door closing. When dawn breaks, the clearing is empty. The Heartstone lies on the moss, its crimson glow extinguished. Somewhere nearby, a delivery cyclist passes through Richmond Park, humming a tune he doesn’t recognize. The wildflowers bloom undisturbed, unaware of the shadow that passed through them. But if you stand still long enough, you might hear the hum again. And feel the weight of something waiting just beyond sight.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount718
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount718
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"anticipation"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"searing"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"normalcy"
count1
10
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"weight"
2"anticipation"
3"footsteps"
4"scanning"
5"etched"
6"flicker"
7"searing"
8"familiar"
9"normalcy"
10"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords5
totalWords710
ratio0.007
matches
0"Stay."
1"You belong here now."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount704
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Carter1
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Fae1
Yu-Fei1
Normalcy1
Aurora7
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"symbols that seem to shift when she blinks"
59.15% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.408
wordCount710
matches
0"Not spoken, but felt"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean47.33
std26.73
cv0.565
sampleLengths
0104
176
256
34
459
550
672
77
864
935
1056
1148
1212
1344
1423
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs113
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences73
ratio0.123
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park hangs thick, heavy with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter—something almost floral, yet wrong."
1"But the feeling isn’t just loneliness—it’s anticipation."
2"Yet the sound repeats—a soft, deliberate tread, like someone dragging their heel against stone."
3"She remembers the stories—whispers of the Fae, of places where time frays and the veil between worlds thins."
4"This isn’t just a grove; it’s a threshold."
5"She thinks of home—the clatter of Yu-Fei’s kitchen, the familiar scent of star anise and ginger, Silas’ gruff laughter behind the bar."
6"Then she hears it—a voice."
7"The mist swirls, forming shapes now—faces pressed against the fog, mouths open in silent screams."
8"She sees herself reflected in the flowers—eyes hollow, lips stained black, smiling."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount419
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.028639618138424822
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.00954653937947494
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean9.73
std5.93
cv0.609
sampleLengths
021
116
216
314
412
525
611
717
813
910
1016
117
122
1317
1414
1510
167
178
184
192
206
2113
2214
233
245
251
2615
2711
283
296
3018
318
324
333
3427
355
363
3710
3822
391
401
417
427
434
4420
4510
4611
4712
485
494
52.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3561643835616438
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners26
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences68
matches
0"Just the trees, their trunks"
1"Then she hears it—a voice."
2"Somewhere nearby, a delivery cyclist"
ratio0.044
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences68
matches
0"She pulls her coat tighter,"
1"She’s been walking for hours,"
2"She tells herself it’s the"
3"It’s warm, alive, and the"
4"Her throat tightens."
5"She spins, scanning the darkness."
6"She remembers the stories—whispers of"
7"She blinks, and they’re gone."
8"Her breath quickens."
9"She thinks of home—the clatter"
10"She takes a step forward,"
11"It’s a promise."
12"Her knees buckle."
13"*You belong here now.*"
14"She reaches for the pendant,"
15"She sees herself reflected in"
ratio0.235
62.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences68
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"Aurora Carter steps over a"
2"The ancient oaks loom around"
3"A thin veil of mist"
4"She pulls her coat tighter,"
5"The Heartstone Pendant pulses against"
6"She’s been walking for hours,"
7"The trees lean inward, their"
8"Aurora’s breath comes shallow, her"
9"She tells herself it’s the"
10"The clearing emerges suddenly, a"
11"Wildflowers bloom in riotous clusters,"
12"The Heartstone’s glow intensifies, casting"
13"Aurora hesitates, her hand brushing"
14"It’s warm, alive, and the"
15"Footsteps crunch behind her."
16"The park is vast, empty"
17"Her throat tightens."
18"She spins, scanning the darkness."
19"A low hum vibrates through"
ratio0.794
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant pulses against her collarbone, a faint thrum beneath her skin, as if the artifact itself senses the unease coiling in her chest."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.9038%