Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS2GXV9VX4Z6HXB9QMXSEM

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
31.4s
Cost:
$0.000209
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air inside The Raven’s Nest hung thick with smoke and memory. A single green neon sign pulsed above the door, casting a sickly glow over the scarred wooden tables and mismatched chairs. The scent of stale beer mingled with the faint tang of old paperbacks stacked behind the counter. Aurora Carter—Rory to those who still called her that—stood near the bar, her fingers tracing the rim of a glass she hadn’t touched. Her black hair, usually pulled into a no-nonsense knot, had loosened into soft waves that brushed her shoulders. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the light as she shifted, a silent reminder of a childhood fall she’d never spoken of. She’d come here on instinct, drawn by the familiar creak of the floorboards beneath her boots, the way the shadows seemed to lean in when the last customer left. The bar was smaller than she remembered, the walls darker, the photographs on the shelves more faded. A map of London from decades past hung crookedly beside a faded portrait of some long-forgotten nobleman. She’d expected silence, but the low hum of a jukebox playing a half-remembered tune filled the space. Then she saw him. Silas Blackwood stood at the far end of the room, his back to her, one hand resting on the back of a stool. His grey-streaked auburn hair was shorter now, thinning at the temples, and his beard—once neatly trimmed—was slightly uneven, as if he’d neglected it for weeks. The limp in his left leg was less pronounced, though the silver signet ring on his right hand still caught the light with every movement. He wore a charcoal sweater that hung loosely on his frame, the kind of thing that suggested comfort over care. “Rory,” he said without turning, his voice a gravelly rumble that carried across the room. “Still chasing ghosts in the neon.” Her breath caught. Years collapsed between them like a folded map. She’d imagined this moment a hundred times—some dramatic reunion, a confession, a reckoning—but now it felt like stepping into a dream she couldn’t control. “Silas,” she replied, her own voice steadier than she felt. “I didn’t think you’d still be here.” He finally faced her, his hazel eyes narrowing as if trying to reconcile the woman before him with the girl who’d once stolen his heart during late-night study sessions in Cardiff. The scar on her wrist stood out starkly against her pale skin, a tiny crescent that seemed to pulse with the rhythm of her heartbeat. “You look… different,” he said, not unkindly. “So do you.” She gestured vaguely at his hands, the way his fingers curled around the stool’s edge as if anchoring himself. “Still carrying that limp?” A flicker of something crossed his face—regret, perhaps, or the weight of a decision made long ago. “Old habits die hard.” The jukebox shifted to a slower tempo, a saxophone weaving through the silence between them. Aurora’s gaze drifted to the hidden room behind the bar, the secret space where whispers and deals were struck. She wondered if he still used it for the same things, or if the walls had absorbed too many secrets. “I heard you left Cardiff,” she said, testing the words. “Left? No. I stayed. Just… moved.” His smile was thin, a shadow of the one that had once made her laugh until tears streamed down her cheeks. “You know how it is.” She nodded, though the truth was messier. She’d fled not just Evan, her abusive ex, but the life that had followed—a life of quiet desperation and unfulfilled potential. London had offered escape, but also isolation. The delivery job at Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress had been a lifeline, though the work felt like a half-measure, a way to pay bills while avoiding the questions she couldn’t answer. Silas stepped closer, the scent of tobacco and aged wood clinging to him. “You’re still smart, Rory. Still sharp.” “Still bitter?” The question slipped out before she could stop it. His expression darkened, but he didn’t deny it. “Bitter’s a luxury. You learn to live with the ghosts.” The neon sign flickered, casting their faces in alternating light and shadow. Aurora studied him—the lines etched deeper now, the gray in his hair more pronounced, the way his shoulders seemed to carry the weight of years. He looked like a man who had outlived his own ambitions, who had traded dreams for survival. “Do you ever think about Cardiff?” she asked. He exhaled slowly. “Every day. But not in the way you might expect.” A beat passed, filled with the hum of the bar and the distant clink of glasses. Somewhere, a door creaked open. “I used to think leaving was the only way out,” Silas said finally. “Turns out, running just changes the shape of the cage.” Aurora’s throat tightened. She wanted to argue, to tell him that running had been necessary, that survival wasn’t weakness. But the words stuck, trapped beneath the layers of what they’d both buried. “You’re still here,” she said quietly. “Why?” He glanced at the hidden room again, then back at her. “Because some things are worth protecting. Even if you’re not sure what they are anymore.” The saxophone swelled, a mournful melody that seemed to echo the unspoken things between them. Aurora reached for her glass, her reflection warped in the amber liquid. For a moment, she saw not the bar, not the city, but the girl she’d been—bold, unbroken, full of plans that had dissolved like smoke. Silas watched her, his gaze steady. “You’ve changed.” “So have you.” A pause stretched between them, thick with everything they’d never said. Then, softly: “I’m sorry.” She turned to him fully, the weight of years pressing against her ribs. “For what?” “For letting go. For not fighting harder.” His voice cracked, but he held her gaze. “But mostly… for not knowing when to stay.” The neon sign buzzed, its light dimming as if acknowledging the truth. Outside, the London night pressed against the windows, indifferent. Inside, two old friends stood at the edge of a conversation that might never begin, the ghosts of their pasts lingering like smoke in the air. Aurora reached out, her fingers brushing his sleeve. “Maybe we don’t have to fix it all tonight.” He didn’t pull away. The silence that followed was neither heavy nor light—it was simply there, a bridge between who they’d been and who they might still become.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Silas said finally [finally]"
2"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.393
leniency0.786
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.214
81.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1089
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"loosely"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"loosely"
2"slowly"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
21.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1089
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"weight"
count3
8
word"potential"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"echo"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"tracing"
2"reminder"
3"familiar"
4"silence"
5"pulse"
6"flicker"
7"weight"
8"potential"
9"flickered"
10"etched"
11"echo"
12"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"tears streamed down"
count1
highlights
0"tears streamed down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
53.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1078
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount927
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.65
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Rory1
London3
Blackwood1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Aurora6
Silas4
persons
0"Nest"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Blackwood"
4"Evan"
5"Yu-Fei"
6"Cheung"
7"Empress"
8"Aurora"
9"Silas"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"felt like stepping into a dream she cou"
1"as if trying to reconcile the woman before him with the girl who’d once stolen his heart during late-night study sessions in Cardiff"
2"crescent that seemed to pulse with the rhythm of her heartbeat"
3"as if anchoring himself"
4"felt like a half-measure, a way to pay"
5"looked like a man who had outlived his ow"
6"melody that seemed to echo the unspoken things between them"
7"as if acknowledging the truth"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords3.711
wordCount1078
matches
0"not just Evan, her abusive ex, but the life"
1"not the bar, not the city, but the girl she’d been"
2"not the city, but the girl she’d been"
3"neither heavy nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean30.8
std26.01
cv0.845
sampleLengths
0116
180
24
393
421
535
617
756
87
926
1021
1154
1210
1332
1466
1519
1611
1718
1854
198
2013
2121
2223
2332
247
2526
2652
278
283
2915
3015
3123
3247
3317
3428
99.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"were struck"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs157
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences80
ratio0.1
matches
0"Aurora Carter—Rory to those who still called her that—stood near the bar, her fingers tracing the rim of a glass she hadn’t touched."
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair was shorter now, thinning at the temples, and his beard—once neatly trimmed—was slightly uneven, as if he’d neglected it for weeks."
2"She’d imagined this moment a hundred times—some dramatic reunion, a confession, a reckoning—but now it felt like stepping into a dream she couldn’t control."
3"A flicker of something crossed his face—regret, perhaps, or the weight of a decision made long ago."
4"She’d fled not just Evan, her abusive ex, but the life that had followed—a life of quiet desperation and unfulfilled potential."
5"Aurora studied him—the lines etched deeper now, the gray in his hair more pronounced, the way his shoulders seemed to carry the weight of years."
6"For a moment, she saw not the bar, not the city, but the girl she’d been—bold, unbroken, full of plans that had dissolved like smoke."
7"The silence that followed was neither heavy nor light—it was simply there, a bridge between who they’d been and who they might still become."
92.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount946
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.042283298097251586
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.017970401691331923
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean13.48
std7.85
cv0.583
sampleLengths
012
121
217
323
418
525
629
717
817
917
104
1123
1225
1325
1420
1515
166
173
188
1924
2010
217
2231
2325
247
2522
264
2717
284
2915
3019
3120
3210
3327
345
357
3621
377
3831
3913
406
4111
428
4310
4412
4525
4617
478
483
4910
60.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.375
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Somewhere, a door creaked open."
ratio0.032
52.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences62
matches
0"Her black hair, usually pulled"
1"She’d come here on instinct,"
2"She’d expected silence, but the"
3"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
4"He wore a charcoal sweater"
5"he said without turning, his"
6"Her breath caught."
7"She’d imagined this moment a"
8"she replied, her own voice"
9"He finally faced her, his"
10"he said, not unkindly"
11"She gestured vaguely at his"
12"She wondered if he still"
13"she said, testing the words"
14"His smile was thin, a"
15"She nodded, though the truth"
16"She’d fled not just Evan,"
17"His expression darkened, but he"
18"He looked like a man"
19"He exhaled slowly."
ratio0.419
8.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences62
matches
0"The air inside The Raven’s"
1"A single green neon sign"
2"The scent of stale beer"
3"Aurora Carter—Rory to those who"
4"Her black hair, usually pulled"
5"The small crescent-shaped scar on"
6"She’d come here on instinct,"
7"The bar was smaller than"
8"A map of London from"
9"She’d expected silence, but the"
10"Silas Blackwood stood at the"
11"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
12"The limp in his left"
13"He wore a charcoal sweater"
14"he said without turning, his"
15"Her breath caught."
16"Years collapsed between them like"
17"She’d imagined this moment a"
18"she replied, her own voice"
19"He finally faced her, his"
ratio0.903
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Her black hair, usually pulled into a no-nonsense knot, had loosened into soft waves that brushed her shoulders."
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair was shorter now, thinning at the temples, and his beard—once neatly trimmed—was slightly uneven, as if he’d neglected it for weeks…"
2"He wore a charcoal sweater that hung loosely on his frame, the kind of thing that suggested comfort over care."
3"He finally faced her, his hazel eyes narrowing as if trying to reconcile the woman before him with the girl who’d once stolen his heart during late-night study …"
4"The scar on her wrist stood out starkly against her pale skin, a tiny crescent that seemed to pulse with the rhythm of her heartbeat."
5"She’d fled not just Evan, her abusive ex, but the life that had followed—a life of quiet desperation and unfulfilled potential."
6"For a moment, she saw not the bar, not the city, but the girl she’d been—bold, unbroken, full of plans that had dissolved like smoke."
7"The neon sign buzzed, its light dimming as if acknowledging the truth."
8"Inside, two old friends stood at the edge of a conversation that might never begin, the ghosts of their pasts lingering like smoke in the air."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said, his voice a gravelly rumble that carried across the room"
1"she replied, her own voice steadier than she felt"
2"he said, not unkindly"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
65.6527%