| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She gestured vaguely [vaguely]" | | 1 | "Silas said finally [finally]" | | 2 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.393 | | leniency | 0.786 | | rawRatio | 0.273 | | effectiveRatio | 0.214 | |
| 81.63% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1089 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "loosely" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 21.95% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1089 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "tracing" | | 2 | "reminder" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "potential" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "etched" | | 11 | "echo" | | 12 | "unspoken" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "tears streamed down" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1078 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 927 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.65 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | London | 3 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Cheung | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Aurora | 6 | | Silas | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nest" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Blackwood" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Yu-Fei" | | 6 | "Cheung" | | 7 | "Empress" | | 8 | "Aurora" | | 9 | "Silas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like stepping into a dream she cou" | | 1 | "as if trying to reconcile the woman before him with the girl who’d once stolen his heart during late-night study sessions in Cardiff" | | 2 | "crescent that seemed to pulse with the rhythm of her heartbeat" | | 3 | "as if anchoring himself" | | 4 | "felt like a half-measure, a way to pay" | | 5 | "looked like a man who had outlived his ow" | | 6 | "melody that seemed to echo the unspoken things between them" | | 7 | "as if acknowledging the truth" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.711 | | wordCount | 1078 | | matches | | 0 | "not just Evan, her abusive ex, but the life" | | 1 | "not the bar, not the city, but the girl she’d been" | | 2 | "not the city, but the girl she’d been" | | 3 | "neither heavy nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 30.8 | | std | 26.01 | | cv | 0.845 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 116 | | 1 | 80 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 93 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 56 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 54 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 66 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 54 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 52 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 47 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 28 |
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| 99.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 157 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.1 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter—Rory to those who still called her that—stood near the bar, her fingers tracing the rim of a glass she hadn’t touched." | | 1 | "His grey-streaked auburn hair was shorter now, thinning at the temples, and his beard—once neatly trimmed—was slightly uneven, as if he’d neglected it for weeks." | | 2 | "She’d imagined this moment a hundred times—some dramatic reunion, a confession, a reckoning—but now it felt like stepping into a dream she couldn’t control." | | 3 | "A flicker of something crossed his face—regret, perhaps, or the weight of a decision made long ago." | | 4 | "She’d fled not just Evan, her abusive ex, but the life that had followed—a life of quiet desperation and unfulfilled potential." | | 5 | "Aurora studied him—the lines etched deeper now, the gray in his hair more pronounced, the way his shoulders seemed to carry the weight of years." | | 6 | "For a moment, she saw not the bar, not the city, but the girl she’d been—bold, unbroken, full of plans that had dissolved like smoke." | | 7 | "The silence that followed was neither heavy nor light—it was simply there, a bridge between who they’d been and who they might still become." |
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| 92.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 946 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.042283298097251586 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017970401691331923 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 13.48 | | std | 7.85 | | cv | 0.583 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 31 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 60.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.375 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she saw him." | | 1 | "Somewhere, a door creaked open." |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 52.26% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Her black hair, usually pulled" | | 1 | "She’d come here on instinct," | | 2 | "She’d expected silence, but the" | | 3 | "His grey-streaked auburn hair was" | | 4 | "He wore a charcoal sweater" | | 5 | "he said without turning, his" | | 6 | "Her breath caught." | | 7 | "She’d imagined this moment a" | | 8 | "she replied, her own voice" | | 9 | "He finally faced her, his" | | 10 | "he said, not unkindly" | | 11 | "She gestured vaguely at his" | | 12 | "She wondered if he still" | | 13 | "she said, testing the words" | | 14 | "His smile was thin, a" | | 15 | "She nodded, though the truth" | | 16 | "She’d fled not just Evan," | | 17 | "His expression darkened, but he" | | 18 | "He looked like a man" | | 19 | "He exhaled slowly." |
| | ratio | 0.419 | |
| 8.39% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside The Raven’s" | | 1 | "A single green neon sign" | | 2 | "The scent of stale beer" | | 3 | "Aurora Carter—Rory to those who" | | 4 | "Her black hair, usually pulled" | | 5 | "The small crescent-shaped scar on" | | 6 | "She’d come here on instinct," | | 7 | "The bar was smaller than" | | 8 | "A map of London from" | | 9 | "She’d expected silence, but the" | | 10 | "Silas Blackwood stood at the" | | 11 | "His grey-streaked auburn hair was" | | 12 | "The limp in his left" | | 13 | "He wore a charcoal sweater" | | 14 | "he said without turning, his" | | 15 | "Her breath caught." | | 16 | "Years collapsed between them like" | | 17 | "She’d imagined this moment a" | | 18 | "she replied, her own voice" | | 19 | "He finally faced her, his" |
| | ratio | 0.903 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Her black hair, usually pulled into a no-nonsense knot, had loosened into soft waves that brushed her shoulders." | | 1 | "His grey-streaked auburn hair was shorter now, thinning at the temples, and his beard—once neatly trimmed—was slightly uneven, as if he’d neglected it for weeks…" | | 2 | "He wore a charcoal sweater that hung loosely on his frame, the kind of thing that suggested comfort over care." | | 3 | "He finally faced her, his hazel eyes narrowing as if trying to reconcile the woman before him with the girl who’d once stolen his heart during late-night study …" | | 4 | "The scar on her wrist stood out starkly against her pale skin, a tiny crescent that seemed to pulse with the rhythm of her heartbeat." | | 5 | "She’d fled not just Evan, her abusive ex, but the life that had followed—a life of quiet desperation and unfulfilled potential." | | 6 | "For a moment, she saw not the bar, not the city, but the girl she’d been—bold, unbroken, full of plans that had dissolved like smoke." | | 7 | "The neon sign buzzed, its light dimming as if acknowledging the truth." | | 8 | "Inside, two old friends stood at the edge of a conversation that might never begin, the ghosts of their pasts lingering like smoke in the air." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, his voice a gravelly rumble that carried across the room" | | 1 | "she replied, her own voice steadier than she felt" | | 2 | "he said, not unkindly" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |