Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS2RT256C8BW0ZE09REDJT

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
30.7s
Cost:
$0.000204
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air inside The Raven’s Nest clung thick with smoke and memory. A single green neon sign flickered above the door, casting jaundiced light over the scarred wooden tables where shadows pooled like spilled ink. Aurora Carter—Rory to those who knew her best—stood just inside the threshold, her shoulders squared against the weight of the night. The city’s rain had soaked through her coat, but she barely noticed. Her eyes, bright blue and sharp as broken glass, scanned the room until they landed on a figure hunched over a whiskey tumbler at the far end. He looked smaller than she remembered. Silas Blackwood sat with the careful posture of a man who’d once been a soldier, though his frame had softened with years. His hair, once a wild mane of auburn, now trailed silver streaks down his neck, combed neatly beneath a battered fedora. A limp tugged at his left leg whenever he shifted, a reminder of Prague’s betrayal. Yet his hands—steady, deliberate—moved with the ease of someone who’d learned to balance chaos for others. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the neon glow as he lifted the glass to his lips. Their gazes met. Time folded. “Rory,” he said, voice low, roughened by decades of unsaid things. “Still chasing deliveries?” She crossed the room in three strides, boots clicking against the floorboards. “Still hiding behind a bar?” Her smile was a blade honed sharp by years apart. “I heard this place was a front. Guess I should’ve known.” Silas chuckled, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “Back when we were kids, you called me ‘Si.’ Now you call me ‘Spymaster’ if you’re feeling dramatic.” “You never did learn subtlety.” She leaned against the bar, fingers drumming a rhythm only she could hear. “What happened? Did the world finally decide to treat you kindly?” His gaze dropped to her wrist, where the crescent scar peeked beneath her sleeve. “Some things don’t change.” The admission hung between them, heavy as the scent of bourbon and damp wool. Aurora studied his face—the lines etched deeper than she recalled, the way his jaw had hardened into something less forgiving. Yet the hazel eyes remained the same: restless, searching. “You look… older,” she said, not unkindly. “Older? No.” He shook his head, a wry twist to his mouth. “Just tired.” She laughed then, a sound that startled even herself. “Tired. Right. When we were twenty, tired meant skipping class to watch trains disappear into fog. Now?” She gestured around the bar. “Tired means knowing which faces to avoid.” Silas’s fingers tightened on his glass. “You never told me you left Cardiff. Why?” Her throat worked. “Evan wasn’t exactly… gentle.” The words hung there, raw and exposed. Silas reached across the table—not to touch her, but to lift the empty glass toward her. A silent invitation to sit. She hesitated. “You still keep the bookshelf?” “Every inch.” She slid into the chair opposite him, the wood creaking under her weight. The hidden room beyond the bar felt suddenly intimate, as if the walls themselves leaned closer to listen. “You ever think about running?” she asked suddenly. He snorted. “Run? Where? London’s got more ghosts than people.” “Except yours.” She tilted her head. “You stayed. Why?” Silas stared into his drink. “Because some debts aren’t paid in cash. Some are paid in silence.” The neon sign buzzed overhead, casting their shadows long and tangled across the floor. Aurora watched him—the way his shoulders hunched, the tremor in his hand when he set the glass down. The boy who’d once argued philosophy with her over cheap wine was gone. In his place stood a man carrying the weight of choices she couldn’t fathom. “You ever wonder what would’ve happened,” she began, voice quieter now, “if we’d stayed?” He met her eyes. “We’d have ended up like everyone else. Broken pieces pretending to fit.” A beat passed. Somewhere outside, a siren wailed—a lonely sound swallowed by the hum of the city. “I kept a map,” she said abruptly. “Of places we never went.” Silas’s brow lifted. “And?” “And I still know every street corner where we laughed too loud, where we swore we’d never let anything happen to each other.” Her voice cracked. “Where I failed.” The confession hung between them, fragile as spun glass. For a moment, neither moved. Then Silas reached into his pocket, pulled out a folded photograph—the two of them at twenty, grinning like fools beneath a London skyline. The edges were frayed, the colors faded. “You kept this?” he asked. “Couldn’t throw it away.” He traced the image with a calloused thumb. “We were so sure we’d always have time.” Aurora’s throat burned. “Time doesn’t give second chances. It just… takes them.” Silas nodded slowly. “But sometimes it gives you people. People who remember.” Outside, the rain thickened, turning the windows into mirrors. Inside, the neon sign flickered once more, casting their reflections side by side—two strangers bound by history, separated by years, yet tethered by something neither could name. “Tell me,” she said softly, “what do you do now?” He smiled, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “Same as always. Watching. Waiting. Hiding.” She studied him—the man who’d once taught her to see beyond the obvious, now teaching her to see the cracks. “You ever get tired of hiding?” “Every day.” “Then why stay?” Silas looked past her, toward the hidden room where secrets slept. “Because someone has to remember how to fight.” The neon sign buzzed louder, a warning or a promise. Aurora reached across the table, her hand hovering near his. Not touching. Just close enough to feel the heat of his skin, the pulse beneath. For a heartbeat, they were both that boy and that man again—two halves of a whole, fractured by time but still reaching. Then the moment passed. The rain kept falling. And somewhere in the shadows, the past waited patiently, ready to claim its due.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"She gestured around [around]"
1"she asked suddenly [suddenly]"
2"she said abruptly [abruptly]"
3"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.325
leniency0.65
rawRatio0.308
effectiveRatio0.2
80.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1005
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1005
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"fractured"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"scanned"
3"reminder"
4"etched"
5"silence"
6"traced"
7"pulse"
8"fractured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords993
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount733
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.23
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Rory1
Blackwood1
Prague1
Silas9
London1
Aurora5
persons
0"Nest"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Blackwood"
4"Silas"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Raven"
1"Prague"
2"London"
globalScore0.886
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
99.30% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.007
wordCount993
matches
0"not to touch her, but to lift the empty glass toward her"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean21.13
std20.16
cv0.954
sampleLengths
095
16
294
33
42
514
638
726
829
918
1043
117
1214
1338
1414
157
1628
177
182
1931
208
2110
229
2317
2459
2514
2616
2717
2812
294
3029
3144
325
334
3416
3512
3612
3736
3810
3914
4026
412
423
4319
4435
4522
4622
95.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"was gone"
1"were frayed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs140
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences98
ratio0.102
matches
0"Aurora Carter—Rory to those who knew her best—stood just inside the threshold, her shoulders squared against the weight of the night."
1"Yet his hands—steady, deliberate—moved with the ease of someone who’d learned to balance chaos for others."
2"Aurora studied his face—the lines etched deeper than she recalled, the way his jaw had hardened into something less forgiving."
3"Silas reached across the table—not to touch her, but to lift the empty glass toward her."
4"Aurora watched him—the way his shoulders hunched, the tremor in his hand when he set the glass down."
5"Somewhere outside, a siren wailed—a lonely sound swallowed by the hum of the city."
6"Then Silas reached into his pocket, pulled out a folded photograph—the two of them at twenty, grinning like fools beneath a London skyline."
7"Inside, the neon sign flickered once more, casting their reflections side by side—two strangers bound by history, separated by years, yet tethered by something neither could name."
8"She studied him—the man who’d once taught her to see beyond the obvious, now teaching her to see the cracks."
9"For a heartbeat, they were both that boy and that man again—two halves of a whole, fractured by time but still reaching."
98.59% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount745
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.04161073825503356
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.01476510067114094
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean10.13
std6.58
cv0.649
sampleLengths
012
123
221
312
427
56
622
721
815
916
1020
113
122
1311
143
1512
1615
1711
188
1918
2018
2111
2214
234
2414
2520
269
277
2812
292
309
3122
327
336
348
353
364
377
3816
395
402
415
422
4313
4418
458
462
478
486
493
67.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.41836734693877553
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences66
matches
0"Somewhere outside, a siren wailed—a"
1"Then Silas reached into his"
2"Just close enough to feel"
3"Then the moment passed."
ratio0.061
68.48% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences66
matches
0"Her eyes, bright blue and"
1"He looked smaller than she"
2"His hair, once a wild"
3"Their gazes met."
4"he said, voice low, roughened"
5"She crossed the room in"
6"Her smile was a blade"
7"She leaned against the bar,"
8"His gaze dropped to her"
9"she said, not unkindly"
10"He shook his head, a"
11"She laughed then, a sound"
12"She gestured around the bar"
13"Her throat worked."
14"She slid into the chair"
15"she asked suddenly"
16"She tilted her head"
17"she began, voice quieter now"
18"He met her eyes."
19"she said abruptly"
ratio0.379
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences66
matches
0"The air inside The Raven’s"
1"A single green neon sign"
2"Aurora Carter—Rory to those who"
3"The city’s rain had soaked"
4"Her eyes, bright blue and"
5"He looked smaller than she"
6"Silas Blackwood sat with the"
7"His hair, once a wild"
8"A limp tugged at his"
9"The silver signet ring on"
10"Their gazes met."
11"he said, voice low, roughened"
12"She crossed the room in"
13"Her smile was a blade"
14"Silas chuckled, but it didn’t"
15"She leaned against the bar,"
16"His gaze dropped to her"
17"The admission hung between them,"
18"Aurora studied his face—the lines"
19"she said, not unkindly"
ratio0.818
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The hidden room beyond the bar felt suddenly intimate, as if the walls themselves leaned closer to listen."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, voice low, roughened by decades of unsaid things"
1"She leaned, fingers drumming a rhythm only she could hear"
2"she said, not unkindly"
3"she began, voice quieter now,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.15
leniency0.3
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.4692%