Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS45D5VMZKQX3NPX4V6E85

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
27.7s
Cost:
$0.000186
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the Fae Grove tasted of iron and damp earth, thick with the scent of wild thyme crushed underfoot. Aurora Carter moved through the ancient oaks, their gnarled branches knitting a canopy so dense it swallowed the last vestiges of daylight. The path—if it could be called that—twisted like a serpent through the undergrowth, roots snaking across her boots as though reluctant to let her pass. Her breath fogged in the chill, each exhale a ghost that vanished before it could settle. She paused at the edge of the clearing, where the ground dipped into a shallow hollow. The Heartstone Pendant pressed against her collarbone, its rough edges biting through her shirt. It had pulsed once since she’d stepped beyond the tree line, a faint thrum against her skin like a second heartbeat. *Near a Hel portal*, the description had said. But there was no portal here, only the weight of silence pressing in, heavy as wet wool. The trees behind her creaked, though no wind stirred. She turned, hand drifting to the knife at her belt—a habit from years of navigating London’s back alleys, now useless here. The grove’s stillness felt deliberate, as if the world itself held its breath. Somewhere ahead, a branch snapped. Not the brittle snap of a small animal, but something heavier, deliberate. Her pulse quickened, but she forced herself to breathe slow, the way her father taught her during exams: *in for four, hold for seven, out for eight*. The rhythm steadied her, though doubt gnawed at the edges. The pendant flared then, a sudden heat seeping into her palm. She glanced upward. The stars were gone. Not obscured by clouds—erased. The sky hung black, starless, as though someone had scraped the heavens clean. A cold crept up her spine. She’d read about places where the veil thinned, where the Fae walked unseen. Her mother’s stories, half-remembered from childhood summers in Cardiff, whispered of thresholds. *Cross them carelessly, and the debt is paid in blood.* Footsteps. Faint, but unmistakable. Her boot scuffed gravel as she stepped forward, the clearing opening before her like a mouth. The ground sloped downward, revealing a circle of stones arranged in a spiral. At their center lay a pool of water, black as oil, reflecting nothing. The pendant’s glow intensified, casting jagged shadows that writhed like living things. A sound—low, resonant, like a cello string plucked underwater. It came from beneath the earth. She crouched, knees cracking, and pressed her ear to the soil. The vibration grew louder, a thrumming that matched the pendant’s pulse. Then, a whisper. Not in English, nor any language she knew. It slithered into her skull, syllables that curled and uncurled like smoke. *You should not have come.* Her fingers brushed the pendant’s surface. It was warm now, almost feverish. The trees around her seemed to lean inward, their bark peeling away to reveal pale, fibrous flesh beneath. She recoiled, but the pull was stronger. The pool’s surface rippled, though no wind disturbed it. Something rose from the depthsnot a creature, but a shape, amorphous and vast, as if the water itself had learned to coil. The pendant’s glow dimmed. For a moment, absolute darkness. Then, a single word formed in her mind, clear as a bell toll: *Stay.* She stood, heart hammering. The path behind her had vanished. Roots twisted into barriers, stones shifted to block her retreat. The whisper returned, softer now, almost tender. *You left your old life behind. You cannot outrun what you’ve become.* Aurora’s throat tightened. She thought of Yu-Fei’s restaurant, the clatter of trays, the smell of ginger and soy sauce. Of her mother’s hands, calloused from teaching, kneading dough for bread. Of Evan’s fist, the bruise blooming purple on her ribs. All of it felt distant, unreal, as if someone had siphoned her memories into a jar and sealed them away. The pool surged. The pendant slipped from her grasp, sinking into the water with a sound like a sigh. The stones around her began to hum, a low, discordant note that vibrated in her bones. Shapes coalesced at the edge of the pool—figures, tall and thin, their faces smooth as stone. They did not move toward her. They simply watched, waiting. She backed away, but the ground gave way. A sinkhole opened beneath her, swallowing her ankle. Cold water rushed over her leg, and she screamed, but the sound died in her throat. The figures tilted their heads, as if considering her fate. The pendant’s absence left a hollow ache, but also clarity. This was not a trap. It was a choice. The whisper returned, gentler now. *You are not alone. You never were.* Aurora closed her eyes. In the darkness, she felt the pulse of the earth, the thrum of something ancient and patient. The pendant would rise again, she knew. Or perhaps it had never left. The grove held its breath, waiting for her answer. When she opened her eyes, the figures were gone. The pool was still. Only the scent of iron remained, and the echo of a name she could not recall. She turned, stumbling back toward the trees, but the path was different now. Roots blocked her way. Branches clawed at her face. Somewhere, a clock struck midnight. Or perhaps it was the grove’s own time, warped and cruel. She ran, the pendant’s memory burning in her mind, until the trees parted and she stumbled into the light of a streetlamp. Dawn bled through the clouds, but the air still tasted of the deep, and her wrist throbbed where the scar lay hidden beneath her sleeve. In her pocket, the pendant rested, warm and silent. She did not reach for it. Not yet. The grove would wait. It always did.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount968
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
12.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount968
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"navigating"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count3
6
word"quickened"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count3
9
word"depths"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"echo"
count1
12
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"pulsed"
2"weight"
3"silence"
4"navigating"
5"pulse"
6"quickened"
7"footsteps"
8"whisper"
9"depths"
10"vibrated"
11"echo"
12"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of silence"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords48
totalWords961
ratio0.05
matches
0"Near a Hel portal"
1"in for four, hold for seven, out for eight"
2"Cross them carelessly, and the debt is paid in blood."
3"You should not have come."
4"Stay."
5"You left your old life behind. You cannot outrun what you’ve become."
6"You are not alone. You never were."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount961
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.31
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove1
Carter1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Hel1
London1
Cardiff1
Footsteps1
English1
Aurora3
Yu-Fei1
Evan1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Pendant"
2"Aurora"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Evan"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Hel"
3"London"
4"Cardiff"
5"English"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if considering her fate"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.081
wordCount961
matches
0"Not the brittle snap of a small animal, but something heavier, deliberate"
1"not a creature, but a shape, amorphous"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
88.93% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs18
mean53.39
std24.63
cv0.461
sampleLengths
084
176
297
376
458
565
668
723
839
960
1061
1161
1212
1343
1451
1563
1617
177
94.18% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences95
matches
0"were gone"
1"is paid"
2"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs165
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences95
ratio0.063
matches
0"The path—if it could be called that—twisted like a serpent through the undergrowth, roots snaking across her boots as though reluctant to let her pass."
1"She turned, hand drifting to the knife at her belt—a habit from years of navigating London’s back alleys, now useless here."
2"Not obscured by clouds—erased."
3"A sound—low, resonant, like a cello string plucked underwater."
4"Something rose from the depths—not a creature, but a shape, amorphous and vast, as if the water itself had learned to coil."
5"Shapes coalesced at the edge of the pool—figures, tall and thin, their faces smooth as stone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount970
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.027835051546391754
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004123711340206186
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean10.12
std6.06
cv0.599
sampleLengths
021
122
225
316
416
514
621
78
817
99
1021
1113
125
1312
1427
1510
1611
173
184
194
2013
216
2213
2312
2410
251
263
2716
2813
2913
3012
319
326
3311
3411
353
368
3712
385
396
406
4118
427
439
4422
454
465
4714
484
496
45.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3263157894736842
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners31
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences93
matches
0"Somewhere ahead, a branch snapped."
1"Then, a whisper."
2"Then, a single word formed"
3"Only the scent of iron"
4"Somewhere, a clock struck midnight."
ratio0.054
90.97% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences93
matches
0"Her breath fogged in the"
1"She paused at the edge"
2"It had pulsed once since"
3"She turned, hand drifting to"
4"Her pulse quickened, but she"
5"She glanced upward."
6"She’d read about places where"
7"Her mother’s stories, half-remembered from"
8"Her boot scuffed gravel as"
9"It came from beneath the"
10"She crouched, knees cracking, and"
11"It slithered into her skull,"
12"*You should not have come.*"
13"Her fingers brushed the pendant’s"
14"It was warm now, almost"
15"She recoiled, but the pull"
16"She stood, heart hammering."
17"*You left your old life"
18"You cannot outrun what you’ve"
19"She thought of Yu-Fei’s restaurant,"
ratio0.323
83.66% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences93
matches
0"The air in the Fae"
1"Aurora Carter moved through the"
2"The path—if it could be"
3"Her breath fogged in the"
4"She paused at the edge"
5"The Heartstone Pendant pressed against"
6"It had pulsed once since"
7"The trees behind her creaked,"
8"She turned, hand drifting to"
9"The grove’s stillness felt deliberate,"
10"Her pulse quickened, but she"
11"The rhythm steadied her, though"
12"The pendant flared then, a"
13"She glanced upward."
14"The stars were gone."
15"The sky hung black, starless,"
16"A cold crept up her"
17"She’d read about places where"
18"Her mother’s stories, half-remembered from"
19"Her boot scuffed gravel as"
ratio0.753
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The path—if it could be called that—twisted like a serpent through the undergrowth, roots snaking across her boots as though reluctant to let her pass."
1"The grove’s stillness felt deliberate, as if the world itself held its breath."
2"Something rose from the depths—not a creature, but a shape, amorphous and vast, as if the water itself had learned to coil."
3"The stones around her began to hum, a low, discordant note that vibrated in her bones."
4"The figures tilted their heads, as if considering her fate."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.7037%