| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 968 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 12.19% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 968 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "navigating" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "quickened" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "depths" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "echo" | | 12 | "throbbed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 48 | | totalWords | 961 | | ratio | 0.05 | | matches | | 0 | "Near a Hel portal" | | 1 | "in for four, hold for seven, out for eight" | | 2 | "Cross them carelessly, and the debt is paid in blood." | | 3 | "You should not have come." | | 4 | "Stay." | | 5 | "You left your old life behind. You cannot outrun what you’ve become." | | 6 | "You are not alone. You never were." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 961 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.31 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | London | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Footsteps | 1 | | English | 1 | | Aurora | 3 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Yu-Fei" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Hel" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "English" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if considering her fate" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.081 | | wordCount | 961 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the brittle snap of a small animal, but something heavier, deliberate" | | 1 | "not a creature, but a shape, amorphous" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.93% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 18 | | mean | 53.39 | | std | 24.63 | | cv | 0.461 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 84 | | 1 | 76 | | 2 | 97 | | 3 | 76 | | 4 | 58 | | 5 | 65 | | 6 | 68 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 60 | | 10 | 61 | | 11 | 61 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 51 | | 15 | 63 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 7 |
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| 94.18% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "were gone" | | 1 | "is paid" | | 2 | "were gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 165 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.063 | | matches | | 0 | "The path—if it could be called that—twisted like a serpent through the undergrowth, roots snaking across her boots as though reluctant to let her pass." | | 1 | "She turned, hand drifting to the knife at her belt—a habit from years of navigating London’s back alleys, now useless here." | | 2 | "Not obscured by clouds—erased." | | 3 | "A sound—low, resonant, like a cello string plucked underwater." | | 4 | "Something rose from the depths—not a creature, but a shape, amorphous and vast, as if the water itself had learned to coil." | | 5 | "Shapes coalesced at the edge of the pool—figures, tall and thin, their faces smooth as stone." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 970 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.027835051546391754 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004123711340206186 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 10.12 | | std | 6.06 | | cv | 0.599 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 45.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3263157894736842 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere ahead, a branch snapped." | | 1 | "Then, a whisper." | | 2 | "Then, a single word formed" | | 3 | "Only the scent of iron" | | 4 | "Somewhere, a clock struck midnight." |
| | ratio | 0.054 | |
| 90.97% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 1 | "She paused at the edge" | | 2 | "It had pulsed once since" | | 3 | "She turned, hand drifting to" | | 4 | "Her pulse quickened, but she" | | 5 | "She glanced upward." | | 6 | "She’d read about places where" | | 7 | "Her mother’s stories, half-remembered from" | | 8 | "Her boot scuffed gravel as" | | 9 | "It came from beneath the" | | 10 | "She crouched, knees cracking, and" | | 11 | "It slithered into her skull," | | 12 | "*You should not have come.*" | | 13 | "Her fingers brushed the pendant’s" | | 14 | "It was warm now, almost" | | 15 | "She recoiled, but the pull" | | 16 | "She stood, heart hammering." | | 17 | "*You left your old life" | | 18 | "You cannot outrun what you’ve" | | 19 | "She thought of Yu-Fei’s restaurant," |
| | ratio | 0.323 | |
| 83.66% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Fae" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter moved through the" | | 2 | "The path—if it could be" | | 3 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 4 | "She paused at the edge" | | 5 | "The Heartstone Pendant pressed against" | | 6 | "It had pulsed once since" | | 7 | "The trees behind her creaked," | | 8 | "She turned, hand drifting to" | | 9 | "The grove’s stillness felt deliberate," | | 10 | "Her pulse quickened, but she" | | 11 | "The rhythm steadied her, though" | | 12 | "The pendant flared then, a" | | 13 | "She glanced upward." | | 14 | "The stars were gone." | | 15 | "The sky hung black, starless," | | 16 | "A cold crept up her" | | 17 | "She’d read about places where" | | 18 | "Her mother’s stories, half-remembered from" | | 19 | "Her boot scuffed gravel as" |
| | ratio | 0.753 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 65.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The path—if it could be called that—twisted like a serpent through the undergrowth, roots snaking across her boots as though reluctant to let her pass." | | 1 | "The grove’s stillness felt deliberate, as if the world itself held its breath." | | 2 | "Something rose from the depths—not a creature, but a shape, amorphous and vast, as if the water itself had learned to coil." | | 3 | "The stones around her began to hum, a low, discordant note that vibrated in her bones." | | 4 | "The figures tilted their heads, as if considering her fate." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |