Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS5RMRQH2M0DCQ0D5STBHS

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
36.1s
Cost:
$0.000227
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air inside The Raven’s Nest clung thick with smoke and memory. Aurora Carter pushed open the heavy door, the distinctive green neon casting a jaundiced glow over the scarred wooden counter. Her boots echoed against the floorboards, each step a reminder of the city’s pulse beneath her soles. She scanned the room—familiar faces half-remembered, shadows shifting like secrets. Then she saw him. Silas Blackwood sat alone at a corner table, the silver signet ring catching the light as he lifted a glass of amber liquid. His grey-streaked auburn hair was cropped short, the neat line betraying the discipline of a man who once commanded entire rooms with a glance. The limp in his left leg was less pronounced now, but the weight of it lingered in the way he held himself—a coiled spring beneath a tailored jacket. His eyes, hazel and sharp, flicked up when she entered. Recognition flared, then something softer, almost wary. “Rory,” he said, voice low, the syllables carrying the weight of years. “Still chasing deliveries at Golden Empress?” His smile was a thin line, but not unkind. She hesitated, fingers brushing the strap of her bag. “You’re still running the front door, I see.” The joke landed awkwardly; he nodded, as if she’d meant it. The bar hummed around them—low laughter, clinking glasses, the murmur of conversations that might have been about anything. Aurora slid into the chair across from him, the wood creaking under her. Silas studied her, the way her black hair fell over one shoulder, the faint scar at her wrist catching the neon’s glow. “Time moves fast,” he said, though it wasn’t true. They’d been twenty since university, two years since the night she fled Cardiff with nothing but a duffel bag and a promise to herself. “Doesn’t feel like it,” she replied, tracing the rim of her glass. The drink tasted of burnt sugar and regret. He leaned forward, elbows on the table. “You look… different.” “So do you.” Her gaze drifted to the signet ring. “Still playing kingmaker in the shadows?” A flicker of something crossed his face—pride, perhaps, or guilt. “Better than being a ghost.” He paused. “You ever think about coming back? To Cardiff? To us?” The question hung between them, fragile as a spider’s web. Aurora’s throat tightened. She remembered the night she left: rain slashing sideways, her father’s voice cracking as he pleaded for her to stay, her mother’s silent tears. She’d run to London, then to this city, building walls higher than the ones in her childhood home. “I thought about it,” she admitted quietly. “After Evan… after everything.” Silas’s jaw flexed. “Evan’s still alive?” “Three years. We lost contact after he…” She didn’t finish. The unspoken thing hung heavy—his name, the way he’d vanished into the same darkness she’d fled. They lapsed into silence, the kind that demanded answers neither wanted to give. Outside, rain began to patter against the windows, blurring the neon into streaks of gold. Aurora watched a couple argue over a check, their voices rising like the tide. “You never told me why you left,” Silas said finally, softer. She exhaled. “I was scared. Scared of what would happen if I stayed.” “And now?” “Now I’m here. Delivering food. Living.” She shrugged, but her hands trembled. “But sometimes I wonder if I traded one cage for another.” His eyes narrowed, searching. “You think I don’t know that feeling?” The admission surprised her. Silas had always been the steady one, the one who’d planned every move. Yet here he was, a man shaped by choices and consequences, his limp a testament to battles fought in the dark. “You could’ve come back sooner,” she said, not unkindly. “I did,” he replied, voice rough. “When you needed me.” The words struck her like a blow. She remembered that night—the slammed door, the silence that followed. She’d told herself it was for the best, that Silas’s world was too dangerous for someone like her. But now, looking at him, she saw the cracks in his composure. The way his fingers curled around his glass, the tension in his shoulders. “You’re still hurting,” she said. He met her gaze, and for a moment, the bar faded away. “I’m trying to heal. Slowly.” A laugh escaped her, bitter. “You always were good at pretending.” He smiled then, a real one, fleeting but genuine. “And you were always better at running than staying.” The bartender called out a special—Aurora’s favorite, a smoky gin fizz. Neither moved to order. Outside, thunder rumbled, and the neon signs flickered, casting their reflections on the wet pavement. “I should go,” Silas said abruptly. “Wait.” She reached across the table, touched his hand. His skin was warm, calloused. “Tell me about your life. Really tell me.” He hesitated, then sighed. “I married a woman named Clara. Had two children. She’s… gone now. Cancer took her.” His voice cracked. “After she died, I started working for Yu-Fei Cheung. It’s… quiet work. No more secrets.” Aurora’s breath caught. “You never mentioned a wife.” “Didn’t think you’d care.” The honesty stung. She thought of her own solitude, the way she’d built walls even around herself. “I had a sister,” she said. “Died when we were kids. Mom never stopped grieving.” Silas nodded. “Grief’s a funny thing. It doesn’t leave. It just… changes shape.” They talked then, slowly, the years slipping away like sand. He spoke of Prague, of operations gone wrong, of the weight of decisions made in blood and shadow. She told him about Cardiff, about Brendan’s stubborn pride, Jennifer’s quiet strength. When she mentioned Eva, Silas’s expression softened. “She saved you,” he said. “Even when you didn’t know it.” The rain eased, leaving the streets glistening. Aurora stood, hesitating. “I should get going.” “Stay,” he urged. “Just for a while longer.” She looked at him—this man who’d weathered storms she couldn’t imagine—and felt the ache of all they’d lost. “Maybe tomorrow,” she said. Outside, the neon sign buzzed, casting their shadows on the wet street. Somewhere, a clock ticked toward dawn, and neither moved to leave. Silas watched her go, the scar at her wrist catching the light like a secret kept. In the hush between heartbeats, he wondered if some wounds never truly heal, only learn to live beside you. Aurora stepped into the night, the city breathing around her. For the first time in years, the future felt both terrifying and possible. And somewhere in the distance, a train whistled—a sound like a promise, or a warning. The Raven’s Nest closed its doors behind them, the green sign flickering once before settling into darkness.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
13.95% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"The joke landed awkwardly [awkwardly]"
1"she admitted quietly [quietly]"
2"Silas said finally [finally]"
3"Silas said abruptly [abruptly]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.465
leniency0.93
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.186
82.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1114
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
2"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1114
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"reminder"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"weight"
count3
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"silence"
count2
11
word"trembled"
count1
12
word"testament"
count1
13
word"tension"
count1
14
word"fleeting"
count1
15
word"flickered"
count1
16
word"glistening"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"reminder"
2"pulse"
3"scanned"
4"familiar"
5"weight"
6"flicked"
7"tracing"
8"flicker"
9"unspoken"
10"silence"
11"trembled"
12"testament"
13"tension"
14"fleeting"
15"flickered"
16"glistening"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences85
matches
0"felt the ache"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1104
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
92.06% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount863
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Carter1
Blackwood1
Cardiff2
London1
Silas10
Aurora8
Prague1
Brendan1
Jennifer1
Eva1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Blackwood"
4"Silas"
5"Aurora"
6"Brendan"
7"Jennifer"
8"Eva"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
2"Prague"
globalScore0.921
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1104
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"remembered that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean24.53
std18.51
cv0.754
sampleLengths
063
192
227
328
453
533
620
710
816
927
1055
1111
126
1326
1442
1511
1613
172
1823
1911
2038
219
2210
2360
245
2517
2611
2718
2830
296
3022
3137
328
334
3432
3513
3647
3711
3814
398
4022
4123
4235
4338
4417
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"was cropped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs170
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences107
ratio0.093
matches
0"She scanned the room—familiar faces half-remembered, shadows shifting like secrets."
1"The limp in his left leg was less pronounced now, but the weight of it lingered in the way he held himself—a coiled spring beneath a tailored jacket."
2"“You’re still running the front door, I see.” The joke landed awkwardly; he nodded, as if she’d meant it."
3"The bar hummed around them—low laughter, clinking glasses, the murmur of conversations that might have been about anything."
4"A flicker of something crossed his face—pride, perhaps, or guilt."
5"The unspoken thing hung heavy—his name, the way he’d vanished into the same darkness she’d fled."
6"She remembered that night—the slammed door, the silence that followed."
7"The bartender called out a special—Aurora’s favorite, a smoky gin fizz."
8"She looked at him—this man who’d weathered storms she couldn’t imagine—and felt the ache of all they’d lost."
9"And somewhere in the distance, a train whistled—a sound like a promise, or a warning."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount875
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.030857142857142857
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009142857142857144
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean10.32
std5.88
cv0.569
sampleLengths
012
120
217
310
44
523
624
728
810
97
1012
1115
129
1319
1418
1513
1622
179
1824
1912
208
217
223
2310
246
2510
267
2710
2810
293
3024
3118
327
334
343
353
3610
3716
3813
3915
4014
4111
422
4311
442
4512
4611
474
487
494
61.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.38317757009345793
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners41
86.58% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Somewhere, a clock ticked toward"
ratio0.026
43.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences77
matches
0"Her boots echoed against the"
1"She scanned the room—familiar faces"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
3"His eyes, hazel and sharp,"
4"he said, voice low, the"
5"His smile was a thin"
6"She hesitated, fingers brushing the"
7"he said, though it wasn’t"
8"They’d been twenty since university,"
9"she replied, tracing the rim"
10"He leaned forward, elbows on"
11"Her gaze drifted to the"
12"She remembered the night she"
13"She’d run to London, then"
14"she admitted quietly"
15"She didn’t finish"
16"They lapsed into silence, the"
17"She shrugged, but her hands"
18"His eyes narrowed, searching."
19"she said, not unkindly"
ratio0.442
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences77
matches
0"The air inside The Raven’s"
1"Aurora Carter pushed open the"
2"Her boots echoed against the"
3"She scanned the room—familiar faces"
4"Silas Blackwood sat alone at"
5"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
6"The limp in his left"
7"His eyes, hazel and sharp,"
8"Recognition flared, then something softer,"
9"he said, voice low, the"
10"His smile was a thin"
11"She hesitated, fingers brushing the"
12"The joke landed awkwardly; he"
13"The bar hummed around them—low"
14"Aurora slid into the chair"
15"Silas studied her, the way"
16"he said, though it wasn’t"
17"They’d been twenty since university,"
18"she replied, tracing the rim"
19"The drink tasted of burnt"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She remembered the night she left: rain slashing sideways, her father’s voice cracking as he pleaded for her to stay, her mother’s silent tears."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"he said, voice low, the syllables carrying the weight of years"
1"The joke landed awkwardly, as if she’d meant it"
2"Silas said finally, softer"
3"She shrugged, but her hands trembled"
4"she said, not unkindly"
5"he replied, voice rough"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she admitted quietly (admit)"
1"he urged (urge)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.302
leniency0.605
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.093
77.3892%