| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 89.48% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 951 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 951 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
| | 13 | | | 14 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "vibrated" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "glint" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "trembled" | | 12 | "down her spine" | | 13 | "quickened" | | 14 | "the last thing" | | 15 | "echoing" | | 16 | "resonance" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "blood ran cold" | | 1 | "sent a shiver down" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 11 | | totalWords | 943 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "“When the stones remember, follow the path of thorns”" | | 1 | "squelch" | | 2 | "knew" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 943 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.64 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 6 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as though responding to something unseen" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 3.181 | | wordCount | 943 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a rustle, not a creak, but something deeper" | | 1 | "not a creak, but something deeper" | | 2 | "Not all at once, but in slow, agonizing waves" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 44.9 | | std | 32.43 | | cv | 0.722 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 74 | | 2 | 90 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 72 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 57 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 89 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 59 | | 13 | 53 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 62 | | 16 | 58 | | 17 | 81 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 46 |
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| 84.92% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "been written" | | 1 | "being siphoned" | | 2 | "been buried" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "was walking" | | 1 | "was trying" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 69 | | ratio | 0.116 | | matches | | 0 | "The note she’d found tucked inside her coat pocket—*“When the stones remember, follow the path of thorns”*—had been written in a hand she didn’t recognize, the ink smudged as though smeared by trembling fingers." | | 1 | "Not a rustle, not a creak, but something deeper—a low, resonant hum that vibrated in her bones." | | 2 | "They were light, deliberate, as if someone—or something—was walking barefoot over the moss." | | 3 | "Not words, exactly—more a suggestion of sound, a breath against her ear that didn’t belong to anyone she knew." | | 4 | "For a moment, she thought she saw shapes within the glow—faces, maybe, or eyes, too many, too wide." | | 5 | "She stumbled, catching herself on a root, but the movement triggered another sound—a soft, wet *squelch*, as if something had just been buried beneath the soil." | | 6 | "A shadow moved at the periphery of her sight—a shape with no edges, no clear form." | | 7 | "Somewhere in the distance, a wolf howled—but the sound was wrong, stretched too long, echoing with a resonance that did not belong to any creature she had ever known." |
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| 92.20% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 951 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "thicker, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.04206098843322818 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005257623554153523 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 69 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 69 | | mean | 13.67 | | std | 6.95 | | cv | 0.509 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 44.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.2463768115942029 | | totalSentences | 69 | | uniqueOpeners | 17 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Then came the footsteps." | | 1 | "Just the flicker of shadows" | | 2 | "Then they vanished." | | 3 | "Somewhere in the distance, a" |
| | ratio | 0.062 | |
| 84.62% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood at the edge" | | 1 | "She had come here for" | | 2 | "They swayed without wind, their" | | 3 | "It had grown warmer since" | | 4 | "Her pulse thrummed in her" | | 5 | "She told herself it was" | | 6 | "They were light, deliberate, as" | | 7 | "She reached into her pocket," | | 8 | "It pulsed again, stronger this" | | 9 | "She stepped back, her boots" | | 10 | "She spun again, but the" | | 11 | "Her hands trembled as she" | | 12 | "She stumbled, catching herself on" | | 13 | "Her blood ran cold." | | 14 | "She wanted to run, but" | | 15 | "It was tall, too tall," | | 16 | "She knelt, fingers closing around" | | 17 | "They spoke of hunger, of" | | 18 | "Her skin prickled as the" | | 19 | "It lingered just beyond the" |
| | ratio | 0.338 | |
| 36.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "She stood at the edge" | | 2 | "The ancient oaks loomed around" | | 3 | "A single moon hung low," | | 4 | "She had come here for" | | 5 | "The artifact had pulsed against" | | 6 | "The note she’d found tucked" | | 7 | "The clearing was smaller than" | | 8 | "Wildflowers bloomed in clusters, their" | | 9 | "They swayed without wind, their" | | 10 | "Aurora’s breath fogged in the" | | 11 | "It had grown warmer since" | | 12 | "The trees around her seemed" | | 13 | "Her pulse thrummed in her" | | 14 | "She told herself it was" | | 15 | "They were light, deliberate, as" | | 16 | "Aurora turned sharply, her gaze" | | 17 | "She reached into her pocket," | | 18 | "It pulsed again, stronger this" | | 19 | "The flowers behind her began" |
| | ratio | 0.846 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park hung thick with the scent of damp earth and decaying leaves, a cloying perfume that clung to Aurora’s skin like a second layer." | | 1 | "The ancient oaks loomed around her, their gnarled branches twisting overhead like skeletal fingers, casting jagged shadows that shifted unnaturally despite the …" | | 2 | "A single moon hung low, its light pale and sickly, as if filtered through a veil of rot." | | 3 | "The note she’d found tucked inside her coat pocket—*“When the stones remember, follow the path of thorns”*—had been written in a hand she didn’t recognize, the …" | | 4 | "They swayed without wind, their stems bending in slow, deliberate arcs, as though responding to something unseen." | | 5 | "Not a rustle, not a creak, but something deeper—a low, resonant hum that vibrated in her bones." | | 6 | "They were light, deliberate, as if someone—or something—was walking barefoot over the moss." | | 7 | "Petals curled inward, their vibrant hues draining to brown, as though the very life of the grove was being siphoned away." | | 8 | "She stumbled, catching herself on a root, but the movement triggered another sound—a soft, wet *squelch*, as if something had just been buried beneath the soil." | | 9 | "The Heartstone’s pulse quickened, a frantic rhythm that matched her own." | | 10 | "The air grew colder, carrying the metallic tang of blood and something older, something that smelled of forgotten graves." | | 11 | "Somewhere in the distance, a wolf howled—but the sound was wrong, stretched too long, echoing with a resonance that did not belong to any creature she had ever …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |