Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS727YK5K0QB6VWH20RWY4

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
35.9s
Cost:
$0.000181
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park hung thick with the scent of damp earth and decaying leaves, a cloying perfume that clung to Aurora’s skin like a second layer. She stood at the edge of the clearing, her boots sinking into the soft moss that carpeted the ground. The ancient oaks loomed around her, their gnarled branches twisting overhead like skeletal fingers, casting jagged shadows that shifted unnaturally despite the stillness of the night. A single moon hung low, its light pale and sickly, as if filtered through a veil of rot. She had come here for the Heartstone Pendant, though she wasn’t sure why. The artifact had pulsed against her chest during the last hour, a faint thrum of warmth that felt less like a gift and more like a warning. The note she’d found tucked inside her coat pocket—*“When the stones remember, follow the path of thorns”*—had been written in a hand she didn’t recognize, the ink smudged as though smeared by trembling fingers. The clearing was smaller than she’d expected, a hollow carved between the roots of the oldest tree. Wildflowers bloomed in clusters, their petals a garish yellow that seemed to bleed into the darkness. They swayed without wind, their stems bending in slow, deliberate arcs, as though responding to something unseen. Aurora’s breath fogged in the cold, and she pressed a hand to her chest, feeling the pendant’s weight beneath her shirt. It had grown warmer since she’d entered the park, its surface prickling against her skin like a living thing. A sound. Not a rustle, not a creak, but something deeper—a low, resonant hum that vibrated in her bones. She froze. The trees around her seemed to lean inward, their branches weaving a canopy so dense it swallowed the moonlight. Her pulse thrummed in her ears, loud as a drumbeat. She told herself it was the wind, but the air was still. Then came the footsteps. They were light, deliberate, as if someone—or something—was walking barefoot over the moss. Aurora turned sharply, her gaze sweeping the perimeter. Nothing. Just the flicker of shadows and the occasional glint of a stone catching the moonlight. But the feeling of being watched sharpened, a prickle at the base of her neck. She reached into her pocket, fingers brushing the pendant. It pulsed again, stronger this time, a heartbeat against her palm. The flowers behind her began to wilt. Not all at once, but in slow, agonizing waves. Petals curled inward, their vibrant hues draining to brown, as though the very life of the grove was being siphoned away. Aurora’s throat tightened. She stepped back, her boots crunching on twigs that snapped like bones. The clearing felt smaller now, the air thicker, pressing against her lungs. A whisper slithered through the silence. Not words, exactly—more a suggestion of sound, a breath against her ear that didn’t belong to anyone she knew. She spun again, but the space behind her was empty, save for the trees and the moon. Her hands trembled as she lifted the pendant, holding it up to the light. The gemstone glowed faintly, its crimson hue deepening until it seemed to bleed into the air around it. For a moment, she thought she saw shapes within the glow—faces, maybe, or eyes, too many, too wide. Then they vanished. The ground beneath her feet shifted. A low rumble, almost imperceptible, but it sent a shiver down her spine. The moss beneath her boots began to writhe, tendrils of green curling and uncurling like serpents. She stumbled, catching herself on a root, but the movement triggered another sound—a soft, wet *squelch*, as if something had just been buried beneath the soil. Her blood ran cold. The Heartstone’s pulse quickened, a frantic rhythm that matched her own. She wanted to run, but her legs refused to obey. The clearing seemed to stretch, the trees receding into a labyrinth of shadow. The air grew colder, carrying the metallic tang of blood and something older, something that smelled of forgotten graves. A figure materialized at the edge of her vision. It was tall, too tall, its form blurred as though viewed through water. Aurora blinked, and it was gone. When she turned back, the pendant had fallen from her hand, landing with a dull thud on the moss. The glow had intensified, casting jagged patterns across the ground. She knelt, fingers closing around it, and the world seemed to hold its breath. The whispers returned, louder now, a chorus of voices overlapping in a language she didn’t understand but somehow *knew*. They spoke of hunger, of cycles, of the price paid for stepping beyond the veil. Her skin prickled as the pendant’s warmth spread up her arm, seeping into her veins. The trees groaned, their branches creaking like old bones. A shadow moved at the periphery of her sight—a shape with no edges, no clear form. It lingered just beyond the reach of the moonlight, watching. Aurora’s pulse roared in her ears. She stood, the pendant burning against her chest, and took a step forward. The ground gave way beneath her, a sudden sinkhole opening with a sound like a sigh. She fell, arms flailing, but the air resisted her descent, as though the grove itself was trying to keep her. The last thing she heard was the hum, rising higher, until it was a scream. Then silence. The clearing was empty again, the wildflowers reduced to ash. The Heartstone lay untouched, its glow extinguished. Somewhere in the distance, a wolf howled—but the sound was wrong, stretched too long, echoing with a resonance that did not belong to any creature she had ever known.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
89.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount951
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount951
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count3
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"glint"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"silence"
count2
11
word"trembled"
count1
12
word"down her spine"
count1
13
word"quickened"
count1
14
word"the last thing"
count1
15
word"echoing"
count1
16
word"resonance"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"weight"
4"vibrated"
5"pulse"
6"footsteps"
7"flicker"
8"glint"
9"whisper"
10"silence"
11"trembled"
12"down her spine"
13"quickened"
14"the last thing"
15"echoing"
16"resonance"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences69
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords11
totalWords943
ratio0.012
matches
0"“When the stones remember, follow the path of thorns”"
1"squelch"
2"knew"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount943
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.64
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora6
Heartstone3
Pendant1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as though responding to something unseen"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords3.181
wordCount943
matches
0"Not a rustle, not a creak, but something deeper"
1"not a creak, but something deeper"
2"Not all at once, but in slow, agonizing waves"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean44.9
std32.43
cv0.722
sampleLengths
091
174
290
32
460
54
672
77
857
96
1089
116
1259
1353
149
1562
1658
1781
1815
192
2046
84.92% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences69
matches
0"been written"
1"being siphoned"
2"been buried"
3"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was walking"
1"was trying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences69
ratio0.116
matches
0"The note she’d found tucked inside her coat pocket—*“When the stones remember, follow the path of thorns”*—had been written in a hand she didn’t recognize, the ink smudged as though smeared by trembling fingers."
1"Not a rustle, not a creak, but something deeper—a low, resonant hum that vibrated in her bones."
2"They were light, deliberate, as if someone—or something—was walking barefoot over the moss."
3"Not words, exactly—more a suggestion of sound, a breath against her ear that didn’t belong to anyone she knew."
4"For a moment, she thought she saw shapes within the glow—faces, maybe, or eyes, too many, too wide."
5"She stumbled, catching herself on a root, but the movement triggered another sound—a soft, wet *squelch*, as if something had just been buried beneath the soil."
6"A shadow moved at the periphery of her sight—a shape with no edges, no clear form."
7"Somewhere in the distance, a wolf howled—but the sound was wrong, stretched too long, echoing with a resonance that did not belong to any creature she had ever known."
92.20% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount951
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thicker, pressing against her"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.04206098843322818
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005257623554153523
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences69
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences69
mean13.67
std6.95
cv0.509
sampleLengths
028
119
226
318
413
527
634
717
816
917
1021
1119
122
1317
142
1519
1610
1712
184
1913
208
211
2215
2315
249
2511
267
279
2821
293
3012
3112
326
3319
3417
3514
3618
3718
383
396
4013
4116
4226
434
4411
4510
4613
4719
489
4913
44.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.2463768115942029
totalSentences69
uniqueOpeners17
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences65
matches
0"Then came the footsteps."
1"Just the flicker of shadows"
2"Then they vanished."
3"Somewhere in the distance, a"
ratio0.062
84.62% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences65
matches
0"She stood at the edge"
1"She had come here for"
2"They swayed without wind, their"
3"It had grown warmer since"
4"Her pulse thrummed in her"
5"She told herself it was"
6"They were light, deliberate, as"
7"She reached into her pocket,"
8"It pulsed again, stronger this"
9"She stepped back, her boots"
10"She spun again, but the"
11"Her hands trembled as she"
12"She stumbled, catching herself on"
13"Her blood ran cold."
14"She wanted to run, but"
15"It was tall, too tall,"
16"She knelt, fingers closing around"
17"They spoke of hunger, of"
18"Her skin prickled as the"
19"It lingered just beyond the"
ratio0.338
36.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences65
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"She stood at the edge"
2"The ancient oaks loomed around"
3"A single moon hung low,"
4"She had come here for"
5"The artifact had pulsed against"
6"The note she’d found tucked"
7"The clearing was smaller than"
8"Wildflowers bloomed in clusters, their"
9"They swayed without wind, their"
10"Aurora’s breath fogged in the"
11"It had grown warmer since"
12"The trees around her seemed"
13"Her pulse thrummed in her"
14"She told herself it was"
15"They were light, deliberate, as"
16"Aurora turned sharply, her gaze"
17"She reached into her pocket,"
18"It pulsed again, stronger this"
19"The flowers behind her began"
ratio0.846
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park hung thick with the scent of damp earth and decaying leaves, a cloying perfume that clung to Aurora’s skin like a second layer."
1"The ancient oaks loomed around her, their gnarled branches twisting overhead like skeletal fingers, casting jagged shadows that shifted unnaturally despite the …"
2"A single moon hung low, its light pale and sickly, as if filtered through a veil of rot."
3"The note she’d found tucked inside her coat pocket—*“When the stones remember, follow the path of thorns”*—had been written in a hand she didn’t recognize, the …"
4"They swayed without wind, their stems bending in slow, deliberate arcs, as though responding to something unseen."
5"Not a rustle, not a creak, but something deeper—a low, resonant hum that vibrated in her bones."
6"They were light, deliberate, as if someone—or something—was walking barefoot over the moss."
7"Petals curled inward, their vibrant hues draining to brown, as though the very life of the grove was being siphoned away."
8"She stumbled, catching herself on a root, but the movement triggered another sound—a soft, wet *squelch*, as if something had just been buried beneath the soil."
9"The Heartstone’s pulse quickened, a frantic rhythm that matched her own."
10"The air grew colder, carrying the metallic tang of blood and something older, something that smelled of forgotten graves."
11"Somewhere in the distance, a wolf howled—but the sound was wrong, stretched too long, echoing with a resonance that did not belong to any creature she had ever …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
73.3004%