Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS7WZ1KZ6HEFH2V17YGABY

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
47.5s
Cost:
$0.000241
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air inside The Raven’s Nest hung thick with smoke and memory. A single green neon sign pulsed above the door, casting a sickly glow over the scarred wooden tables and mismatched chairs. The scent of stale beer mingled with the faint tang of old paper from the black-and-white photographs lining the walls—faces frozen mid-laugh, eyes that had long since turned to dust. Aurora Carter moved through the crowd like a shadow slipping between pillars, her boots silent on the creaking floorboards. She wore a charcoal coat, its collar turned up against the chill, and her dark hair was pulled back in a loose knot that threatened to unravel with every step. The small crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light as she reached for a glass of whiskey, her fingers lingering on the rim as if testing whether the pain still lived there. Across the room, beneath the flickering bulb above the bar, stood a man whose silhouette made her breath catch. Silas Blackwood. His frame was still broad, though the lean muscle had softened into something more weathered, like oak that had been carved by decades of wind. The grey-streaked auburn hair that once framed his face now clung to his scalp in damp tendrils, and his beard—neatly trimmed but graying at the temples—gave him the look of a man who had outlived his own legend. His left leg, bent slightly inward, bore the faintest trace of a limp, a reminder of the Prague operation that had left more than just a limp in its wake. The silver signet ring on his right hand glinted as he turned, his hazel eyes scanning the room until they landed on her. “Rory,” he said, the name a low rumble that seemed to vibrate in the space between them. His voice carried the weight of a thousand unsaid things, each syllable a stone dropped into a well. She didn’t smile. “Silas.” Her gaze flicked to the scar on her wrist, then back to his face. “You look… older.” “And you,” he replied, stepping closer, “still wear that coat like armor.” His eyes lingered on the coat’s frayed hem, the way it hung off her shoulders like a second skin. “Or did the years finally teach you to stop running?” The question hung between them, sharp as a blade. Aurora’s jaw tightened. She had run from many things—Evan’s cruelty, the suffocating expectations of her parents, the life that had felt too small to contain her restless mind. But Silas had been the one constant, the anchor in a storm she hadn’t known how to navigate. Yet here he was, standing before her like a ghost from a past she had tried to outrun. “I didn’t run from you,” she said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. “I ran from myself.” Silas’s lips pressed into a thin line. He moved to the bar, ordering a drink without looking at her. The bartender, a wiry woman with a tattoo of a raven on her forearm, slid a glass toward him. “You’re thinner,” she observed, wiping down the counter with a rag that smelled of lemon and regret. “Time does that.” “And the scar?” she asked, her tone softer now, almost gentle. He didn’t answer immediately. When he did, his voice was quieter, stripped of its usual authority. “It’s a reminder. Of what happens when you trust the wrong people.” Aurora’s fingers tightened around her glass. “You never told me about Prague.” His laugh was bitter. “Why would I? You were never meant to know.” The words struck like a slap. She remembered the night she had fled Cardiff, the way Silas had found her curled beneath a bridge, her coat soaked through with rain and tears. He had wrapped her in his own coat, carried her to the train station, and promised to wait. But promises, she had learned, were fragile things. “I thought you’d forgotten me,” she said, the admission slipping out before she could stop it. “I never did.” His gaze dropped to her hands, calloused from years of delivering orders for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress. “But you stopped coming back.” The silence that followed was thick with the ghosts of what they had once shared—the late-night debates over philosophy, the way they had sketched plans for futures that never materialized. Aurora had left for London with nothing but a suitcase and a head full of questions. Silas had stayed, building a life from the fragments of his own failures. “I thought you were dead,” she said, the words hollow. “Not yet.” His smile was thin, almost mocking. “But I’ve outlived my purpose. The network is gone. The war is over. All that’s left is this place and the memories.” She studied him—the way his shoulders slumped slightly, the way his eyes avoided hers. The man who had once taught her to think critically now carried the weight of a thousand unspoken regrets. “You still run things,” she said. “Not like I used to.” He gestured to the bar, to the patrons who laughed too loudly, to the photographs that watched them all. “This isn’t a front anymore. It’s just… a refuge.” Aurora’s throat tightened. She wanted to ask why he had kept the signet ring on his right hand, why he had never taken off the hat he wore even indoors. Instead, she reached into her coat pocket and pulled out a folded photograph—a snapshot of them at twenty, arms slung around each other’s shoulders, grinning like fools. The edges were frayed, the colors faded, but the joy in their faces was still vivid. Silas’s breath hitched. “Where did you get that?” “From my mother’s attic. She kept it all these years, like it was a secret.” She held it out, the paper crinkling under her grip. “You never told me about Prague.” His fingers brushed hers as he took the photo, and for a moment, the world narrowed to the warmth of that touch. “I didn’t want you to see me like this,” he murmured. “Broken. Failing.” “You’re not failing,” she said, though the words felt inadequate. “You’re surviving.” He looked away, toward the hidden back room behind the bookshelf, where secrets were stored in silence. “Sometimes survival feels like losing.” The neon sign above the door buzzed faintly, casting their shadows on the wall—two figures, one tall and unyielding, the other bent but still standing. Outside, the city hummed, indifferent to the weight of their pasts. Inside, the air was heavy with everything they had never said, everything they had left unsaid. Aurora reached into her coat again, this time pulling out a small vial of liquid amber. “I brought something for you,” she said, holding it out. “A gift. From the restaurant. A little something to remember us by.” Silas stared at the vial, then at her. “What is it?” “A tonic,” she lied. “For your leg.” He laughed, a sound that cracked like old wood. “You always were good at pretending.” They stood there, the distance between them shrinking and expanding in equal measure, as the bar’s patrons turned their heads to watch the slow dance of two old friends rediscovering each other in the dim light. Somewhere in the back, a clock ticked. Somewhere else, a photograph fell from the wall, its edges catching the neon glow like a promise neither of them had kept. The weight of time pressed down, but for the first time in years, Aurora felt something shift—not healing, not forgiveness, but the quiet understanding that some bonds, even fractured, could still hold. And in that moment, beneath the flickering sign and the scent of stale beer, they were both still here. Still alive. Still waiting.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1298
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.66% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1298
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"unravel"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count2
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"carried the weight"
count2
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"navigate"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"weight"
count2
12
word"dance"
count1
13
word"fractured"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"chill"
2"unravel"
3"reminder"
4"scanning"
5"carried the weight"
6"flicked"
7"navigate"
8"silence"
9"unspoken"
10"warmth"
11"weight"
12"dance"
13"fractured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"the air was heavy with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences72
matches
0"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1289
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1084
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.65
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Blackwood1
Prague1
Evan1
Silas7
Cardiff1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
London1
Aurora7
persons
0"Nest"
1"Carter"
2"Blackwood"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
5"Yu-Fei"
6"Cheung"
7"Aurora"
places
0"Raven"
1"Prague"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
63.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if testing whether the pain still lived there"
1"rumble that seemed to vibrate in the space between them"
44.84% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.552
wordCount1289
matches
0"not healing, not forgiveness, but the quiet understanding"
1"not forgiveness, but the quiet understanding"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean37.91
std32.49
cv0.857
sampleLengths
0146
1137
235
321
441
573
620
755
83
911
1028
1112
1213
1358
1416
1525
1659
1710
1830
1939
2033
2173
228
2331
2435
2512
2622
2752
2838
2911
307
3115
3265
3355
85.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences72
matches
0"was pulled"
1"been carved"
2"were frayed"
3"were stored"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs182
matches
0"was, standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences91
ratio0.088
matches
0"The scent of stale beer mingled with the faint tang of old paper from the black-and-white photographs lining the walls—faces frozen mid-laugh, eyes that had long since turned to dust."
1"The grey-streaked auburn hair that once framed his face now clung to his scalp in damp tendrils, and his beard—neatly trimmed but graying at the temples—gave him the look of a man who had outlived his own legend."
2"She had run from many things—Evan’s cruelty, the suffocating expectations of her parents, the life that had felt too small to contain her restless mind."
3"The silence that followed was thick with the ghosts of what they had once shared—the late-night debates over philosophy, the way they had sketched plans for futures that never materialized."
4"She studied him—the way his shoulders slumped slightly, the way his eyes avoided hers."
5"Instead, she reached into her coat pocket and pulled out a folded photograph—a snapshot of them at twenty, arms slung around each other’s shoulders, grinning like fools."
6"The neon sign above the door buzzed faintly, casting their shadows on the wall—two figures, one tall and unyielding, the other bent but still standing."
7"The weight of time pressed down, but for the first time in years, Aurora felt something shift—not healing, not forgiveness, but the quiet understanding that some bonds, even fractured, could still hold."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1099
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.03002729754322111
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007279344858962694
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean14.16
std9.31
cv0.657
sampleLengths
012
121
230
319
430
534
619
72
825
938
1030
1123
1217
1318
143
1515
163
1731
1810
199
203
2125
2218
2318
2416
254
267
2712
2819
2917
303
3111
324
3312
3412
356
366
374
389
396
4026
4118
428
4316
4420
455
4630
4716
4813
4910
54.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3626373626373626
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences66
matches
0"Instead, she reached into her"
1"Somewhere in the back, a"
2"Somewhere else, a photograph fell"
ratio0.045
32.12% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences66
matches
0"She wore a charcoal coat,"
1"His frame was still broad,"
2"His left leg, bent slightly"
3"he said, the name a"
4"His voice carried the weight"
5"She didn’t smile."
6"Her gaze flicked to the"
7"he replied, stepping closer, His"
8"She had run from many"
9"she said, her voice steady"
10"He moved to the bar,"
11"she observed, wiping down the"
12"she asked, her tone softer"
13"He didn’t answer immediately."
14"His laugh was bitter."
15"She remembered the night she"
16"He had wrapped her in"
17"she said, the admission slipping"
18"His gaze dropped to her"
19"she said, the words hollow"
ratio0.47
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences66
matches
0"The air inside The Raven’s"
1"A single green neon sign"
2"The scent of stale beer"
3"Aurora Carter moved through the"
4"She wore a charcoal coat,"
5"The small crescent scar on"
6"His frame was still broad,"
7"The grey-streaked auburn hair that"
8"His left leg, bent slightly"
9"The silver signet ring on"
10"he said, the name a"
11"His voice carried the weight"
12"She didn’t smile."
13"Her gaze flicked to the"
14"he replied, stepping closer, His"
15"The question hung between them,"
16"Aurora’s jaw tightened."
17"She had run from many"
18"she said, her voice steady"
19"Silas’s lips pressed into a"
ratio0.833
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
11.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The scent of stale beer mingled with the faint tang of old paper from the black-and-white photographs lining the walls—faces frozen mid-laugh, eyes that had lon…"
1"She wore a charcoal coat, its collar turned up against the chill, and her dark hair was pulled back in a loose knot that threatened to unravel with every step."
2"The small crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light as she reached for a glass of whiskey, her fingers lingering on the rim as if testing whether the pai…"
3"His frame was still broad, though the lean muscle had softened into something more weathered, like oak that had been carved by decades of wind."
4"The grey-streaked auburn hair that once framed his face now clung to his scalp in damp tendrils, and his beard—neatly trimmed but graying at the temples—gave hi…"
5"She had run from many things—Evan’s cruelty, the suffocating expectations of her parents, the life that had felt too small to contain her restless mind."
6"The silence that followed was thick with the ghosts of what they had once shared—the late-night debates over philosophy, the way they had sketched plans for fut…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands"
1"she asked, her tone softer now, almost gentle"
2"she said, the admission slipping out before she could stop it"
3"She held, the paper crinkling under her grip"
4"she said, though the words felt inadequate"
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she observed (observe)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"she lied (lie)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.167
74.1902%