Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS9XXT63ZX4KKGTSEESXPT

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Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
46.7s
Cost:
$0.000199
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air inside The Raven’s Nest hung thick with the scent of aged whiskey and damp wool. Flickering neon cast long shadows across the scarred wooden tables where solitary patrons nursed their drinks. Aurora Carter pushed through the heavy velvet curtain, her shoulders squared against the chill that clung to her like a second skin. She paused just inside the threshold, letting her eyes adjust to the dim glow before spotting the figure at the far end of the bar. Silas Blackwood sat alone, one elbow resting on the scarred mahogany, fingers drumming a slow rhythm against the silver signet ring that glinted beneath his sleeve. His grey-streaked auburn hair was cropped short, neatly combed despite the years, and his hazel eyes watched her approach with a quiet intensity that made her throat tighten. She recognized the set of his jaw, the way he held himself—still the same man who’d once taught her to read between lines of law books and whispered secrets in the hush of midnight. “Rory,” he said when she drew near, voice low and roughened by smoke and time. “Or should I say Aurora?” She smiled faintly, the ghost of a memory flickering behind her eyes. “You still call me that.” Her fingers brushed the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, a relic of childhood mischief that had never faded. Silas nodded, his gaze lingering on the black silk ribbon tied loosely around her wrist. “Time does strange things to people.” The bar’s jukebox coughed up a half-remembered tune, its notes trembling like a half-forgotten promise. Aurora slid onto the stool beside him, the wood creaking under her weight. She studied the lines etched into his face—the deep grooves around his mouth, the faint tremor in his left hand when he lifted his glass. The limp in his step had softened, but it remained, a silent testament to Prague, to choices made in the dark. “I thought you’d be dead,” she said, not unkindly. His laugh was a dry rasp. “Not yet. Though I’ve been counting the days.” He gestured to the empty chair opposite. “Sit. You look like you’ve been running.” She hesitated, then sank into the seat. The bar’s noise faded into a distant hum as she met his eyes. “I haven’t run in years. Not really.” Silas studied her, his expression unreadable. “You left Cardiff so fast. No goodbye. Just a note slipped under my door.” Aurora’s fingers tightened around her glass. “Evan… he wasn’t kind.” “No,” he agreed softly. “He wasn’t.” The silence stretched between them, filled only by the clink of ice in glasses and the low murmur of other patrons lost in their own stories. Outside, rain began to streak the windows, blurring the neon into streaks of green and red. “You became someone else,” she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper. He shrugged, though his shoulders rose and fell with the effort of restraint. “So did you.” She laughed, bitter and fleeting. “You always saw through me.” Silas leaned forward, elbows on the bar. “I saw what you needed to see. Even when you didn’t want to.” His gaze dropped to her hands. “That scar. Still with you?” Aurora flexed her fingers, watching the light catch the pale line. “Still here. Reminds me I survived.” “Survived what?” “Everything.” He studied her face, searching for something—apology, accusation, understanding. “You think I don’t know that?” She shook her head. “No. But I wonder if you ever regretted leaving.” Silas’ jaw tightened. “Regret is a luxury for those who never had to choose.” He paused, then added quietly, “You chose to leave. I stayed.” The words hung in the air, heavy with the weight of years. Aurora traced the rim of her glass, her mind drifting to Cardiff’s cobbled streets, to her father’s voice reciting statutes like poetry, to her mother’s laughter echoing through classroom halls. She remembered the night she’d packed her bags, the way her hands had trembled as she sealed the envelope. “I thought running would fix things,” she said, more to herself than him. Silas’ eyes softened. “It doesn’t.” Outside, thunder rumbled, and the neon sign outside flared brighter, casting their shadows onto the wall—a tangle of past and present, of choices made and paths untrodden. “I came here once,” Aurora admitted. “Thought maybe you’d be gone forever.” He nodded. “I knew. But I hoped you’d find your way back.” She looked at him then, really looked, seeing the man he’d become: weathered, wise, carrying the scars of battles fought in silence. And she saw herself reflected in his gaze—older, sharper, but still carrying the same quiet defiance. “Do you ever think about what could’ve been?” she asked. Silas exhaled slowly. “Every day. But some doors, once closed, stay closed.” Aurora reached across the table, her hand hovering above his before pulling back. “Maybe we’re both wrong.” He studied her hand, then placed his palm over hers, their fingers interlacing like roots seeking soil. The touch was brief, but it carried the weight of decades. The bartender called out an order, breaking the spell. They drank in silence, the rain easing to a drizzle. Somewhere beyond the bar’s walls, life moved on—jobs, responsibilities, the endless march of time. But here, in this corner of The Raven’s Nest, two old friends sat in the quiet aftermath of everything unsaid, holding onto the fragile thread of what remained. When Aurora finally stood to leave, Silas rose with her, their hands still entwined. At the door, she paused. “Thank you,” she said. He smiled, a small, sad thing. “For what?” “For remembering.” He nodded. “Always.” She stepped into the night, the neon sign flickering behind her as she disappeared into the rain. Silas watched until she vanished, then turned back to the bar, the weight of years settling gently upon his shoulders.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
28.57% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he agreed softly [softly]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
2"He paused then [then]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.343
leniency0.686
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.171
64.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount979
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"loosely"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
5
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"loosely"
1"really"
2"softly"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"slowly"
5"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount979
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"solitary"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"weight"
count3
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"testament"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"silence"
count3
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"fleeting"
count1
12
word"traced"
count1
13
word"echoing"
count1
14
word"trembled"
count1
15
word"carried the weight"
count1
16
word"aftermath"
count1
highlights
0"solitary"
1"velvet"
2"chill"
3"intensity"
4"silk"
5"weight"
6"etched"
7"testament"
8"unreadable"
9"silence"
10"whisper"
11"fleeting"
12"traced"
13"echoing"
14"trembled"
15"carried the weight"
16"aftermath"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords973
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.39% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount775
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Carter1
Blackwood1
Silas7
Prague1
Aurora8
Cardiff1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Blackwood"
4"Silas"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Prague"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.984
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount973
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean23.73
std21.3
cv0.897
sampleLengths
080
188
220
336
421
574
69
728
827
920
1010
116
1242
1313
1416
1510
1631
1717
182
191
2015
2113
2225
2361
2413
255
2627
2712
2812
2938
3010
3112
3217
3328
3461
3519
364
378
382
393
4037
99.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"was cropped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs135
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences84
ratio0.071
matches
0"She recognized the set of his jaw, the way he held himself—still the same man who’d once taught her to read between lines of law books and whispered secrets in the hush of midnight."
1"She studied the lines etched into his face—the deep grooves around his mouth, the faint tremor in his left hand when he lifted his glass."
2"He studied her face, searching for something—apology, accusation, understanding."
3"Outside, thunder rumbled, and the neon sign outside flared brighter, casting their shadows onto the wall—a tangle of past and present, of choices made and paths untrodden."
4"And she saw herself reflected in his gaze—older, sharper, but still carrying the same quiet defiance."
5"Somewhere beyond the bar’s walls, life moved on—jobs, responsibilities, the endless march of time."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount513
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.029239766081871343
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.015594541910331383
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean11.58
std8.05
cv0.695
sampleLengths
017
116
222
325
426
528
634
715
85
912
1024
1115
126
1315
1413
1525
1621
179
186
1915
207
217
2213
237
246
2514
266
274
284
292
3026
3116
3213
3313
343
355
365
377
3819
395
4011
416
422
431
449
456
464
479
483
4922
71.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.44047619047619047
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners37
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Somewhere beyond the bar’s walls,"
ratio0.019
27.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences54
matches
0"She paused just inside the"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
2"She recognized the set of"
3"he said when she drew"
4"She smiled faintly, the ghost"
5"Her fingers brushed the small"
6"She studied the lines etched"
7"she said, not unkindly"
8"His laugh was a dry"
9"He gestured to the empty"
10"She hesitated, then sank into"
11"he agreed softly"
12"she said finally, her voice"
13"He shrugged, though his shoulders"
14"She laughed, bitter and fleeting."
15"His gaze dropped to her"
16"He studied her face, searching"
17"She shook her head."
18"He paused, then added quietly"
19"She remembered the night she’d"
ratio0.481
34.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences54
matches
0"The air inside The Raven’s"
1"Aurora Carter pushed through the"
2"She paused just inside the"
3"Silas Blackwood sat alone, one"
4"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
5"She recognized the set of"
6"he said when she drew"
7"She smiled faintly, the ghost"
8"Her fingers brushed the small"
9"Silas nodded, his gaze lingering"
10"The bar’s jukebox coughed up"
11"Aurora slid onto the stool"
12"She studied the lines etched"
13"The limp in his step"
14"she said, not unkindly"
15"His laugh was a dry"
16"He gestured to the empty"
17"She hesitated, then sank into"
18"The bar’s noise faded into"
19"Silas studied her, his expression"
ratio0.852
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Silas Blackwood sat alone, one elbow resting on the scarred mahogany, fingers drumming a slow rhythm against the silver signet ring that glinted beneath his sle…"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair was cropped short, neatly combed despite the years, and his hazel eyes watched her approach with a quiet intensity that made her t…"
2"She recognized the set of his jaw, the way he held himself—still the same man who’d once taught her to read between lines of law books and whispered secrets in …"
3"He studied her face, searching for something—apology, accusation, understanding."
4"Aurora traced the rim of her glass, her mind drifting to Cardiff’s cobbled streets, to her father’s voice reciting statutes like poetry, to her mother’s laughte…"
5"Aurora reached across the table, her hand hovering above his before pulling back."
6"He studied her hand, then placed his palm over hers, their fingers interlacing like roots seeking soil."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he said, voice low and roughened by smoke and time"
1"Her fingers brushed, a relic of childhood mischief that had never faded"
2"she said, not unkindly"
3"she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper"
4"she said, more to herself than him"
92.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he agreed softly (agree)"
1"Aurora admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.229
leniency0.457
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.114
72.3874%