Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTXSXWJYZ8979NY29EEK4KV

Run Details

Duration:
7.8s
Cost:
$0.002752
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the entrance to the Raven’s Nest hummed with that familiar, insectile buzz, casting a sickly emerald glow across the rain-slicked pavement of Soho. Aurora pushed open the heavy oak door, the scent of stale ale and old floor wax instantly wrapping around her. It was a smell she had come to associate with home, or at least, the closest thing she had to one these days. Silas was behind the bar, polishing a heavy glass with a rag that had seen better decades. He looked up, his hazel eyes narrowing as he clocked her arrival. He didn’t smile, but he inclined his head, a silent acknowledgment of the shift ending. Rory offered a tired nod in return, gripping the strap of her delivery bag until the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist throbbed. She was twenty-five, exhausted, and yet the transition from the bustling, indifferent London streets to the hushed, map-covered sanctuary of the Nest provided a temporary, fragile stability. The bar was mostly empty, save for a lone figure sitting in the far corner booth under a photograph of a fog-drenched bridge. The man was angled toward the shadows, his face obscured by the brim of a dark coat. Rory started toward the stairs leading to her flat—the promise of a hot tea and silence was a siren song—when the man shifted. The movement was abrupt, a sharp intake of breath that echoed in the quiet room. He stood, and the light from the bar caught his face. "Rory?" The voice was a jagged piece of glass, years old and entirely out of place. Rory froze, her pulse stuttering against her ribs. She turned slowly, her straight black hair swinging across her shoulders. The man was thinner than she remembered, his shoulders hunched as if expecting a blow, but the set of his jaw was unmistakable. It was Evan. A lifetime ago, in Cardiff, they had been a different sort of pair—tethered by suffocating expectations and a volatile heat that had burned Rory raw. She had escaped that life, leaving her legal textbooks and Brendan’s pride behind to carve out this shadow existence in London. Seeing him here, in the heart of her sanctuary, felt like a structural failure of her own personal reality. "Get out," she said. Her voice was thin, devoid of any warmth. Evan took a tentative step toward her, his eyes scanning her face with a hunger that made her skin crawl. "I didn't think it was you. I heard you moved to London, but I assumed... well. You look different." "I am different," she snapped. Her cool-headed nature, usually her greatest asset, threatened to fracture into a panicked, frantic speed. She glanced at the bar. Silas was watching them, his hand resting near the silver signet ring on his right hand, his expression unreadable. He made no move to intervene, but his presence was a weighted anchor in the room. "Rory, wait. Just listen." Evan gestured toward the empty stool near the bar. "I’m not the same person either. I’ve spent the last three years in the city, trying to find a rhythm. It’s been… quiet. Without you." "Quiet for you, maybe," she retorted, stepping back until her spine hit the edge of a mahogany table. "I spent two years in Cardiff making myself small enough to fit inside your ego, Evan. Don't talk to me about quiet." Evan sighed, a sound of self-pity that made her physically nauseated. He reached out, his hand hovering in the space between them before he dropped it, realizing she would never let him close the distance. "I made mistakes. My father always told me that men like us, we run hot, and we burn what we love. I didn't believe him until the day your flat was empty. The keys on the counter. The silence in the hallway." "You weren't meant to have me," she said, her voice steadying. "You were meant to own me. There’s a distinction." "Is that why you’re here?" He gestured vaguely at the room, at the maps on the walls and the aura of secrets that clung to the Raven’s Nest. "Hiding in a dive bar in Soho, serving meals to strangers? Did you really trade a career in law for this?" Rory felt a cold, sharp satisfaction. "I didn't trade anything. I recovered parts of myself I didn't know were missing." Silas cleared his throat then, a low, gravelly sound that seemed to vibrate through the floorboards. He walked around the bar, his slight limp rhythmic and deliberate. He didn't look at Evan; he looked at Rory, a subtle check for her safety, his eyes steady and reassuring. "Bar's closing, lad," Silas said, his voice carrying the calm authority of a man who had ended much more dangerous conversations with a single sentence. "Whatever business you think you have here, it expired the moment you walked through that door." "I just wanted to apologize," Evan said, his bravado slipping. He looked between Silas and Rory, finally realizing that the world they occupied was entirely alien to him. He was a creature of domestic discord; they were something else. "Apologies are for people who deserve them," Rory said. She turned her back on him, walking toward the stairs. She didn’t look back to see him leave, but she heard the door chime, the rush of cold air as he stepped out into the night, and then the blessed silence as the heavy lock turned behind him. She stopped on the bottom step, her legs trembling. The weight of the encounter pressed down on her—not the fear of his physical presence, but the realization of how deeply he had colored her memories. She had spent so long defining herself by who she wasn't—the daughter of a barrister, the girlfriend of an abuser—that she had forgotten to look at who she had become. Silas stepped beside her, his hand briefly resting on the banister. "You handled that with significant grace, Aurora," he murmured. "I handled it by wanting to burn the building down," she admitted, her voice cracking. "Restraint is a form of power," Silas said quietly. He tipped his head toward the bookshelf that concealed the back room. "The past is a phantom, Rory. It only has weight if you feed it. You've been here long enough to know that the maps on these walls lead to places no one can follow you unless you show them the way." Rory touched her wrist, feeling the ridge of the scar beneath her sleeve. "He thinks I’m wasting my life." "He thinks you’re hiding," Silas corrected. "You aren't. You’re waiting for the right moment to decide where to go next. There is a difference, and it’s a vital one." She looked up at him, seeing the grey streaks in his hair, the weariness of a man who had seen too many secrets remain unspoken. In the amber light of the bar, the danger of her old life felt like a ghost story told in a language she no longer spoke. "I'm not going back, Silas," she said. "I know," he replied, and for the first time that night, he offered her a small, knowing smile. "That’s why you’re still here, kid." Rory turned and climbed the stairs to the flat. For the first time in years, the silence didn't feel heavy. It felt like space. As she reached the landing and locked the door behind her, she realized she had stopped holding her breath. The man in the coat was a reminder of who she used to be, but as she looked out her window at the neon-drenched streets of Soho, she realized the city didn't belong to the past. It belonged to the version of her that was still being written.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Silas said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.536
leniency1
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.133
92.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1308
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1308
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"sanctuary"
count2
3
word"silence"
count4
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"weight"
count2
11
word"encounter"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count1
13
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"throbbed"
2"sanctuary"
3"silence"
4"echoed"
5"pulse"
6"warmth"
7"scanning"
8"unreadable"
9"rhythmic"
10"weight"
11"encounter"
12"unspoken"
13"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1302
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.19% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount984
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest3
Soho2
London2
Evan6
Cardiff1
Rory10
Brendan1
Silas8
persons
0"Nest"
1"Evan"
2"Rory"
3"Brendan"
4"Silas"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.992
windowScore1
8.49% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if expecting a blow, but the set of his jaw was unmistakable"
1"felt like a structural failure of her o"
2"felt like a ghost story told in a langu"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.768
wordCount1302
matches
0"not the fear of his physical presence, but the realization of how deeply he had colored her memories"
82.28% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"escaped that life"
1"realizing that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean42
std24.74
cv0.589
sampleLengths
071
194
263
326
41
560
665
712
839
960
1038
1140
1277
1320
1449
1520
1647
1741
1839
1957
2065
2111
229
2315
2462
2519
2629
2751
287
2924
3091
94.63% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences66
matches
0"was angled"
1"being written"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs163
matches
0"was watching"
1"was still being"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences79
ratio0.076
matches
0"Rory started toward the stairs leading to her flat—the promise of a hot tea and silence was a siren song—when the man shifted."
1"A lifetime ago, in Cardiff, they had been a different sort of pair—tethered by suffocating expectations and a volatile heat that had burned Rory raw."
2"He didn't look at Evan; he looked at Rory, a subtle check for her safety, his eyes steady and reassuring."
3"He was a creature of domestic discord; they were something else."
4"The weight of the encounter pressed down on her—not the fear of his physical presence, but the realization of how deeply he had colored her memories."
5"She had spent so long defining herself by who she wasn't—the daughter of a barrister, the girlfriend of an abuser—that she had forgotten to look at who she had become."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount998
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.031062124248496994
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.014028056112224449
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean16.48
std8.72
cv0.529
sampleLengths
028
120
223
317
412
515
623
727
823
917
1023
1115
1211
131
1415
158
1611
1723
183
1925
2021
2119
224
238
2420
2519
265
2715
285
2919
3016
3113
3225
3318
3422
3511
3624
3742
3811
399
4028
4121
426
4314
4416
4511
4620
4725
4816
4910
40.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.31645569620253167
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences60
matches
0"It was a smell she"
1"He looked up, his hazel"
2"He didn’t smile, but he"
3"She was twenty-five, exhausted, and"
4"He stood, and the light"
5"She turned slowly, her straight"
6"It was Evan."
7"She had escaped that life,"
8"Her voice was thin, devoid"
9"Her cool-headed nature, usually her"
10"She glanced at the bar."
11"He made no move to"
12"she retorted, stepping back until"
13"He reached out, his hand"
14"she said, her voice steadying"
15"He gestured vaguely at the"
16"He walked around the bar,"
17"He didn't look at Evan;"
18"He looked between Silas and"
19"He was a creature of"
ratio0.5
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences60
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Aurora pushed open the heavy"
2"It was a smell she"
3"Silas was behind the bar,"
4"He looked up, his hazel"
5"He didn’t smile, but he"
6"Rory offered a tired nod"
7"She was twenty-five, exhausted, and"
8"The bar was mostly empty,"
9"The man was angled toward"
10"Rory started toward the stairs"
11"The movement was abrupt, a"
12"He stood, and the light"
13"The voice was a jagged"
14"Rory froze, her pulse stuttering"
15"She turned slowly, her straight"
16"The man was thinner than"
17"It was Evan."
18"A lifetime ago, in Cardiff,"
19"She had escaped that life,"
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
9.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Silas was behind the bar, polishing a heavy glass with a rag that had seen better decades."
1"The man was thinner than she remembered, his shoulders hunched as if expecting a blow, but the set of his jaw was unmistakable."
2"A lifetime ago, in Cardiff, they had been a different sort of pair—tethered by suffocating expectations and a volatile heat that had burned Rory raw."
3"Evan took a tentative step toward her, his eyes scanning her face with a hunger that made her skin crawl."
4"Evan sighed, a sound of self-pity that made her physically nauseated."
5"He reached out, his hand hovering in the space between them before he dropped it, realizing she would never let him close the distance."
6"He tipped his head toward the bookshelf that concealed the back room."
7"She looked up at him, seeing the grey streaks in his hair, the weariness of a man who had seen too many secrets remain unspoken."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, her voice steadying"
1"Evan said, his bravado slipping"
2"she admitted, her voice cracking"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
1"she retorted (retort)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"she admitted (admit)"
4"Silas corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.464
leniency0.929
rawRatio0.385
effectiveRatio0.357
65.5199%