| 66.67% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He gestured vaguely [vaguely]" | | 1 | "Silas said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.536 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.133 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |
| 92.35% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1308 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.37% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1308 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "sanctuary" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "unreadable" | | 9 | "rhythmic" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "encounter" | | 12 | "unspoken" | | 13 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "started to" | | 1 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1302 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.19% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 984 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.02 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Evan" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 3 | | Soho | 2 | | London | 2 | | Evan | 6 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Brendan | 1 | | Silas | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nest" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Brendan" | | 4 | "Silas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Soho" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.992 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 8.49% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if expecting a blow, but the set of his jaw was unmistakable" | | 1 | "felt like a structural failure of her o" | | 2 | "felt like a ghost story told in a langu" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.768 | | wordCount | 1302 | | matches | | 0 | "not the fear of his physical presence, but the realization of how deeply he had colored her memories" |
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| 82.28% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "escaped that life" | | 1 | "realizing that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 42 | | std | 24.74 | | cv | 0.589 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 94 | | 2 | 63 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 65 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 60 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 77 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 41 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 57 | | 20 | 65 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 62 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 51 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 91 |
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| 94.63% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "was angled" | | 1 | "being written" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 163 | | matches | | 0 | "was watching" | | 1 | "was still being" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 79 | | ratio | 0.076 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory started toward the stairs leading to her flat—the promise of a hot tea and silence was a siren song—when the man shifted." | | 1 | "A lifetime ago, in Cardiff, they had been a different sort of pair—tethered by suffocating expectations and a volatile heat that had burned Rory raw." | | 2 | "He didn't look at Evan; he looked at Rory, a subtle check for her safety, his eyes steady and reassuring." | | 3 | "He was a creature of domestic discord; they were something else." | | 4 | "The weight of the encounter pressed down on her—not the fear of his physical presence, but the realization of how deeply he had colored her memories." | | 5 | "She had spent so long defining herself by who she wasn't—the daughter of a barrister, the girlfriend of an abuser—that she had forgotten to look at who she had become." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 998 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.031062124248496994 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014028056112224449 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 79 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 79 | | mean | 16.48 | | std | 8.72 | | cv | 0.529 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 42 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 25 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 40.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.31645569620253167 | | totalSentences | 79 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 20.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a smell she" | | 1 | "He looked up, his hazel" | | 2 | "He didn’t smile, but he" | | 3 | "She was twenty-five, exhausted, and" | | 4 | "He stood, and the light" | | 5 | "She turned slowly, her straight" | | 6 | "It was Evan." | | 7 | "She had escaped that life," | | 8 | "Her voice was thin, devoid" | | 9 | "Her cool-headed nature, usually her" | | 10 | "She glanced at the bar." | | 11 | "He made no move to" | | 12 | "she retorted, stepping back until" | | 13 | "He reached out, his hand" | | 14 | "she said, her voice steadying" | | 15 | "He gestured vaguely at the" | | 16 | "He walked around the bar," | | 17 | "He didn't look at Evan;" | | 18 | "He looked between Silas and" | | 19 | "He was a creature of" |
| | ratio | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon sign above" | | 1 | "Aurora pushed open the heavy" | | 2 | "It was a smell she" | | 3 | "Silas was behind the bar," | | 4 | "He looked up, his hazel" | | 5 | "He didn’t smile, but he" | | 6 | "Rory offered a tired nod" | | 7 | "She was twenty-five, exhausted, and" | | 8 | "The bar was mostly empty," | | 9 | "The man was angled toward" | | 10 | "Rory started toward the stairs" | | 11 | "The movement was abrupt, a" | | 12 | "He stood, and the light" | | 13 | "The voice was a jagged" | | 14 | "Rory froze, her pulse stuttering" | | 15 | "She turned slowly, her straight" | | 16 | "The man was thinner than" | | 17 | "It was Evan." | | 18 | "A lifetime ago, in Cardiff," | | 19 | "She had escaped that life," |
| | ratio | 0.933 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 9.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas was behind the bar, polishing a heavy glass with a rag that had seen better decades." | | 1 | "The man was thinner than she remembered, his shoulders hunched as if expecting a blow, but the set of his jaw was unmistakable." | | 2 | "A lifetime ago, in Cardiff, they had been a different sort of pair—tethered by suffocating expectations and a volatile heat that had burned Rory raw." | | 3 | "Evan took a tentative step toward her, his eyes scanning her face with a hunger that made her skin crawl." | | 4 | "Evan sighed, a sound of self-pity that made her physically nauseated." | | 5 | "He reached out, his hand hovering in the space between them before he dropped it, realizing she would never let him close the distance." | | 6 | "He tipped his head toward the bookshelf that concealed the back room." | | 7 | "She looked up at him, seeing the grey streaks in his hair, the weariness of a man who had seen too many secrets remain unspoken." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice steadying" | | 1 | "Evan said, his bravado slipping" | | 2 | "she admitted, her voice cracking" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she snapped (snap)" | | 1 | "she retorted (retort)" | | 2 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 4 | "Silas corrected (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.464 | | leniency | 0.929 | | rawRatio | 0.385 | | effectiveRatio | 0.357 | |