"Aurora Carter—Rory, to anyone who bothered to learn her nickname—checked her phone again: 10:47 PM."
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"She tucked her phone back into her hoodie pocket, grabbed the small canvas tote slung over her handlebars—just a spare delivery pad, a bottle of water, and a pack of mint gum—and struck out along the narrow dirt path that branched off the main trail."
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"She reached up, fingers brushing the silver chain around her neck, and the Heartstone—deep crimson, roughly the size of a thumbnail—flared warm against her skin."
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"She swung the Heartstone’s glow toward it, and nothing was there—just the wildflowers, swaying now, even though she hadn’t felt a breeze."
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"She gripped the pendant tighter, the silver chain digging into her neck, and backed away toward the gap between two of the oak stones—the same gap she’d stepped through to get into the clearing."
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"Its skin was pale, so pale it looked translucent, and its eyes were bright blue—exactly the same shade as hers."
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"The Heartstone’s glow had dimmed, fading to a faint crimson pinprick against her collarbone, and the time on her watch stopped spinning, stuck on 10:17 PM—the night she’d been pushed through the fence."
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"The time on her watch jumped forward again, landing on 11:40 PM—the exact time she’d calculated she’d arrive at the clearing."
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"Aurora Carter—Rory, to anyone who bothered to learn her nickname—checked her phone again: 10:47 PM."
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"But the Heartstone around her neck had pulsed nonstop since she’d found it, a slow, warm thrum that had woken her three nights in a row, even after she’d tucked…"
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"She tucked her phone back into her hoodie pocket, grabbed the small canvas tote slung over her handlebars—just a spare delivery pad, a bottle of water, and a pa…"
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"It wasn’t on any of the Richmond Park maps she’d pulled up on her bike computer, overgrown with ferns and clover that shouldn’t have been blooming this late in …"
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"Gnarled ancient oaks, their bark weathered to the pale grey of limestone, their branches twisted into sharp, angular lines that looked like standing stones."
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"The sound came from between the oak stones, low and sustained, as if the trees themselves were singing."
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"For half a heartbeat, it looked like a figure standing behind her, tall and slender, wearing a tattered white dress, its hair hanging long and white as snow."
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"A figure standing between two of the oak stones, tall and slender, wearing a tattered white dress, its hair hanging long and white as snow."
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"She stood up, her legs shaking, and stared back at it, the crescent scar on her own wrist burning under the faint glow of the pendant."
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"She ran toward the path, her boots thudding on the dirt, not looking back until she was through the gap between the oaks."
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"She collapsed against a gnarled oak tree, gasping, her hands shaking, and touched her left wrist."