Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTY0MXVV9HZDAJEY3VEZ3Y7

Run Details

Duration:
8.5s
Cost:
$0.002675
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest hummed with a low-frequency buzz that Rory felt in her teeth before she even reached the door. She pushed inside, the bell above the frame giving a muffled, brassy chime. The air was a familiar thick fog of toasted hops, floor wax, and the faint, citrusy tang of stale lime peels. It was a slow Tuesday, the kind of quiet that allowed the old maps lining the walls to seem as though they were shifting under the dim amber light. Silas stood behind the polished mahogany bar, a tea towel draped over his shoulder, his grey-streaked auburn beard immaculate as always. He was polishing a glass with the methodical, rhythmic motion of a man who didn't trust stillness. When he saw her, he didn't smile, but his hazel eyes softened, signaling his recognition of her shift. Rory climbed onto a stool, her hands resting on the warped wood. The small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the light—a relic of a childhood she sometimes struggled to remember as her own. She was tired, the heavy thermal bag of the Golden Empress still digging into her shoulder, a physical weight that mirrored the mental exhaustion of navigating London’s arteries. Silas reached for a bottle of dark amber scotch, setting it down with a quiet clink alongside a clean tumbler. He leaned his weight onto his right side, favoring his bad left knee, the old injury still dictating the cadence of his movement after all these years. Before she could reach for the glass, the front door swung open again. A man stepped in, shaking the damp London mist from a charcoal overcoat. He paused, scanning the dim interior, his gaze catching on the maps before lingering on the bar. Rory watched through the reflection in the mirror behind the bottles. She felt her breath stutter. The man looked familiar—the structured set of his jaw, the way he carried his shoulders—but the man who had occupied her memories had been softer, unformed, fueled by the reckless kinetic energy of their student days in Cardiff. This man looked carved out of granite. He turned toward her, and for a moment, the bar seemed to shrink. Evan? Rory thought, the name hitting her like a physical blow. But the man turned fully, and she exhaled, a ragged sound that dissolved into the ambient hum of the fridge. It wasn't Evan. It was Brendan, a friend from the law school days, the one who had once promised to change the world before he disappeared into the machinery of corporate litigation. Brendan froze. He pulled his hands from his pockets, his fingers twitching toward his vest. He looked older, the sharp, hungry ambition in his eyes replaced by a heavy, opaque look of someone who had won every argument but lost the reason for having them. Rory, he said. The voice was deeper, stripped of the hesitant, boyish lilt she remembered. Brendan. She didn't move, her fingers tightening around the glass Silas had pushed toward her. She wondered if he noticed the way her gaze darted toward the door, a reflex left over from her time with Evan, a ghost of her own fight-or-flight conditioning. He walked over, his stride measured and precise. He looked at Silas, who gave the briefest of nods, a silent acknowledgment between two men who understood the utility of secrets. Brendan took the stool next to her, leaving a deliberate, uncomfortable space between them. I heard you moved to London, he said, pulling a leather wallet from his inner pocket to signal for a drink. The movement was sharp, efficient. I didn't think you’d be… here. Here? Rory asked, her voice steady despite the hammer of her heart. You mean in a place that has soul, or just a place with a neon sign? Brendan laughed, a hollow, percussive sound. He kept his eyes on the bar, refusing to look at her directly. Back then, you were destined for the High Court. You had everything mapped out. I remember you quoting the Legal Aid statutes like they were scripture. That girl is dead, Brendan. She left her notes in Cardiff and her life in an apartment that felt like a cage. He finally turned. His eyes were tired, the skin beneath them bruised with exhaustion. I went back a few years ago. Cardiff hasn't changed. The rain is still grey, and the law buildings still smell like damp paper and ego. I thought I’d run into you at some alumni event, but everyone said you’d vanished. I didn't vanish. I just stopped being a prop in other people’s stories. Brendan traced the rim of his glass. The silence between them grew heavy, pressurized, filled with the things they hadn't said when they were twenty-one and convinced that time was an inexhaustible resource. He reached for his drink, and as the light hit his hand, she saw a gold band. He noticed her look and shifted it slightly, a nervous tic that betrayed the granite exterior. It didn’t work out, he said, sensing her focus. The firm, the life, the expectations. It all turned out to be hollow. I spent five years litigating insurance claims for corporations that don’t even know my name. Is that why you’re in London? To hunt down the ghost of the version of you that actually believed in justice? He looked at her then, truly looked at her. He saw the change—the guarded blue eyes, the way her shoulders stayed pulled back, the subtle scar on her wrist that spoke of a history she never shared with him. The realization hit him, and it was a cold, sharp thing. He realized he didn't know her at all anymore. I’m here because I don’t know where else to go, he confessed, his voice barely rising above the low-tempo jazz playing from the speakers. I thought maybe if I found you, it would remind me of how to breathe. Before everything got so… calculated. Rory looked at Silas, who was intently reorganizing a rack of glasses, providing them with the illusion of privacy. She looked back at the man who represented a trajectory she had barely escaped. She reached out and touched the wood of the bar, feeling the grain beneath her fingertips. You can’t breathe through me, Brendan. I’ve used up all my air just keeping myself afloat. She stood up, the chair scraping against the floorboards with a sharp, dissonant sound. She grabbed her bag, the weight feeling different now, less like a burden and more like a tool. If you want to find who you were, stop looking in the reflection of people you haven’t spoken to in a decade. Go home. Or don't. But don't look for it here. This place is for people who have already accepted what they’ve lost. She didn't wait for his reply. She headed toward the bookshelf at the back of the room, signaling to Silas with a flick of her hand. He didn't look up, but he reached under the bar, and the mechanism triggered—a soft, pneumatic hiss. The bookshelf swung outward just enough for her to slip through. She left Brendan sitting at the bar, a man in a charcoal coat holding his drink, staring at the space where she had been. The green neon sign buzzed outside, a beacon for the lost, beckoning them into the dark, but Rory walked toward the back room, her stride familiar, quiet, and entirely her own. Behind her, the bar went silent, save for the hum of the fridge and the soft, rhythmic clink of Silas polishing another glass, the sound of a mentor who knew that some regrets were just the cost of survival.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1298
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.66% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1298
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"familiar"
count3
1
word"methodical"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count2
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"navigating"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"lilt"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"efficient"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"calculated"
count1
12
word"beacon"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"methodical"
2"rhythmic"
3"weight"
4"navigating"
5"scanning"
6"lilt"
7"measured"
8"efficient"
9"traced"
10"silence"
11"calculated"
12"beacon"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1293
ratio0
matches(empty)
69.44% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions2
matches
0"Rory, he said."
1"I heard you moved to London, he said, pulling a leather wallet from his inner pocket to signal for a drink."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1293
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Brendan"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Brendan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory8
Tuesday1
Golden1
Empress1
London4
Cardiff3
Evan3
Brendan9
Silas7
High1
Court1
Legal1
Aid1
You3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Empress"
4"Evan"
5"Brendan"
6"Silas"
7"You"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a cage"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1293
matches(empty)
96.49% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"convinced that time"
1"knew that some"
85.86% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean44.59
std20.09
cv0.451
sampleLengths
088
156
263
347
443
561
613
763
845
915
1044
1144
1232
1328
1445
1522
1655
1713
1866
1937
2021
2159
2244
2349
2416
2532
2644
2754
2894
94.18% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences95
matches
0"was tired"
1"were destined"
2"were tired"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs224
matches
0"were shifting"
1"was polishing"
2"was intently reorganizing"
22.56% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences95
ratio0.042
matches
0"The small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the light—a relic of a childhood she sometimes struggled to remember as her own."
1"The man looked familiar—the structured set of his jaw, the way he carried his shoulders—but the man who had occupied her memories had been softer, unformed, fueled by the reckless kinetic energy of their student days in Cardiff."
2"He saw the change—the guarded blue eyes, the way her shoulders stayed pulled back, the subtle scar on her wrist that spoke of a history she never shared with him."
3"He didn't look up, but he reached under the bar, and the mechanism triggered—a soft, pneumatic hiss."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1305
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.03065134099616858
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.00842911877394636
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean13.61
std8.76
cv0.644
sampleLengths
025
113
221
329
421
517
618
712
823
928
1020
1127
1213
1313
1417
1511
165
1738
187
1913
201
2110
2220
233
2429
252
2613
2730
283
2912
301
3114
3229
338
3422
3514
3621
375
385
391
401
4111
4216
436
4413
459
465
4712
485
4917
36.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.28421052631578947
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences87
matches
0"She pushed inside, the bell"
1"It was a slow Tuesday,"
2"He was polishing a glass"
3"She was tired, the heavy"
4"He leaned his weight onto"
5"He paused, scanning the dim"
6"She felt her breath stutter."
7"He turned toward her, and"
8"It wasn't Evan."
9"It was Brendan, a friend"
10"He pulled his hands from"
11"He looked older, the sharp,"
12"She didn't move, her fingers"
13"She wondered if he noticed"
14"He walked over, his stride"
15"He looked at Silas, who"
16"I heard you moved to"
17"I didn't think you’d be…"
18"You mean in a place"
19"He kept his eyes on"
ratio0.563
17.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences87
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"She pushed inside, the bell"
2"The air was a familiar"
3"It was a slow Tuesday,"
4"Silas stood behind the polished"
5"He was polishing a glass"
6"Rory climbed onto a stool,"
7"The small, crescent-shaped scar on"
8"She was tired, the heavy"
9"Silas reached for a bottle"
10"He leaned his weight onto"
11"A man stepped in, shaking"
12"He paused, scanning the dim"
13"Rory watched through the reflection"
14"She felt her breath stutter."
15"The man looked familiar—the structured"
16"This man looked carved out"
17"He turned toward her, and"
18"Rory thought, the name hitting"
19"It wasn't Evan."
ratio0.885
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences87
matches
0"Before she could reach for"
1"To hunt down the ghost"
2"Before everything got so…"
3"If you want to find"
ratio0.046
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount14
matches
0"It was a slow Tuesday, the kind of quiet that allowed the old maps lining the walls to seem as though they were shifting under the dim amber light."
1"He was polishing a glass with the methodical, rhythmic motion of a man who didn't trust stillness."
2"She was tired, the heavy thermal bag of the Golden Empress still digging into her shoulder, a physical weight that mirrored the mental exhaustion of navigating …"
3"He paused, scanning the dim interior, his gaze catching on the maps before lingering on the bar."
4"The man looked familiar—the structured set of his jaw, the way he carried his shoulders—but the man who had occupied her memories had been softer, unformed, fue…"
5"He looked older, the sharp, hungry ambition in his eyes replaced by a heavy, opaque look of someone who had won every argument but lost the reason for having th…"
6"He looked at Silas, who gave the briefest of nods, a silent acknowledgment between two men who understood the utility of secrets."
7"She left her notes in Cardiff and her life in an apartment that felt like a cage."
8"He noticed her look and shifted it slightly, a nervous tic that betrayed the granite exterior."
9"I spent five years litigating insurance claims for corporations that don’t even know my name."
10"He saw the change—the guarded blue eyes, the way her shoulders stayed pulled back, the subtle scar on her wrist that spoke of a history she never shared with hi…"
11"Rory looked at Silas, who was intently reorganizing a rack of glasses, providing them with the illusion of privacy."
12"She left Brendan sitting at the bar, a man in a charcoal coat holding his drink, staring at the space where she had been."
13"Behind her, the bar went silent, save for the hum of the fridge and the soft, rhythmic clink of Silas polishing another glass, the sound of a mentor who knew th…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.9761%