"She pushed her shoulder-length black hair out of her sweaty forehead, the strands sticking to her skin, and rubbed the crescent scar on her left wrist—a nervous tic she’d carried since she was twelve, when she’d fallen through a cottage window and sliced her wrist on shards of glass."
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"A narrow gap gaped in the circle, just wide enough for her to squeeze through, and air wafted out of it—warm, thick, smelling like jasmine and burnt sugar, nothing like the crisp, piney park air she’d been breathing for the last three hours."
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"The crunch of oak leaves under her boots stopped, replaced by the soft squelch of moss, and around her bloomed wildflowers—purple clover, yellow primroses, even tiny white snowdrops—thick and lush, even though outside the grove the only plants were brown, dormant bracken and dead oak leaves."
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"Swiping open the camera app, she zoomed in on the oak branches above her—their bark was covered in faint, dark carvings, shapes that looked like faces, blurring when she leaned in too close, like her eyes were tricking her."
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"For a full minute, the only sound was the quiet thrum of the pendant against her chest, and the soft rustle of wildflowers swaying in a breeze that shouldn’t have existed—outside the grove, the air had been still as death."
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"She realized now that this was what the pendant had been warning her about—the Hel portal, hidden right here in this grove."
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"High, breathy giggles started up again, coming from all around her, dozens of voices overlapping, whispering words she didn’t recognize—old Welsh, she thought, some of it, but most of it was something older, harsher, like the language of the woods themselves."
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"She’d snuck in through the unguarded north gate, her Golden Empress lanyard digging into the skin of her neck under her black puffer jacket, the empty delivery …"
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"Now, it was leading her to the middle of nowhere, a stretch of park she’d never seen marked on any trail map, a narrow dirt path winding between gnarled, ancien…"
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"The deep crimson gem pulsed against her skin, thrumming so hard she could feel it through her bones, a faint inner glow bleeding out to paint her fingers red, e…"
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"Swiping open the camera app, she zoomed in on the oak branches above her—their bark was covered in faint, dark carvings, shapes that looked like faces, blurring…"
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"For a full minute, the only sound was the quiet thrum of the pendant against her chest, and the soft rustle of wildflowers swaying in a breeze that shouldn’t ha…"
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"She stood up fast, spinning around, and this time she saw it: a figure at the far edge of the grove, tall and gaunt, with long, stringy black hair that fell pas…"
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"The figures froze, their heads turning toward the pendant, their red eyes (dots) fixing on the light."
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"Rory craned her neck, looking up, and saw a woman perched on one of the lowest, thickest branches, her silver hair falling in loose waves around her shoulders, …"
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"The leading figure snarled, a low, guttural noise that vibrated through the moss under Rory’s knees, and took another step forward, its long, thin fingers reach…"
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"Rory sat on the ground for a full minute, her hands shaking, her heart hammering so hard she could hear it over the thrum of her own breath."
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"She pushed herself up off the ground, brushing moss off her knees, and looked at the silver-haired woman, who was now standing on the ground in front of her, he…"
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"A few minutes later, she heard the sound of a police car driving past the park, its siren wailing in the distance, and she stood up, brushing moss off her jacke…"