Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTZFPXW0M273F9YJ2W4WZ65

Run Details

Duration:
7.2s
Cost:
$0.002561
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the entrance to the Raven’s Nest hummed with an aggressive, insectile buzz, casting a sickly luminescence over the wet cobblestones of Soho. Aurora pushed the heavy door open, the familiar scent of stale ale and old floor wax washing over her. It was a Tuesday, the quietest night of the week, save for the low, rhythmic clinking of glass coming from behind the mahogany bar. Silas looked up, his grey-streaked auburn beard catching the dim amber light. He didn't offer a greeting, just a slow, recognizing nod, his right hand—adorned with the heavy silver signet ring—resting on a stack of damp coasters. He shifted, his left leg dragging slightly as he moved to pull a pint of stout, the phantom ache of his old injury always present in the way he braced himself against the counter. Aurora sat on a stool near the end of the bar, her black hair falling in a straight line over her shoulders. She traced the rim of her glass, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist catching the light. She had been living in the flat upstairs for three months, yet the ghost of her old life in Cardiff still clung to her, a persistent, dusty film. The door groaned again, letting in a gust of damp midnight air and the muffled roar of London. A man stepped inside, shaking off a slim black umbrella. He looked prosperous, his coat tailored, his expression one of polite, disarming expectation. He stopped dead when he saw the back of Aurora’s head. Rory? The name hit Aurora like a physical blow. She went rigid, her fingers clenching the glass so tightly her knuckles turned white. She knew that cadence. The clipped, precise English of a man who had spent his life winning small arguments in courtrooms. She turned slowly on the stool. Brendan Carter stood there, aged deeper than she had expected. His hair had thinned, and there were vertical lines running from his mouth to his chin that hadn’t existed when she had fled her life three years ago. Dad. The word sounded hollow in the dim bar, lost among the maps and yellowing photographs tacked to the walls. Brendan moved forward, his stride tentative. He looked around The Raven's Nest with a frown, his gaze skimming the dingy wallpaper and the hidden bookshelf in the back, landing finally on Silas, who watched the interaction with the unblinking, predatory stillness of a man who had seen too many secrets exposed. Aurora, he said, his voice dropping an octave. I didn't think I’d find you here. Your mother… we’ve spent months looking. Eva wouldn't speak, but she didn't have to. You left quite the vacuum behind. Aurora stood, though she didn't move toward him. She kept the bar as a barricade. Do you have any idea how hard it is to bury a life, Dad? I didn't go missing. I went to ground. There is a distinction. Brendan let out a sharp, jagged laugh. He looked at her—really looked at her—and the disappointment was a heavy, suffocating thing. You look thin. And this place… is this what the law school dropout does now? Serve drinks to shadows? Silas polished a glass with a rag, his hazel eyes flickering between them. Care to order, sir? Or are you just here to discuss family real estate? Brendan ignored him, his focus exclusively on his daughter. I came to tell you that Evan is gone. The charges, the pressure—everything fell apart after you left. He’s in a facility now. You’re safe to come home. The name, *Evan*, hung in the air, acidic and sharp. Aurora felt the familiar phantom pain in her wrist, the memory of that childhood scar itching beneath her skin. She had spent two years relearning how to breathe without checking over her shoulder. She had traded her mother’s disappointment and her father’s rigid expectations for a delivery job and the anonymity of a Soho flat. You think it was about him, she said softly. You spent your life thinking I was a rebellion, a series of poor choices. You still think I’m that girl in Cardiff, waiting for permission to be something else. You ran away, Rory. You abandoned your degree, your reputation, your family. You left us questioning where we’d failed. Aurora leaned over the bar, her bright blue eyes searching his, looking for a shimmer of regret that wasn't there. We failed when you decided that reputation was a currency intended to be saved, not spent. You never asked why I liked the law, Dad. You only asked if I could win. The silence that followed was heavy with the ticking of an old clock somewhere behind the bar. Silas set the glass down with a soft thud. I don't belong in Cardiff anymore, she continued, her voice steady now, devoid of the tremor she’d felt a moment ago. I live here. I work. I’m not waiting for an invitation to return to a room where I never had a voice. Brendan looked defeated, the crisp lines of his coat suddenly seeming too large for his retreating shoulders. He looked at the maps on the wall, the strange, tactical clutter of the place, and realized he was a stranger in his daughter’s world. He didn't understand the geography of her life, and he lacked the map to navigate it. I suppose I expected a different welcome, he whispered. Aurora didn't offer a hug. She didn't offer an excuse. She watched the man who had shaped her early years with a strange, detached pity. You expected a daughter, Dad. But you weren't looking for me. You were looking for a piece of your own history that had gone missing. Brendan sighed, a sound that seemed to deflate his entire presence. He reached into his pocket and placed a business card on the mahogany. A hotel in Mayfair. I’m leaving on the morning train. If you want to talk—properly—you know where to find me. He didn't wait for a response. He turned and walked to the door, his silhouette framed for a fleeting second by the sickly green glow of the sign. The door swung shut, the sound of the London rain rushing back in to reclaim the silence. Aurora sat back down. She stared at the card. Her hand moved toward it, then she stopped, pulling it back. Silas finished drying the glass and placed it on the shelf. He poured a small measure of amber liquid into a tumbler and slid it across the wood toward her. He’s a ghost, she said, her voice barely a murmur. Silas looked at the door, his features settling back into their familiar, guarded mask. We’re all ghosts in this room, Rory. The trick is knowing which ones are worth haunting. Aurora picked up the drink, the heat of it chasing the chill from her skin. She looked at the bookshelf in the back, the threshold to the secret room behind it, and then back at the door where her father had vanished. She took a slow sip, the amber stinging her throat, and didn’t reach for the card. She simply sat, watching the street through the window, feeling the weight of the past shift, pull, and finally, settle into the shadows where it belonged.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
75.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1230
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"tightly"
2"slowly"
3"really"
4"softly"
5"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1230
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"familiar"
count3
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"clenching"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"navigate"
count1
6
word"fleeting"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"rhythmic"
2"traced"
3"clenching"
4"silence"
5"navigate"
6"fleeting"
7"chill"
8"weight"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
72.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences102
filterMatches
0"look"
1"think"
2"know"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1223
ratio0.001
matches
0"Evan"
17.86% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions3
matches
0"Aurora, he said, his voice dropping an octave."
1"You think it was about him, she said softly."
2"I suppose I expected a different welcome, he whispered."
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1223
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.06
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho2
Tuesday1
Cardiff3
London2
Aurora11
English1
Carter1
Silas6
Dad4
Evan2
Rory3
Mayfair1
Brendan6
You13
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
4"Silas"
5"Evan"
6"Rory"
7"Brendan"
8"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
3"Mayfair"
globalScore0.969
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sound that seemed to deflate his entire presence"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1223
matches(empty)
68.63% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences102
matches
0"knew that cadence"
1"that girl"
2"decided that reputation"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean39.45
std20.39
cv0.517
sampleLengths
070
171
268
352
41
543
644
71
819
951
1035
1141
1240
1327
1437
1565
1638
1719
1852
1926
2043
2158
229
2350
2444
2545
2620
2730
2810
2930
3084
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs222
matches
0"weren't looking"
1"were looking"
30.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences102
ratio0.039
matches
0"He didn't offer a greeting, just a slow, recognizing nod, his right hand—adorned with the heavy silver signet ring—resting on a stack of damp coasters."
1"He looked at her—really looked at her—and the disappointment was a heavy, suffocating thing."
2"The charges, the pressure—everything fell apart after you left."
3"If you want to talk—properly—you know where to find me."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1232
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.024350649350649352
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.01461038961038961
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean11.99
std7.88
cv0.657
sampleLengths
027
119
224
312
425
534
622
718
828
918
1010
1113
1211
131
148
1514
164
1717
186
1910
2028
211
2219
236
2445
258
267
272
284
298
306
318
327
3314
344
354
364
377
3814
393
403
419
424
4313
444
4510
469
479
489
495
29.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.2549019607843137
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences98
matches
0"It was a Tuesday, the"
1"He didn't offer a greeting,"
2"He shifted, his left leg"
3"She traced the rim of"
4"She had been living in"
5"He looked prosperous, his coat"
6"He stopped dead when he"
7"She went rigid, her fingers"
8"She knew that cadence."
9"She turned slowly on the"
10"His hair had thinned, and"
11"He looked around The Raven's"
12"I didn't think I’d find"
13"we’ve spent months looking."
14"You left quite the vacuum"
15"She kept the bar as"
16"I didn't go missing."
17"I went to ground."
18"He looked at her—really looked"
19"You look thin."
ratio0.571
5.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences98
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Aurora pushed the heavy door"
2"It was a Tuesday, the"
3"Silas looked up, his grey-streaked"
4"He didn't offer a greeting,"
5"He shifted, his left leg"
6"Aurora sat on a stool"
7"She traced the rim of"
8"She had been living in"
9"The door groaned again, letting"
10"A man stepped inside, shaking"
11"He looked prosperous, his coat"
12"He stopped dead when he"
13"The name hit Aurora like"
14"She went rigid, her fingers"
15"She knew that cadence."
16"The clipped, precise English of"
17"She turned slowly on the"
18"Brendan Carter stood there, aged"
19"His hair had thinned, and"
ratio0.908
51.02% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"If you want to talk—properly—you"
ratio0.01
76.72% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The clipped, precise English of a man who had spent his life winning small arguments in courtrooms."
1"His hair had thinned, and there were vertical lines running from his mouth to his chin that hadn’t existed when she had fled her life three years ago."
2"He looked around The Raven's Nest with a frown, his gaze skimming the dingy wallpaper and the hidden bookshelf in the back, landing finally on Silas, who watche…"
3"Aurora leaned over the bar, her bright blue eyes searching his, looking for a shimmer of regret that wasn't there."
4"The silence that followed was heavy with the ticking of an old clock somewhere behind the bar."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
71.9120%