| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.37% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1367 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1367 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "navigate" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "gloom" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "sanctuary" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "throb" | | 10 | "dancing" | | 11 | "flicked" | | 12 | "flicker" | | 13 | "pulsed" | | 14 | "tension" | | 15 | "electric" | | 16 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.16% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "seem to" | | 2 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1360 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1350 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.52 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | London | 3 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Silas | 1 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 50.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a lung held in a tight fist" | | 1 | "looked like people—caught in the architec" | | 2 | "shadows that seemed to lunge at her ankles" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.206 | | wordCount | 1360 | | matches | | 0 | "not herself, but a flicker of the Grove as it existed on the other side of th" | | 1 | "not the heavy, suffocating silence of the Grove, but the familiar, lonely silence of London" | | 2 | "not a pulse, but a steady, waiting eye" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 46.9 | | std | 26.21 | | cv | 0.559 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 85 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 77 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 49 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 79 | | 11 | 83 | | 12 | 58 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 77 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 104 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 52 | | 22 | 41 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 50 | | 26 | 65 | | 27 | 50 | | 28 | 44 |
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| 89.31% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "being folded" | | 1 | "being stripped" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "been open" |
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| 28.18% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 194 | | matches | | 0 | "was coming" | | 1 | "was throbbing" | | 2 | "was being" | | 3 | "were shaking" | | 4 | "was scorching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.101 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park did not just chill; it curdled." | | 1 | "It was warm—dangerously so." | | 2 | "The glow was no longer faint; it was a rhythmic, angry throb, casting long, dancing silhouettes among the branches that didn't seem to match the movements of the trees themselves." | | 3 | "In the reflection, she saw not herself, but a flicker of the Grove as it existed on the other side of the veil—a twisting, violent place of shifting dimensions and hungry, unblinking eyes." | | 4 | "A flicker of movement to her right—a pale, translucent hand, fingers far too long, gripping the bark of an oak." | | 5 | "She saw the flickers of other people—or things that looked like people—caught in the architecture of the branches, their silhouettes woven into the wood, their eyes wide, watching her with a frantic, silent jealousy." | | 6 | "She realized with a sickening thud of clarity that the benefactor hadn't given her a gift; they had given her a lure." | | 7 | "The night was quiet—not the heavy, suffocating silence of the Grove, but the familiar, lonely silence of London." | | 8 | "But as she watched, she saw a single, distant flicker of deep, crimson light deep within the woods—not a pulse, but a steady, waiting eye." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1360 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.03455882352941177 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010294117647058823 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 15.28 | | std | 9.04 | | cv | 0.592 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 39 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 33 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 33 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 30.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.2808988764044944 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Usually, the Grove was a" | | 1 | "Then, the world tilted." | | 2 | "Just a gap in the" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 40.69% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "She touched the crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "She was here because a" | | 2 | "It was a vacuum that" | | 3 | "She peered into the gloom," | | 4 | "It was rhythmic, a soft," | | 5 | "She lowered her hand into" | | 6 | "It was warm—dangerously so." | | 7 | "She stopped walking." | | 8 | "She exhaled a long, shaky" | | 9 | "she called out, her voice" | | 10 | "She turned back to the" | | 11 | "She gripped the pendant, the" | | 12 | "It had no face, only" | | 13 | "It was the sound of" | | 14 | "It was coming from the" | | 15 | "She looked down at her" | | 16 | "Her blood felt thick, sluggish," | | 17 | "She was being watched from" | | 18 | "She spun, moving with the" | | 19 | "She needed the boundary." |
| | ratio | 0.448 | |
| 46.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Aurora pulled the collar of" | | 2 | "The streetlights of London had" | | 3 | "She touched the crescent-shaped scar" | | 4 | "She was here because a" | | 5 | "These were the boundary markers" | | 6 | "Rory stepped between the stones," | | 7 | "The silence inside was absolute." | | 8 | "It was a vacuum that" | | 9 | "The air here smelled of" | | 10 | "She peered into the gloom," | | 11 | "The Heartstone pendant began to" | | 12 | "It was rhythmic, a soft," | | 13 | "She lowered her hand into" | | 14 | "It was warm—dangerously so." | | 15 | "She stopped walking." | | 16 | "The rustle came from the" | | 17 | "Rory spun, but there was" | | 18 | "She exhaled a long, shaky" | | 19 | "she called out, her voice" |
| | ratio | 0.828 | |
| 57.47% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Either way, the standing stones" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 71.43% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "It was rhythmic, a soft, crimson heat against her collarbone, beating in time with a rhythm that felt entirely foreign to her own pulse." | | 1 | "The glow was no longer faint; it was a rhythmic, angry throb, casting long, dancing silhouettes among the branches that didn't seem to match the movements of th…" | | 2 | "She spun, moving with the cold-headed instinct that had carried her through worse nights in London." | | 3 | "The pendant flared, casting a harsh, crimson light that illuminated the area in sharp, terrifying relief." | | 4 | "It was a graveyard of things that had never been human, of entities that fed on the slow erosion of time." | | 5 | "She saw the flickers of other people—or things that looked like people—caught in the architecture of the branches, their silhouettes woven into the wood, their …" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice flat and small, instantly swallowed by the canopy" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |