| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.833 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.86% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1321 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "completely" | | 3 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 20.51% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1321 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "intensity" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "sentinels" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "resonance" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "gloom" | | 8 | "grave" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "marble" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "pulsed" | | 13 | "beacon" | | 14 | "rhythmic" | | 15 | "could feel" | | 16 | "velvet" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1314 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 1272 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.71 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 3 | | Thames | 1 | | November | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Eva | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Delivery | 1 | | Aurora | 2 | | Carter | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Carter" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Thames" | | 4 | "Heartstone" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 50.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like pressed ice" | | 1 | "looked like a tear in the fabric of the n" | | 2 | "looked like an open eye" |
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| 47.79% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.522 | | wordCount | 1314 | | matches | | 0 | "not as an absence of sound, but as an active, pressing weight" | | 1 | "not with a faint, warm light, but with a harsh, flickering crimson strobe" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.89% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 46.93 | | std | 22.63 | | cv | 0.482 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 70 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 80 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 63 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 67 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 90 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 45 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 79 | | 26 | 70 | | 27 | 14 |
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| 90.33% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "been panicked" | | 1 | "was blocked" | | 2 | "were made" | | 3 | "been locked" |
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| 73.02% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 210 | | matches | | 0 | "was watching" | | 1 | "were trying" | | 2 | "was glowing" | | 3 | "were vibrating" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.105 | | matches | | 0 | "Beyond them, the darkness wasn’t black; it was a bruised, shimmering violet, shifting in the periphery of her vision like oil on water." | | 1 | "A snap echoed through the grove—a brittle, clean sound like a bone being broken." | | 2 | "It was the smell of damp earth and old linen—the scent of a freshly turned grave." | | 3 | "Her brain searched for a rational explanation—a trick of perspective, a prank, a hallucination brought on by exhaustion and the bizarre atmospheric pressure." | | 4 | "Its feet didn't touch the ground; it glided, soundless, its presence drawing the light out of the air." | | 5 | "She looked down and saw, to her horror, that the pendant was glowing—not with a faint, warm light, but with a harsh, flickering crimson strobe that pulsed in time with the thudding of her own heart." | | 6 | "A sound emerged from the darkness behind her—a wet, raspy inhalation, followed by the soft, rhythmic clatter of long fingers tapping against wood." | | 7 | "It didn't clatter; it hit the ground with a dull, heavy thud, as if the earth were made of velvet." | | 8 | "She felt the pulse—a violent, rhythmic thrum that matched the tremor in her hands." | | 9 | "She could see them now—dozens of them, silhouettes within silhouettes, standing just beyond her arm’s reach, a circle of silent spectators waiting for the light to fade or the bargain to be struck." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1285 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.02801556420233463 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013229571984435798 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 13.83 | | std | 8 | | cv | 0.579 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 26.84% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 22 | | diversityRatio | 0.25263157894736843 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 35.84% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it felt like pressed" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 4.95% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept her gaze fixed" | | 1 | "She had reached the center" | | 2 | "It was the silence of" | | 3 | "She felt the crescent-shaped scar" | | 4 | "She turned in a slow" | | 5 | "She had come here for" | | 6 | "She was the one who" | | 7 | "She reached for the pendant," | | 8 | "It should have been warm." | | 9 | "she called out" | | 10 | "Her voice was flat, robbed" | | 11 | "It didn't carry." | | 12 | "It simply dropped into the" | | 13 | "It wasn't the fluid grace" | | 14 | "It was the movement of" | | 15 | "She stepped forward, her pulse" | | 16 | "she said, her voice steadier" | | 17 | "She reached into her bag," | | 18 | "She didn't turn it on" | | 19 | "She didn't want to see" |
| | ratio | 0.538 | |
| 24.52% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Aurora adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant rested against" | | 3 | "She kept her gaze fixed" | | 4 | "She had reached the center" | | 5 | "The silence hit her first," | | 6 | "It was the silence of" | | 7 | "Rory paused, her shoulders tightening." | | 8 | "She felt the crescent-shaped scar" | | 9 | "She turned in a slow" | | 10 | "The oaks stood like sentinels," | | 11 | "She had come here for" | | 12 | "Eva had been panicked, babbling" | | 13 | "Rory was the one who" | | 14 | "She was the one who" | | 15 | "A snap echoed through the" | | 16 | "Rory froze, her breath hitching." | | 17 | "She reached for the pendant," | | 18 | "The crimson stone lay against" | | 19 | "It should have been warm." |
| | ratio | 0.871 | |
| 53.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 70.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "But here, past the perimeter of the ancient oak standing stones, the atmosphere was thick, sweet, and suffocating, clotted with the scent of wildflowers that ha…" | | 1 | "The oaks stood like sentinels, gnarled and thick-trunked, their limbs twisting upward like fingers clawing for a moon she couldn't see." | | 2 | "But when she swung the light, the beam shuddered, flickering as if the air itself were trying to drown out the photons." | | 3 | "It tilted its head, a motion that continued too far, until its cheek touched its own collarbone." | | 4 | "It sounded as if it were vibrating directly against her eardrum, a chorus of voices layered on top of one another, thin and reedy." | | 5 | "She could feel the heat radiating off the entity now, a dry, feverish pressure that pushed against her skin." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice steadier than she felt" | | 1 | "she gasped, her hands shaking so violently she dropped the flashlight" | | 2 | "the voice answered, and the wind began to howl, though the trees remained perfectly still" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "a voice whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she gasped (gasp)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |