Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTZV26RN4TPHPNB9P0EE6ER

Run Details

Duration:
7.4s
Cost:
$0.002644
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon hum of the sign outside The Raven’s Nest bled through the condensation on the front window, painting the interior in a sickly, electric pallor. Aurora, known to most as Rory, wiped the condensation away with the cuff of her delivery jacket and stepped inside. The air was heavy, smelling of floor polish, spilled stout, and the faint, dusty scent of the old maps crowding the walls. Silas was behind the bar, his grey-streaked auburn beard neatly groomed, polishing a glass with the methodical patience of a man who had seen everything worth seeing. He looked up, his hazel eyes narrowing slightly before the ghost of a smile touched his lips. He favored his left leg, shifting his weight with that familiar, slight hitch as he moved toward the tap. Rory nodded at him, intending to head straight for the stairs leading to her flat, when the bell above the door chimed again. A man stepped out of the London drizzle, shaking a wet umbrella. He stood for a moment, shoulders hunched, water dripping onto the worn floorboards. When he looked up, the light caught his face. He was older than the version of him tucked away in the dusty corners of Rory's memory, his jawline blurred by the soft, indistinct lines of middle age, but the eyes were impossible to mistake. It was Evan. The breath caught in Rory’s throat, a jagged, sharp thing. She felt the sudden, involuntary heat against the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a phantom itch from a childhood accident that usually only flared when she was stressed. She stood frozen near the coat rack, the weight of the last few years pressing down on her shoulders. She had fled to London to become someone new, someone who didn't exist in the same orbit as a man like that. Evan didn't see her at first. He walked to the bar, shaking his coat off, his movements stiff. Silas leaned forward, his silver signet ring flashing in the dim light as he placed a coaster down. Whiskey, Evan said. His voice was deeper, stripped of the manic edge she remembered, replaced by a weary, hollow resonance. You’re a long way from Cardiff, Silas remarked, his tone neutral, though his gaze was sharp enough to cut glass. He poured the drink without asking. Evan took the glass, his fingers trembling, just a fraction. He turned to scan the room, and his gaze snagged on Rory. The glass hovered halfway to his lips, then settled back onto the bar with a clatter. Rory? The name sounded foreign coming from him, stripped of its intimacy. Rory didn't move. She felt the coolness of the bar’s atmosphere—the old maps, the photographs of long-lost agents, the quiet sanctuary Silas had built—suddenly destabilized by the man’s presence. What are you doing here? she asked, her voice steady enough to surprise herself. Evan looked at her, then at Silas, and then back at her. He looked thinner, his skin pallid under the bar’s warm, amber lighting. I heard you moved. I didn't think it was for good. I didn't think I needed to stay where I wasn't wanted, Rory said. The cool-headed instinct that had carried her through the terrifying quiet of her final weeks in Cardiff rose to the surface now. She stepped away from the door, closing the gap between her and the bar. Evan laughed, a short, dry sound that had no humor in it. You always were the sharp one, Laila. Don't call me that, she snapped. The nickname felt like a weapon, something meant to hold her in place. She glanced at Silas, but the old spymaster was already busying himself with the taps, his presence a static, grounding force. He was watching, though; he was always watching. I've had time to think, Evan said, his eyes tracing the line of her shoulder. He seemed to be cataloging the changes—the way she carried herself differently, the distance in her expression, the way she was no longer the girl who apologized for taking up space. I’m not saying I was right. I’m just saying that everything I did... I thought it was for a reason. Rory felt a cold, hard knot of resolve tighten in her stomach. People like Evan didn't change because they saw the error of their ways; they only changed when they lost their grip on the things they tried to control. He looked like a man who had lost his grip. What reason? she asked. He didn't answer immediately. He stared into the depths of his whiskey. I don't know anymore. Time has a way of washing the paint off things, doesn't it? You look at what you’ve built, you look at who you’ve hurt, and you realize you’re just standing in a ruin. Rory bit her lip, looking at the scar on her wrist. The memories were vivid—the arguments that felt like storms, the way he had once tried to isolate her from her friends, the slow erosion of her own sense of self. To hear him speak of ruins as if he were a poet instead of a perpetrator was grating. You’re a ruin, Evan, she said, her voice dropping into a register that made Silas pause his work. But I’m not. I’m not the person you left behind in Wales. She turned to Silas, meeting his hazel eyes. He gave a microscopic nod, the signal of a man who understood the value of a closed file. I’m going upstairs, Silas, Rory said. Of course, Silas replied. His voice was calm, authoritative. He turned to Evan, his expression shifting into a mask of professional, icy disinterest. And for you, sir, that’s your final drink. It’s closing time for the public. Evan looked at the barman, then back at Rory, his expression a mingling of confusion and regret. He looked like a ghost haunting his own life, wondering why the living didn't welcome him back. Rory, wait— She didn't wait. She turned and walked toward the stairs, toward the quiet, sterile sanctuary of her flat. She didn't look back to see if he tried to stand, didn't check to see if Silas blocked his path, though she knew the old operative would handle it. As she mounted the stairs, the sounds of the bar faded. She reached her door, the wood cool against her palm, and let herself inside. The room was dark, lit only by the streetlamp below. She went to the window, watching as, moments later, Evan emerged from the front door of The Raven’s Nest. He stood on the pavement for a long time, looking up at the flat above the bar, a lonely, rain-slicked silhouette against the neon green light. He looked like a man trying to remember a song he had once loved but whose lyrics he had long since forgotten. Rory watched him until he turned and walked away, his steps uneven, disappearing into the London fog. She walked to the kitchen and ran water over her hands, the cool temperature grounding her. She touched her left wrist, tracing the crescent scar one more time. The weight of the past remained, but it was just weight now. It was no longer an anchor. She took a breath, the air in the room tasting of nothing but her own life, her own pace, her own future. Outside, the London night continued, uncaring and vast, and for the first time in a long time, she was exactly where she needed to be.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1260
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1260
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"methodical"
count1
2
word"weight"
count4
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"resonance"
count1
5
word"sanctuary"
count2
6
word"tracing"
count2
7
word"resolve"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"depths"
count1
10
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"methodical"
2"weight"
3"familiar"
4"resonance"
5"sanctuary"
6"tracing"
7"resolve"
8"stomach"
9"depths"
10"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
35.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences93
filterMatches
0"look look realize"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1256
ratio0
matches(empty)
75.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions2
matches
0"Whiskey, Evan said."
1"Of course, Silas replied."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1256
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Rory14
London4
Evan12
Cardiff2
Silas11
Laila1
Wales1
You4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
5"Laila"
6"You"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
2"Wales"
globalScore0.943
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like a weapon, something meant to"
1"looked like a man who had lost his grip"
2"felt like storms, the way he had once t"
3"looked like a ghost haunting his own life"
4"looked like a man trying to remember a so"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1256
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"saying that everything"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean40.52
std23.07
cv0.569
sampleLengths
069
163
248
347
481
536
620
726
838
91
1040
1114
1235
1349
1419
1548
1666
1750
184
1949
2059
2130
2226
236
2437
2534
262
2747
2880
2939
3093
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"was stressed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs233
matches
0"was already busying"
1"was watching"
2"was always watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences93
ratio0.065
matches
0"She felt the coolness of the bar’s atmosphere—the old maps, the photographs of long-lost agents, the quiet sanctuary Silas had built—suddenly destabilized by the man’s presence."
1"He was watching, though; he was always watching."
2"He seemed to be cataloging the changes—the way she carried herself differently, the distance in her expression, the way she was no longer the girl who apologized for taking up space."
3"People like Evan didn't change because they saw the error of their ways; they only changed when they lost their grip on the things they tried to control."
4"The memories were vivid—the arguments that felt like storms, the way he had once tried to isolate her from her friends, the slow erosion of her own sense of self."
5"Rory, wait—"
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1265
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"lonely, rain-slicked silhouette"
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.03715415019762846
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.009486166007905139
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean13.51
std7.98
cv0.591
sampleLengths
027
120
222
327
417
519
623
712
813
99
1035
113
1210
1330
1419
1522
166
1712
1818
193
2017
2120
226
2310
2412
2516
261
2711
283
2926
305
319
3212
3312
344
357
3613
3722
3814
3912
407
416
4213
4321
448
4515
4631
476
487
497
37.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.25806451612903225
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners24
37.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"Of course, Silas replied."
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences89
matches
0"He looked up, his hazel"
1"He favored his left leg,"
2"He stood for a moment,"
3"He was older than the"
4"It was Evan."
5"She felt the sudden, involuntary"
6"She stood frozen near the"
7"She had fled to London"
8"He walked to the bar,"
9"His voice was deeper, stripped"
10"You’re a long way from"
11"He poured the drink without"
12"He turned to scan the"
13"She felt the coolness of"
14"she asked, her voice steady"
15"He looked thinner, his skin"
16"I heard you moved."
17"I didn't think it was"
18"I didn't think I needed"
19"She stepped away from the"
ratio0.596
10.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences89
matches
0"The green neon hum of"
1"Aurora, known to most as"
2"The air was heavy, smelling"
3"Silas was behind the bar,"
4"He looked up, his hazel"
5"He favored his left leg,"
6"Rory nodded at him, intending"
7"A man stepped out of"
8"He stood for a moment,"
9"He was older than the"
10"It was Evan."
11"The breath caught in Rory’s"
12"She felt the sudden, involuntary"
13"She stood frozen near the"
14"She had fled to London"
15"Evan didn't see her at"
16"He walked to the bar,"
17"Silas leaned forward, his silver"
18"Whiskey, Evan said."
19"His voice was deeper, stripped"
ratio0.899
56.18% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"To hear him speak of"
ratio0.011
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Silas was behind the bar, his grey-streaked auburn beard neatly groomed, polishing a glass with the methodical patience of a man who had seen everything worth s…"
1"The cool-headed instinct that had carried her through the terrifying quiet of her final weeks in Cardiff rose to the surface now."
2"He seemed to be cataloging the changes—the way she carried herself differently, the distance in her expression, the way she was no longer the girl who apologize…"
3"The memories were vivid—the arguments that felt like storms, the way he had once tried to isolate her from her friends, the slow erosion of her own sense of sel…"
4"You’re a ruin, Evan, she said, her voice dropping into a register that made Silas pause his work."
5"He gave a microscopic nod, the signal of a man who understood the value of a closed file."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
74.0985%